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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a vampire living alone, away from the rest of the Cullens, with nothing but his music to fill the emptiness of his lonely heart. Little does he know that his quiet seclusion will never be the same again when the shy, beautiful Bella Swan comes into his life. Quiet but inquisitive, Bella is more than curious about Edward and his strange habits. Little does she know that his secret could threaten her very life. Will Edward be able to control his appetite for her blood and satisfy his yearning for this enchanting young woman?

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Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34559
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I sooooooooooooo love this story. Great writting. This was a great chapter. However, you are horrible for ending it here and better update soon! Soon I tell you!!! I hope he stays the night!!!



Author's Response: I aim to please. I'm working on it but I want it to be really good so bear with me. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I so love this story!



Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thank ya kindly hun! Means alot.

 
Summary:

 

Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Seeing The Light

good stuff

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Choosing Battles

Too good. Update soon. Love it. I hope E and B get back together in this tale.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: A New Day

Love the story, please update. I hope it has a happy ending with Edward.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Road Trip

Can't wait to see what is going on. I hope Edward is the reason!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Change of Heart

Very interesting. I like it  alot. Update soon@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: First Sight

For the love of all that is holly, Edward needs to grow a pair!

Great story.

 
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Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Shattered

Can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Broken

Good story

Good writting

Please let it have a happy  E and B ending. I hope he changes her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Stop and Stare

such a great story

 
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Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sacrifice

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY

 
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Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Uncertainty

GREAT WRITTING

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Nothing to Lose

I felt sorry for them  - what a mess

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Mess I Made

I feel so bad for E and B. Great writting.

 
Summary:

Seven years after becoming a vampire, Bella comes to terms with all that Edward knew that she would miss of her humanity.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2495
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: OneShot (V)

Beautiful story!

 
Alice's Twilight by MissBella Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 360]
Summary:

"It wasn't long before I started to get anxious, so by the time I walked into the cafeteria, I immediately targeted lover-boy, sitting alone at the new table as I had predicted.

Can I talk to Bella now?? I thought toward him frantically, grinning ear to ear and almost shaking with excitement.

He looked up at me, weary. 'Keep out of it.'

Well, I wasn't going to have to wait much longer. Fine. Be stubborn. It's only a matter of time, I reminded him.

 

He sighed, as if to say 'Trust me, I know.'"

 

When change occurs in an immortal's life, it is irreversible and exciting. When you can predict these changes, it's even more intriguing. But when you can't change a future that might be fatally dangerous... then there's a problem.

 

Although her past is unknown, Alice Cullen's future is even brighter. Visions of a newcomer - Bella Swan - bring pain, joy, conflict, and even love to the Cullen family's reclusive, tight circle.

Told once by Bella herself, Alice's Twilight is a take on Stephenie Meyer's first YA novel - from our favorite sister psychic's point of view. Written by MissBella over at Twilighted.Net and read by many, Alice's Twilight is sure to satisfy any fan-pire's literature thirst.

This is Twilight, from Alice's point of view. It's NOT one-shot, finally. :) I decided to try something new. I've done Bella's POV, Nessie's POV ( story on the way) ... so now, why not try everybody's favorite sister psychic?

Seriously, you can look up Stephenie Meyer's Midnight Sun and see the exact dialogue. That's where I got the base... haha ;)

I do not own Twilight, but it does own me ;) Twilight and all characters featured in this story belong to Stephenie Meyer, who everyone loves and adores.

Take a look! Hope you like it. 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 52828
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time

I so love ALice. I love the with the mountain lion on top -lol. Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. First Sight

Sooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Love Alice! Loove this story - update soon !!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Decisions

I really really like it! Update soon! I love Alice so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Not "Yet"

love it. Love Alice

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4. The Crash

LOVE IT

UPDATE SOON

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5. The Truth Comes Out

teenage angst,” lol

 

Great job

 

Love Alice

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Longing

I so love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose

This is a great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 11. Observing

Awesome chapter

Cute

 




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