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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

A few weeks before Bella and Edward's wedding, something terrible happens in the state of Washington.  Can the Cullens protect Bella and her father from the living dead?

Rated NC-17 for Graphic violence and language.

Carlisle, zombies


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 54019
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

THIS IS GREAT!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I so love this story

Hopefully it won't take a couple of weeks - I really do look forward to reading this one.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

can't wait

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love it

one of my favorite stories

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so laughing

Poor Edward

I hope Jacob stays away from Bella. I can't stand him

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can' t tell u how much I love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed it. Kinda like Shawn of the Dead meets Twiliglht. LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Again, I so love this story.

Gay go go dancer LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I was just thinking about this story. I loved this chapter. I have always disliked Jacob, so you get extra points for this one LOL.

Can't wait for more.

I  hope Rose can be put back together without turning

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Fanatastic as always lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You have done a great job with this story

I love your humor!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  My goal was to emulate Shaun of the Dead.  As funny as it is scary.  I hope that I am pulling it off.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was grizzly....but a great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please, no zombie Bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love the story

 
The First Decade by kelseasc413 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

This summarizes the first seven years or so after Breaking Dawn ends.  It involves Jacob leaving (temporarily), Alice reuniting with part of her human family, and the return of the Volturi.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Benjamin, Caius, Carlisle, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sulpicia, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 675
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Drama

good start

not a Jacob fan so go Nahuel! if that is where this is going



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And also thanks for taking the time to review.

 
Beautifully Broken by TheVolvo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A secret wedding, a broken treaty, a looming threat,
and an unforeseen tragedy.

Bella never realized just how hard
her life would become.

“Edward,” I cry. The sound is lighter than a whisper, hoarse, dry. As if I’m combusting, burning like paper from the inside out. But there’s still a hand there to accept me. To try and sooth me. It’s so hot now that his cool touch can’t help. He feels warm. It feels wrong.

I writhe away from him. I hear a sob, and issue one in return.

Hell. I’m in Hell? I didn’t remember dying.

Unless I died of love. The reverse of a broken heart. I had too much, so it was taken away. That would make sense. I wouldn’t even be angry. I would understand. I would understand, because it wasn’t fair. I was too blessed.
It only fit that I be punished.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 14541
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Of Marble and Paris

I do like this. I just hope that "Paris" remains forgotten in this story!



Author's Response:

I can't make any promises. :) Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Ghost Wars

Please tell me you are pro Edward. I can't stand Jacob. I always stop the pro Jacob stories - my heart can't take them

Like the story.



Author's Response:

Definitely pro Edward.  BUT I love Jacob as a character, as well.  So I'll give you a little warning: While the story is predominantly E/B, there is one chapter in particular that you may not like.  It's not a long one, but it is there, and I don't plan on changing it one bit.

I hope you keep reading though, because there is definitely a resolution.  And that resolution is definitely pro Edward. =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Morbid Necessity

I really like the story - as long as it stays a happy E and B story lol. I love angst filled stories, but can't read the ones where she sleeps with Jacob blah blah blah. I am not a Jacob fan. He just needs to imprint already and leave Bella alone - but I know that won't happen!



Author's Response:

Wait, you've met Bella, right?  Shy, awkward, clumsy, definitely not into having casual sex?  Trust me - the only person Bella will/may be having sexy time with is Edward.  Now just sit tight and hold on to your hat, because we've got a lot of twists and turns to go.

 
Summary:

Forget Denmark- Something's rotten in Scotland, and things are about to get a whole lot worse when a certain sneeky, future-seeing vampire decides it's time for the Cullen family- the whole Cullen family- to take a trip. But, something's missing from Alice's visions, something that's going to, well, mess up all her plans. And once things get started, there's really not much anyone can do to stop a certain vengeful vamp from getting what she wants, one way or another.

Edward has been running for too long, and he's about to realize:

Blood On Hand

 

 

WARNING: This is NOT a happy, fun story. People die in brutal ways. People are tortured, maimed, and mentally abused in even more brutal ways. If you're sensitive to such things, please do not read this story. I understand it is not for everyone.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2853
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well,you have my interest



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Normally, I will not take so long to reply, I promise.

I'm glad you're interested in the prologue, I hope chapter 1 will keep your interest!

 
Saints by Ideophobic Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

"Some would say that this moment, when young Bella was first exposed to the world of vampirism, is when she had subconsciously decided the path she would walk down." Bella's life in the sprawling city of Volterra, growing up in a coven of vampires. A story of skewed morals, awkward situations, obsession, and unconditional love. Mostly canon, E/B much later.


Categories: Twilight, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6820
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

OKAY, this is REALLY GOOD. So, you MUST update soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD

Update soone

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

I was just thinking that it had been awhile for an update. Love the story. Update soon or Demetri will have to track you down.

 




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