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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


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Lost Cause by bonnysammy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
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A woman awakes in a forest. She is lost, alone and has practically no memory. Three members of the Cullen family find her and take her to their home. But everything is not as it appears, especially not with the girl.  How can the little she knows to be true actually be possible?  It could be said that anything is possible when thrown into a world of myth.

 

Follow along as she travels on her journey to find, forgive and move beyond her past, all the while finding herself and something she never knew she was looking for.

 

This is mostly an E/B story though other loved and not so loved characters will be involved.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
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Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 145399
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Encounter

interesting....hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I hope that I don't disappoint as time goes on!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Surprises

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I hope you enjoy the rest.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Agitation

A++ as always



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Research

great story and writting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I hope you continue to like it as time progresses.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Sight

how old is Bella in this?



Author's Response:

Thanks for response.  She is 30.  I took the age from the end of New Moon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Confirmation and Communication

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I am happy you liked it.  I am having huge problems with the next one.  So there might be adelay there. Sorry.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Changes

love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm happy you are enjoying it!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Confrontations

excellant story



Author's Response:

Thanks again, dear.

I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Stress

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Discussion

I actually like HIM - they have some good music

Love the story - great chapter. Wonder how Tanya and Bella will get along.



Author's Response:

I listened to some of their music while doing my research.  I liked what I heard.  Yet another reason I included them!

Thanks for reviewing.

We'll see next chapter.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Talented

I just love this story. Ready for E to make his move lol. So, how will Tanya handle it lol



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for reviewing.  I have been such a failure responding to reviews.  I apologize for that.  I really appreciate you reviewing, though.

They haven't told me that yet! lol



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for reviewing.  I have been such a failure responding to reviews.  I apologize for that.  I really appreciate you reviewing, though.

They haven't told me that yet! lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Victoria

Great job as always



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Mistake

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.  I'm so sorry I've been sucha failure at responding.

 

Love you for reading and reviewing.  :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Mistake

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Preparation

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Accident

love it

 




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