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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

A mosaic freely drawn from book and movie, wanders into AU as the story unfolds ... ....

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Showing is stronger than telling.  Forks was just like I remember it.  I felt the short little hairs on the back of my neck stand straight on end.  Cut your losses before they can become catastrophic.   “It’s not fair,” I say aloud.   The night wind swirls, lifting the fine surface powder from the tops of the snowdrifts, coating us in diamond dust.  

 


Then weave for us a garment of brightness

 

Moving to Forks, spending the last eighteen months of her childhood with a father she barely knew ... it seemed like a good idea at the time.

 

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A/N about the rating: The narrative in this story ranges between PG-13 (most of it) and R (occasional language and occasional non-graphic reference to mature themes). An isolated technicality in a late chapter has necessitated changing the rating from R to NC-17, however R is a much better measure of the farthest outer limit of what the reader will encounter in this tale.

 

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<3<3<3  and  @};-  @};-  @};-  to  DeliciousDreamer for this beautiful banner ~~

delicious dreamer's lovely banner for garment of brightness

I never in my wildest dreams thought that something I wrote would inspire someone to make something like this.   I am so touched.  THANK YOU DD!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 59050
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Can't Get to Heaven

I really love this story



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much!   I can't wait to find out what you think of the next chapter ....  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Yellow Cabinets

looking forward to more

Rene has the parenting skills of a pet rock



Author's Response:

<< Rene has the parenting skills of a pet rock >>

Ahahahaha!

In her defense, (this) Renee was a very young mother, and had her own adolescence cut short at the time.   

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Bridge to Nowhere

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

Music to my ears!  (Eyes.)   Working on the finishing touches right now ....

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Harry Clearwater's Famous Fish Fry

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Caught in the Undertow

LOL, I CAN'T GO A NIGHT W/O EDWARD READING

LOVE THE STORY



Author's Response:

Oh thank you thank you thank you!

(Huge thanks also to my validator, Phoenix Rising, who fixed the glitch with the review reply button. )

I really appreciate your reading, and your enthusiastic comments always spur on my Muse.   More is coming, I promise.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Parsifal

Excellant job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Hungry Eyes

great writting



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Vol de Nuit

Rose - lol



Author's Response:

Thanks!   I like Rosalie a lot, and hope to show her as a unique person, thorns and all.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Una Rama Oscura

Beautiful as always



Author's Response:

Oh thank you!  And thank you for being such a faithful reviewer.  @};-

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: In Grandmother's House

I just have to say it again.....very good writting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Owl Called Her Name

Shortest chapter ever lol



Author's Response:

Yes, probably a record.  Next chapter will be longer.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Morning

great job as always



Author's Response:

:-)   

Thanks so much.   More is on the way ...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Loony Bin

good job as always



Author's Response:

:-)  Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Secrets and Lies

A+



Author's Response:

Ah, your review is so succinct, and yet so satisfying. :P  Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Caliban

Beautiful writting as always



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Quasimodo

Great as always



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Crescent Moon by Brandinm05 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 218]
Summary:

What if Jacob and the Quileute werewolves never showed up in the meadow that day to save Bella? What if Bella became a vampire and Edward wasn't the one to do it? Bella is turned and forced out of Forks, up North to the Denali clan. New bonds are formed while old ones are nearly broken.  Read as Bella adjusts to her new life, and possibly, a new mate.  Special lovely thanks to M1187 for my fanstical banner :)

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Playlist for story can be found at:

http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9BFE9317988CD122


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46381
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Requiem

another 10



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Indaco

CAN'T WAIT!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: My Love

good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Valse d'Amelie

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Nocturne

So dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Passages

I LIKE THIS. PLEASE DON'T LET HER SLEEP WITH HIM.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Primavera

THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Truman Sleep

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Andare

I can't wait for the next chapter

 




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