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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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The Night Before by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?

Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.

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Thanks to m81170 for the banner.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tentative Beginnings

I was so glad to see the update as I had been thinking about this story. I love it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Handle With Care

I had been thinking about this story. Glad to see the update. A++

 
Aegis by mothlights Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 669]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE

AegisAEGIS

Edward returns to Forks to find that Bella is stronger than he is. Their relationship must be redefined, but first he'll have
to catch sight of her. He's not the only one to track her down; Aro threatens the whole family when he uses Alice to get
to Bella and her troubled friend, Britt. EXB NM AU, MULTIPLE POV.

 

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Additional banner by Rianeau!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Santiago
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 77742
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: He smells like wool and copper

LOL

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks as always!! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Why didn't I see

You have done such a great job with this. I really enjoy reading it!



Author's Response:

Thanks again!! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: How far we've come

Loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Britt is short for Brittany

love it



Author's Response:

wow. thanks! more soon

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I'm not sure I should be here

I can't tell you how much I love this story. I love Britt. I cracked up at the how he muddled this one up. LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating & review! I'm glad you like Britt so far. I don't think Edward's going to love her attitude... 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: She's one of us now

I so love this



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for the rating!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Be brave enough to try

this is such a great story

one of my favorites



Author's Response:

Thank You!!! Hope you like the rest. ch 5 coming very soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: She is my mate

I know I keep saying the same thing, but can't help it - this is a great story



Author's Response:

And I keep saying thanks, but I DO appreciate it! Nice to know when someone likes it. 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Please forgive me

What a great chapter...but I would expect nothing less from u



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks! I hope the rest of the story lives up to your expectations as well! Thanks for rating.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: I forgive you

I like this a lot

E and  B need to share a room



Author's Response:

Thanks!! You're to the point, lol. I guess they do. 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: We pay a visit tonight

This is one of my favorite stories



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: She's family to me

You really have done such a great job with this story. I can't tell u how much I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was worried about this chapter for some reason. Maybe because I like the more exciting ones like Demetri biting Britt or BxE meeting again. But this ch needed to happen next... Anyway glad to know you're still liking it!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: We meet at last

THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks as always, HC!!! 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: It's you and me

loved this chapter

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks again! You are so nice to comment on every ch.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: He will make you a widow

I just love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The frickin' Capulets and Montagues

THE BATS AND THE BEES LOL LOL LOL

YOU REALLY HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB WITH THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks again! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything we do is a risk

DYING HERE!



Author's Response:

I know. What a place to end a chapter. Perhaps I'm evil. 

Thanks as always!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: So it's a fight

I just love this story. Great chapter.

I did start reading Bronze - I like it



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yep, I saw your reviews over there. You're so good about that!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: I knew you would come for me

I just love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you... again! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: You are my life now

IFIC...really needs to be one



Author's Response:

Thanks, though I think selections are based on site stats, so it'll never happen, lol. 

When I'm reading other stories and I look at the reviews - which I do for my favs - I often see your comments. There should be some sort of reader award for routinely taking the time to review chapter after chapter as you read them. If there were, I'd nominate you in a heartbeat! :)

 
Pieces by ToTheEights Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

We all remember it:  That critical moment in New Moon, when Bella raced accross the marketplace to get to Edward.  We all know what happened:  She saved him, and eventually they lived happily ever after.

But what if she didn't make it? 

Now all Bella and the Cullens have left is pieces of who they were, pieces that are too many and too far apart to once again be whole. 

But do they know what truly happened?  And what if the truth could shatter their world to nothing?

"I'm lost, crushed, cold and confused with no guiding light left inside." ~Guiding Light, Muse


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6907
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Plummet

okay, I like this as I am holding out that Edward is alive.

Good writting



Author's Response:

Mwahhahahaha we'll see, won't we?

And thank you very much! :) I try.

 
Summary:

Rob and Kristen RosesTwilight from Edward's POV.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 85402
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good starrt



Author's Response:

Thanks! I should have a new chapter up soon. I really appreciate the review, it means a lot! :)

 
Exposure by ThePhoenixRiddle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

 

When Bella meets Edward and Rosalie, they have an interesting proposition for her. It was supposed to be one night only. What happens when no one wants it to end? ExBxR, ExB, BxR, AU/AH. Part One of The Photographer's Series.

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Banner by SorceressCirce


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 66121
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: If I Fell

She needs to make a choice - hopefully E

 




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