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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Apologies

PLEASE, DON'T LET IT BE EDWARDS BABY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Future Beckons

T AND M DESERVE EACH OTHER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17: Moving Forward

GREAT CHAPTER

 
Summary:

 


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Ascension of the Morning Star is a novel-length work that offers an alternative to Breaking Dawn.  The work is represented in two books, Evening Star and Morning Star.  Each book will appear as a separate story on this site.  This is Part I.

In Part I:  Evening Star, we find Bella and Edward preparing for their marriage.  From engagement to wedding night the whirlwind of 55 planning days is a roller coaster of emotion, intrigue,and surprises for everyone. Exploring sexuality & intimacy, will Edward be ready?  As the big day draws nearer, everyone realizes this is a good-bye, but not everyone realizes how true that is... 

The facets of their transition to marriage are much the same as other young couples, however, they are not like any other young couples and they face a specific set of challenges on their way to the altar.  Their journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity they thought to be lost forever.  Even the humans find compelling forces of change in their lives because of this one strange human. A young woman's presence has altered the destiny of those she loves.

Post Eclipse, AU, Cannon Characters and Relationships. Mature for sexual situations.


The story of Ascension of the Morning Star continues with Part II.  A major shift in tone, action, and impact from Part I.  Hang on to your hats.  It is a thunderbolt from the begining and rarely lets up.  Whereas Part I is light and laughter, Part II is darkness and tears.

When Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, the future is anything but assured, yet, one thing is clear.  By her existence, she will rock the foundations of both the human and mythical worlds.   Although there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places, but the question is simply this:  Would you follow your destiny if you knew it would cost you your eternal life? 

What if Bella isn't the only one changed by her choice to follow her Destiny?

Canon characters and relationships explored in greater detail.  Contains family relationships, humor, mature situations, sensual exploration, action, and inference; horror, angst, hurt, gore, limited violence, loss, mystery, psychic phenomenon, and mythic/religious references. 

 

Many opportunites to discuss the themes of this story...Come join the thread! 

 http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8085

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 297219
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: June 19: The Meadow

great start



Author's Response:

Thanks for being an early adopter and reading this fresh out of the box!  I hope it is indeed a good start and that you will come back to see how it goes...  Thanks for writing.

RL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: June 29: "May I have a moment..."

Such a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for your encouragement...wait till you see the next couple!  They are doosies!  Come back!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: July 1: Dare To Be Human

great writting

enjoying the story



Author's Response:

Thank you for writing and for your praise.  I hope you will come back to see what is in store for our friends in Forks.

 
Summary:

Edward isn't fast enough to save Bella in Port Angeles. When faced with her death as the alternative, he decides to force her into a vampiric eternity. How will Bella handle being thrown into a new existence? Can the journey lead her to find herself, her mate....and her spine? 

 

WARNING: This story contains scenes that involve violence against women and rape.


Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 10181
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

all sex offenders need to die before they go straight to hell

intense start



Author's Response:

Yep, I agree the punishment should be beyond severe. For this story, it had to happen to set things in motion. I really appreciate the review. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this. Please don't let her have been raped.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Chapter 4 will talk a little more about what exactly happened, I think you'll be pleased!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great job

Poor Edward



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Poor Edward, indeed. Unfortunately, he has a hard road to run down if he wants to be with Bella. : (  It's sad to write but things will find a way to work themselves out, hopefully! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

my heart is breaking for them

love the story



Author's Response:

Aww! Maybe it can begin to heal with the next chapter! Things will get heavier for Bella but Edward will find some relief! Hope you enjoy! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a beautiful story...you can feel the emotions



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't stress how much I mean that. It's always hard for me to judge if I'm putting enough emtion into it, if it will come across the way I'm intending. Thanks for letting me know, so far, it's working.

I really appreciate it!

 
Lovegame by moneybeet Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Every night she goes about her business ignorant to the man who watches her from her window. She doesn't understand what is coming. She couldn't know the horrors he would subject her to in the name of fascination. E/B, DARK.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15979
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Watching

dying for more



Author's Response:

Hi, never fear: I have through chapter 5 completed, so the updates should be fairly prompt. Thank you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!! It makes me very happy you are hooked!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

DYING FOR AN UPDATE.....DYING HERE



Author's Response:

;) Just sent chapter 4 off to be validated. Don't panic!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I LOVE DARWARD

HOPE IT TURNS INTO A LOVE STORY



Author's Response:

Here's where I want to share spoilers because I'm excited, but I will resist! Glad you are enjoying my version of dark Edward!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it but hope darward mellows in a bit...after the angst of course



Author's Response:

Hmmm, we will see. Thanks for reading!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I AM SO IMPRESSED WITH THIS. OF COURSE DOWN THE ROAD I WANT HIM TO LOSE THE DARKWARD FOR HER...BUT I LOVE IT. GREAT WRITTING.

 
Summary:

 

She was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. She was also the most careful creature I had come upon. She was pale and shy, obviously not accepted by others. And every day I saw her retreat, scars of the werewolf claws upon her back angered me.

Contains vague references to sexual assault. Contains slight references to child abuse.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5307
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mission

Great start. Looking forward to more. Glad Rose feels sympathy. I liked the "don't look at the dress" lol. So, did Charlie not believe?

 
Summary:

Dr. Bella Swan goes to court to fight a traffic ticket and meets Officer "Do Me Hard" Cullen.  Alice, Bella's pot-smoking, future-telling roommate, suspects there is more to the relationship than just one night of heated passion.  The man in uniform is interested yet Bella remains doubtful.  A story of finding love in the city that never sleeps.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 29073
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2009 Updated: December 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: OMGWTFBBQ?!

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

More to come!  Thanks for letting me know you're looking forward to it and, of course, for reviewing! :)

 

xx

 

LaraIsAwkward

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Pancakes With A Side of Fail

I am glad she got over it

great job

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a bad boy. Bella Swan is daddy’s little girl. What would happen if Fork’s new good girl was to be the new object of Edward’s desire? Will Edward corrupt her? Or will Bella be the one to finally turn this bad boy good?

A cocky, charming Edward and a seemingly innocent Bella. What will happen when opposite personalities collide?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 12783
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

loved it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

run Bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Again, run Bella

 
Summary:

Ever wonder what happened between The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition and The Maiden Swan and the Cullen Domain?  Well, wonder no more!  Here you'll find a few outtakes happening between the ending events of TVS&TCI and beginning events of TMS&TCD.

 

The Christmas Outtake Banner  (Made by the amazing Selita!!)

Christmas Outtake Banner

The Tattoo Outtake Banner  (Also made by the amazing Selita!!)

The Tattoo Scene Outtake

The Prom Outtake Banner  (This, too, was made by the amazing Selita!!)

The Prom Outtake

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 30335
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Prom Scene Outtake

great job

 
None Shall Be Spared by stef_ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

This is Twilight with a twist. Bella is the vampire, Edward is the human. This story will borrow some plotline from the book, but will be mostly AU.
Intrigue, seduction, murder, the Volturi...it cant get any better than that. Cannon Pairings. Varying POVs


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 27662
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

enjoying it



Author's Response:

thanks!

 




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