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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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The Half-Breed by Athey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Alternate Universe where Edward is a half-breed human-vampire and the biological son of Carlisle and Esme. The Cullens move to Forks and Edward meets Bella Swan. ExB AU


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 58286
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great. Love it!@

 
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Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3 - Introductions, Food, and Philosophy

I totally love this

Yes, Jessica would taste foul lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A New Start

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Pickup Trucks, Migraines, and the Library

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

I LOVED HOW HE TOLD THEM OFF

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7 - Dreams and Birthdays

LOVE IT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: First Date

Loved it. Nice to see him being carefree and going for it lol

 
Hidden Beauty by SarahElizabeth Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Bella has a beautiful heart, but it has been battered by her past. When she moves to Forks after years of pain, will the Cullens be able to help her find the beauty behind the scars? AU/Dark themes/No Sexual Abuse

::Also available on FFN under my other pen name 1-Brave-Lamb::

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 11822
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The First Day

I sooooooooo love this. Please tell me you will keep writting! I only say that as I have about 100 stories that were started and nobody finished LOL.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Getting To Know You

I was so happy to see an update.

Thing 1 and 2 LOL

Love it

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has been through a lot this past year since the death of her best friend, Jacob Black. After meeting Edward Cullen she decides now is the time for new beginnings, a little heat and a lot of fun! Will she allow him into her heart or just her bedroom? Rated M for Edward Cullen.

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Thank you to SSVO75 for the above banner...you ROCK our SOCKS!!!

Thank you to Rachelle for the above banner...you are AMAZING!!!

And to Stacey- I love you for this!!! You are my Soul Sister!! LOVES!!

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14608
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Single Ladies

Thank you for not letting her sleep with him when they first met. A pet peeve of mine are the stories where they meet, five minutes later have sex, and then are madly in love (rolling eyes).

 

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I'm not gonna lie, it does happen quickly but there is an underlying reason. So please forgive me and stick with us. We have 16 Chapters written. We are patienly waiting for each one to be validated by The Beta Team. Thanks for your support!! We greatly appreciate it!

CB9 & IP

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Good Girls Go Bad

love this story



Author's Response:

We are thrilled you are enjoying it!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

 
Summary:

An old friend calls the Cullens to Italy.  The Volturi have discovered a secret of Demetri and Heidi’s: they possess a potentially powerful weapon and the Volturi want it as their own.  Carlisle, owing Demetri a favor, takes the family to Italy to collect the item to bring back to Forks for safekeeping. 

Little do they know, the item is a 16 year old human girl named Bella, who already possesses amazing abilities in her human form.  Edward falls instantly in love with the girl but is it an effect of her amazing abilities or has he finally found what he has been searching for his entire existence? Will he risk his own life and family to protect her from the Volturi?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Heidi, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27787
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: March 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Introductions

great job and looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Interference

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!!! 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Favors

GREAT JOB and dying for more



Author's Response:

Aww!! You rock!  Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and give a review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Gifts

I really love this tale

You are doing a great job



Author's Response:

thanks so much!  im glad you are enjoying my story!  take care!

Amy

 
Endless Pain by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nightmares

Great chapter

love the story

When will he learn that changing her will make life so much easier aughh

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

sweet chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals

I really like this. I just hope Jacob keeps his paws off of her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Talks

loved it

I actually don't hate Jacob in this one lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Visions

I like it. Please update soon.

Please tell me you will finish this lol. I don't like being rude but so many people start and never finish - aughh!

I hope it has a happy E and B ending

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Pain

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Being Human

that was a suprise

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Catching Up

really enjoying this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: New Home

This is my favorite chapter. Rose lol. Poor Edward, now he knows how Bella felt all of those times LOL.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Planning Is Everything

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Becoming One

a 10

 




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