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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Lights Out. by Lucille Marie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The end of New Moon, told from Edward's perspective, starting with the fateful phone call from Rosalie.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Demetri, Edward, Felix, Jane, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3303
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Candle

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Monster (shabbyapple)

Great job!

 
Remembrance by denise17 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

If there were such things as soul mates, then there are such things as past lives. And when Edward Masen became a vampire, his immortal soul became one with his body. But what of his soul mate? While he lives forever, her soul wanders from body to body, bound by the ties of mortality, always searching and never finding. Alone every single lifetime. After 108 years of solitude, he meets those brilliant chocolate-brown eyes for the first time -- again. Finally.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12593
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting. Can't wait for more.

 
Summary:

Becoming a vampire was supposed to mean a new beginning for Bella. Instead tragedy is visited upon the Cullens, and Bella is neither alive, nor dead, left to keep a promise she wishes she'd never made. This is her Afterlife.

 

Afterlife


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8997
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Stranger

Oh, what a cliffy!! Love it. Please update soon. I just hope that nobody dies (well, the Cullen's...I could care less about the others)

 
Summary:

You Are my Sunshine’ by various artists, song reference.

Set in New Moon, during the 3 months that Bella is unresponsive after Edward leaves. The following one-shot is the way Bella is feeling throughout every verse of the song.

Bella POV

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Because of him, grey skies and cloudy days, were made bearable, and at times even enjoyable. But now, I hated them because of all of the memories they caused. I prefer my sun, my Edward.

 

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 918
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You Are My Sunshine

I am crying with Bella. Good story.



Author's Response:

I am too. I hated that part in New Moon, and there's really not much said about what bella went through and how she was actually feeling during those 3 months, besides what Charlie describes to Alice (but that's only what he was observing of her).

Thank you so much for reviewing! You're the first for this story! Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, even though it's a sad one! :D

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Summary:

Under a Killing Moon banner

Bella goes to Forks to complete some omnious task her mother says she "must do on her own."  Edward struggles with his grip on humanity.  They both harbor secrets, but she knows his.  She's about to learn that her mother is a big, fat liar.  He's about to learn that Alice and Carlisle are capable of keeping secrets from him.  These two might be the best thing for each other; the only way they can come to terms and move forward.  And for once, Bella is Edward's equal.  In will and ability.
OOC, AU, canon pairing

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16808
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great story! Please update soon.

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Hope

THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST CHAPTERS YET.

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alone

I so love it. Update sooN!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Immortal

Oopsies.  Love you, Edward!   lol

Love the story. PLEASE update soon. I can't wait for them to see each other.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Trembling

Like the story. Edward needs to stop being an asshole. What now - I say throw down time!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Restraint

Great chapter. Update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

Please, don't let him be with Tanya. If he is married to her or something, don't let them have done the deed --- PLEASE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Love Me

I am so glad you updated. A friend of mine were saying awhile ago we wished it would update. I hate that he slept with that bitch. Hopefully it was only one time.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

tee hee... you talk about my story *hides*  Thats exciting and nreve-wracking all at the same time!

LOVE YOU!

I get the angst everyone is having... must be patient ppl, even E tried to tell us *ahem, Bella* that "it isnt what it seems like..." So... stick it out ;)

Thanks,

Air

xox

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Help Me

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Leave Me

please update soon

want to know what went on with E and that ho T

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Find Me

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ready

so dying for more

 

I want to know what he did with the skank Tanya.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Set

I HOPE BELLA IS BEING GOOD

PLEASE NO SLASH. TO EACH THEIR OWN, BUT THAT BELONGS IN STORIES THAT ARE SLASH, NOT WHEN HE IS LOVE WITH BELLA. THAT WOULD RUIN THIS STORY AS HE HAS TO MAKE UP FOR TANYA?



Author's Response: Haha... Totally kidding about the slash lmao! Well, not kidding that a lot of people wanted it... But ita that this is SO NOT a slash story lol. No worries buddy. I'll leave the rest up to your guys' imagination. ;) Thanks Air xox

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: No

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. EDWARD CAN'T GIVE UP....HE NEEDS TO BEG HER AND WIN HER BACK. DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE SKANK TANYA.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Options

One of my favorite stories

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Bella

Get to updating...now!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Shattered

please tell me that it only appeared like she was having sex with him and didn't do the deed - it would just ruin it for me.



Author's Response: DID NOT! Promise! However...it is important that Ed not know one way or the other immediately. He walked in at a bad time and he needs to appreciate just how far Bella has fallen...no deal breaker tho. You have my word. Air xox

 
Summary:

Edward hasn't discovered 'vegetarianism.'   Bella's out alone in the woods and Edward attacks. Alice has had visions of Edward joining the Cullen's for months and has to race to stop him killing the one person that could turn his life around. As Edward helps Bella recover he has to decide the answer to one of the hardest questions he's ever had to ask himself. What is more tempting, her blood or her body?

"Good." He paused, and took a deep breath. "Now, stories, fairy tales if you will, teach you things. They teach you to dream, to experience a world outside of your own. To escape from reality. But, such fantasies must have origins, don't you think? No one person could have such a vivid imagination to create a world so differently than our own. They must have known that some of these tales or elements of them, existed in reality. Us, my family and I, along with many others, are indeed characters from such tales. Monsters in most," he said in disgust. I, personally, couldn't imagine a world where Carlisle or Alice could be classed as monsters; they were too beautiful, too gentle to be worthy of that description. "We are what some call the 'Cold Ones'. Others know us as the 'Danag', the 'Estrie', the 'Upier', 'Varacolaci', 'Nelapsi', 'Stregoni Benefici'. I could go on forever. Lies have been spun and names created, but you would probably recognize us by the more widely known name." I had become so entranced by his story that it shocked me back into the present when he paused. I waited, with bated breath for him to continue. He looked deep into my eyes as if he was searching for something. "Vampire," he said simply. ~ Excerpt from Chapter Three 'Collision Course'

Bring Out the Light in Me by Hysteria_09

Told from both Alice and Bella's point of view for the first two chapters, but after that, it's all Bella.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4435
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Meetings

I like it and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, glad you're liking it!

 
Summary:

When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.

Will he be able to resist?

 

Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more. Great writting. PLEASE udate SOON!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! As soon as it gets approved, chapter two will be up! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Emmett’s last heart to heart with me on the subject of sex consisted of him holding up a banana and a doughnut and then two bananas. He wanted to know which I found more interesting. I was more interested in what he was doing with human food in the first place. He then shoved a DVD in my hands, told me to have fun, and left the room. It was titled Edward Penishands. Clever. LOL!


 


I really like it - keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks! There is a really porn called that....or, so I heard...

 




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