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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Sequel to The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and in to Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward.  When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain?

 

*Rated for lemons and language

 

Thank you, Selita, for making this fantastic banner!  *muah*

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This is my first fan-made banner!!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you, dear!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone? 

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 168854
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Big News

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Party Time

I really like this story. I am a bit worried about Claire. Please don't let Edward cheat. I love how you had Bella stand up for herself.



Author's Response:

I'm curious as to why you're worried about Claire.  Or why you'd think Edward would cheat on Bella with Claire.  LOL!  Trust me when I say that Edward doesn't have enough love in his body to have two girlfriends.  Edward is completely devoted to Bella and only has eyes for her.  I can't stand reading stories where one cheats on the other or they're with someone else before they're with each other.  So know that when you read ANY of my stories, these two will always be together with no cheating involved.  Promise! :D :D

I'm glad you enjoyed Bella standing up to Victoria and Charlotte.  I enjoyed writing it. :D

Thanks for reading and all the reviews!! :D :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Birthday Gift

I liked it

I also liked the part where you wrote the deep throat part ended badly in the past. Thanks for some realism. I always chuckle when I read stories where Bella, the first time she goes down on him takes him whole and then swallows with no problem. Come on, a little reality - like gagging and then throwing up LOL. So, you get an extra point for being more realistic.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed the little misshap with the 'deep throat' part.  Even though their relationship is far from real, I try and make it as real as possible otherwise.  I can't stand it either when she can deep throat and it's her first time giving head or her first time with Edward. 

Thanks for the review! :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Wedding

okay hooked on it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Birthday Boy

LOL THAT WAS GREAT

I DON'T SMOKE BUT NEED A CIGARETTE I AM GUESSING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Step Daddy Dearest

Phil needs to die

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Screaming Epiphany

Phil needs to get his ...the perv.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Proposition

Phil is such a creep

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Truth

Renee sucks and I don't care if she says she is sorry...what type of mother doesn't believe

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Forgiveness

I work with abused kids and women like that don't change....they always pick the man. They do the tears and I am sorry and then go back to them once the jerk calls them telling them how sorry they are. This is a bit different as she actually saw it, but still, I have worked with many who have seen it and still chose the man - just sick.

anyway, still like the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Back to Reality

Dying here....need to know who it is and she better keep her hands of E lol

 
DC by elliejelliebean Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Bella Swan doesn't move to Washington--she moves to Washington, D.C.

The Cullens are not vampires, but something equally foreign to the average American teenager: the president's relatives.

Join Bella, President Carlisle Cullen, and the first family as they navigate their way through D.C. high society.


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2162
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Saying Adios

looking forward to more

great start and writting

 
Conditional by burnforyou Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Five years after Edward left Bella alone in the forest on that fateful day, she is a strong young woman with a heart of gold and a real love for her work. Learning about herself, and growing to understand more of her world, has made her happy again, or at the very least, content with her life.

Then, in the face of sudden and serious danger, she is shocked when her entire world is turned upside down once more. Will the hero and heartache of her past repeat history, or will she be given the opportunity to change it all? A story of forgiveness, love, and unimaginable devotion. ExB. New Moon AU. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3676
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: November 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you made me cry

please update soon

please also tell me that u will finish this story. I don't mean to be rude, but so many stories are started and never completed. LOL

Great writting - you could feel the emotion

 
Angel Eyes by RaeCullen Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary:

When Edward first sees Bella, he never suspects that she is different, that she is blind. How will he handle it? This is a story of differences, overcoming obstacles, rebuilding relationships, loss and above all; finding love.

Thank you ReachingAsIFall for the banner!! 

Edward and Bella in Park

Thanks to AngstGoddess003 for the banner! 

Blinkie made by Rose Arcadia! http://www.rosearcadia.sushicereal.com/EyesBig.gif

I got interviewed by Sue from SYTYCW: http://www.sytycw.com/?p=1425

 

Link to Twilighted thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=8256

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 96204
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -Sweet Lime and Cedar

another ten



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it. I just discovered what those stars meant the other day. So thank you so much for rating AE so highly! I really appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Angel in the Park

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you're liking it! =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Mistakes

lol Emmett

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Angel Girl

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Melodic Angel Laugh

Great first chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Overprotected

love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Answers

really enjoying this



Author's Response:

I'm so glad! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! 

Rae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Learning to Breathe

sweet chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Rae

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Falling

I just love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.. so glad you are liking it! <p>Rae</p>

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Two Is Better Than One

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES



Author's Response:

Aw thank you so much. You're so sweet.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Baby Steps

such a sweet story

I really like it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Typical

I really love this story

 




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