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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Box

I really am dying to see what is going on here.

 
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Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Train

Did she cheat with Jacob? If so, she deserves what she gets

 
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Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Car

dying to know what happened between them. Did she cheat? If she did then I don't feel sorry for her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Car

dying to know what happened between them. Did she cheat? If she did then I don't feel sorry for her.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Fight

can't wait to see what caused all of this

 
Captured by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

What if Victoria had gotten a hold of Bella in New Moon? What was she planning to do to her? What if what happens to Bella changes her life and the Cullens' lives forever?

captured

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 49091
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4: A Time For Everything

great job

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue: Time Moves On

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: A Not So Happy Birthday

i LIKE IT. i JUST NEED TO KNOW ONE THING...IS THIS AN E AND J SGTORY? i DON'T READ THOSE. GOOD WRITTING.



Author's Response:

E&J, not sure which combo that is but I can tell you ALL my stories are Edward and Bella pairings.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: An Eye for an Eye

edward needs to kill riley

 
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Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Hell Has Frozen Over

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Be Careful What You Say

I love this story. This chapter was fantastic. I hope that Tanya will be okay with E and B and not be too jealous.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6: I Don't Want You

I liked this chapter.

I think it made sense due to the irony. But  I think in the next chapter, the reality that she was raped needs to kick in.....his anger.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Emotional Break Downs

Ecellant story

Edward needs to take it slow

 
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Date: October 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 11: Questions Not Answered

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 8: An All Around Tease

This was an excellant chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Sent Over the Edge

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you but please reread the first part the chapter, I just now noticed almost all of the 1st pov is missing, I fixed it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Can't Handle the Truth

strong chapter

good job

 
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Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: 12: Gifts Aren't Always Good

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: 13: What A Smashing Idea

Still enjoying this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 14: A Promise That Lasts Forever

good job

 
The Epoch of Belief by Veritas5 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Witness the journey of Tianna Sabbat from her upbringing as the spoiled daughter of an embassy official to the horrors of Volterra and to a new life and love she had never imagined existed. This story is not AU. Rather, it weaves in and out of the tale we all know and love. All of your favorite characters will be present and accounted for.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Amun, Aro, Bella, Benjamin, Caius, Edward, Kebi, Marcus, Tia
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 39022
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Volterra

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Summary:

 

Summary:  Chief Swan has always been content to swallow the lies that Bella and Edward tell him.  But after a conversation with one of his officers, Charlie questions his own judgment and decides it’s time for an unexpected visit during one of Bella’s sleepovers at the Cullens. 

 

ExB fluff . . . and a little angst (Edward can’t seem to help himself LOL). 

 

And Emmett humour – he’s so irrepressible that it’s impossible to keep him out of this story!

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 10537
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Saturday Night

great writting

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you like it!  :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Sunday Morning

very cute

well written

 
Summary:

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Edward is a FBI agent and is assigned to a strange case where he will need the help of his fellow agents and friends. His only problem? He has been assigned a new partner...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 101843
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Situation

Good job as always



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal,

Your reviews always make me smile.  Thank you for always being there for Bureau.  :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Partners

LOVE IT

Going into my favorites



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm tickled pink to be a favorite! I really glad you enjoyed :0)

 




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