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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

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Bella is successful, strong and independent; she has everything she wants in life.  Well, almost everything.  A chance meeting one night with a mysterious Edward, potentially changes everything she thought she knew and wanted.  Rated NC-17 for language and lemons. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 95764
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Old Friends and New Ones

nothing would be better then E stroking your leg.....well, I guess I could think of a few other things that included him lol

great  job



Author's Response:

I know...right!

Hey, thanks for the review!  I love each one you've given me!

xoxo,

cosmogir;7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Jacket

Nothing would be better than Edward taking u against  a wall lol

nice chapter



Author's Response:

I agree about Edward and the wall...Sadly, my husband does not.  LOL

So, tell me...after reading the chapter, do you think Bella is a slut?

Thanks for the review!  They really do make me happy.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Four Days

I hope we don't find out anything bad from Esme/./////

love this



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath, Aftterglow

such a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I love all your reviews!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Cocktails and Conversation

dying here...u must update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for being the first person to review my story!  It means so much, I can't even tell you!  It should update pretty soon.  Second chapter is done and ready to send off to my beta.

Thanks again...You Rock!

~cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Mine, Yours

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

And, thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Ambition Is Hot

I really reallly love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Edward and the Downward Dog

keep it coming



Author's Response:

I promise to keep it coming!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

I really love this story. On that note, don't let her sleep with him on first date LOL. The build up is so much better and I just don't like a slutty Bella LOL.



Author's Response:

Talk to me about this after you read chapter 5  :)

PS

I don't think Bella's a slut!  I promise, I know. 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Mistakes and Misapprehension

BELLA OWES EDWARD BIG TIME LOL



Author's Response:

She pays him back....I promise!

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Everything and Nothing

loved it



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!

I'm so glad you loved it!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Who's The Boss?

dying dying dying for more



Author's Response:

Please don't die!

Update will be soon!  I promise!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Mothers and Lovers

love this chapter and story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Something More Important

Can't wait until the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What He Didn't Say

I DIDN'T GET THE MEMO LOL

EDWARD NEEDS TO REALIZE HE ISN'T ALWAYS THE BOSS LOL...MEN

 
Here's to Strategy by Lumedog7 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 407]
Summary:

Thank you so much to MistressElektra for my new awesome banner! xoxo

 

 

HTSv1

 

(Thanks so much to Selita and Liz for the AWESOME banner!)

 

Isabella Swan is the president and CEO of a major marketing firm in Washington. She’s worked long and hard to get there, and as a result, she’s a bit of a bitch. When her VP hires a fresh new manager, lured away from a competing firm, Bella expects perfection and more money. But this guy seems to think he’s the best thing since sliced bread, and Bella will not tolerate insubordination. It doesn’t matter how good he is. Two people used to being in charge and getting their way are bound to clash, and it’s a battle of wits. Who’s going to win?

 

Rated NC-17 for language and later lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 144508
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: A walk and then...

I SO LOVE THIS TALE



Author's Response:

Why thank you so much lovey! So glad! I'm having so much fun with it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Are you kidding me?!

Damn...she really does need to get laid. Talk about being pent up LOL



Author's Response:

Haha! You're funny! Yeah, that's only ONE of her problems! Glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Damage control

Boy,, she really does need to get laid lol



Author's Response:

That's only one of her problems! Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-four: Devil in a blue dress

Wow, a chapter where I actually didn't want to slap Bella lol

Love the story

Why do I feel angst will be coming soon....



Author's Response:

Hehe. Because you know me all too well, my dear. Hang in there, okay? I do prefer the HEA stuff, so it will be worth it in the end. Have faith. Sometimes change is necessary to correct the trajectory. And we know Bella's still holding back. And Sweetward deserves much more than half a Bella. No?

Hugs and bandaids,

Lumedog

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: War and peace

I like this a lot. He still needs to bend her over and give her what she needs lol



Author's Response:

So you keep saying! Haha! Don't worry - there will be lots of that...but I'm not telling you when! Haha! I'm so mean, I know.

Thanks for staying with me!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Stuck together

She really is a bitch lol



Author's Response:

I know, I know. Don't you just love to hate her? At least no one would accuse this Bella of being a doormat! Quite the opposite! Thanks for returning!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In (P)reparation

I love this. Bella so needs a good roll in the hay..lol. I think Bella should lose it and attack him in the hotel.



Author's Response:

Hello again my dear. I think they both need a good roll, honestly. All of that pent up sexual frustration is bound to explode - and soon! Haha! Stay here for more!

Thanks!

L

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks! Chapter Two is coming up! Keep reading! It's gonna get interesting!

Lumedog7

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Baggage

great job



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry for the delay, too!

Keep reading...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: First Day

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 




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