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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Bella, turned into a vampire by Carlisle Cullen in the year 1837, and Edward, determined to enter the Great War against his family's wishes, must face the potential for both love and despair embodied in one another.  Through personal journeys and adversity, they confront the limits of their faith in order to determine whether they can share a future. BxE

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28824
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

doing a great job with this



Author's Response:

Thanks!  ;) jj

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great story

 
Undisclosed Desires by bethaboo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Edward, a vampire lonely and isolated by his very existence, meets
Isabella Swan, a human who is nothing like what he expects. He decides to
pursue her, but she has an agenda of her own.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 14863
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

busted lol

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

DYING FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE THE STORY

GREAT CHAPTER

 
Summary:

 

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It's been 25 years after Edward left Bella. Now that the Cullens have reunited with Bella they are suprised to find that she is not running back into their open arms. Instead Bella tells them her story of how her life took a tragic turn after they left.

"Bella, can we just go back to the way things were?" Alice pleaded.

I wouldn't lie to her.  "No."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 35122
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: July 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Staying Strong

I am so into this story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Grace

I am so hooked now. Great writting. I do want a happy E and B after all of the angst though!. I like how she just isn't letting them back in right away. They should suffer a bit for what they did to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and rating! Don't worry I believe in happily ever afters too;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Cullens

I am dying here...dying for more. This is def one of my favorites!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and rating! I'm so glad you like the story so far. I'll try to update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Helpless

I really like it. I hope she never slept with the other vamp,



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Rosalie vs. Bella

Boy, that was mean of Bella

Love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, Bella was mean this chapter:) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Curiosity

Can't wait for more. Jessica is a bitch. Why would Emmette say that....they are the ones who left her?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: New Acquaintances

I really love this story. You are doing a fantastic job. Great writting. Now, get on with the updating....



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I hope you continue to enjoy.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My Alice

excellant



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Not Fixed

I really like this story. Great job. I was glad to see the update.

 
Snapshots by ThePhoenixRiddle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Outtakes from The Photographer's Series. Chapter titles will signify exactly where each chapter of this collection of outtakes takes place in the continuum of the 4 stories in our series. All pairings possible. All POVs possible.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7593
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Exposure, Chapter 4: EPOV

really really love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Exposure Chapter 5, RPOV

Great job. But I want B with E.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Exposure Chapter 5, RPOV

Great job. But I want B with E.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Exposure Chapter 1: EPOV

sooooooooooo love this

 
Summary:

Sequel to The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and in to Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward.  When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain?

 

*Rated for lemons and language

 

Thank you, Selita, for making this fantastic banner!  *muah*

TMS

This is my first fan-made banner!!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you, dear!!!

FanMadeBanner

This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone? 

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 168854
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Big News

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Party Time

I really like this story. I am a bit worried about Claire. Please don't let Edward cheat. I love how you had Bella stand up for herself.



Author's Response:

I'm curious as to why you're worried about Claire.  Or why you'd think Edward would cheat on Bella with Claire.  LOL!  Trust me when I say that Edward doesn't have enough love in his body to have two girlfriends.  Edward is completely devoted to Bella and only has eyes for her.  I can't stand reading stories where one cheats on the other or they're with someone else before they're with each other.  So know that when you read ANY of my stories, these two will always be together with no cheating involved.  Promise! :D :D

I'm glad you enjoyed Bella standing up to Victoria and Charlotte.  I enjoyed writing it. :D

Thanks for reading and all the reviews!! :D :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Birthday Gift

I liked it

I also liked the part where you wrote the deep throat part ended badly in the past. Thanks for some realism. I always chuckle when I read stories where Bella, the first time she goes down on him takes him whole and then swallows with no problem. Come on, a little reality - like gagging and then throwing up LOL. So, you get an extra point for being more realistic.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed the little misshap with the 'deep throat' part.  Even though their relationship is far from real, I try and make it as real as possible otherwise.  I can't stand it either when she can deep throat and it's her first time giving head or her first time with Edward. 

Thanks for the review! :D

 




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