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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Newspaper Wars by Annichka101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella returns to Washington after Renee's death and finds herself an unwitting pawn in a newspaper war. Will her ethics survive an a-moral boss? Can she resist competing fishwrap publisher Carlisle's advances? Can she resist his son's? AH/OOC M for Lemons


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 24017
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Worst Case Scenario

I HATE JAKE SO I REALLY LOVED THIS LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Cat and Mouse

I LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  I wanted to tell you that the next several chapters are posted on FanFiction if you haven't read them yet.  On Twilighted I will keep on plugging away with at least one chapter a week, but if you want to read ahead and wait a little longer in between on FF, then go get your fix now!

Thanks again for supporting the story, its really tough to be a new author in this environment and it feels like a shot in the arm when people offer up some feedback.

Yours,

Annichka

 
Hope May Vanish by Vixen1836 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Successful executive Edward Cullen is living a nightmare: the love of his life Bella Swan has disappeared without a trace.

Continued by request and inspiration with prompts from Fictionista Workshop's WitFit challenge. RATED M. AU/AH. 

 

 

 

Thank you to CalamityJane for the banner.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alec, Bella, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Felix, James, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7018
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prompt: Abracadabra

FANTASTIC START

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Prompt: Inadequate

CAN;T WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Prompt: Sea Salt

LOVE THIS STORY

 
Double en Tundra by msbond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Looking for an Answer, Bella seeks solitude in the one place she never expects to find what she's looking for. Will a life changing experience sway her or will she follow her heart?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 17042
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I THINK THE WRITTING IS GOOD. HOWEVER, I THINK THERE SHOULD BE BUILD UP BEFORE SEX. THE LEMON WAS GOOD.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Actually the only reaon for the quick lemon was it started as a one shot written for a friend. I couldn't get the story out of my head and I kept thinking of what if's so I decided to continue it.  I fully agree with you and the lemon coming up so fast and if the story had been started as a multi chapter then I wold have played it all very diffrently.

Again though, thanks for the review! I always appreciate feedback.

xoxo

Ms. Bond

 

 
Set in Stone by Psyche_001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

After her life was saved by a man more illusory than real, Bella leaves Forks for college in Seattle, never actually seeing or meeting him again, convinced that he exists, that he is something deviant and that she is NOT as everyone suggests....crazy.

Edward is bound to secrecy and to a version of life that cannot be shared with the girl he saved, the one he has fallen in love with from a distance. The rules keep him in check, but a dangerous discovery and turn of events make their lives collide again.

How will Edward's fate accommodate what is happening between them?

R&R!


Categories: AU, Other Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 57151
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: March 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

GREAT START

GREAT WRITTING



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Discovery

great writting

exciting story



Author's Response:

You respond to all my chapters. Thanks! Glad you're liking so far :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - The Messenger

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

Thanks again for eading and reviewing! More to come...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - The Problem of Isabella Swan

Great story and plot

 



Author's Response:

THanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - What the.....

Liked it a lot



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - First Pact

Great job with this



Author's Response:

Thank you BB!

 
Stranded by Beth818 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1229]
Summary:

Edward and Bella get on the same plane, but it crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Bella and Edward are the only survivors, and they luckily find a deserted island to stay on until someone finds them. But can they survive each other? All characters are human and OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95080
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter and can't wait for the next

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I THOUGHT THIS WAS A GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thank you! I didn't think many people would like it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

AUGHH! Angst cliffy. Good job.



Author's Response:

thanks! Glad you liked it!

I'll update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

THIS IS WELL DONE

 



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! i'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

sharks are my fear too

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! Stay tuned!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved the chapter. I also like that she had her v card (these are my favorite types of stories). Wonder how Edward will feel about it lol.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Making me cry



Author's Response:

awe, I'm sorry...

Next one will be happier, but this sad one was pretty crucial to the story.

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really like the story. You can't make everyone happy.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOL I know, I think that happens a lot when people know you post on FF. That is why if I read one of FF I review at BOTH places.

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good job. Does Dr. Cullen realize that the pull out method isn't 100% lol.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love the story

great job

 




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