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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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The Work-out Plan by Miss_Vic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

My first short story...

Tired of her advances getting repeatedly rebuffed by Edward, Bella enlists the help of Alice and Rosalie, to engage in the art of seduction in order for her to break down his defences. Will it work? Will she get what she wants? Will she learn and perfect the art?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 31778
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2009 Updated: April 27, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Caution: Road Block Ahead

Can I do the Edward work out

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: She shoot, she scores!

That was great and can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Who's Birthday Is It? Pt. I

LOVE THE STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Who's Birthday Is It? Pt. II

DAMN JACOB

LOVE THE STORY

 
Summary:

A high school crush not quite forgotten.  Bella has become a business tycoon living in NYC when a brush with her past leaves her wondering... AU/AH  BXE  Lemons!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2860
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

please dump TANYA NOW!

LOL

 
Conflicted by Psyche_001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Victims of their grief and introverted nature, Edward and Bella inevitably find comfort in each other's company. Bella has a peculiar gift that complicates their already chaotic circumstances and threatens their future, forcing Edward to make a decision that tests the strength of their love. Will Edward be able to save Bella from herself?

Coupling: Edward and Bella


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6610
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I think this is a great start. I am looking forward to more.

Are the guys vampires in this one?



Author's Response:

Hey there, thanks for the review. No vamps in this one. All human and angsty.

Chapter two being uploaded today.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Get the Forks away from me (whynot)

looking forward to more

 
Lost Cause by bonnysammy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

 

 

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A woman awakes in a forest. She is lost, alone and has practically no memory. Three members of the Cullen family find her and take her to their home. But everything is not as it appears, especially not with the girl.  How can the little she knows to be true actually be possible?  It could be said that anything is possible when thrown into a world of myth.

 

Follow along as she travels on her journey to find, forgive and move beyond her past, all the while finding herself and something she never knew she was looking for.

 

This is mostly an E/B story though other loved and not so loved characters will be involved.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 145399
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Obscure

I like this. So, will we have a jealous Tanya? Good writting.



Author's Response:

You'll have to see how Tanya reacts! 

 

Thanks.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: New Start

Good story



Author's Response:

Thanks, dear.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Sound and Sight

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much,

I'm glad people like this!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Arrival

keeps getting better and better



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks for your kind words!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Encounter

interesting....hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I hope that I don't disappoint as time goes on!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Surprises

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I hope you enjoy the rest.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Agitation

A++ as always



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Research

great story and writting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I hope you continue to like it as time progresses.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Sight

how old is Bella in this?



Author's Response:

Thanks for response.  She is 30.  I took the age from the end of New Moon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Confirmation and Communication

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I am happy you liked it.  I am having huge problems with the next one.  So there might be adelay there. Sorry.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Changes

love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm happy you are enjoying it!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Confrontations

excellant story



Author's Response:

Thanks again, dear.

I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Stress

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 




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