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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward and Bella on Isle Esme - their first time, the way I would have written it.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2644
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

great job



Author's Response:

thank you :)

 
Be Here Now by jcara Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

New York City. The city of opportunity.

Bella Swan is awkward, dorky, and extremely clumsy. Has been her entire life. After being accepted to NYU to study English, she jumps at the chance to get out of Phoenix and start over. Follow her as she embarks on a new journey involving new friends, a spiteful roommate, and a soul mate. Just remember, this is New York. Anything goes!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8167
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: November 30, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I want a Bella make over and those skanks put in their place

LOVE THE STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Concrete Jungle

so dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this

 
Summary:

No reception, no civilisation - nothing. Stranded. Completely isolated. A girl attempting to start a new life is lost when her truck decides to stop functioning. Good thing Edward Cullen comes along to lead the way. AU


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1380
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: November 22, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Sweet. :) Thanks for reviewing!

 
Chance Encounter by Besotted Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Bella is a young cellist studying music at Julliard.  Edward is a famous hollywood actor struggling to establish some normalcy in his life.  When they meet on a red-eye flight from L.A. to New York, sparks fly.  But Bella has a haunting past that threatens to tear her apart.  Will Edward be able to help pull Bella through, or will Bella's demons prevent her from loving the man she was fated to be with?  All Human.  Canon Pairings.  Rated NC-17 for some lemons later in story. 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 163516
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Anticipation

dyiing for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Red Eye

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Companionship

LOL SHE NEEDS TO CHILL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Safety

LOVE THE STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Bliss

I LOVE THIS STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Bare

I have been reading this over at FF and really like it! Great writting.

 
Summary:

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Shy Bella is a recent college graduate working in a record store.  She spends her days lusting after a sexy doctor with amazing green eyes. On her last day of work, someone rocks her world. Guess who?  Set in the 80s.  This was originally a one shot for an 80s music contest, but I'm going to expand it.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6366
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ask

good job



Author's Response:

Glad you're reading both stories!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Please Please Let Me Get What I Want

yes, at his place - a promise is a promise lol

 
Summary:

What do you do when the one you thought would love you forever up and leaves you? You move to Vegas of course!

It's 3 years after Edward left Bella. She's discovered a new life, and made new friends, but has never really gotten over Edward's abandonment.

When a chance encounter with Alice at a local Vegas night club brings the Cullens back full force into Bella's life, how will she react? Is there any hope for them to rekindle their friendships? More importantly, is there any chance that she and Edward can work through her distrust and his shame and guilt to get back their undying love, or does attention from a new love interest have Bella distracted?

Come on in to the world of Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies, and find out!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99051
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity

I was hesitant to read this as I am so E and B. I was scared b/c of the Rob character. I feel sorry for him, but it is E and B only for me.

I really like this, but if it is going to end up with her being with someone else, please pm and let me know. I just can't take anything less than E and B.

 

Great writting



Author's Response:

I'm all for E & B... but I love me some Angsty drama... stay with me, I'm sure you'll be happy :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Destiny's Course

Really into it. I feel sorry for Rob, but he has to go LOL.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Revelations

I hate Tanya aughh

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Too Late

I am almost in tears. I love the angst, but I do hope it will have a e and b ending. I hope Tanya gets some type of vampire STD.  I hate her!



Author's Response:

I've been so excited to share this Chapter with you all, and I was sooo bummed when it got rejected for Punctuation ... but in re-evaluating this chapter to make my corrections, I actually ended up making the content a little better, so I guess everything happens for a reason. Hoping Ch 5 won't give me quite as many problems.

Thanks so much for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Attempting Redemption

I LOVE THIS

PLEASE TELL ME HER AND JAKE WERE NOTHING MORE THAN FRIENDS

ROB IS NICE BUT HE HAS GOT TO GO

TANYA NEEDS HER SKANK BUTT KICKED

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Complicated

I LOVE THIS

1. ROB NEEDS TO BE GONE LOL..HE CAN BE A FRIEND

2. EDWARD NEEDS TO CHANGE HER...OR MAYBE ROSE DECIDES SHE DOESN'T WANT TO SEE HER FAMILY DESTROYED AND CHANGES HER.

3. WILL WE SEE MORE TANYA SKANK? I COULD SEE HER COMING BACK TO  TRY AND KILL BELLA.

 

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Intruder

Love it

I would let him change me@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Worst Fears

Having faith there will be a HEA



Author's Response:

Absolutely an HEA... you'll see... this is actually a really neat direction it's taking.. at least I think so :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

L.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Strange Days

I really want to slap Bella lol. Please, don't let her hook up with anyone else. I love the story and E needs to suffer a bit hehehe but B doesn't need to be with anyone else.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Second Chances

I was getting worried there for a moment lol. I was reading thinking I am ready for Edward to kill Rob lol.. Really like the story. Please tell me that Edward heard her conversation with Rob when she told him to get lost. So, will we be having a newborn Rob who wants Bella?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

SO EXCITING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Ties that Bind

Great job.

It will be interesting to see what happens with Rob.

 




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