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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: Bella and Edward have happily been together for decades but Bella craves something new and exciting in their sex life. Jasper steps up to the plate to fill the void in Bella. Where do they go from here and who else will help them along the way? One-shot turned into a lemony story.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 18995
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I like it. But I hate Tanya. Please, no sex with Tanya!!! Author's Response: I dislike Tanya as well. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I like the story. I HATE TANYA with a passion. Please, no sex with Tanya. Let Edward finally just grow a pair and tell her to back (feel free to use STRONGER words) off. They can sleep with Aro for all I care....just not that skank!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha, Bella and Aro. I've only seen that in Past & Present and Kiss did it so perfectly that I wouldn't even begin to touch that, but I agree with you about the Tanya hate.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Edward needs to tell Tanya to get lost!
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Funny! I want to see what she will do to Edward! Author's Response: Oh, trust me it's worth the wait!
Cheers!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
chew toy - hahaha
I really like it. I do want her and Edward back together. Update sooN@! Author's Response: Mmm back together. I'm not telling sorry...you'll just have to wait. It's canon couples though!
Cheers!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Emmet and wood - hahaha.
I really like it. I hope though, that despite her change she hasn't done the deed with anyone. I would like to see her and Edward get it on down the road. Author's Response: Ooooh Izzy still a virgin??? I'm not telling yet!
Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
I can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet again. I love this story so much. Update very soon - please!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Hehe! It's well worth the wait...trust me.
Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Great chapter
I am ready for the return of Edward!!! Author's Response: Not too much longer. Should be worth the wait though!
Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
CANT WAIT UPDATE SOON@@@@@ QUIT YOUR DAY JOB UPDATE SOON
LOVE THIS STORY
Hope it has a happy ending! Author's Response: Lol well if you guys paid me...I would totally quit but until then *sigh*. Though I am committed cause I submitted next chap this morning. Love me I know you want to!!!!
Not telling bout the happy ending...it might it might not!
Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
MUST UPDATE LIKE NOW
Emmett belted the crap out of me, telling me to man up and just be there for my family. I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO SEE THAT. Author's Response: Lol as soon as Texbelle sent it I updated it. Validation is the hardest wait! Yeah it was funny in my head...both of them yelling and hollering in the janitors closet...priceless!
Cheers!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
So funny. I do want them back together in a bad way, but boy it is funny.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Dying Again
Love the story. It is nice to see Edward get some payback. But, in the end, being the pathetic creature I am, I want them to be together and be happy. I do hope that Izzy still is a virgin. As much as I like Izzy, it would be nice to have something sweet left from the old Bella. Also, I hope he changes her as well.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's
I like it. I want her and Edward to be together like NOW. I like the new Edward. He needs to keep it up and just do a throw down with her. I do hope though they are both still virgins, so something sweet is left.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood
Love it, but a throw down has to be in the works
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30:Stolen
Just hope Edward isn't so sad that Tanya tricks him into sleeping with him.
can't wait to see where this is going
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Great chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed
Oh and it came with a free steam mop,” lol
Great chapter
Okay, I am ready for Edward to grow a pair now and do a toss down!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I love it that you had her wait for him. Great job. Now, please let her WANT to be changed into a vampire!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
Real men don’t gross out their family,” lol
Great chapter. Nice to see Edward relax and become a man.
Please let her be changed!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever
What did you just do? Give us all a heart attack!
Love the story. It really has been the perfect story. However, it will continue to be perfect as long as Bella gets to be turned and live forever with Edward - minus the brain damage.
Great writting
Now go update so we can hopefully recover from this chapter lol
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Limbo
waiting for the next chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes
All I can say is there better be some explanations in the next chapter. I am actually physically sick.
#1 - Edward wouldn't act like it was no big deal that Bella was dead
#2 - Edward wouldn't do anything disgusting with Tanya
#3- Edward would never be disrespectful at the funeral with flirting with Tanya
I will give you the benfit of doubt as you have done such a good job with this story. But if he has done anything with Tanaya then I am done LOL!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt
I am glad he didn't sleep with Tanya.
Summary: It was there where my life fell apart, where everything inside of me died. It was a simple decision really. Who would give up the opportunity to have a piece of heaven? I tried but I couldn't. I was so young, so naïve.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 6853
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Please update soon. I like it!
Summary: What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?
What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?
Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Death
SOooooooooooooooo GOOD ! You must update soon! Author's Response: Your wish is my command...
Next chapter is awaiting validation as we speak
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