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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

What do you do when the one you thought would love you forever up and leaves you? You move to Vegas of course!

It's 3 years after Edward left Bella. She's discovered a new life, and made new friends, but has never really gotten over Edward's abandonment.

When a chance encounter with Alice at a local Vegas night club brings the Cullens back full force into Bella's life, how will she react? Is there any hope for them to rekindle their friendships? More importantly, is there any chance that she and Edward can work through her distrust and his shame and guilt to get back their undying love, or does attention from a new love interest have Bella distracted?

Come on in to the world of Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies, and find out!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99051
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Second Chances

I was getting worried there for a moment lol. I was reading thinking I am ready for Edward to kill Rob lol.. Really like the story. Please tell me that Edward heard her conversation with Rob when she told him to get lost. So, will we be having a newborn Rob who wants Bella?

 
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Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

SO EXCITING

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Ties that Bind

Great job.

It will be interesting to see what happens with Rob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Changes

Poor Bella

Edward needs to change her

 
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Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Going Home

looking forward to more

Edward needs to change her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Awakenings

Excellant

Edward needs to change Bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Straws, Camels & Broken Backs

I am so sorry for all that you have been though.

 

Great STRONG chapter. Excellant writting.

 
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Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Control & Compromise

I was glad to see this update. Love how you can feel the emotion. Dying for more.

 
The Other Foot by twighlit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Summary:

 

What if the shoe was on the other foot?

What if Bella was a Cullen, and Edward a mere human?

Bella Cullen has been living with her vampire family in a small town in Washington state for nearly four years - since she bridged the divide being life and undeath.

When a slip in judgment forces the Cullens to move to Chicago, she finds herself juxtaposed with Edward Masen: impossibly beautiful, impossibly tempting, impossibly human.

How would Twilight have played out if everything was backwards?

 

*Rated for potty mouths and lemons.

Canon pairings, even in the most alternate of alternate universes.

Mild to moderately OOC for Edward and Bella, switching things around really messed them up.

SM owns, I pepper in the debauchery.

 

Mkystich is taking over my page with all her banners. She's delicious.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8732
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oops.

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oops.

great job



Author's Response:

thanks, im doing what i can.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A for Effort

I really like it

 
Angel by eglantine Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

Bella is a librarian who is in need of some money to pay off her college loans. When her best friend Alice finds out about an interview at the Chicago branch of Elite Model Management, she decides to give it a try. A Victoria's Secret story, with a Cinderella twist. But is Edward her Prince Charming? All human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6174
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2009 Updated: December 22, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
The Half-Breed by Athey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Alternate Universe where Edward is a half-breed human-vampire and the biological son of Carlisle and Esme. The Cullens move to Forks and Edward meets Bella Swan. ExB AU


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 58286
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great. Love it!@

 
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Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3 - Introductions, Food, and Philosophy

I totally love this

Yes, Jessica would taste foul lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A New Start

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Pickup Trucks, Migraines, and the Library

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

I LOVED HOW HE TOLD THEM OFF

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7 - Dreams and Birthdays

LOVE IT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: First Date

Loved it. Nice to see him being carefree and going for it lol

 
Hidden Beauty by SarahElizabeth Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Bella has a beautiful heart, but it has been battered by her past. When she moves to Forks after years of pain, will the Cullens be able to help her find the beauty behind the scars? AU/Dark themes/No Sexual Abuse

::Also available on FFN under my other pen name 1-Brave-Lamb::

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 11822
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The First Day

I sooooooooo love this. Please tell me you will keep writting! I only say that as I have about 100 stories that were started and nobody finished LOL.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Getting To Know You

I was so happy to see an update.

Thing 1 and 2 LOL

Love it

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has been through a lot this past year since the death of her best friend, Jacob Black. After meeting Edward Cullen she decides now is the time for new beginnings, a little heat and a lot of fun! Will she allow him into her heart or just her bedroom? Rated M for Edward Cullen.

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Thank you to SSVO75 for the above banner...you ROCK our SOCKS!!!

Thank you to Rachelle for the above banner...you are AMAZING!!!

And to Stacey- I love you for this!!! You are my Soul Sister!! LOVES!!

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14608
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Single Ladies

Thank you for not letting her sleep with him when they first met. A pet peeve of mine are the stories where they meet, five minutes later have sex, and then are madly in love (rolling eyes).

 

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I'm not gonna lie, it does happen quickly but there is an underlying reason. So please forgive me and stick with us. We have 16 Chapters written. We are patienly waiting for each one to be validated by The Beta Team. Thanks for your support!! We greatly appreciate it!

CB9 & IP

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Good Girls Go Bad

love this story



Author's Response:

We are thrilled you are enjoying it!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

 
Summary:


Edward Cullen is drawn in many ways to new girl, Bella Swan. Can he do what is needed when his family's survival is put at risk? Will Bella walk away from their encounter unscathed?

 

Better Question: Will Edward?

 

Rated M for lemons & language.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 70870
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: January 17, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Remorse

great story



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you think so!!

Thanks for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Father's Fear

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

I am in the process of writing chapter 3 as we speak. So it will hopefully be done in a few days!

Thanks so much for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981

 




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