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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Numb by Tyranny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 666]
Summary:

Numb by Tyranny

 

Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 113960
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It never ceases to amaze me the things people will do to their children. SUCH A TRUE STATEMENT. I work with abused children and it is amazing. I really like this. However, CPS would have had to talk to Bella first and/or the police would have had to detain. CPS couldn't just say yeah she is staying with you. So I am wondering if Charlise did something like contact CPS in the county and they contacted law enforcement to detain based on records and the emergency of the situation? Or CPS could have done a protective custody warrant. I would also imagine they would have had to have assistance from prob the Sheriff's department as Charlie is the local city police? Just wondering.

Great writting and I am enjoying it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it, you're one of those that I was worried about offending. I don't know about your work, I've only ever been on the other end of it and I wasn't exactly in a position to know what the hell was going on. If you don't mind I'd love to use some of your suggestions, or possibly talk to you privately about what the actual procedure would be. Let me know if that would be ok with you. If not, it's cool, I'm just glad to know that you know I'm taking your job lightly. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I work with abused kids. Abusers should die !

anyway, off my soap box now

great start



Author's Response:

I agree. Maybe not in this fic, but definitely agree.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

dying for more



Author's Response:

And more you shall have, as you well know, since you're one of my most loyal. Thanks hun.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is really good. I am a CPS worker and my hatred for Charlie in this story....well, I can't put into words. Seeing kids with bruises from their so called parent (I use the term losely) just pisses me off. I hope Charlie gets the hell beaten out of him.



Author's Response:

We shall see, we shall see. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I REALLY AM ENJOYING THIS CHAPTER. I HOPE CHARLIE GETS EATEN BY WOLVES.



Author's Response:

...Now that would be an interesting outtake to do. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like the story



Author's Response:

Good, it likes you too.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I loved this chapter so much!



Author's Response:

Glad to please. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love the story.

I hate Charlie. I am a social worker and work with abused kids. They need to report it so she can be removed from that ass! I hope he dies a painful death just like all child abusers should.....before they go to hell ((my little soap box rant).

You do a great job with making one feel the emotions in this



Author's Response:

I liked your rant, and agree wholeheartedly. As a social worker, I hope that you don't take exception to anything I put in this story. I'm taking a bit of creative license with what exactly the authorities might do. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

THANKS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake 2

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Please update soon! Dying here!!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

Oh, please don't let her forgive the loser mother

Good job

 
Voyeur by Sic Et Non Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

When Bella Swan sees something she shouldn’t she can’t help her response, and Edward Cullen can’t help but take that response to the next level.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4694
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

damn

 
Tutor by Mentalistecbm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

The Cullens move to a new school, in a new state, with new students. Edward is… pretty much a nerd. Dweeb, Geek, Turd, Loser. Whatever you wanna call him. Bella isn’t. She already goes to Forks High. Well-known, actually. Not your average Nerdy Edward/Slutty Bella fanfic. Originality is all over, babe. So read.

 Thank you to ebonyy and PosionousGarden! (: original two inside. this one is just to perfect.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46201
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

update soon



Author's Response:

I plan on it.

 

Thanks for reading.

>

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so bery much.

>

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It made me sad when he said she wasn't that pretty

enjoying the story



Author's Response:

It made me sad, too. :(

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL



Author's Response:

LMFAO.

hehe, thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

Bella, turned into a vampire by Carlisle Cullen in the year 1837, and Edward, determined to enter the Great War against his family's wishes, must face the potential for both love and despair embodied in one another.  Through personal journeys and adversity, they confront the limits of their faith in order to determine whether they can share a future. BxE

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28824
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  Chapter 2 is up and Chapter 3 is submitted!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

doing a great job with this



Author's Response:

Thanks!  ;) jj

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great story

 




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