Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: hc4metal [Contact]
Real name:
Status: Member
Member Since: February 28, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader:

I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by hc4metal
 
None Shall Be Spared by stef_ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

This is Twilight with a twist. Bella is the vampire, Edward is the human. This story will borrow some plotline from the book, but will be mostly AU.
Intrigue, seduction, murder, the Volturi...it cant get any better than that. Cannon Pairings. Varying POVs


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 27662
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

fogot to review chapter three - where was I when this one updated?

like the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I just love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great job

 
Summary:

 The almost manic whispers of the devil echoed through my ears..."Hypocrite... Hypocrite... Hypocrite..." My face paled. It dawned on me as clear as looking through a translucent window. I was as much of a killer as Edward was. WARNING - EXTREME VIOLENCE*Darkward & Darkella At Times*


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6902
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1: Sliced to Pieces

OH MY. IS IT WRONG TO LIKE THIS STORY LOL?



Author's Response:

lol, I think it's just as wrong to like this story as writing this story. But, that didn't stop anybody, eh?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 2: Craving

All I know is I shouldn't like it...but can't stop reading it

 

Please tell me he will kill Jacob.!

 
Blind Date from Hell by bebe86 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 453]
Summary:

Bella is unlucky in love and has been set up on one bad blind date after another by Alice and Rose. She finally agrees to one last blind date with Edward Cullen, but is this going to be the worst blind date yet? Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.

Thank you to ms_ambrosia for the amazing banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 100611
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

too bad about the deleate



Author's Response:

I know, but it can all be fixed, so I try not to worry about it...  :-(

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Great Expectations

I just love the humor in your story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Signs

I can't get enough of this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Too Hot to Handle

AGAIN, THIS NEEDS TO BE AN IFIC

 
Entering Twilight by BugRehsom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary:

stories/89199/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpg

Think 'The Starter Wife' meets 'The Wizard of Oz', only instead of ending up in Munchkinland, she awakens to discover she is now a character in her favorite story.

Caroline Dawson is having trouble coming to terms with her divorce, her husband's pregnant new girlfriend, and the loss of her once perfect love... Christmas is right around the corner, and she decides to spend this first holiday sans-husband alone on the beach in Cancun. During a layover in Chicago, Caro reads Twilight for the first time and is quickly enraptured by it.

But after a near death experience, Caro awakens to find herself trapped amidst the drama that is Forks. Is it a dream, a mental breakdown? What changes will her presence bring to Forks? How will she use her knowledge of the books to change the story? And should she even try?


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 45039
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2009 Updated: December 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Where's Judge Judy When You Need Her?

Great start/

 

Please tell me this won't be like the  Lingering in Meyer story where in the end Edward decides he loves the one who took Bellas place.



Author's Response:

good lord no. that would just be depressing.  dont worry, she's not replacing bella, as i'll get to in chapter 3, cause unfortunately that's as quick as i could squeeze the backround story into before plopping her in forks.

thanks for the review, i appreciate the candor.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Family Bonding

ANOTHER GREAT JOB

FROM HEATHER



Author's Response:

I got chapter 6.... i sent it to michele.... it's all finished ..... na na na na na na....:)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Escape to Cancun

REGARDING JACOB TURNING INTO A CHILD MOLESTOR LOL. THAT WAS MY THOUGHT EXACTLY LOL. I ALWAYS THOUGHT SETH SHOULD HAVE IMPRINTED...AT LEAST EDWARD LIKED SETH.

I CHUCKLED REGARDING YOUR SUMMARY OF EACH BOOK. I PRETTY MUCH AGREE WITH SOME PARTS. EXCEPT FOR I AM NOT A JAKE FAN. ALSO, WHAT REALLY PISSED ME OFF IN ECLIPSE WAS THE FORCED KISS. CHARLIE PISSED ME OFF TOO WHEN HE WAS ALL "ALL RIGHT" - IF THAT WAS MY CHILD I WOULD HAVE BEEN MAD. BUT ANYWAY,,,,

GREAT WRITTING

AS LONG AS IT IS E AND B WE WILL GET ALONG FINE LOL

MAYBE SHE CAN HOOK UP WITH JAKE OR MARCUS.....

I FORGOT TO ADD IN MY REVIEW ON THE FIRST CHAPTER HOW I LOVED THAT SHE TOOK JAMES TO THE CLEANERS.



Author's Response:

i was just getting ready to click on the respond button to the review that was listed above yours and just as the screen switched i caught ABOUT JACOB BEING A CHILDMOLESTOR and thought oh dear lord, i've pissed off someone...so i hurried through that response so i could get to yours lol.

ah, but i'm a jacob fan. until i hit breaking dawn and saw that everything turned out for bella and edward despite everything that was stacked against them, i didnt think that she should jump into eternity with edward, and give jake a shot. she was just giving up so much: children, family, friends, a chance to figure out who she was, gain a sense of selfconfidence. and during new moon when jacob popped into the equasion, it really struck a cord with me. he was the perfect friend for her, picked her up, dusted her off, stood up for her, went along with her crazy ideas. he seemed to respect her boundaries(in that book) and he was willing to do whatever it took, wait however long until she was ready to live again. and the way edward came back into bella's life just sucked. he should have come back because he just couldnt live without her anymore and begged for her to take him back. but i still fell back in love with him despite jake, and despite the suicide crap he pulled, even despite his overbearing dating style, though there were times i felt he deserved a good tongue lashing.(Ok, that didnt come out right, but i guess i agree with whatever direction you take that one, ha ha)

as for the forced kiss... well, i guess i saw it coming at some point, so i wasnt so surprised by it. jake was trying to pull out all the stops and win the woman he loved, not that i think he should have continued to paw at her after she initially did nothing. and for charlie being all right, his daughter just sucker punched him. i would have been proud of my girl, but secretly disappointed that she hadnt broke his damn nose.

i fully intend for e&b to walk off into the proverbally sunset, never fear. i think i just have to play with how they get there first, that's all.

as for the exhusband, your damn straight she took him to the cleaners. rat bastard. thats just how i roll LOL (sorry, i had a customer say that to me today, i just had to repeat it)

Marcus? you've got to explain that one, im intrigued.

anywho, my email is bugrehsom@myspace.com if you want to get into some debating of the ideas. lord knows i got no one else to talk to about this stuff.

thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Waking up in Forks

LOL

I LOVE THIS STORY

"I GUESS WE ARE IN NEW MOON" LOL

GREAT WRITTING



Author's Response:

now i have a big silly grin on my face that won't come off....thank you!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Gaining Membership to the Club

liked the endiing lol



Author's Response:

im glad i havent disappointed you yet.... :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6. In a Moment

GO UPDATE MY FRIEND (ITS ME HEATHER) OR I WILL HAVE TO GET THE TWI'S AFTER YOU. WE DEMAND MORE.



Author's Response:

i'm having trouble at emily's, but it's coming along. maybe i'll be nice and send it to you when i'm done...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Powwow on the Rez

Happy for the update. Keep up the good work. Your friend, Heather

 
Breathless by Dahlia Raynes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

What if Bella had jumped off the cliff with Jacob in New Moon? What if Alice hadn't seen a thing? What if Edward had checked on Bella but never re-entered her life? Would she have survived or would the pain have spun out of control?

This is my version of what would have happened.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5992
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2009 Updated: January 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Red Sky

good start

please tell me this is an E and  B tale

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looking forward to more

glad to here it is a E and B tale

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2594]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

MYBLUE you messed up, you referenced me as HeathersTwilight  at the start of this(that is me at Fan Fic). I am HC4METAL here. Some friend, forgetting your friends name LOL. I guess I can forgive you and not bring out the handcuffs.

As always, great writting. Love the story. Keep up the good work and looking forward to reviewing the next chapter!!!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

PLEASE, DON'T LET HIM BE ABLE TO GET IT UP WITH LAUREN / HE CAN BE LIMPWARD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE THIS

I AM HOOKED

DYING FOR AN UPDATE



Author's Response:

thank you much!

-mybluesky

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am dying for more. I just love this!



Author's Response:

Thanks, darling!

-mybluesky

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so love it

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.