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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Scheme of Fate by thebugroom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 696]
Summary:

Bella Swan moved to Forks, Washington after being brutally attacked and turned into a vampire in Phoenix. She's desperately trying to put her life back together when she finds out that she's not the only vampire in Forks. Will the Cullen Family and Edward in particular be able to show there that being a vampire isn't so bad after all?

 

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Edward's family wouldn't care if we took off together. He wasn't a child. He was old enough to be Charlie's grandfather and well knew how to handle himself even if I was simply a seventeen-year-old girl. Edward also had more money at hand than I was even aware of; I always tried not to think about just how rich the Cullens were.

We could literally disappear for months or years on end, checking in with the rest of the Cullen's periodically and they wouldn't think anything of it other than that they might miss us. We could, quite literally, travel the world.

 

Forum: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8798


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 97975
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Center of Attention

ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES



Author's Response: I love seeing your reviews. They may not be very long, but I can see that you read every single chapter and that you are enjoying yourself so far. Thank you.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Close Call

This was a remarkable chapter

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Treaty

Great job with this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Not Just Tribal Elders

I can't believe this story didn't make it. It is an amazing one! It would be a great IFIC.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Sunny Days and Arm Wrestling

I soooooooooooooooooo love this

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Calm Before The Storm

Fantastic job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Calm Before The Storm

Fantastic job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Baseball Game

This is such an excellant story. I love it!



Author's Response: You are so sweet. You leave a review on every chapter. I love it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 -- The Plan

Great job as always with this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Flight and Deception

perfect as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Final Battle

A+ as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Return To Washington

LOved it as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Interrupted

Can't wait to see what Charlie does

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Homecoming

I hope you do more

 
Idylle Incité by Kay Cannon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Idylle Incité Banner

After a rough morning and being stood up for a lunch meeting, structured and focused Bella Swan meets the passionate and challenging Edward Cullen. A daily writing prompt series hosted by Fictionista Workshop.

Thank you to Dahlia Black for the amazing banner. You can find more of her fabulous work here: http://www.dahliablackthings.blogspot.com/?zx=34b750a388c0481d


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 4848
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: February 13, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chance

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. there will be an update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Opportunity

I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS



Author's Response:

Aw, yay! I'm so glad! *beams* Thanks so much for the review! <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Query

so love it



Author's Response:

*hugs* Thank you! <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Trade

I REALLY LIKE THIS



Author's Response:

*beams* That makes me so happy! Thanks for the review! <3333

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Seclusion

keep it coming



Author's Response:

Gladly! Thanks for reading and every review!!! <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prospect

OKAY, READY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

I'll do what I can to get it up in a jiffy. Thanks for the review! <3

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are both broken by his abrupt departure following her birthday. In an attempt to heal her pain, Bella turns to pen and knife for release, until a nomad vampire crosses her path and new possibilities bloom. Meanwhile, Edward deals with his self-inflicted torment through music, which brings him closer to his family. But the tides of sorrow are too strong, and he must learn to accept fate or drown.

Bella-singer, Edward-singer/piano, writing notes and blood, Jasper-guitar, Alice-violin/percussions

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 157862
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: July 13, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Darkness - Part II

great job as usual



Author's Response:

Thank you luv!!!

<3 ~Nae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Memories

OMG U must update now!!! AUGHH



Author's Response:

Thank you! hehehe, glad to see you are enjoying it.

The next chapter is in the validating que already, shouldn't be too long. ;)

<3 Nae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Promises

VERY GOOD

I HOPE YOU FINISH THIS. I ONLY SAY THIS B/C SO MANY START AND NEVER FINISH.

VERY GOOD WRITTING



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm so happy you like it so far! I already have 10 chapters written, and the entire outline. I will NOT be abandoning this story, it will come to a natural end.

Thanks for the review, stay tuned. ;)
~Nae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Persuasions

GREAT WRITTING



Author's Response:

Thank you!! That means a lot. I'm so glad you liked it.

~Nae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Affirmation

great writting and story



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, xox

<3 ~Nae

 




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