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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

SEQUEL TO 'DANCING WITH DEATH'

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"But that was the joke. I was invisible. No one could neither see, nor hear me, if I didn't want them to. It just so happened, however, that I wanted nothing less from Bella. I wanted her to see me, just not yet."

 Do you ever get that tingling sentation going down the back of your spine? Making you feel paranoid, like there's someone watching you? The type that makes your heart rate quicken, your lungs stop working and makes you turn around quickly only to find that there's no one there? Well.... what if your pulse pounds, your breath hitches and your hair stands on end because there is someone there? What if you just can't see him? What if the predator lurking in the shadows was, in fact, invisible? What then?

 

Well, Bella, in the wake of everything else that's been happening to her, is about to find out.....

 

*WARNING: CONTAINS DARK THEMES*


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 44351
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: January 17, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Changing Tides

I can't believe I only saw today that it updated - this is on my favorite list???

 
Summary:

What if things went differently than in Breaking Dawn? What if Renesmee had capitvated Aro just like she captivated all who met her?

Would the events there have caused any significant changes and how far could their effects be felt?

Couldn't anyone or anything feel the mass of Vampires heading across the Atlantic - what happened if some one did - and that person brought a whole new force into play... enter the European Wizarding Council.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 804
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Okay, you have my interest so please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks - I'm working on the next chapters at the moment, I have a few versions at the moment it depends on who I decide to bring in rather than the themes I was working on... a conundrum lol

 
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Masen have spent their whole lives together and Bella can’t imagine life without her best friend until a tragic car accident on a deserted stretch of highway steals him away. Four years later, the ghosts of her past resurface. AU - M - OOC (somewhat)

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17468
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

I really like this. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Into the Night

This is so good! Please udpdate soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hard to Be A Girl

LOVE IT

UPDATE SOON

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Photos of the Impossible

great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Flashes of You

dying for more

 
The Taste of Sin by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

After living on the blood of humans for decades Edward returns home to his family. He finds things are very different from when he left. Can a brown eyed orphan help him cure his thirst once and for all? Or make him hunger for more than blood? B/E OOC/AU lemons-

 

 

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Banner by the amazing Anne Cullen


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charles, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 26830
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Hunting for Two

Don’t look baby, it’s a rare occurrence, and it will blind you.” LOL

Great chapter

Looking forward to her being in heat - lol!



Author's Response:

Apparently a lot of people are looking forward to it.  Edward on the other hand is watching the clock (damn it Edward! It's not the clock's fault!).

*wink*

 

Erica

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Newt

I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS FINALLY UPDATED. LOVE IT!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Auntie

lol

love the story

 
After The Dawn by 5by5creations Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

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Edward & Bella's happy-ever-after is interrupted by a call Edward never expected to receive.  Angel needs the Cullens help to fight the greatest battle he's ever faced.  Now Edward must put his family at risk to fulfill a prophecy.  In the epic battle of good vs. evil, who will survive after the dawn?

After The Dawn is an Angel/BTVS/Post-Breaking Dawn crossover that continues the storyline of Soul Searching.  It takes place following the end of the Angel TV series and after Breaking Dawn.

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Crossover Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 31762
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. THE CALL

This is so good. I hope you can give Angel and Buffy a happy ending - I so miss those shows!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4. UNCERTAINTY

GREAT CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5. MEETING

This is soooooooooo good! UPdate soon#

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6. MAJICKS

great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7. CROWN CONTROL

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8. HERE COMES THE RAIN

“Let’s roll!” he called as he pounded his chest. lol love Emmett

 

What a great cliffy...didn't see that coming

 
Summary:

A story about pain... patience... depression... desire... addiction... passion... healing... hope... and above all, love.

Bella moves to Alaska after a devastating accident tears her life apart, leaving her depressed and alone.  Consumed by her loss, she spirals into a deep depression.  At her new high school, she meets Edward Cullen and her life will never be the same. 

Edward moves to Alaska to start over with his coven - as he has been doing for the past four centuries.  Spending hundreds of years alone on the fringes of society has turned him into a pessimistic, sarcastic rebel who has lost hope of ever finding a mate.  The moment he sees Bella Swan, his life is turned upside down.

As friendship and obsession grow into love, Edward helps Bella overcome her crippling grief and teaches her how to live again. 

 RFTA Alternate

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**Warning** This story deals with mental health issues. Please be warned if this is a theme which may bother you in any way.  

 

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic - AU story that knocks you off your feet

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 71573
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: June 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Road to Denali

Great

please update soon



Author's Response:

...Chapter 3 is in the queue, so it should be up soon!

Thanks for reading! 
-NK

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: First Sight

So love this story. Also, love the fact that he actually realizes he wants lemons!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was getting sick of all of the Edwards who don't even notice their hormones.  Carlisle actually says he was scared he turned Edward too soon... but I mean... he's SEVENTEEN.  I don't know about you all, but in my experience guys start liking girls way before that age. 

I wanted to give him the hormonal response of a seventeen year old guy who hasnt had sex in decades... terrifying.  ha!

Thanks for reading... will update soon!
-NK

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: First Week - Edward

I soooo love this story. I like the fact that it appears that he isn't too against changing her. I do need a cigarette after his little fantasy (kidding - I don't smoke).

Great chapter and writting!



Author's Response:

Yes.  I am tired of Emoward - grow some balls and take what you want!

I don't smoke either - but reading FanFics makes me consider starting! HA!
-NK

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Breakdown

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Libraries are for Lovers

Yeah… this whole friend thing isn’t going to last long…

 lol

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Friends. Right. Okay.

great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Preternatural Revelations

I really love this story

Great writting



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  :o)

 
Coming Home by Dumblydor Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella behind after the incident with Jasper, and doesn't come back. Bella tries to move on with her life, but one day comes face to face with her past, and is changed. So, what happens after she returns to Forks years later, and finds the Cullens again? Read and find out.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1599
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The End

Very good. Please update soon! Also, please, after all of the angst (lol) please let it have a happy E and B ending. I am saving this to my favorite list.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Home

Oh, GOD no, don't let Edward be with anyone. If that is the case, please let me know. I like the story but I wouldn't be able to go on as it would break my heart!!!

 




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