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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

 

Summary:  Chief Swan has always been content to swallow the lies that Bella and Edward tell him.  But after a conversation with one of his officers, Charlie questions his own judgment and decides it’s time for an unexpected visit during one of Bella’s sleepovers at the Cullens. 

 

ExB fluff . . . and a little angst (Edward can’t seem to help himself LOL). 

 

And Emmett humour – he’s so irrepressible that it’s impossible to keep him out of this story!

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 10537
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Sunday Morning

very cute

well written

 
Summary:

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Edward is a FBI agent and is assigned to a strange case where he will need the help of his fellow agents and friends. His only problem? He has been assigned a new partner...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 101843
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Situation

Good job as always



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal,

Your reviews always make me smile.  Thank you for always being there for Bureau.  :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Partners

LOVE IT

Going into my favorites



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm tickled pink to be a favorite! I really glad you enjoyed :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Case

this is very good



Author's Response:

Thank you! The plot has been stuck in my head for a while and it's a relief to have it written. Thanks for reading, the next chapter will be up soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Complications

dying for more



Author's Response:

Hi :0) Thanks for being so patient. The next two chapters will be more fun. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Game Plan

SO DYING FOR MORE

GREAT WRITTING



Author's Response:

Thank you! I promise that the next two chapters will be more fun. The stakeout is shaping up to be a real trip. Next chapter is in production.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Set Up

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi There! :0)

Thanks for being here! Yes, next chapter will be over-the-top, playing with the agents fun.  The E&R romance arc hits the middle of the chapter.  Those two are so much fun!

Next chapter will be up very soon--scout's honor. :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Stakeout

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

Thank you, lady.  *curtsy*

This was my first ever "spy mission" chapter, so I just hoped like heck I didn't bungle it.  I look at the science of it and try to make it as realistic as possible.  I am completely open to feedback if there is a loophole or gaff anywhere!

Thank you-THANK YOU for reading, rating and reviewing!  You are the best! :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Ghosts

I really love this story

Great job with the writting



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

Thank you, sweetheart! You have been TB since the beginning and I so appreciate!

You rock. :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 -- The Shuffle

enjoying the story



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing! *I bow to you*

I appreciate! Thanks! :0)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -- The Response

I really really really like this

Great job



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

I'm so glad!  I was thinking, "Okay, we're getting into the middle of the plot now. Things are going to start to pick up."  I'm really happy when the chapters are recieved okay.  It's love and then pans over to action, so I don't want to shake anyone too badly.  Poor J.  Gosh, I have spent every waking minute with the urge to pick him up off the floor! Eek.  LOL! 

Thank you so much for reading, rating and revieiwng! You are the best!  **I bow, curtsy and hug** :0)

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Hidden Enemies

Great story



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

Thank you.  There will be a few more ups and downs but we are two thirds of the way through.  We get more action and Edward's past (hopefully without any more cliffies) next chapter.

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing! *I heart the stars!--Thank you!*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Shooting

Fantastic chapter



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

Thank you for the review and thank you for the stars!!  Ah, I was a little afraid of this chapter because, let's face it, I conked Jasper on the head and then I shot Edward.  I'm so glad you enjoyed. 

All the injured parties will make full recoveries, I promise!  :0D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Behind Closed Doors

Great job as always



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

OH, thank you for the stars!  You are so good to me.  I appreciate your readership so much. 

Thanks for sticking with Bureau.  :0)

 
The Marksman by Melolabel Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

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Can love blossom in the blistering heat of Devil's Fork, AZ? When Ed Cullen, a gunslinger on the run, meets up with unusual beauty, Izzy Swan, the two join forces to take down the evil Valentine brothers. The Wild West has never been hotter! AU/AH, E/B.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 81997
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Rise of Ward Masen

This is great



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Awakening

I really love this story. You have done a great job with. I like the banner as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like the story and the artwork!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Death of Ed Cullen

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Check my profile for the teaser!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Izzy and the Injun

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  The teaser for ch. 4 is up on my profile!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Mad as a Wet Hen

I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THIS STORY AND WAS GLAD TO SEE AN UPDATE

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

I know it took forever, hopefully we'll be able to get the next couple out a little quicker.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Stinky Swan and Minty Fresh

love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're still with me here!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Run Ins

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Smoldering

One of my favorite fan fics

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Memory Lane

You have done a great job with this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Sorry I missed responding to last review, but real life has been insane for me.  Literally.  But I'm glad you're still hanging around and still enjoying this tale!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Justice

Fantastic as always



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sorry for the fail of responding soooooo late!

 
Volition by Rochelle Allison Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Feature

 

Belfast, Northern Ireland and the year is 1972. Bella's worried about her brother and his best friend, Edward, and their dangerous involvement in the Irish Republican Army. Is it really wise to fall in love with a rebel?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 139090
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love this story



Author's Response:

thanks, girlie. :)

 




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