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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Crescent Moon by Brandinm05 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 218]
Summary:

What if Jacob and the Quileute werewolves never showed up in the meadow that day to save Bella? What if Bella became a vampire and Edward wasn't the one to do it? Bella is turned and forced out of Forks, up North to the Denali clan. New bonds are formed while old ones are nearly broken.  Read as Bella adjusts to her new life, and possibly, a new mate.  Special lovely thanks to M1187 for my fanstical banner :)

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Playlist for story can be found at:

http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9BFE9317988CD122


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46381
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Valse d'Amelie

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Nocturne

So dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Passages

I LIKE THIS. PLEASE DON'T LET HER SLEEP WITH HIM.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Primavera

THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Truman Sleep

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Andare

I can't wait for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Rose

Bella with Edward  is how it ALWAYS should be.

Love the story



Author's Response:

Mehhhh, see that's where I disagree.... I played into the whole Bella/Eddie thing because I knew that's what would make the masses happy.   I personally doubt I would have taken him back.... He caused too much pain, he left her, he made his family (pretty much her family) leave her, and didn't even consider how she felt in the process... He just did it.  As my profile states, I'm team Jacob (but we all know how SM makes it end, and no worries- this story will end the "right" way).  Again, if it were me, I'd have been all over Jake- and not just because his devilishly handsome :)  but because he loves Bella unconditionally, despite her transgressions... And because he lets her be herself and pushes her to do what she wants.  Granted, that can get a little stupid at times- but what's life without a little danger, right?

Anyway- those are just my thoughts.  I am so very happy that you are loving the story so far.  Please continue reviewing, as they make my day :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: All Of Me

I think you have done a great job with this story



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you!  I'm not going to lie, I always feel weird putting my writing up online for others to read, but hearing the praise from my readers just makes it feel completely worth it.  Thank you so much for reviewing :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Rose

I am fine with her going back to Edward...that is how it should always be. Jake is just...yuck!

Good writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: All Of Me

A+ as always

 
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Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: String Quartet, Op.1:II. Adagio

gagged with the Jake kiss but I like the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Adagio G Minor

Fantastic chapter.

I always felt sorry for Marcus....he needs someone to love

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Oltremare

sorry to see it ending

 
Summary:

 

Summary: Bella Swan has seen more than any human is allowed to. She had once been the target of a bronze haired vampire. That one time she was saved. But that was long time back…

Now the vampire is back, more determined than ever.

The deadly game of predator and prey begins again on the night of Halloween. Bella is out for a bit of fun and dancing, but it soon turns into a dance with death…

(NOTE: The title is in French, so no typos there. It Is Danse, not Dance).

WARNING: Contains explicit sexual situations, profanity, some violence, and a Dark Edward.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 20300
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this. Love a dark Edward. Hope in the end it will have a happy ending!

Great writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, I would LOL

I sooooooooo love this story. I love darkward. I just hope he realizes he loves her and decides he wants to keep her!

 

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great job

Too bad she slept with the mutt...yuk

I hope E changes her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the story

Feel free to kill Jacob off....

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I was just thinking about this story...love it

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella end up in detention together during Bella's first week of school. How will the meeting go, will they find love or end up hating each other?

OOC ONE-SHOT!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1819
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, he is mad b/c she turned the fan off?



Author's Response:

HI! Thanks for the review! Yes, technically he's annoyed about her wanting the fan off, but because it meant the "music" that made his time in detention pass faster and more pleasantly. IN reality, it's just because he's a bit of a control freak.

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Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5: Conversations and Promises

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9: History Repeats...

I hope that the ho was already prego and needed someone to blame it on. Edward needs to grow a pair and tell Bella and be honest about his feelings.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more and want to see a jealous Edward

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Ch. 1: Enter Alice

I really love this. I hope in the end Edward wises up.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Ch. 2: Unwanted Memories

I LIKED IT. SO SAD. I WANT TO SEE A JEALOUS EDWARD AND THEN E AND B IN THE ENDING!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3: NYC

I am sure it is Jake (yuk)

So want to see a jealous Edward

 




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