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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

Aro held his hand out to me once again and nodded to me that I should take it. "Perhaps something can be done, but first you must hand me some insight," he said softly.

Excerpt from chapter 15   

In medieval London Bella Swan is captured by Henry, a centuries old vampire. He changes her at the young age of 15 and they travel England, befriending more vampires along the way. But when she meets Emily, her world crumbles around her and the shards of Bella's broken life fall at the child's feet. And what trouble will the Volturi's intervention create?

The plague of the immortal children is still upon the world, that much is certain.

Banner by *Beautiful Liar* Thank you so much!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 31684
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Indecision

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm glad.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The End

I really like this. What is the sequel going to be called? Will Edward be in it?



Author's Response:

Don't know yet and yes. ;) I'll see you there.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Freedom in Perspective

GREAT WRITTING



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Freedom in Perspective

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Emily

great writting



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Revelation

I really love this story



Author's Response:

I'm glad! :)

 
Summary:

When Edward leaves Bella in the beginning of New Moon, his decision sets off a spiral of tragic consequences. Edward and Jacob attempt to protect Bella, but there are some things that they can't protect her from.

Rated for occasional profanity, sensitive topics, and sexual content

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 62038
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Cover Up

Sad. Good writting. I hope this is a E and B love story. I hate Jacob (let me know if it is Jacob getting Bella in the end as I can't read those stories - I know I am pathetic - but if E and B don't end up together it breaks my heart).



Author's Response:

Bella is most definitely still in love with Edward. Love has many complications, but that fact won't change.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Distraction

Update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Cycles

Sad story but good. I hope Jacob and Bella just stay friends. Update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Bella, I'm Coming Home

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Paternity

Can't wait for more - must update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Rumors

Please update soon!!! Love it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8:Irrevocable Consequences

As fascinating as this is, care to let the rest of us in on the daily Edward drama?” Emmett spoke, annoyed. lol

 

I so love this story. I can't wait for Edward to find out what REALLY happened. Please let it be soon. Also, I hope E and B work out. I want Edward to tear apart whoever did it.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON...SOON...SOON!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confrontations

Great chapter. I am glad they know the truth. I hope Charlie finds out soon as well.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Waiting

Love the story. Glad he will change her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: 48 Hours

WOW! This is the BEST chapter. I love how you had Esme kill her and that Edward is okay with the change. I am dying to find out who the male is. Please update soon!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Changes

This is soooooo good! Update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Of trust and family

I really love the CHarlie twist. Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: News Travels

THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Trump Card

Great chapter. I am glad Charlie has an ability.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Big Brother

Suddenly, I felt his hand make impact to the back of my head. “You know….you’re a real jackass sometimes," he blurted out angrily.

You gotta love Emmett

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: New Life

Great chapter...as usual. I hope Charlie and his mate are okay - I want to see him happy with someone!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Moonlight

BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER

Well done

 
Infinite Heart by makovitza Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

"The bottom line is that you have to choose who you are going to commit to - that's the foundation of true love, not a lack of other options." - Stephenie Meyer.   It has been six years since Bella was left alone and heartbroken in the woods.   She has moved on, creating a happy life for herself in La Push.  That is, until an unexpected meeting with some long-lost friends causes her comfortable life to be thrown into disarray.  Will she have to choose between her husband and the man she can't forget?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Claire, Edward, Jasper, Quil, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14578
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope she leaves Jacob



Author's Response:

Duly noted :-)

Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

AU New Moon. There is no Jacob. Edward comes back during a school party in the gym. Has a happy ending :)


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2127
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BRAVO!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it :)

-M

 




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