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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

 

During a chance return to Forks, Bella Swan runs into her high school crush only to discover that things were never as they appeared.  What has Edward been waiting for all this time?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 203247
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, so love this



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

you have done a great job with this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

soooooooooooooooooooooo love this



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

BEAUTIFUL

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you...it's people like you that make me keep writing, I kid you not!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

GREAT WRITTING

LOVE THE STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved this chapter and seeing the girls in action. I would have loved to see Rose kill Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

GREAT JOB

FEEL FREE TO KILL JACOB OFF

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

another great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE THE STORY

GREAT WRITTING

FEEL FREE TO KILL JACOB OFF

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I SO LOVE THIS STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I really love this and would love to see it turned into an IFIC

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan has begun to notice changes in her body - strange, unlikely occurances that are accompanied by horrific bouts of pain.

 

And when Edward Cullen - miles away and living a stagnant life after leaving the only one he has ever loved - gets a frantic call from Alice, he must rush back to Forks. His next descision will change the course of their lives.

 

Will Bella be able to forgive Edward for breaking her heart? And when a not-so-new threat meets her eye to eye, Bella is finally strong enough to fight for herself - but will she be able to win?

 

AU-New Moon. Canon pairings. Rated for gore, intense scenes, and eventually some hot vampire lovin'.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 24477
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Killer

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Days

loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks, dear! <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Sudden Change

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Splitting

Great story

please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'll do my best!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Learning

GREAT JOB AS USUAL



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Core

Excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Silly Soul Stuff

It was good for me

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Flesh

I would suffer through the burn for Edward...sigh

 
Summary:

She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift. He hides behind his opinions,seeking closure. When their worlds collide can they help each other. For the winning bidder, HooiserNina of the Support Stacie Auction. Not for the light hearted. M rating.  All human with supernatual elements. Banner by emerald_rosalie.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 44372
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not Alone

Oh, what a cliffy!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Writing

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Darkness Falls

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Now That She's Gone

You made me tear up

great job



Author's Response:

Then I've done what I've set out to do.  Write real emotion.  :D

 

Erica

 




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