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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Threadbare by Bionic Becks Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Childhood pipe-dreams & promises... When Bella's Mother relocates them away from her best friend, her heart is left hanging by a thread. 16 Years later when fate steps in, will the world famous, Teddy Masen remember where his heart belongs? 

A romantic love story, with a few laughs and zesty lemons thrown in for good measure!

ThreadbareSSVO

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 57825
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE

CAN'T WAIT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

love it

like stories where she is innocent

hope he recognizes her

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

great job

 
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Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

dying for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

lol

 
Summary:

Bella is a night manager at a small but luxurious hotel.  Edward is a hotshot movie star that has forgotten the world does not revolve around him.  His agent books him and his entourage into Bella's hotel for their vacation. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6343
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks! glad you're liking it so far

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this. Can't wait for more.

 
Mr. Cullen by Jenshu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Edward is a teacher. Bella is his student. Edward is a vampire. Bella is human. What happens when sexual tensions run high? Something will have to give.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1988
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Day

good start

 
Summary:

Bella meets Edward when he helps her after an accident, letting her drink his blood. Things begin to change when Bella and Edward are drawn together. Bella wants his blood, he wants her heart. AU, extremely OOC!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8110
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: February 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY....A LOT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

why did she have to have sex with the mutt! YUK



Author's Response:

haha! I know! It was sad to write. I love Jacob but he's just not meant for Bella. It was a guilt thing. Don't hold it against me!!

 
Summary:

Everyone makes mistakes and Bella is about to make the biggest mistake of her life. Will Edward be able to resist the temptation of Bella’s blood much longer? Will Jacob be able to save her in time? (Post New Moon, Bella still saves Edward, Edward and the Cullens still return to Forks but this story is completely AU after the end of New Moon.) Rating is set for graphic images, sexual content and some violence in later chapters.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 36926
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beautiful Nightmare

I like it. However, I need to make sure this is an E and B story. I am fine if Jacob is just a friend but I don't read J and B or stories where she sleeps with him - yuk.

Good writting



Author's Response:

To be totally honest with you I have 2 versions of this story in the works. One in which she ends up with Edward and one in which she ends up with Jacob. I am uncertain which I like better and which I will continue to work on, it has to come naturally to me so if this becomes a Bella/Jacob story then I apologize to you in advance.

If it does become Bella/Jacob I am not very comfortable with writing sexual scenes so at the very least the chances of the story being a sexual J/B story are less than 10%.

You'll just have to tune in until I decide which way to take it, I'll try to remember to warn you should I put Bella in Jake's arms.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Reaction

Have you decided it you are going to make this a B and J story? I know you told me before you didn't know but would give me a warning as I hate Jacob and don't read those type of stories. Great writting. But really, I hate J with a passion. I am fine in stories where he is a friend, gay, or doesn't get Bella, but other than that it just breaks my heart lol.



Author's Response:

This version will be J&B BUT there will be a E&B version to follow. I promise.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is heartbroken because her boyfriend, James, died in a fatal car accident. She has decided to go back to the place where their love first began: Los Angeles. However, what happens when her plans to relive the magic of meeting James is ruined when someone is determined to heal her broken heart?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 11490
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: February 24, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

looking forward to more

really like this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very well written. I could feel her saddness. Please continue.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. YOU CAN REALLY FEEL THE EMOTION. NICE CHANGE WHERE VICTORIA AND JAMES AREN'T BAD FOR ONCE LOL.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I was going for the approach to make them not evil, but also not main characters. I'm glad you like this story!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story.

Let me guess, those loons the LU did a number on this story as well over at FF ( I swear they don't have lives).

 
I Dreamed Of You by Krismarie94 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Once upon a time, there lived a girl. A girl who had dreams. A girl who had big dreams.

Perhaps that girl's biggest dream was Edward Cullen.

And, once upon a time, that girl's dreams came true.

This is the story of Isabella Swan- the girl who dreamed.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 603
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

Edward is a lead singer of a hard rock band-lots of drugs, alcohol, and sex. Bella is a massage therapist freshly out of Massage Therapy school and her first job is with the band, Loxley Screws that consists of Cullen Masen, Emmett, Jasper and Jake, who is managed by Carlisle.

This story is dedicated to Peter Steele of Type O Negative who passed away April 14th, 2010.  I will miss you.  This story will have the ending you were supposed to have had.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 115979
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Beauty of the Pagan gods

I am team Edward but RUN BELLA RUN AWAY FAST

 
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Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue New Toy

Well, this should be interesting lol

 
The Virgin Game by Alylyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Bella is good and ready to lose her virginity. It's just a matter of who should she give it to. Every girl wants their first time to be remarkable. So who will it be? Edward, the lusty sweetheart, Jacob, the friend, or James, the sleazy rich guy.

Lemons, Language, the usual.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 11682
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liked it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like that he wants a relationship. Why was she on the pill? Good writting. Like the story.



Author's Response:

Thanx for the review! She's on the pill for every reason women I know are on it: to be prepared or for god awful period cramps and other symptoms. <3 Hope you continue to read this!

 
blossom by ms_ambrosia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 638]
Summary:

 

Isolated and disheartened, Bella Swan struggles to relate to people her age. When a charming young man named James enters her life, she finally starts to feel like she belongs. But when an unexpected pregnancy leads her back to Forks, what at first seemed like a punishment turns into a blessing in disguise. Hope blooms in unexpected places.

AU-AH. OOC. BxE, JxA, EmxR.

 

Banner courtesy of the fabulous m81170. She's ten kinds of awesome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 108516
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Oh, She's Only 17

I FEEL SO BAD FOR BELLA....BAD PARENTS

LOVE THE STORY



Author's Response:

Yeah, Renee isn't going to be winning any "Mother of the Year" awards anytime soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: August & Everything After

YOU REALLLY FEEL HER PAIN

I HOPE KARMA GETS JANE



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad that Bella's depression and lonliness are coming through.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Where Do We Go Now but Nowhere

I love this story

I feel so sorry for both of them. I hope she doesn't sleep with James. I like them, but we all hold out for Edward lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I wish I could hurry and cram all this Jacksonville stuff in. I'm anxious for Edward, too. :)

 




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