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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

Could she bear to live out eternity knowing the one person she had trusted above all else had never actually cared for her? No, she didn’t think so… Fifty years later, Edward, Rosalie, and Emmett are captured by the Volturi. Guess who’s there to greet them?


AN:


Ok, so I know I haven’t updated in forever, (my sincerest apologies), but I’ve had the worst case of writer’s block and I have just been going through kind of a rough time in my life, and am just now starting to get over it. I know that’s not an original excuse, but it’s the truth. To top it off, I wasn’t sure of the direction this story was headed in, but now I think I have a pretty good idea. I just need to take some time to write it. So I promise that I’m not giving up, but it’s going to take a bit of time before anything new is posted. I haven’t even completely finished the first chapter. I’m sorry! But here’s a teaser from the prologue of the new version to hopefully make it up to you! (Or at least tide you over.)


~*~

“They have finally sent in their spies.”


Gasps and hisses sounded from the small grouping behind him, tensed and preparing to attack.


“Patience, my friends. We have a plan, remember?”


“Who is it, master?” a female guard asked, an almost resigned tone contradicting her questioning phrase.


He hesitated for only a moment, trying and failing to find a way to avoid this question. There was simply no other way. She was a key part of the plan. Finally, with a sigh, he answered, “Edward, Emmett, and Rosalie Cullen.”


Something twisted in her gut, but she had been anticipating this. Of course it was bound to happen. That was just the way things worked out for her, and she had long ago accepted that. So there was no outward reaction to his words; only a simple nod.


“Edward, as in the mind reader?” the first guard wondered. Aro’s confirmation caused another hiss to rise up from amongst the guard.


“We must proceed with great caution.” He turned to face his followers. They had anticipated the rebellion’s every possible move and had prepared intensely for them all. He turned to face the female guard who had spoken. “You know what to do.”





 


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It’s not the final draft, but I felt you all deserved a sneak peek! I'll be posting the new version as a new story, and once it's up I'll probably delete this one. I want to have a big chunk of the new version written before I post it, so it'll be a while. Sorry! But good things do take time. And a big thank you to anyone who hasn’t given up on me! You’re patience will be rewarded, I promise!


~Jazz~


 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20107
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 3: What Does Bella Have to do With Them?

DYING FOR MORE



Author's Response:

My goal is this coming Friday, because of the movie. Thanks for the review!

~Jazz~

 
Summary:

 

“Son, you are here to receive a precious gift.  It is one that my father bestowed upon me, and his father bestowed upon him—one I will pass on to you now and expect that you give to your own sons when it is time.”

“You are a Cullen, and were therefore born with certain natural—endowments—that predispose you to success with women.  But, there is a beauty in sex which, if you could only grow to appreciate it—an art which, if you could only commit to learning it—will bring you and the women in your life such divine fulfillment as most mortals never know.  It is the art of worship, Edward, and it has very little to do with sex.”

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15498
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Man to Man

going into my favorites



Author's Response:

Awesome!  Thanks for the review--this is my first attempt at lemony twilight fic, so I hope I don't disappoint!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Practice

GREAT STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: She Comes First

love the story

appears little grasshopper is learning from the master

 
Break My Heart... by babygem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Much love to Christine 30974 for the awesome banner

Much love to Christine30974 for the awesome banner!!

Isabella Swan has had a tough past. After David breaks up with her and Renee is raped and killed, Bella moves to Forks to live with her dad, Chalie. She later finds the ireresistable Edward Cullen who later breaks her heart. However, she doesn't jump off a cliff after Edward leaves her. She decides that no matter how much it hurt, she had to get over him. But Edward can't stand living without her for long. He comes back to Forks in search of his lost love, but the Bella he finds is not the Bella he left. Will he be able to win her back?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 19063
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This Cannot Be Happening

I WAS CRACKING UP LAUGHING. GO BELLA. WITH THAT SAID, I HOPE THEY GET BACK TOGETHER AND THAT SHE STILL HAS HER V CARD. BUT SEEING HIM SUFFER IS FUN. I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A EPOV.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm gretly humbled by the fact that you took the time to read and review... it means alot to me.

EPOV coming up soon. keep an eye out for it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Painful Goodbye

another great chapter

you can really feel the pain

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A little too not over you

another good job



Author's Response:

thank tou, darling... I'm very glad you like it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: You Ruined my Day!

I like it. I would love for it to be one where he comes back and has to work for her to forgive him  ( I don't want her to run out and have sex with mutt boy or anything like that). I wouldn't mind seeing a jealous Edward. Maybe Alice has a vision that sends him back - such as Bella being with another guy ( or even another vampire ) and Edward decides to come running back and the games begin.

Great writting. You can feel her grief.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hope...

I like the story and great writting. However, if this is a E and J story or she sleeps with him, please PM me to let me know. I don't read those stories as I am a E and B girl all of the way. Don' t get me wrong, I love stories where he has to work to get her back and when he feels jealous. I just can't hang with her sleeping ( I am fine with kissing and dating so E is jealous lol )or ending up with someone else.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Oh no! Not You, Too...

I like it but please don't let it be a b and j story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: It doesn't matter

I am glad that they are just friends. I always hate Jacob, but am fine with him in this tale!

 
Summary:

When Bella overhears Jessica Stanley plotting to worm her way into Edwards' affections, and push best friend Bella out of his life for good, she knows she must do something- but what? She's just one of the boys.

Right?

 

One of the Boys

 

AU/AH  OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jessica
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16193
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: October 17, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day

love it

I hope Jess and Lauren get their

s

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Damsel in Distress

really love it

please don't let Jess sucker Edward into a date. I want to see her crash and burn.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Non-Date Double Date

Jessica and Lauren are just evil. Can't wait to see their demise. SO LOVE THIS.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

dying for the party

 
Prophecy by Bella_Cullen884 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 225]
Summary:

College student Bella Swan has been plagued with strange dreams for ten years. She doesn't think much of them, but when her dreams turn violent, she finds that there is something more to her dreams than what she thinks.

Prophecy banner by bondgirl

 Thanks to bondgirl for this wonderful second banner above!!!!

 Prophecy banner 1

 Thanks to Angel (antebellum) for the wonderful banner!

*NC-17 rating just to be safe*

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 29004
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I'm glad! XD

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

dying for more



Author's Response:

I'll try to get chapter three up as soon as I can. :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I liked it



Author's Response:

I'm glad! =D

Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating!

 
Mind's Eye by catharticone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

A momentary loss of control leaves Edward desperate to find a way to fulfill the promise he made to Bella about "trying" during their honeymoon. 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22762
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, that was unexpected. I can't hang with that idea...it would be cheating. How could Esme handle it? I would also hope that Bella would slap Edward for even thinking that.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.  Perhaps this story is slight AU?  But when all is said and done, I hope that most readers will walk away feeling content.  I do understand, though, that this story will not appeal to everyone.

 
The Work-out Plan by Miss_Vic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

My first short story...

Tired of her advances getting repeatedly rebuffed by Edward, Bella enlists the help of Alice and Rosalie, to engage in the art of seduction in order for her to break down his defences. Will it work? Will she get what she wants? Will she learn and perfect the art?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 31778
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Formulating the plan

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out to read my story. I appreciate it =]

Here's a snippet from chapter 2. Be warned, it contains a slight lemon:

I stood straight and turned around, only to be met with his darkened, honey colored eyes. He didn't respond, but suddenly appeared before me, and crushed my chest to his. The breath left my lungs in  a whoosh, before my lips were captured by his. He kissed me hungrily, our lips meshing together in a bittersweet reunion that felt both foreign and familiar to me. He wrapped his hands around my waist, pulling my hips flush against his. I could feel him, hard against my belly, and I groaned audibly into the kiss, as his tongue invaded my mouth. This tongue dance was different. It moved with a sense of urgency, passion and lust. Sparks of electricity spread throughout my entire body, and I tightened the hand in his hair, while using the other to scratch his scalp. This time, I felt rather than heard the growl that came from his chest, and it caused hot moisture to pool between my legs, along with the dull ache that seemed to be spreading slowly but surely through my lower region.


 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Caution: Road Block Ahead

Can I do the Edward work out

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: She shoot, she scores!

That was great and can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Who's Birthday Is It? Pt. I

LOVE THE STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Who's Birthday Is It? Pt. II

DAMN JACOB

LOVE THE STORY

 
Summary:

A high school crush not quite forgotten.  Bella has become a business tycoon living in NYC when a brush with her past leaves her wondering... AU/AH  BXE  Lemons!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2860
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

 




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