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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC.

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Excerpt from Chapter 7:
“I have to get out of here,” I said.
I walked right past Edward but stopped when I felt something cold and hard grab my wrist.
“Don’t touch me.” I said it in a way I was surprised how it came out. It came out in more of a plea.
“Bella, please…let me explain…” Edward pleaded loosening his grip on my wrist.
“No,” was all I said. I started to pull and realized my vision started to blur and I could feel a few tears fall. “Edward, please let me go!”
“Edward. Let her go,” I heard Carlisle calmly say. Edward slowly, and somewhat reluctantly, let me go and I quickly turned around and opened the door.
I ran out and down the steps of the porch.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 37717
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Promise (angelicwish)

great chapter

hope it has a happy e and b ending.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: I Don't Want to Want You

Great job. Love this story so much.

So, what was Jacob showing Edward? Hopefully it was how Bella looked in the forest. Please, don't let her have slept with Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: White Horse

I am crying. But I am glad that she gave it to him. He did deserve it. Now  I am ready for them to be back together. Please, don't let her have slept with Jacob.

LOVE THE STORY BEYOND WORDS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Huntress

I really do love this. You have done a great job with it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Bliss

I really do love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Before the Storm

Another good job. I am just concerned what images Jacob was showing Edward..I can hang with kisses, but I hope she never slept with the mutt!

Good writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Trouble in Seattle

love it

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

next chapter will be up soon!
Thanks for reading!

~Sydney

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Imaginary

please update soon as I am dying here



Author's Response:

It should be up in a couple of days. =)

Thanks for reading!
~Sydney

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: You're Not Sorry

 I sooooooooooooo love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Stand My Ground

I so love this. You are doing a great job. I love Alice, but hope that Bella lays into her for leaving her. Please, don't let Edward have been with anyone else.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Keep Holding On

love it

Edward, always the tormented soul. LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

Loved the story and will miss it. Have you thought about doing a sequel regarding evil Irina

 
Summary:

It's been fifty-three years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Since then, the Cullens have added two new members to their coven, and have moved back to Forks. Feeling compromised, the Volturi travel to Forks to dispose of the Cullens. As war is about to commence, the newest Volturi member suffers an onslaught of memories of her human past. The Cullens' saving grace may also mean the end of Edward. Or will Bella Volturi have a change of undead heart. 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33135
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The (e)X-Files

I really like this. But I beg you please don't let Edward have been with anyone else. Let whoever was in the clearing with him just be a new family member..

If he is with someone please pm me and let me know. I know it is sad, but I only read E and B stories. I can't bear it if one has been with someone else and don't read those, or stop reading them when it occurs. I am just a sucker for E and B.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Saved by (the) Bell

Okay, is the girl he protecting his girlfriend, wife, mate,, or just a family member?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Saved by (the) Bell

Please don't let the girl he is protecting be someone he is with - please let it just be a family member. I like the story and want to be able to keep reading it LOL. I am pathetic, but can't handle it when they are with other people.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Three's Company

Your writting is very good. But I can't handle Bella being a slut so I can't read anymore. It is not a put down, I am just not into slutty Bella. Like I said,  the writting was good.

 
Summary:

 

Drawing lines is, for a time, on hiatus. Please be patient with me. I'll let you know what's going on when I know.

 

Drawing Lines by Arizona Hale

 

The whole world is turned upside down when Bella is attacked in Port Angeles and she must be changed if Edward wants to keep her in his life. It is clear from the beginning that Bella is much more than she seems and the circumstances involving her attack and new found abilities prove to be a challenge that Edward and the rest of the family may be unable to prevail against.

When Bella turns to an unlikely source for help, will she be able to heal? Or will they become the keepers of the pieces of her broken heart?

An Edward and Bella story.


Canon-based AU, mostly canon pairings.

Story rating pertains to crude language, moderate sexuality, and graphic references to rape and violence.



Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31596
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Abomination

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Short Venture

I hope Edward kills them all

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: One Way Or Another

looking forward to more

I hope Bella gets to kill lher attackers. All sex offenders deserve to die a horrible death and then have hell to look forward too.



Author's Response:

don't worry...justice is important to me :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: For Her

great job again

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Wellspring

I really liked the journal - excellant job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Negotiations

Great job - looking forward to shopping gotta love Alice

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Drawing Lines

I LOVED IT! I HOPE WE GET TO SEE WHAT THEY DO TO THE RAT BASTARDS. ESME WAS A REAL SHOCKER LOL.

ALL SEX OFFENDERS DESERVE TO DIE IN MY OPINION



Author's Response:

Wow! haha :) tell us how you REALLY feel.

 

Don't worry...they'll get taken care of. Promise.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Drawing Lines

Love Esme



Author's Response:

me too. she's a great mom :)

 




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