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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

This is an alternative ending to New Moon AU and slightly OOC, for Bella anyway. It starts when Rosalie calls Edward to tell him what Alice saw. Rosalie tells Edward that Bella jumped and that Alice went back to Forks to check on her. Edward decides to come back to find out what is going on. Also, Victoria does not make a newborn army in Seattle...but don't worry about that just yet ;)

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WARNING: This is not a "Jacob is the devil" type of story. Even though it will end up with ExB, if you want to stab Jake, then you probably shouldn't read this fic 'cause I love him and I will not write him as a complete ass.

Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight

Copyright infringment is not intended


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Butterfly Effect
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 64370
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

update soon



Author's Response:

I'll try ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

love this

I so want them back together.  Feel free to kill Jacob off



Author's Response:

Thank you!

They will be...Jacob's death isn't on the agenda, though he probably wouldn't mind (My poor Jakie *tear*)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love the story

Jacob needs to go imprint on a milkbone



Author's Response:

Thank you

 

Kelly loves that idea...I, however, veto it.....perchance it will be mentioned at a later date, tho ;P

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope she has some mouthwash

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Good job



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Sandy Cove by thessamp Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

They never went to La Push. Instead, they took a longer drive to Sandy Cove. Instead of riding in the front seat of Mike's Suburban, she rode with a Cullen in a shiny, silver Volvo. She never heard the legends from Jacob.

She got to know him as a boy that she liked, a boy that was extremely strong and fast, and maybe a bit too protective. And she made him feel like a 17 year old boy, in love for the first time.

And eventually, something amazing happened. They tore down their shields and trusted each other. No more secrets.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7347
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Invitation

LOVE IT - UPDATE SOON

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Holding Hands

I LOVE this story. Edward is so sweet. I also like it that apparently he doesn't have a closed mind to changing her! The texts were funny.

 
Lights Out. by Lucille Marie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The end of New Moon, told from Edward's perspective, starting with the fateful phone call from Rosalie.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Demetri, Edward, Felix, Jane, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3303
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Candle

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Monster (shabbyapple)

Great job!

 
Remembrance by denise17 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

If there were such things as soul mates, then there are such things as past lives. And when Edward Masen became a vampire, his immortal soul became one with his body. But what of his soul mate? While he lives forever, her soul wanders from body to body, bound by the ties of mortality, always searching and never finding. Alone every single lifetime. After 108 years of solitude, he meets those brilliant chocolate-brown eyes for the first time -- again. Finally.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12593
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting. Can't wait for more.

 
Summary:

Becoming a vampire was supposed to mean a new beginning for Bella. Instead tragedy is visited upon the Cullens, and Bella is neither alive, nor dead, left to keep a promise she wishes she'd never made. This is her Afterlife.

 

Afterlife


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8997
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Stranger

Oh, what a cliffy!! Love it. Please update soon. I just hope that nobody dies (well, the Cullen's...I could care less about the others)

 
Summary:

You Are my Sunshine’ by various artists, song reference.

Set in New Moon, during the 3 months that Bella is unresponsive after Edward leaves. The following one-shot is the way Bella is feeling throughout every verse of the song.

Bella POV

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Because of him, grey skies and cloudy days, were made bearable, and at times even enjoyable. But now, I hated them because of all of the memories they caused. I prefer my sun, my Edward.

 

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 918
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You Are My Sunshine

I am crying with Bella. Good story.



Author's Response:

I am too. I hated that part in New Moon, and there's really not much said about what bella went through and how she was actually feeling during those 3 months, besides what Charlie describes to Alice (but that's only what he was observing of her).

Thank you so much for reviewing! You're the first for this story! Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, even though it's a sad one! :D

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Summary:

Under a Killing Moon banner

Bella goes to Forks to complete some omnious task her mother says she "must do on her own."  Edward struggles with his grip on humanity.  They both harbor secrets, but she knows his.  She's about to learn that her mother is a big, fat liar.  He's about to learn that Alice and Carlisle are capable of keeping secrets from him.  These two might be the best thing for each other; the only way they can come to terms and move forward.  And for once, Bella is Edward's equal.  In will and ability.
OOC, AU, canon pairing

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16808
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great story! Please update soon.

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Hope

THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST CHAPTERS YET.

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alone

I so love it. Update sooN!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Immortal

Oopsies.  Love you, Edward!   lol

Love the story. PLEASE update soon. I can't wait for them to see each other.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Trembling

Like the story. Edward needs to stop being an asshole. What now - I say throw down time!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Restraint

Great chapter. Update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

Please, don't let him be with Tanya. If he is married to her or something, don't let them have done the deed --- PLEASE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Love Me

I am so glad you updated. A friend of mine were saying awhile ago we wished it would update. I hate that he slept with that bitch. Hopefully it was only one time.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

tee hee... you talk about my story *hides*  Thats exciting and nreve-wracking all at the same time!

LOVE YOU!

I get the angst everyone is having... must be patient ppl, even E tried to tell us *ahem, Bella* that "it isnt what it seems like..." So... stick it out ;)

Thanks,

Air

xox

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Help Me

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Leave Me

please update soon

want to know what went on with E and that ho T

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Find Me

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ready

so dying for more

 

I want to know what he did with the skank Tanya.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Set

I HOPE BELLA IS BEING GOOD

PLEASE NO SLASH. TO EACH THEIR OWN, BUT THAT BELONGS IN STORIES THAT ARE SLASH, NOT WHEN HE IS LOVE WITH BELLA. THAT WOULD RUIN THIS STORY AS HE HAS TO MAKE UP FOR TANYA?



Author's Response: Haha... Totally kidding about the slash lmao! Well, not kidding that a lot of people wanted it... But ita that this is SO NOT a slash story lol. No worries buddy. I'll leave the rest up to your guys' imagination. ;) Thanks Air xox

 




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