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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Theodicy by Kristonio Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary:

"God's Justice." 

After suffering the transformation alone in the Arizona desert, sixteen year old Bella must find the strength to go on with her life.  Wrestling with existential questions, she makes her way across the country to her only hope of refuge, Forks, Washington State.  Will she find the answers she's looking for?  When you're an indestructable mythical being, is there any chance for normalcy?


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 36905
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: November 16, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Covens

I love this story

Can't wait for Edward to see her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Transformation

dying for more

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Allies

This is such a great chapter

I like these two vamps

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Wager

love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Homecoming

I can't tell you how much I love this story

Great writting

 
Unbitten by maggieloo402 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 132]
Summary:

The story of Bella Swan, a 23 year old journalist, who is sent back to her hometown of Forks to report on a recent murder. During her investigation, she meets Edward, a 24 year old doctor, and most importantly, a vampire. When she begins having feelings for Edward and discovers his secret, they will learn how much they are willing to sacrifice for true love.

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 61569
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Saltwater Room

This was a great chapter

Great writting

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much dearie! 

You always make me smile with your reviews. Thanks for sticking with me!

xoxo,

Maggie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Crazy

so dying for more



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! The chapters are going up as quickly as I can get them validated!! I have up through chapter seven written and part of chapter eight! :) 

 

Much Love

Maggie

 

PS- recommend it to your friends! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

another great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Defying Gravity

really like this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Assignment

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Amends

I like this. Thank you for not letting her have been with Jacob. When I saw he was in it and they were in the same house I almost stopped reading LOL as I hate him. But I can deal with them being friends.

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Explosions and Fireworks

love the story

Charlie is a jerk like Billy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Concussions and Confrontations

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Two Sparrows in a Hurricane

THIS IS A GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) Glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Complete

10



Author's Response:

:) Thanks

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Fearless

I so love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you darlin :)

Your continued love to my story means a lot!!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: So Small

INTERESTING



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it :) I've been nervous about introducing this part of the plot!!

Thanks for the review!!

xoxo,
Maggie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Find a Way

I LIKE IT. BUT IN THE END I WANT THEM BOTH TO BE VAMPS SO THEY CAN HAVE FOREVER.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, darlin :) I hope you continue to enjoy the story

xoxo,
Maggie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Hope

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. BUT I WANT THEM TO BE VAMPS - THAT WAY THEY HAVE FOREVER.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like the story, but I'm sorry to hear that you don't like where it's going. I'm trying to write something different and original, and I knew some people wouldn't like what I'm doing with it, but it's just a story I had in my head that I had to get out. I think you'll enjoy where I'm going with it, and I hope you'll like AH Edward. Thanks for your review! xoxo

 
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Bella is successful, strong and independent; she has everything she wants in life.  Well, almost everything.  A chance meeting one night with a mysterious Edward, potentially changes everything she thought she knew and wanted.  Rated NC-17 for language and lemons. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 95764
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Buzzing

I REALLY AM ENJOYING THIS STORY

GREAT WRITTING

HOPE THEY CATCH THE GUY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Longest Day

omg

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Old Friends and New Ones

nothing would be better then E stroking your leg.....well, I guess I could think of a few other things that included him lol

great  job



Author's Response:

I know...right!

Hey, thanks for the review!  I love each one you've given me!

xoxo,

cosmogir;7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Jacket

Nothing would be better than Edward taking u against  a wall lol

nice chapter



Author's Response:

I agree about Edward and the wall...Sadly, my husband does not.  LOL

So, tell me...after reading the chapter, do you think Bella is a slut?

Thanks for the review!  They really do make me happy.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Four Days

I hope we don't find out anything bad from Esme/./////

love this



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath, Aftterglow

such a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I love all your reviews!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 




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