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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Fall From Grace by Tempus Fugit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Edward kills Bella in 1940. Then he meets her again some odd 60 years later in Forks, Washington. He and the rest of the Cullens remember her. She does not remember Edward... or does she?

Fall From Grace

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 11150
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: This Mortal Flesh

I liked the chapter

 
Summary:

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For as long as she could remember James had always been an important part of her life. They'd met in grade school and quickly became the best of friends. In junior high they started dating and Bella thought they would be together forever.
James' life is turned upside down and the next thing Bella knows she's being forced to leave her home and her mother in an attempt to get away from the last person she'd ever thought she'd run from.
She escapes to Forks, WA, a small town on the Olympic peninsula where her father is the chief of police. As the danger draws nearer Chief Swan realizes that he alone may not be able to keep his only daughter safe. So he turns to an unlikely place for help. What happens when he puts his precious only child in the protection of predators?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 84384
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: September 06, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I just love this story

please update soon

 
Summary:

This is an adaptation of New Moon and it takes place a year after Edward left Bella. Bella was heartbroken and devastated, on the verge of a catatonic depression but anger and resentment helped her heal as well as, Jacob, who she has become very close with. My story picks up a year after the breakup at Ben and Angela's wedding. (Yes, they married early). Please keep in mind that this is my first attempt at writing and that it is very amateur. Additionally, please be advised that this adaptation is very graphic and contains strong sexual passages. Any feedback, good or bad, would be greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy.    


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 20793
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Ceremony

I like it. But if you aren't going to let Edward and Bella get back together, let me know - I couldn't handle reading it then (I know, I am pathetic).



Author's Response:

I don't think the story would be of any good if Edward and Bella didn't hook up.  The question is... will it work?  More chapters on thier way.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Forest

I hope Jacob is dead!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Wake

I like the story. However, you have me worried. Hopefully all is well with E and B.

 
Summary:

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John F. Kennedy said once that the courage of life is often a less dramatic spectacle than the courage of a final moment; but it is no less a magnificent mixture of triumph and tragedy. A man does what he must, in spite of personal consequences, in spite of obstacles and dangers and pressures, and that is the basis of all morality.

I couldn't agree more.

Courage was the reason I was here. Courage and love.

We know Edward and Bellas story during Twilight, but what if it was different? What if Alice was the new girl, and Bella was already a vampire? Would Jaspers self-control hold out when he meets a girl whos blood smells so intoxicating to him?

Mostly AxJ, all canon pairings.

Thank you so much to MoonSpinner for the amazing banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4088
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: First Sight

SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD ! UPDATE SOON!

 
Pieces by ForbiddenScars Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Pieces (banner by Chaney)

This is a story about Jasper and Alice: Their journey, connecting the past, present, and future.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 934
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Warmth

Good stuff

 
Summary:

After surviving a traumatic event in Phoenix, Bella comes to the realization that she will never be normal again.  Bella feels that Phoenix holds too many reminders of what happened and decides to move to Forks to live with her father, Charlie.  Not long after starting at Forks High School, Bella meets the Cullen family and quickly realizes that they, too, are not quite normal, just like her.  She is intrigued by this.  Eventually, she falls in love with Edward.  Even after discovering their deepest secret, she is still not surprised by this extraordinary family.  But what happens when Bella's past tracks her down in Forks?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2128
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Like it - udate soon!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a vampire living alone, away from the rest of the Cullens, with nothing but his music to fill the emptiness of his lonely heart. Little does he know that his quiet seclusion will never be the same again when the shy, beautiful Bella Swan comes into his life. Quiet but inquisitive, Bella is more than curious about Edward and his strange habits. Little does she know that his secret could threaten her very life. Will Edward be able to control his appetite for her blood and satisfy his yearning for this enchanting young woman?

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Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34559
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, so LOVE it. MORE SOON PLEASE!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I sooooooooooooo love this story. Great writting. This was a great chapter. However, you are horrible for ending it here and better update soon! Soon I tell you!!! I hope he stays the night!!!



Author's Response: I aim to please. I'm working on it but I want it to be really good so bear with me. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I so love this story!



Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thank ya kindly hun! Means alot.

 
Summary:

 

Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Seeing The Light

good stuff

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Choosing Battles

Too good. Update soon. Love it. I hope E and B get back together in this tale.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: A New Day

Love the story, please update. I hope it has a happy ending with Edward.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Road Trip

Can't wait to see what is going on. I hope Edward is the reason!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Change of Heart

Very interesting. I like it  alot. Update soon@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: First Sight

For the love of all that is holly, Edward needs to grow a pair!

Great story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Shattered

Can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Broken

Good story

Good writting

Please let it have a happy  E and B ending. I hope he changes her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Stop and Stare

such a great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sacrifice

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Uncertainty

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Nothing to Lose

I felt sorry for them  - what a mess

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Mess I Made

I feel so bad for E and B. Great writting.

 
Summary:

Seven years after becoming a vampire, Bella comes to terms with all that Edward knew that she would miss of her humanity.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2495
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: OneShot (V)

Beautiful story!

 




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