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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Hot Dish by diamondheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

 

Chef Bella Swan has spent her life pursuing her dream and passion - owning her own restaurant. Which has left her love life in the soup. What love life?

 Enter suave, sexy, unapproachable headwaiter Edward Masen...

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"...Previously, the combination of ambition and exhaustion had put my libido into a sort of hibernation. No more. Not only did Edward's efforts at the Swan's Nest give me more time to myself than I'd had in years, there was the E-Factor, the Edward-factor, itself.

 I was quickly finding that all work and no play makes Bella a dull, frustrated, HORNY girl!"

 A lemony frolic! Rated for vulgar language, lewd behavior and shockingly graphic descriptions of food.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 8461
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Mid-course

this is great

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Appetizer

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summer of Salt by lola_pop Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 776]
Summary:

The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick.  Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other.

Until it's not.

An unexpected guest, new neighbors and a few stiff drinks collide to make the year we turn 19 sometimes better, often worse, but infinitely more interesting.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 84353
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Wherever you go, there you are.

I have been dying for an update. Great chapter. He has alot of making up to do because of that skank Tanya.



Author's Response:

Word.  Skank!  Hee.  More coming...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Snap

Great job as always! Fantastic.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Stranger Danger

please say it isn't so@



Author's Response:

I wish I could!  Alas, he is an ass.  

Hey, that rhymed!

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Crush

Auggh, please right this wrong!!!



Author's Response:

I'm trying, but these rich kids have a mind of their own!  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Cannoli and Chianti

I thought it was a great chapter. Edward better decide to change. Hopefully while at the lake Bella can go out dancing with the girls and Edward can get a bit jealous - might be good for him.

 

Great writting.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think Edward will get what's coming to him, one way or another!  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Fried Chicken and Chainsaws

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Coming soon!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Shenanigans

I have been dying for this update. Now I am dying for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Sorry for the wait.  Check the forums for a teaser in the next day or two...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Catharsis

I JUMPED FOR JOY WHEN I SAW THIS WAS UPDATED.

EVEN THOUGH I DON'T WANT HER TO SLEEP WITH MIKE, I HOPE MIKE DRIVES EDWARD CRAZY WITH JEALOUS RAGE LOL.



Author's Response:

Oooh I think we can get some of that going!  I love a jealous Edward, myself.  Thanks, as always, for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Reel

I can't wait for more.

I want Edward to suffer but I don't want her to sleep with Mike.



Author's Response:

Noted!  Definitely got readers on both sides of that fence.  Ha.  

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: It Could Be Sweet

I HOPE E HEARD EVERY MOAN LOL

I DO WANT THEM BACK TOGETHER...BUT SUFFERING E IS GOOD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Lotions and Potions and Lists

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

LOVE YOU!  Thanks for reviewing.  xo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Juicy Fruit

I just love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me!  I love you for loving it.  xo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The truth is all there is

I can't wait for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Little Bastard

good chapter ending

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: One More Time, With Feeling

I hope she moves for him

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Finding Purchase

great job with this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Drawing Limits

hard to believe this is coming to an end

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Shangri-La

A+

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

A+++

 
Summary:

 

Edward Masen, center fielder for the Boston Red Sox, meets Bella Dwyer, a reporter for EPSN who's been assigned to cover the streaking Sox for the last half of the season. Edward hates reporters; Bella loathes baseball. Defying the odds, they become involved, and the Sox begin to lose. Can Bella convince Edward that she isn't his unlucky charm?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 27417
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am glad you didn't have her sleep with him at this point - I can't stand stories where they meet and screw the same day and then end up being in love --- yeah, that is so reality (rolling eyes),

Great writting

I think Jasper needs to find Alice LOL to tame that wild boy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well, for someone who said she wasn't a groupie she sure is acting like one lol

 
Summary:

100 years have passed since Bella was changed. What happens when Bella finds herself in a dream like trance and finds herself transported back to 1918.....

 

 

Thanks to Jules for the awesome banner!!!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6393
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Where Do We Go From Here? (casket4mytears)

keep it coming

 




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