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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen began life in the highlands of pre-medieval Scotland.  He should have died there, revered as the warrior-king he was.  He didn't.  In the aftermath of a battle against Celtic invaders his life is forever altered; he is murdered and transformed. He struggles to come to terms with his new life over the centuries despite finding meaning in his family, his studies, and his music.  Just as the tedium begins to destroy the tenuous foundations of the life he has built, the arrival of a familiar woman disrupts everything.

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 67089
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: With Gaping Maw

THIS IS A FANTASTIC CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

great writting

looking forward to more

please tell me you finish ----- I only say this b/c there are so many stories that are started and never finished.



Author's Response:

I have every intention of finishing.  And the plot outline is already done, which I consider the hard part.  Ideally I'll update every 1-2 weeks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Loss Incarnate

SUCH A GREAT STORY AND WRITTTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Beautiful Doom

GREAT AS ALWAYS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Vortigern's Folly

I LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK THE WRITTING IS WONDERFUL.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Spark Ignition

I love this story. The writting is EXCELLANT.



Author's Response: Thanks! rhi

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Divine Providence

Great writting

Enjoying the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Physical Reciprocation

I just love this story

Beautiful writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Grasping Gravity

A+ as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Brenhinoedd y Saeson

I really am impressed with the writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sublime Surrender

Fantastic as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Trading Gifts

A+++++++++++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Trading Gifts

A+++++++++++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Anger Answers

Well written as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Misinterpreted Melodrama

Fantastic writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Draconian Deals

Great writting

A+++

 
Romeo and Juliet by Char Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Masen have been sworn enemies since the moment they first met. Cast for the lead roles of Forks High's upcoming production of "Romeo and Juliet", they are forced to put aside their differences and focus on their one true passion: acting. But, what if, in between the lines of iambic pentameter, a new passion is found? One so powerful and unexpected that it blows them both off their feet? Can life ever be the same again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 764
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella like he did in New Moon. 8 years later and she's joined the Volturi and is now engaged to one of the Volturi Leaders. The Cullens arrive along with Bella's human family and it's now up to the Cullens to win back Bella's the rest of her families forgiveness for them leaving behind all while she's planning on becoming Queen of the Vampires... Bella and Marcus!

Lemons, and AU!


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 12841
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: April 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Looking forward to more...but how did they  tell the parents? What about keeping secrets?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

That'll be covered in the next chapter

xo Beckie

 
Newspaper Wars by Annichka101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella returns to Washington after Renee's death and finds herself an unwitting pawn in a newspaper war. Will her ethics survive an a-moral boss? Can she resist competing fishwrap publisher Carlisle's advances? Can she resist his son's? AH/OOC M for Lemons


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 24017
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1 - Coming Full Circle

REALLY GOOD

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Worst Case Scenario

I HATE JAKE SO I REALLY LOVED THIS LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Cat and Mouse

I LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  I wanted to tell you that the next several chapters are posted on FanFiction if you haven't read them yet.  On Twilighted I will keep on plugging away with at least one chapter a week, but if you want to read ahead and wait a little longer in between on FF, then go get your fix now!

Thanks again for supporting the story, its really tough to be a new author in this environment and it feels like a shot in the arm when people offer up some feedback.

Yours,

Annichka

 
Hope May Vanish by Vixen1836 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Successful executive Edward Cullen is living a nightmare: the love of his life Bella Swan has disappeared without a trace.

Continued by request and inspiration with prompts from Fictionista Workshop's WitFit challenge. RATED M. AU/AH. 

 

 

 

Thank you to CalamityJane for the banner.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alec, Bella, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Felix, James, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7018
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prompt: Abracadabra

FANTASTIC START

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Prompt: Inadequate

CAN;T WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Prompt: Sea Salt

LOVE THIS STORY

 
Double en Tundra by msbond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Looking for an Answer, Bella seeks solitude in the one place she never expects to find what she's looking for. Will a life changing experience sway her or will she follow her heart?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 17042
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I THINK THE WRITTING IS GOOD. HOWEVER, I THINK THERE SHOULD BE BUILD UP BEFORE SEX. THE LEMON WAS GOOD.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Actually the only reaon for the quick lemon was it started as a one shot written for a friend. I couldn't get the story out of my head and I kept thinking of what if's so I decided to continue it.  I fully agree with you and the lemon coming up so fast and if the story had been started as a multi chapter then I wold have played it all very diffrently.

Again though, thanks for the review! I always appreciate feedback.

xoxo

Ms. Bond

 

 




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