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Penname: ArtemisSundance [Contact]
Real name: Sandra
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Member Since: February 28, 2009

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Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2150]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010

Reviewer: ArtemisSundance Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Lighthouse

So far, I am really impressed. You write the story with such realness, and instead of Perfect Good Edward, you show a flawed, human character, who however imperfect, is still endearing. And freaking hilarious. And you write wonderfully, very eloquent and well composed. This is better than some books I've read. Nice job, very, very nice job. It's not the heart warming fluffy bunny Edward type stories, but it's probably the best Twific I've ever read.

Suspenders by sparklyMannequin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]

Bella and Edward have been married for a few months.  Every Thursday night, Edward and the Cullen boys go out for dinner and a meeting about business.  But when Edward wears one of Bella's favorite clothing accessories, will she be able to resist him?  And will Edward catch on to Bella's secret fetish?  FIND OUT!  LEMONS!

^ That was the summary for the one-shot (first chapter) before I developed the story.

Bella and Edward have been married for a few months.  The sex is great, but what happens when Bella is suddenly trapped in her own mind?  Will Edward be able to bring her out of it?  Lemons.


I know it's not the best, but it was never meant to be a story.  Once Suspenders in over, I plan on writing a story that I've been thinking about for a while.  Keep your eyes open!  I think I'm naming it "Dear Edward" or "Parallel Universe"


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 37770
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2009

Reviewer: ArtemisSundance Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it at the beginning and up till the middle, when they started screaming fuck. I don't know, once or twice seems enough but repeatedly screaming that word makes it seem like a C-rated porno. The plot is adorable, but if you could have less vulgarity and more tender'd be much better.

Programming by 1breezybri Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 500]


Bella is a plus-sized woman who loves her life. When she meets a man who has never been with a big girl before, she is reminded of the difficulties of a past relationship that left her broken. Can she overcome her insecurities and make him fall in love?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 34941
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010

Reviewer: ArtemisSundance Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

At first, when I saw this story, I laughed and thought I'd never read it. But then out of curiousity, I did. It wasn't stupid or cheesy or pathetic, like I expected. It's very well written, you should definitely extend it.

Author's Response:

Cheesy...sometimes :oP  Stupid or pathetic...never.  Life's too short.  :o)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Deserving by SinAndShame Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]

My entry for the "Love Through Lemons" contest. In life, in love, in sex, in everything. Eventually, we all get what we deserve.

 And thanks once again to the AMAZING DigseyGalley for the banner.  She continues to amazing with her graphics brilliance.  If you haven't checked out her art/graphics site - do it.  You won't regret it.  (www).(shanniesart).(com)

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3975
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2009 Updated: July 27, 2009

Reviewer: ArtemisSundance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Deserving

Most of the time, I wouldn't touch stories like this, but this was really, really good. It was beautiful, sensual and very well-written. It also didn't have the porn-movie plot cheesiness I expect. I'm glad I took a chance with this one, it was fabulous!

With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5906]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010

Reviewer: ArtemisSundance Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is one of the precious few stories I've seen that are smart, funny, brilliant written and very real. You keep the same characters, but they're not Cliched Emo Edward or Needy Bella. It's lovely, and raw and emotional, and you could make this more than just a fanfiction piece. Excellent job, I very much look forward to reading more. 


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