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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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The Deluded by FantasyMother Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 648]
Summary:

Edward lowered his eyes to his lap, obviously uncomfortable with my question.  But there was nothing odd about it.  It shouldn't cause tension, or reveal hidden secrets, or cause the amount of angst currently contorting his features.

I had simply asked him why he lived in the woods.

He grabbed a grape off the table, popped it in his mouth, and raised his head while he slowly chewed  - scanning the trees ringing my office, as if he was searching for an answer to give me.  I could see a faint blush to his cheek, and a hint of unshed tears in his crystalline green eyes.  I could almost hear his heartbeat pick up speed as he finally turned to me.  Closing his eyes for a moment he took a deep breath, willing himself to calm.  Then his eyes snapped to my face and with renewed determination took another deep breath.

"Bella, I live there because I'm a vampire."


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 119614
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Bitch is Back

Very interesting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Beginnings

 

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Playing House

I am so dying to find out what is going on!



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be calmer...sorta.  It'll be full of a ton of information, if I can get these characters to stop shouting at each other, and stop talking over each other.  There's a riot going on in my head at the moment...

And thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Truth is Stranger than Fiction

love the story

so different



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Bloodsucker

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm writing...I'm writing...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Retrieving Memories

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: True Lies

I feel bad for everyone.

I hope Jacob ended up dead - well, I always hope that lol



Author's Response:

But, to make Jacob dead we have to have him in another chapter.  I'm not sure it's worth it.  LOL

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Return to the Beginning

such a great story

I just wish she hadn't given up her v card to Jacob



Author's Response:

Thank you and, I think Bella would emphatically agree with you...

Thank you again :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Professional

I like this story even though I feel real bad for E and E. I wish she wouldn't have slept with Jacob though.

So, why did Victoria and James not kill her? Did they want the baby?



Author's Response:

*wink*  that's my answer. :-)

And you're not the only one who wishes Bella hadn't slept with Jacob.  She already had serious issues about that, but learning how it impacted Edward, and possibly the rest of her life?  That can't be easy...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I have always hated that mut



Author's Response:

LOL, me too.  Could you have guessed?  This felt good :-)

And thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Finding Reality

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

POOR ELI



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Actually...poor Bella...  Sniff.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Revelations

dying for more



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm going to try to get the next chapter out earlier, if I can.  No promises, but I'll try :-)

And thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Ch-ch-ch-ch-changes

talk about a tear jerker

well written...as always

i hope eli finds someone



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Don't worry...Eli will be in fine shape at the end.  Actually, he's in fine shape now *cough* so let's say, he'll be in better shape :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Taps

Beautiful story

I hope Eli gets a happy ending. My heart goes out for him.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  And yes...Eli will be fine.  I promise :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Magical Mystery Tour

Love the stoy

But what fool would turn Edward down for fun in the shower



Author's Response:

I know!  The woman is clearly obsessed ;-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: The Master Song

LOL



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Great job. Glad Eli got a happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Aww, I wasn't gonna leave the little guy just hanging out there :-)

 
Summary:

The Cullens are famous for skipping out on school to go camping, aren't they? One day, they decide to take Bella along with them as hilarity ensues!


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1906
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

very funny

 
Summary:

Bella is content being single and tired of being pursued by losers. Alice and Rosalie play a game of punk rock “Bella Barbie” before dragging her to a club to watch their boyfriends’ band play at an open mic night. They want Bella to look extra sexy so that she’ll catch someone’s eye. Conveniently, Emmett and Jasper’s band has a new lead singer, and guess who it is…


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31998
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: July 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is just great

update soon

I hate drunk skanks at rock shows. Once I was backstage at a Skid Row and Poison concert. This drunk girl knocked into Snake from Skid Row, causing his drink to go all over my dress.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great job

great job on updating fast

10

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this is really cute

you are doing a great job on updating fast

it is in my favorites

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

good story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

funny chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chapter

 




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