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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Both damaged, Edward and Bella meet and the chemistry is instantaneous.  Will she still love him when she discovers that he is the criminal defense attorney that got her rapist acquitted just two days before her attack?  Can he forgive himself enough to give her justice?

 

 

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Finalist - The Faithful Shipper Awards

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Best Secondary Character AH - Cynthia

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 248688
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

Rosalie cracked me up

I feel for both. I can understand how Bella would need time.

I myself have no respect for defense attorney's - scum. I work with abused kids and it is disgusting at how they try to make the kids into liars and so forth.

 
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Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Revelations

still love the story

 
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Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Change of Venue

another great chapter

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The Storm

another great chapter

 
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Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved

great cliffy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Trading Up

I can't wait for Tanya and James to go down

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Sex

I liked the chapter

I hope she is ready for the leap

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Baby Steps

good job as I am sure that was difficult to write

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Cynthia's Novel

You have done a great job with this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Discipline

GREAT JOB

WELL, IF CONNER / JAMES WANTS TO SUE EDWARD, THEN BELLA SHOULD SUE JAMES AND MAKE IT EVEN.

 
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Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Future

LOVED THIS CHAPTER

GREAT WRITTING...AS USUAL

 
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Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams

another great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Unsafe

Great job with this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Great job with this. I think you have handled everything in a very sensitive manner. Also, I like how you show how sick these sub human sex offenders are. I work with abused kids (and women who were as kids) and see these creeps all of the time.

You have done a very good job with this subject unlike some others who have no tact or respect for such a crime. For example, there is a story right now where B was raped as part of a frat initiation  ( I will NEVER read this). Later, E and her meet and start a relationship.  I was curious and read reviews - I was sickened by what I read. People talking about how anyone can make a "mistake". Like rape could be a mistake - give me a break. I don't know what sick fantasy world these people are living in. They have never held someone's hand while they are getting a rape exam. I didn't mean to go off on my soap box, but I wanted to know that as an advocate for abused women and children, you have done a great job with this story...especially with showing Bella's slow healing.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Surprise!

This story just gets better and better.

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Families

I feel bad for Edward. That had to hurt.

Had to laugh about Redding - I am from Northern California.

Fantastic story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Maggie

It's so strange reading a story that includes the town and drinking holes one knows! I am suprised you didn't add The Bear to the list . It is almost sureral since I can visually see the Crazy Horse and La Salle's - thinking of in my younger days when I went to those places!

You are doing a great job with this story and are handling the subject matter very well.

Defense attorney's are scum. They try to justify but they are scum.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - Charlotte

Excellant as always. Love the part about Embry and his boyfriend.  Reminds me when a co-worker was testifying and the defense attorney was trying to make it out like the co-worker was biased against an Indian tribe. Loved it when my co-worker got to inform him his wife was a member of the same tribe.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Preparing to Wait

Defense attorneys are sick and disgusting. I don't know how they live with themselves.

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45 - Bella Begins

That was really tense. Great writting as always. Did anyone else here James statement - so they could testify to what he said....like the baliff!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46 - Bella Continued

Working in a field with defense attorneys I can say they are scum. 99% of them will do anything to get their client off. I have seen it time after time - disgusting. They don't care about rape victims, hell they will try to get a child molestor set free to rape again. I would hate to be them on judgement day. Nothing like selling ones soul for the almighty dollar.

Great story and writting.

 
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Date: October 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Great job

 
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Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - In Closing

Great job

Working in a field with defense attorney's I can tell you they lack morals.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan had big dreams.  You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall.  When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water.  Edward Cullen's life is perfect.  Well, almost.  Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Dinner for Five

You have done such a great job with this!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Dinner for Five

Even though I read this on fan fic (HeathersTwilight) I wanted to make sure you get reviewed over here as u deserve it. This is a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I appreciate your support!

 




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