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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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full moon by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 442]
Summary:

“He left me! Am I really just a pet?” was the only thing Bella could think of as she watched her true love leap out his bedroom window. Will she ever be the same again? Will Edward return, when? How can he be so close yet unreachable? Not even a pack of wolves or a coven of vampires can answer that question but they will sure try.

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Sequel to daybreak, read it first.

Set during summer of 2006.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 92552
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Thoughts

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Trips

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Why Can't I Stay Away?

can't wait for the next chapter

 
College Daze by Soldiers_pixie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Freshman Bella Swan meets and becomes close friends with college roommate Alice Cullen.  This friendship thrusts Bella into the Cullen's world of wealth, glitz, glamour, and secrets.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 9444
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: November 06, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'll try to have the third chapter up sometime this weekend, if not early this week. 

 
Summary:

Vampires aren't just myth, they're the enemy.

 

 

Bella Swan is a hardened killer living in a warzone in Forks, Washington. Vampires have taken control away from the humans and she's willing to do anything to get them out of the country (or kill them, that always works). She was always taught to never trust a vampire, but when the resistance is compromised, and the solution falls into the hands of a vampire, is she willing to turn her back on everything she believed in?

(AU/canon couples/gore, action, guns, language)



Part of So You Think You Can Write? (www.sytycw.com) "Undiscovered Gems" vol. 6!

Recommended on Center Of His Universe (http://centerofhisuniverse.blogspot.com) as The Fic You Need To Be Reading!

Reviewed at Twi-fic Promotions! (http://twi-ficpromotions.blogspot.com)

Guest reviewed and part of "Under the Radar" at The Twilight Awards! (http://www.thetwilightawards.com)

Recommended on Tazz's Twilight Obsession! (http://tazzsobsession.blogspot.com)

Nominated at The Faithful Shipper Awards!

Nominated for Best Unknown Author at The Silent Tear Awards!

Nominated at the Indie Twific Awards for Best AU and Best Action or Drama!

Nominated at The Howling Wolf Awards for Best Underling!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 131681
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

looking forward to more. I hate Jake so feel free to kill him anytime!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, I'm not sure if Jake will be dying (any time soon, that is), but I could always write an alternative where he gets brutally mauled to death. Thanks for always reading! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so love this story

great writting and plot



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

just love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you for always reading! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20a

Glad to see this is back!



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's good to be back! ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20a

Glad to see this is back!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is soooooooo good



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy Cauchemar Vivant! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

GREAT JOB

SHE SHOULD BE A BIT MORE GRATEFUL LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! (:

In her mind vampires are evil and she's staying with a coven. Whether they say they're good or bad, she still doesn't feel comfortable with it. Maybe one day....

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great job

she does need to be a bit more grateful lol



Author's Response:

Thanks as always! (:

Hey, at least she didn't snap at him like usual, and her sarcasm was a little half-hearted, ha ha. Don't worry, you get a different side of Bella very soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Excited for the raid? ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

SUCH A GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is an outstanding story@



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yet another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Okay, love this story. I loved seeing a playful Edward lol.



Author's Response:

He's kind of a playful jerk, isn't he? Ha ha ;)

Thank you for your continued support with Cauchemar Vivant! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't tell u what a great job u have done with this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really hope it was worth the wait.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! (:

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19b

Such an awesome story

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! (:

 
Caravaggio by meimei42 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 886]
Summary:

Bella's parents have comissioned a painting to be done of her by one Edward Cullen. Edward, though, is too suave for his own good and its not long before he's trying to talk Bella right out of her own clothes.

 

car

 

“You did really well,” Edward said, beginning to pack up his things.

I blushed. "Thank you."

“You ever thought about posing nude?”

My head went up in shock and I half expected to see one of those gotcha smiles plastered on his face. There wasn’t though. No, instead he looked deadly serious, like he was already taking my clothes off with his eyes. I felt the sudden need to cover up.

 

TLKF

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 117988
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Thnks fr th Mmrs

I think I hate you right now lol. WTF happened! Dying here. Sorry, but if she takes him back she is so stupid.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Subject Matter

great start

please tell me she is 18 in this



Author's Response:

She is 17, but I put it at the start of the school year so her birthday is right around the corner LOL.  I met my husband three weeks from my 18th birthday when he was 22.  :D

 




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