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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


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I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Picks up decades from the day in the meadow of New Moon. What if it had been Victoria who showed up, not Laurent? What if Victoria's 'plans' for Bella did not include killing her, but changing her (the one thing Edward wasn't willing to do to keep Bella safe from James.).

 

Bella has been living as a member of the Volturi for decades now, not able to remember her human life. What happens when she goes searching for her past and comes face to face with her mate and his family whom she has forgotten about for the past 65 years?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 86459
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Clearly, he was an asshole - lol

Love this story - update soon! Please!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am begging you for an update. I can't wait to see Edward's reaction!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great story

please update soon

Hopefully Alice left some clothes!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thirsty Thursday lol

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was a great chapter.

As much as I love the Cullens, I do want them all to feel bad for leaving her.

You must update soon! This is one of the best stories on the board.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am flattered you think that about my little story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love this story. That says a lot because I don't read stories where Edward or Bella have slept with others - it hurts me lol. But, I do like this one.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella has pet LOL

As a veggie myself, I hope Bambi takes out a few hunters



Author's Response:

haha... those poor hunters wouldn't have a clue what hit them! Bambi may have higher moral standards than hunters, though. :) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

love it

great job



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is the best chapter yet

crispy lol



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rate and review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOVE THE STORY

I KNOW HE WAS AN ASS FOR LEAVING, BUT I FEEL SORRY FOR HIM



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! I kinda feel sorry for him, too, but he deserves it. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE THIS TALE

HAVE TO GO KILL SOMEONE LOL



Author's Response:

haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the rating and review!

 
Summary:

Stephenie Meyer owns the sandbox that I play in.

 

A single wish from Bella to Edward on her birthday will change their lives forever.

 

Bella/Edward


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9681
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Wishes

I like this. I do hope whoever she was married to was just a sham - maybe Edward got her pregnant and someone was just helping her out.

 
Light of Day by heathcliff Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 199]
Summary:

 

Light of Day banner

Edward and Bella finally got what they always wanted: to spend eternity together. Now, their relationship is free to thrive and flourish.  A very canon, very in-character, very romantic exploration of the depth of E&B's relationship as they adjust to their new life-- both Bella's new life as a vampire and Edward's as a husband. Lots of light, fluffy moments balanced by more serious ones.

It's just E&B in the first several chapters, but the rest of the Cullens show up later. The time frame is set during the summer following BD up to Edward and Bella's second wedding anniversary.

If you like canon and in-character, please have a read.

**Nominated for two Moonlight Awards** (Thank you, Serendipitous and None!)

Please vote!  http://themoonlightawards.yolasite.com/

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 51645
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Black Sands Beach

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Strictly Ballroom

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you, metal! I'm so glad to still have you as a reader!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Call of the Wild

you get a ten



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know. :-) Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Encounter by Shadowrelm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

The Cullen's come into contact with someone, or something, they never thought could exist. Is he friend or foe?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6862
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Great start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is very interesting

update soon

 
Summary:

Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher.  With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two.  After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job.  Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Kiss Me

love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Walking on Sunshine

Love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: ISWSIFOBAAIGWTSSWAM

Yes, I read that to my kids as well...goodnight air....LOL

I hope Bella makes a better impression tomorrow!

 

Love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy

I soooooooooooooo love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Five O'clock Somewhere

I really love this story. The second chapter cracked me up. PLEASE update soon.

You get a 10!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks for the ten! I will alert my beta to edit chapter 3 lickity split! Cahpters 1-10 are complete but I didn't have a beta for 1-3... odd, right?

Thanks!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Coffeeshop Soundtrack

i so love this story

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Life is a Party

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 




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