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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Rejection by miska de cat Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

About a lot of rejection that Bella recieves, and how she handles it.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 2982
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Happy pixie and mean teacher

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

yeah, i can't ait to write more....

wait a second..

i can!!

from ami sweet- whos now going to write more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3, aka: Whoops, that was stupid!

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

more is coming....now! -ish

obnce beta-d!

nikki <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Edward's hair

please update soon



Author's Response:

thanxs for reviewing and i will soon

nikki <3

 
Not Meant to Be by klighted Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Growing up at Volturi Preparatory School, Bella always had a thing for Edward Cullen. At times it seemed as though he shared her affections, but after being rejected again and again, Bella decides to move on with her life. Then one night, ten years after graduation, the sparks between Edward and Bella are ignited again. Bella is reluctant to let Edward back into her life and her heart. Will they find happiness this time or are some things just Not Meant to Be?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25872
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Crush

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Plan

dying for more

 
Eternal Damnation by zomniac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 599]
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His question brought Bella back down from cloud nine. She glowered at him. “Bite me.”

A slow, wicked grin etched itself on Edward’s face. “I don’t think you’d want me to,” he whispered darkly, laughing silently at the irony of her insult.

-

“I know I smelled an open wound, Bella,” Alice said sternly. Behind her, Carlisle and Edward exchanged a look.

Bella scoffed slightly. “Believe me, I felt it,” she told her as she tried to stand.

-

“You don’t understand,” Edward said in a deadly tone.

Bella stared at him for a moment, a bitter expression overcoming her features. “There’s something for me to understand?”

 

-

 

 

“Fuck her!” she heard one of them call.

 

“Oh, I will,” the man above her answered.

 

-

 

Her smile faded after a moment when she realized something. “Oh, great,” she started grumpily, “we match.”

 

Edward grinned lopsidedly. “Indeed, we do,” he replied.

 

-

 

“You’re funny,” Edward said dryly. “I bet you wouldn’t be saying the same thing if you were the one who turned up missing.”

 

 

“Are you trying to scare me, Mr. Cullen?” Bella asked as she snapped a picture.

-
  
"Bella, listen to me,” he tried coaxing her gently.

“No!” Bella shouted, pulling her arms out of his grip. “I never want to see you again. Stay away from me,” she said through clenched teeth, and no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling.

 

-

He cupped her face with both hands while looking into her eyes. “If you don’t find me, who’s killed before, whose diet consists of blood, repulsive, how can I look at you in that way?” he asked her softly.

-

"What kind of man are you?!” Bella pushed and slapped his chest as she raged. She was becoming unhinged.

-
  
“Bella, don’t come,” her mother said weakly. “Whatever he says, don’t come—” 

“No! That’s not what you’re supposed to say!” a voice exclaimed in the background.

A tear escaped Bella’s eye as she listened to her mother’s cries as he hit her.

-

 

Edward nodded. “You’re safe now, Bella,” he told her tenderly as he softly massaged her cheek.

 

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It's cranky vampire Edward against angry, no shit-taking, possibly mortal Bella in the ring. Who will be the winner? Or will they both lose? Watch their journey to life full of drama, mystery, romance, and mythical creatures.

Twilight told with a strong, angry Bella, and a more controlled, bad tempered Edward. B/E, AU, canon pairings, lots of OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 221838
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Revelation

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Behind Closed Doors

this is great

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Behind Closed Doors

love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sometimes Sacrifices Are Necessary

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deceived, Betrayed, and Broken

great job with this

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Complicated Arrival

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: And So it Begins...

great writting and plot

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Complicated Arrival

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Regretted Confessions

So, is she a teen mom or is the child's someone elses?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Collision

Looking forward to more.

Would like to know about Dominic? Is Renee his mother???

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Heart of a Fighter

excellant chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Secrets Shared, Memories Awakened

wow!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Beginnings of a Bond

I just love this story. Great plot and writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Escapades

Love the story

Great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Moving Forward

WOW! Wonder how Edward will handle this. LOVE the story. Great writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: More Than You Thought Possible

EXELLANT!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Revealed

She needs to be honest with him regarding the records. Good job/



Author's Response:

I agree. :]

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: When It All Comes Crashing Down

EXCELLANT



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Almost Happily Ever After

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 




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