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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Here's to Strategy by Lumedog7 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 407]
Summary:

Thank you so much to MistressElektra for my new awesome banner! xoxo

 

 

HTSv1

 

(Thanks so much to Selita and Liz for the AWESOME banner!)

 

Isabella Swan is the president and CEO of a major marketing firm in Washington. She’s worked long and hard to get there, and as a result, she’s a bit of a bitch. When her VP hires a fresh new manager, lured away from a competing firm, Bella expects perfection and more money. But this guy seems to think he’s the best thing since sliced bread, and Bella will not tolerate insubordination. It doesn’t matter how good he is. Two people used to being in charge and getting their way are bound to clash, and it’s a battle of wits. Who’s going to win?

 

Rated NC-17 for language and later lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 144508
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: War and peace

I like this a lot. He still needs to bend her over and give her what she needs lol



Author's Response:

So you keep saying! Haha! Don't worry - there will be lots of that...but I'm not telling you when! Haha! I'm so mean, I know.

Thanks for staying with me!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Stuck together

She really is a bitch lol



Author's Response:

I know, I know. Don't you just love to hate her? At least no one would accuse this Bella of being a doormat! Quite the opposite! Thanks for returning!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In (P)reparation

I love this. Bella so needs a good roll in the hay..lol. I think Bella should lose it and attack him in the hotel.



Author's Response:

Hello again my dear. I think they both need a good roll, honestly. All of that pent up sexual frustration is bound to explode - and soon! Haha! Stay here for more!

Thanks!

L

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks! Chapter Two is coming up! Keep reading! It's gonna get interesting!

Lumedog7

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Baggage

great job



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry for the delay, too!

Keep reading...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: First Day

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Boss from hell

Great chapter

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Let's try to get along

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thanks for being a loyal reviewer. I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: The B Side

you have done a great job with this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you darling! So glad you've been enjoying it (and telling me as much)!

Much love and future lemons to you!

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: The mason

MEANY, LEAVE US HANGING LOL

I ACTUALLY THINK IT IS BETTER TO WAIT AND HAVE THE BUILD UP



Author's Response:

Please, PLEASE trust me, my dear...all of this waiting will be worth it. I promise.

Until then, keep reading. I love the reviews! It's so much fun!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Case of the Mondays

I guess I need to slap Bella again.....dumbass girl! Go for the sex with Edward lol.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: A change in trajectory

AUGHHH! I hope she gives up the foolish plan of distance.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: The grind

SHE NEEDS TO GO FOR IT AND DO HIM AGAINST THE WALL, IN THE HALL, ON A BALL....



Author's Response:

Thanks smutty Dr. Seuss!

Love it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: Let me count the ways

LOVED IT

Just afraid Bella will screw it up



Author's Response:

Aren't we all. That's what she does.

Glad you loved it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: The vultures descend

She needs to go over and make it up to him



Author's Response:

My dear - please don't fret. All will be made clear in the next chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Two roads diverged...

I love this story. Glad that Bella isn't freaking out and pushing him away. I am sure Tanya isn't done yet!



Author's Response:

So glad! Haha! You know it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Confession

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Reality check

When she told him to go work for A and T I about punched her LOL!

 



Author's Response:

Me too! The bitch just won't listen to reason! I'm trying...

Thanks for your comment!

Huge, Lumedog

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-five: All for me

Well, ready to slap her again

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six: Growing pains

She better start making it up to Edward lol



Author's Response:

She will. Oh boy will she ever. Hmmm...I see BJs and lots of sex and cooking (pizza and beer, of course) and apologies too, for sure.

Thank you!

Hugs, L

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-eight: I'm sorry...

great as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-eight: I'm sorry...

great as always

 
Summary:

When a mysterious package finds its way to workaholic junior editor Bella Swan's door, she opens it to find the crisp pages of a manuscript penned by the mysterious M. J. Hunter. Astounded to have been granted the opportunity to work for such a great, albeit anonymous, author, she loses herself in the pages of the writer's newest novel, Assassin's Gate.

What she didn't foresee however, what she never expected, was for the book to change her life. But then again, the fictional world wasn't supposed to come to life.

Long ago, when she was young, her grandmother had told her of a pen that held great powers. A story that, though she based her masters dissertation on, she believed to be nothing but folklore: random coincidences romanticized by her eccentric family. Now however, she can't be so sure that it's all just happenstance.

Can Bella save the man written in the pages before it's too late? Or is destiny fated to destroy him? And, if she were to reach him, what could come of her interference in a world that she doesn't belong in, that she was never written in to begin with?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 8237
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: May 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
Getting Warmer by Eiluned Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

 [GW.png]  art by manyafandom for the Perv Pack Smut Shack

  

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 159917
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: May 22, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: ORD

great job



Author's Response:

Thanks again!

 




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