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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

When Bella and Edward meet for the first time it's anything but love at first sight. But maybe fate (or Alice) has other plans.

 

Thanks to Dahlia Black for her banner skills


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12476
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That would be awful to look like her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

DIRECT QUESTIONS LOL

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE....HOPEFULLY SOON



Author's Response:

I'll try to update just around Christmas, depending on how much RL gets in my way.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Leave...what an ass



Author's Response:

Well.... Not totally dissagreeing here, but some things will be explained soon

 
The Affair by shelly6661 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

The Affair

How can something so wrong be oh so right? Despite the many hurdles in their path, Bella & Edward come together again & again, over & over. Is this pair willing to risk everything they've both worked so hard to get for just great sex? OOC,AH,Lemons Galore, NC17


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13660
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward t omore



Author's Response:

Cool!   Well, the next chapter has been submitted for beta so hopefully, it wont be too long after that!

thanks for reviewing and more importantly thanks for reading!

Shellx

 
Failure by KrysCullen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

What would have happened if Edward had lost control on Bella's first day of school? How would the Cullens have adjusted to this new addition to their life? When Edward fails to keep his self-control, he begins a journey like nothing he could ever have imagined...

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Banner by M81170. THANK YOU!

 

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 56628
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 31, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Guilt

I love this. Please, don't let Edward do anything with that ho! I can't wait to see what Tanya will do when she finds out E likes B.



Author's Response:

I won't let anything happen between Edward/Tanya. He is going to be too busy taking care of Bella anyway, which of course is going to make her fairly unhappy. Oh, so much fun to be had!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Lapse

Okay, I really love this so that means u better update pronto!



Author's Response:

I am working on chapter one as we speak! I hope it's as good as the prologue! Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

THANK YOU SO MUCH TO m81170 FOR THE BEAUTIFUL BANNER!

Edward was looking to start over when he moved to New York to stay with his cousin Emmett. Bella was looking for a whole new life when she met Alice. What happens when their two worlds collide, and an unexpected connection threatens to expose the truth?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 26450
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Walk in the Park

I like the story. I am guessing Tanya is moving out to be with Edward. Edward better decide what he wants.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Night in New York

good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Taxi Cab Confessions

DYING FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: What Happened?

you are making me cry

he needs to end it with the ho now

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Going Crazy

I REALLY LIKE THIS.

EDWARD NEEDS TO SEE ANOTHER GUY HITTING ON BELLA AND SHE CAN RUB IT IN IS ASSWARD FACE. WE NEED TO SEE A JEALOUS EDWARD. ASSWARD NEEDS TO MAN UP. LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Why?

He needs to leave Tanya now.

 
Summary:

A naughty oneshot Alternate Universe to V&P... were Emmett's not the only one who finds Rosalie pleasuring herself in the forest, and the scenario that follows as the memory of that night haunts all three young, horny teenaged vampires.

Rosalie's Point of View

Em/Ro/Ed but ending w/ Em/Ro, of course

Warning: Read at your own risk. Rated NC-17 for a reason for adult language, themes, and uber-strong sexual content. It’s all lemons with angst and a small touch of fluff. You’ve been warned.

Part of the series "Twilight After Dark." A Smutt Anthology by KariAnn, cfmom, and Achelle131.

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU, Crackfic Characters: Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Twilight After Dark: A Naughty Smut Anthology Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10251
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: ONESHOT

it was good for me



Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Midnight Caller by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

AU. Bella is left alone for the evening and has the entire house all to herself. Well, maybe not quite. . .NC-17 for dark, smutty times.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 21642
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Caller

loved it

how about a epov

 
Cullen the Horde by izzzyy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
Summary:

CRACKFIC - Forks has been infested with zombies, and it's up to the Cullens, as always, to save humanity.

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Categories: Crackfic Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 51496
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2009 Updated: April 15, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Backstage Pass to Hell

LOL laughing my ass off here



Author's Response:

Sounds like me when I was writing. I was in WCs and people were writing serious thing and I was laughing the whole time. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Life is a Grave, and I Dig it!

love the story



Author's Response:

thank you! *happy*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Rubber Monks and Leather Nuns

OMG I AM DYING LAUGHING HERE

THIS WAS BEYOND FUNNY

THANKS FOR THE LAUGH

LOL



Author's Response:

*laugh* I'm glad you liked it. I'm STILL waiting for the backlash of "OMG WTF?!" reviews ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dead by Dawn

and people say i am a bitch lol

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

But Rosie's such a FUNNY bitch! Thanks for reading, I'll be getting a new chapter up as soon as it's betaed!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Nice Day for Resurrection

awesome job



Author's Response:

Thanks very much

 
Summary:

Story Summary: Edward has been struggling with the loss of his humanity for almost a century when he discovers his singer, a two-year-old Bella. In a world wrought with violence, greed, and an unquenchable thirst for power, the Cullens' find themselves tangled in an intricate web of half-truths and unfulfilled destinies. There is a reason Edward has walked the earth alone for almost a century, and he is about to find out why when he discovers the consequences of tearing two souls away from each other. Now there is much more at stake than just their love for one another. Will Edward and Bella fulfill their destiny as soul mates and bring balance back to the world or will Edward let his own self-loathing and uncertainty get in the way?

 

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I want to give a shout out to eatmySKIRTSx for making this awesome banner for me! She inspired me to make my own above...yay! I was freaked out and you lead me to the right path! Yay! Thanks again!

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 10863
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

dying for more



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so glad you are...I'll try to keep up the pace and not flake out! lol! Thanks for reading - K

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Age of Innocence

great job



Author's Response:

Thank you...much appreciated! Next chapter should be up soon...let me know what you think! ; )

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Destiny, Prophecy and Powers

love this



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...consistency is good...I like consistency, lol! Thanks again for taking the time ; )

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Pinky Swear?

lol



Author's Response:

I take that as a good sign then...I laughed a lot when I was writing it! ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing...as usual! You're a keeper!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: I Know What You Are

I really liked it. I would like to see more flashbacks of where she screwed with Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Means a lot...really. Don't worry about getting flashbacks either because that certainly is in the mix for next chapter...I kind of wanted them to be from Bella's POV though, so it should be interesting to say the least. ; ) Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

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Excerpt: Aro laughed again and his smile returned although it was more menacing than inviting. "That is where you are wrong, dear child. I'm quite sure that you could be persuaded. Are there not more members of the Cullen family? Do you want to be the reason that they all perish?"

This story explores another direction that New Moon could have taken. One that might have happened if Aro hadn't been so forgiving.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Demetri, Edward, Felix, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 20244
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Eternal Nightmare

I would really like it from his POV. So, will there be a Alec and Felix smack down? How is Jane processing this?

Great writting. I can't believe I am reading this bc I am so beyond PRO EDWARD.



Author's Response:

I love Edward too. But he really doesn't have a place in this fic. Nothing past the scene in the throne room could have occured with him in the picture. Wherever he goes, I see Bella following so I had to get him out of the picture. I definately see felix becoming a big problem in the near future and I do plan to bring jane into this in the next few chapters. She is Alec's twin and a big part of his life. I have lots of ideas and I can't wait to get thenext chapter finished. We'll be hearing from Alec and see what he thinks about all that has transpired. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 




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