Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: hc4metal [Contact]
Real name:
Status: Member
Member Since: February 28, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader:

I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

The summer between Twilight and New Moon was perfect - or was it?  This series of one-shots will explore Edward and Bella in the early days of their relationship, and try to make sense of their eventually break up.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1990
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Sick Day

Edward wouldn't know what to do with himself if he wasn't worrying



Author's Response:

No, but that doesn't give him the right to make decisions for Bella. There needs to be trust in a relationship.  And honestly, that's no way to live.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blank Paper

looking forward to mroe

 
The Takeover by nygirl88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a corporate tycoon, in charge of all aspects of his life. Unfortunately, the one obstacle to his latest project doesn't know that yet...but she'll learn it soon enough.  AU and OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 18965
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Melancholy

My friend Michelle told me this updated and I was so happy to hear it. This is a fantastic chapter. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. Well, if she hasn't been kissed then obviously she still holds her v-card. I actually love stories like that. It will be interesting to see what Edward thinks of that. Jake - thank you for obviously letting Bella have a bad reaction to the mutt.

LOVE THIS STORY. QUIT YOUR DAY JOB TO UPDATE ON A DAILY BASIS>

Another ten

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh you must so update

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Lie

Okay, go update now. Quit your job and so forth...your only job is to update this great story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The New Strategy

I can't stay away from this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Real Angela

your doing a great job

 
A Love Story by tawelephant Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 141]
Summary:

Edward and Bella love each other but it takes a secret note to get them to make a move.  Follow them as they fall in love.


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 55540
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: February 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes, i liked

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

 

Thank you for reviewing.  I am so glad that you like my story.

Tiffany

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

cute story



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

really enjoying the story



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I have a one-shot pending beta approval and then I will send the next chapter for ALS to her.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice Mike. I never hated him, just Jacob

Cute story



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

U GET A 10 FOR FAST UPDATES



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So, he never kissed Tanya?



Author's Response:

Nope.  No worries there.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great story

 
Summary:

Small Fair

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,

Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!

Canon Couples 

My BFF is Twitter: Mrs_Robward


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

You made me tear up. My first pregnancy was a miscarriage ( luckily I have two beautiful children now) - that is something nobody should go through. I felt Bella's pain.

Now we just need the HEA with Edward coming from Heaven to get Bella

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4, Duckies

I really like this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3, Friends

I really love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme

Beautiful chapter

Hope karma bit Mike in the ass

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Bella

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2, Edward & Ethan

Can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6, More Forks, Roses, & Some Dancing

I just love this story.

I agree with as much as we want them to boink, it must wait. I can't stand stories where they meet and five minutes later they boink and then they are in love - oh, yeah that is real life (rolling eyes).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches

I WANT TO GO WITH HIM TO THE BEACH HOUSE..SIGH

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8, Wishes & Surprises

I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9, Forks, Birthdays, & More Songs

DO IT LOL

love the story

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.