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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

 

When Bella requested that Edward allow her to experience the sensations of making love while human, he agreed.

Edward's control held, but now they have another problem. Something is wrong with Bella, and the Cullens are sure that even the Volturi will have no knowledge about the topic.

While our favourite family deal with the rather "personal" crisis, they also have to try and defeat Victoria...

Rated for strongly implied sex and excessive language.

  I started a topic in the forums for this story. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=9082  Feel free to go and post there. Suggestions for future chapters would be welcome, even though I do have a general plan. I'll also be posting teasers from the next chapter. :)


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: Early Turnings
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5679
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Homicide Involuntaire

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Homicide Involuntaire

get to updating!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Homicide Involuntaire

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Homicide Involuntaire

good chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Homicide Involuntaire

I really am enjoying this

 
Tortured Heart by bellaLife Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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What would you do if you could change who you were and win the heart of the man you love? That was the question Bella Swan asked herself the day she left the Cullen home and ventured out on her own to Italy. Eight years later, the maid’s daughter is back with the sole purpose of winning the heart of the man loves, Emmett. However, things don’t always go to plan, sometimes love has plans of its own. Sometimes, just sometimes, the heart can’t decide what it wants.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 27272
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

update soon

did you get this idea from the old Audrey Hephburn movie



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment and the rating. I got the inspiration from the Julia Ormond and Harrison Ford version of the movie. It's such a great story. You can't help but love it. Keep following the story to see what happens.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- Back to the Beginning.

Poor Edward. I shutter as I know Tanya is in this - hope she and E haven't done anything. Vicky really is a pill.

Great writting. Dying for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing and for the rating. Yes Tanya is coming and eventually Alice and Jasper, to get some perpective into the mix. Victoria is a pill and she's going to stay that way. Glad you like my writing. More to come soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- For She's a Jolly Good Fellow!

I so love this

Bella needs to open her eyes!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and for sharing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Bella's eyes will eventually open to what is so painfully obvious, just not yet.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Let the Music Play

begging you to update soon

love it



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for posting a review and rating this chapter. I appreciate it. At present, all my stories are on hiatus while I re-work them to be there best. They will be finished. I promise. Just bear with me.

 
The Cullen Girl by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1103]
Summary:

Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.

This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).

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Thanks to m81170 for the banner.

Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Elephant In The House

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Human in the House

I really do love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comment and the stars :) 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: First Day

I really love this story

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Blood Red

I liked this chapter a lot. I was really feeling sorry for E there/



Author's Response:

You might feel even sorrier whaen you learn what he has to deal with later. Glad you liked this chapter :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

great start and writting

will it be a E and B story



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's good to know the writing's going ok. I've only got a loose plan at the moment so in terms of the actual relationships I'm making it up as I go along. Which means it could be Bella with anyone.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I Know What You Are

dying for more



Author's Response:

Please don't die, more is coming soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Sinking Deeper and Deeper

love this story

great plot



Author's Response:

Thank you. Hope you enjoy what's to come plotwise. 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Something's Got To Give

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you and cheers for the stars.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: How It's Going To Be

Go Jasper LOL

Love it and keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Love Jasper. Thanks for the lovely review and the stars :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Breaking and Entering

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Cheers. I'm glad you liked it :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: High School Beauty Queen

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Better

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

 

 

dorian gray bannerIt is 1886 and eighteen year old,innocent Isabella Swan is staying with the famous wit Oscar Wilde and his family while she visits Europe. At Wilde's house she meets Mr Bram Stoker, Mr Sheridan Le Fanu, Lord Alfred Douglas and his mysterious friend Mr Edward Cullen ( rake about town and debaucher of young innocents). Miss Swan is about to delve into the sordid underbelly of Victorian sex! Come with us genlte reader...


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 74892
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Journey to Madam Chang's

GO CROWE GO



Author's Response:

:) cheers babes!! thanks for taking the time to review even though i know you've read this on FF!! cxx

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: After the recital

a perfect ten



Author's Response:

oh thank you!! that is so sweet of you!! cxx

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: An Unusal Guest

I really love this. I know Edward is a rake right now,,,,but I hope he ends up falling in love with her.

Going into my favorites right now and will pimp the story to my friends.



Author's Response:

Huzzah!! Thank you so much!! This is my first story on here and everyone's been so lovely. Hope you carry on enjoying this!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: An Unwelcome Reaction

AWESOME

 




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