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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

What if it wasn't bloodlust that drew Edward to Bella in the beginning? What if he had recognized her as his soulmate from the very moment he saw her? This is the story of how a lost soul finally came to be with his one true love.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23043
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Epilogue

THIS WAS A PERFECT ENDING



Author's Response:

Yay!!

 
Summary:

Edward finds Bella at a different time in her life. The bloodlust is almost uncontrollable. He wants to leave, but can't seem to pull himself away. They both seem to call for each other. What does this mean? Where does this put them for their future?    


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 19947
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Tears and Venom

good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Such an Intoxicating Scent

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Raising a Human Child

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: They Grow up So Fast

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Leaving for the First Hunt

good job

 
Summary:

Edward falls in love with Bella from a distance as they share the same route to work.  Bella can't help feeling attracted to Edward as well but, being a bit of a cynic when it comes to love, she dismisses him as an impossible fantasy.  She prefers the comfort and safety of the content, but passionless, relationship she has with Jake.  When Edward and Bella actually meet, however, she considers giving the impossible a chance. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6747
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YUK...JACOB

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE AND HOPEFULLY SHE KICKS THE DOG OUT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I REALLY LIKE THIS NOW GET TO UPDATING LOL



Author's Response:

Haha, I know, I have terrible writing habits.  I procrastinate like there's no tomorrow... or an unlimited number of tomorrows I guess... lol.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yuk, I hate Jacob. I hope she says NO!

 
Summary:

A mosaic freely drawn from book and movie, wanders into AU as the story unfolds ... ....

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Showing is stronger than telling.  Forks was just like I remember it.  I felt the short little hairs on the back of my neck stand straight on end.  Cut your losses before they can become catastrophic.   “It’s not fair,” I say aloud.   The night wind swirls, lifting the fine surface powder from the tops of the snowdrifts, coating us in diamond dust.  

 


Then weave for us a garment of brightness

 

Moving to Forks, spending the last eighteen months of her childhood with a father she barely knew ... it seemed like a good idea at the time.

 

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A/N about the rating: The narrative in this story ranges between PG-13 (most of it) and R (occasional language and occasional non-graphic reference to mature themes). An isolated technicality in a late chapter has necessitated changing the rating from R to NC-17, however R is a much better measure of the farthest outer limit of what the reader will encounter in this tale.

 

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<3<3<3  and  @};-  @};-  @};-  to  DeliciousDreamer for this beautiful banner ~~

delicious dreamer's lovely banner for garment of brightness

I never in my wildest dreams thought that something I wrote would inspire someone to make something like this.   I am so touched.  THANK YOU DD!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 59050
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: More

great job

great story

great writting



Author's Response:

Oh thank you!  I'm glad that you are enjoying it.  :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Story of My Life

okay ready for more



Author's Response:

:-)    So am I!   Thanks for the r&r !

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Dance of the Hours

ready for more



Author's Response:

Oh thank you!   Would you, by any chance, be willing to bake some cookies for my Muse .... I'm running out of already-written chapters, and starting to get nervous.   I do know 'what is going to happen' in the story, but it is still a long way from that to actually getting the words down on the page/screen .... gah!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Dumb Barter

Beautiful writting as always



Author's Response:

:-)   Thank you very much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

GREAT START



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: A Garment of Brightness

looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Me, too!  Thank you for reviewing so faithfully.  It means a lot.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: First Sights

ready for the next chapter



Author's Response:

:-)   hope you enjoy.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Tell it to the Rain

looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Yeah, we're finally back on track!  Thanks for the r&r.  :-) 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Edward

Edward has some making up to do big time. I hope Alice hits him lol.



Author's Response:

Yes he does!  We'll see how Alice handles Edward a little later ... 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Can't Get to Heaven

I really love this story



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much!   I can't wait to find out what you think of the next chapter ....  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Yellow Cabinets

looking forward to more

Rene has the parenting skills of a pet rock



Author's Response:

<< Rene has the parenting skills of a pet rock >>

Ahahahaha!

In her defense, (this) Renee was a very young mother, and had her own adolescence cut short at the time.   

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Bridge to Nowhere

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

Music to my ears!  (Eyes.)   Working on the finishing touches right now ....

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Harry Clearwater's Famous Fish Fry

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Caught in the Undertow

LOL, I CAN'T GO A NIGHT W/O EDWARD READING

LOVE THE STORY



Author's Response:

Oh thank you thank you thank you!

(Huge thanks also to my validator, Phoenix Rising, who fixed the glitch with the review reply button. )

I really appreciate your reading, and your enthusiastic comments always spur on my Muse.   More is coming, I promise.

 




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