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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Unbitten by maggieloo402 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 132]
Summary:

The story of Bella Swan, a 23 year old journalist, who is sent back to her hometown of Forks to report on a recent murder. During her investigation, she meets Edward, a 24 year old doctor, and most importantly, a vampire. When she begins having feelings for Edward and discovers his secret, they will learn how much they are willing to sacrifice for true love.

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 61569
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Defying Gravity

really like this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Assignment

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Amends

I like this. Thank you for not letting her have been with Jacob. When I saw he was in it and they were in the same house I almost stopped reading LOL as I hate him. But I can deal with them being friends.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Explosions and Fireworks

love the story

Charlie is a jerk like Billy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Concussions and Confrontations

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Two Sparrows in a Hurricane

THIS IS A GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) Glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Complete

10



Author's Response:

:) Thanks

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Fearless

I so love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you darlin :)

Your continued love to my story means a lot!!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: So Small

INTERESTING



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it :) I've been nervous about introducing this part of the plot!!

Thanks for the review!!

xoxo,
Maggie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Find a Way

I LIKE IT. BUT IN THE END I WANT THEM BOTH TO BE VAMPS SO THEY CAN HAVE FOREVER.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, darlin :) I hope you continue to enjoy the story

xoxo,
Maggie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Hope

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. BUT I WANT THEM TO BE VAMPS - THAT WAY THEY HAVE FOREVER.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like the story, but I'm sorry to hear that you don't like where it's going. I'm trying to write something different and original, and I knew some people wouldn't like what I'm doing with it, but it's just a story I had in my head that I had to get out. I think you'll enjoy where I'm going with it, and I hope you'll like AH Edward. Thanks for your review! xoxo

 
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Bella is successful, strong and independent; she has everything she wants in life.  Well, almost everything.  A chance meeting one night with a mysterious Edward, potentially changes everything she thought she knew and wanted.  Rated NC-17 for language and lemons. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 95764
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Buzzing

I REALLY AM ENJOYING THIS STORY

GREAT WRITTING

HOPE THEY CATCH THE GUY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Longest Day

omg

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Old Friends and New Ones

nothing would be better then E stroking your leg.....well, I guess I could think of a few other things that included him lol

great  job



Author's Response:

I know...right!

Hey, thanks for the review!  I love each one you've given me!

xoxo,

cosmogir;7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Jacket

Nothing would be better than Edward taking u against  a wall lol

nice chapter



Author's Response:

I agree about Edward and the wall...Sadly, my husband does not.  LOL

So, tell me...after reading the chapter, do you think Bella is a slut?

Thanks for the review!  They really do make me happy.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Four Days

I hope we don't find out anything bad from Esme/./////

love this



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath, Aftterglow

such a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I love all your reviews!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Cocktails and Conversation

dying here...u must update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for being the first person to review my story!  It means so much, I can't even tell you!  It should update pretty soon.  Second chapter is done and ready to send off to my beta.

Thanks again...You Rock!

~cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Mine, Yours

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

And, thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Ambition Is Hot

I really reallly love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Edward and the Downward Dog

keep it coming



Author's Response:

I promise to keep it coming!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

I really love this story. On that note, don't let her sleep with him on first date LOL. The build up is so much better and I just don't like a slutty Bella LOL.



Author's Response:

Talk to me about this after you read chapter 5  :)

PS

I don't think Bella's a slut!  I promise, I know. 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Mistakes and Misapprehension

BELLA OWES EDWARD BIG TIME LOL



Author's Response:

She pays him back....I promise!

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Everything and Nothing

loved it



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!

I'm so glad you loved it!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Who's The Boss?

dying dying dying for more



Author's Response:

Please don't die!

Update will be soon!  I promise!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 




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