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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Numb by Tyranny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 654]
Summary:

Numb by Tyranny

 

Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 113960
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Please update soon! Dying here!!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

Oh, please don't let her forgive the loser mother

Good job

 
Voyeur by Sic Et Non Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

When Bella Swan sees something she shouldn’t she can’t help her response, and Edward Cullen can’t help but take that response to the next level.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4694
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

damn

 
Tutor by Mentalistecbm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

The Cullens move to a new school, in a new state, with new students. Edward is… pretty much a nerd. Dweeb, Geek, Turd, Loser. Whatever you wanna call him. Bella isn’t. She already goes to Forks High. Well-known, actually. Not your average Nerdy Edward/Slutty Bella fanfic. Originality is all over, babe. So read.

 Thank you to ebonyy and PosionousGarden! (: original two inside. this one is just to perfect.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46201
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

update soon



Author's Response:

I plan on it.

 

Thanks for reading.

>

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so bery much.

>

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It made me sad when he said she wasn't that pretty

enjoying the story



Author's Response:

It made me sad, too. :(

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL



Author's Response:

LMFAO.

hehe, thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

Bella, turned into a vampire by Carlisle Cullen in the year 1837, and Edward, determined to enter the Great War against his family's wishes, must face the potential for both love and despair embodied in one another.  Through personal journeys and adversity, they confront the limits of their faith in order to determine whether they can share a future. BxE

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28824
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  Chapter 2 is up and Chapter 3 is submitted!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

doing a great job with this



Author's Response:

Thanks!  ;) jj

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great story

 
Undisclosed Desires by bethaboo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Edward, a vampire lonely and isolated by his very existence, meets
Isabella Swan, a human who is nothing like what he expects. He decides to
pursue her, but she has an agenda of her own.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 14863
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

busted lol

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

DYING FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE THE STORY

GREAT CHAPTER

 
Summary:

 

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It's been 25 years after Edward left Bella. Now that the Cullens have reunited with Bella they are suprised to find that she is not running back into their open arms. Instead Bella tells them her story of how her life took a tragic turn after they left.

"Bella, can we just go back to the way things were?" Alice pleaded.

I wouldn't lie to her.  "No."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 35122
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: July 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Staying Strong

I am so into this story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Grace

I am so hooked now. Great writting. I do want a happy E and B after all of the angst though!. I like how she just isn't letting them back in right away. They should suffer a bit for what they did to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and rating! Don't worry I believe in happily ever afters too;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Cullens

I am dying here...dying for more. This is def one of my favorites!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and rating! I'm so glad you like the story so far. I'll try to update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Helpless

I really like it. I hope she never slept with the other vamp,



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Rosalie vs. Bella

Boy, that was mean of Bella

Love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, Bella was mean this chapter:) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Curiosity

Can't wait for more. Jessica is a bitch. Why would Emmette say that....they are the ones who left her?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

 




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