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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

What do you do when the one you thought would love you forever up and leaves you? You move to Vegas of course!

It's 3 years after Edward left Bella. She's discovered a new life, and made new friends, but has never really gotten over Edward's abandonment.

When a chance encounter with Alice at a local Vegas night club brings the Cullens back full force into Bella's life, how will she react? Is there any hope for them to rekindle their friendships? More importantly, is there any chance that she and Edward can work through her distrust and his shame and guilt to get back their undying love, or does attention from a new love interest have Bella distracted?

Come on in to the world of Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies, and find out!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99051
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Destiny's Course

Really into it. I feel sorry for Rob, but he has to go LOL.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Revelations

I hate Tanya aughh

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Too Late

I am almost in tears. I love the angst, but I do hope it will have a e and b ending. I hope Tanya gets some type of vampire STD.  I hate her!



Author's Response:

I've been so excited to share this Chapter with you all, and I was sooo bummed when it got rejected for Punctuation ... but in re-evaluating this chapter to make my corrections, I actually ended up making the content a little better, so I guess everything happens for a reason. Hoping Ch 5 won't give me quite as many problems.

Thanks so much for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Attempting Redemption

I LOVE THIS

PLEASE TELL ME HER AND JAKE WERE NOTHING MORE THAN FRIENDS

ROB IS NICE BUT HE HAS GOT TO GO

TANYA NEEDS HER SKANK BUTT KICKED

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Complicated

I LOVE THIS

1. ROB NEEDS TO BE GONE LOL..HE CAN BE A FRIEND

2. EDWARD NEEDS TO CHANGE HER...OR MAYBE ROSE DECIDES SHE DOESN'T WANT TO SEE HER FAMILY DESTROYED AND CHANGES HER.

3. WILL WE SEE MORE TANYA SKANK? I COULD SEE HER COMING BACK TO  TRY AND KILL BELLA.

 

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Intruder

Love it

I would let him change me@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Worst Fears

Having faith there will be a HEA



Author's Response:

Absolutely an HEA... you'll see... this is actually a really neat direction it's taking.. at least I think so :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

L.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Strange Days

I really want to slap Bella lol. Please, don't let her hook up with anyone else. I love the story and E needs to suffer a bit hehehe but B doesn't need to be with anyone else.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Second Chances

I was getting worried there for a moment lol. I was reading thinking I am ready for Edward to kill Rob lol.. Really like the story. Please tell me that Edward heard her conversation with Rob when she told him to get lost. So, will we be having a newborn Rob who wants Bella?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

SO EXCITING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Ties that Bind

Great job.

It will be interesting to see what happens with Rob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Changes

Poor Bella

Edward needs to change her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Going Home

looking forward to more

Edward needs to change her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Awakenings

Excellant

Edward needs to change Bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Straws, Camels & Broken Backs

I am so sorry for all that you have been though.

 

Great STRONG chapter. Excellant writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Control & Compromise

I was glad to see this update. Love how you can feel the emotion. Dying for more.

 
The Other Foot by twighlit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Summary:

 

What if the shoe was on the other foot?

What if Bella was a Cullen, and Edward a mere human?

Bella Cullen has been living with her vampire family in a small town in Washington state for nearly four years - since she bridged the divide being life and undeath.

When a slip in judgment forces the Cullens to move to Chicago, she finds herself juxtaposed with Edward Masen: impossibly beautiful, impossibly tempting, impossibly human.

How would Twilight have played out if everything was backwards?

 

*Rated for potty mouths and lemons.

Canon pairings, even in the most alternate of alternate universes.

Mild to moderately OOC for Edward and Bella, switching things around really messed them up.

SM owns, I pepper in the debauchery.

 

Mkystich is taking over my page with all her banners. She's delicious.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8732
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oops.

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oops.

great job



Author's Response:

thanks, im doing what i can.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A for Effort

I really like it

 
Angel by eglantine Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

Bella is a librarian who is in need of some money to pay off her college loans. When her best friend Alice finds out about an interview at the Chicago branch of Elite Model Management, she decides to give it a try. A Victoria's Secret story, with a Cinderella twist. But is Edward her Prince Charming? All human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6174
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
The Half-Breed by Athey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Alternate Universe where Edward is a half-breed human-vampire and the biological son of Carlisle and Esme. The Cullens move to Forks and Edward meets Bella Swan. ExB AU


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 58286
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great. Love it!@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3 - Introductions, Food, and Philosophy

I totally love this

Yes, Jessica would taste foul lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A New Start

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Pickup Trucks, Migraines, and the Library

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

I LOVED HOW HE TOLD THEM OFF

 




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