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Penname: just a fan [Contact]
Real name: carolyn simino
Status: Member
Member Since: June 18, 2010
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Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

this is a great story, at first I couldn't figure where you were going with the

past but soon realized you were setting the scene for present day, hopefully Rose will cave in to  Em soon  and Allice and Jas will be a couple----Ed seems to really have it for Bella, can't wait to see where all of this goes

 
Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: March 01, 2010


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

it took a while to get there but they are finally reacting towards oneanother...they have wasted lots of time in their persomal lives, the story is really getting good now

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: July 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2

great story

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: July 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1

good girls, women hate to be taken for granted====but Bella is deprived of women's guidance, its hard to delibertly stay away from someone when you're dying to be with them but Alice is steering her so she'll be appricated.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: July 05, 2009


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: March 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Torino

great story

 

great story!

 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: July 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump

I felt so sorry for Bella,because of Tanya's flirting and Jaspers warning to Edward to keep a distance, which Bella and probally Alice don't know about. Next she's left all alone with her movie and longing for Edward,who is with Tanya.

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Fearless

James sounds like a stalker, finally Bella tells someone about him. She needs to tell her sponcers what a creep they've sent to accompany her==I keep expecting him to try something, forcing himself on her. I can see Edward coming to her rescue

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: November 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cereal

sounds like its a great story, cann't wait to get further into it-----.

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: November 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Fearless

ugh------james is a creep, sounds dangerous for Bella. hopefully she will be rid of him before any harm comes her way---good story

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: just a fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: December 23, 2008 to January 4, 2009

I love this story, in your remarks you seemed discouraged at times. i know it has to be stressful waiting for responces from readers, maybe some are not good at responding, like me. i can not reply to every chp. I'm just not good at it,,,,,please  don't  give up, you're to good to stop writing.

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: September 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: March 22, 2008

i love this story,this is my 4th 0r 5th time reading ----I'll be so happy when you finish it

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: December 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008

i love this story, I've read it several times. always hoping you'd finish it. So many of the better fictions never get finished. Please consider it, you are such a good writer. I've read lots of fiction[twilight] some are very stiff and others just flow so smoothly.I give you a 10.

 

 
Up to Speed by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 854]
Summary:

Race car driver Edward Cullen has wrecked another car.  He's losing all his sponsors and funding.  His only hope is the incredibly sexy but stubborn Isabella Swan a brilliant engineer.  He can't get enough of her and she's keeping a secret that will change his life forever.

Banner by: dazzlemebetch-Thanks!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 140390
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2009


Reviewer: just a fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Time to Go

Bella is a take charge lady, interesting----.I'm eager to see where this goes, sounds really good.

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely homesteading cowboy in northern Nevada, Bella is a mail order bride full of secrets.   What happens when Edward discovers her lies?  Can he forgive her? Can she measure up?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 85364
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sounds good. I have to get the picture in my mind of the time the story takes place. This is so different from most stories I've read. A time when women were desperate, job options were scarce and some men feeling women were only good for their needs

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: More than a Gift

This story is just so good, you've done a great job. I do hope that somehow Angela gets to visit. I thought of her when Beb turned up as the sheriff---can't wait to get back to reading but will be sad when its finished. I allways do that whenever i find a great story.



Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't get to these comments sooner!  I hope you enjoyed the way New Frontier turned out as much as you liked Blood Crystal. Thanks so much for reading! ~Mel

 
Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 589]
Summary:

Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: February 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Awkward Reunion

sounds good, and your writing is good also.  Some writers are stiff ,yours is so natural

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 84444
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: February 24, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

sounds really good----but james is trouble waitihg to rear its head and strike or thats the way I see  it heading.



Author's Response:

james is always trouble, huh? bad news! ;)  thanks for reading!

 
The Blood Crystal by Melolabel Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 132]
Summary:

When Angela is kidnaped by a rogue Vampire, Bella embarks on a whirlwind adventure to save her friend. When she becomes lost in the rainforests of Peru, who will come to her rescue? And what is the Blood Crystal?

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Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, James, Jane, Marcus, Rosalie, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 51670
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm getting into the story slowly. now that Edward and Bella are at least talking, I know thing will start to unfold, I can't wait till they form more of a relationship

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I like the idea of the crystal and the trio's lives tied to it. You did great coming up with that. the fact is Edwards family have to choose the lesser of 2 evils--even with the Volturi being as fearful as they are[ when in their full strength] even they are more peaceful than rogue vampires out of controll with such a powerful weapon. I hope that Aro has mercy for the Cullen family when they return the crystal [3 humans are involved] Will They Be Spared??????

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

GREAT-----I LIKE IT, you're doing a great job of writing, so like the original but yet so different. I like the jungle scenery and the plot, off now to search for Angela and Ben.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  I did enjoy including some of those familiar elements of the movie with the new characters and  vamp aspect.  Thanks so much for your previous reviews.  I'm so pleased you stuck with it!  ~Mel

 
Summary:

Based loosely on the movie Return to Me.  Bella received an organ transplant and a chance at life she never thought she'd have.  Edward's world ended when the love of his life died, but he's finally ready to try and live again when he meets the strange and amusing waitress at his new favorite restaurant. 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 114468
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: March 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Protected

sounds like its going to be a great story.

 
Collide by Martinibaby1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1057]
Summary:

As usual, Bella is late for work and as she crosses the street -without looking-, a cycling music teacher, better know as Edward Cullen, must do all he can to avoid her. But the collision that follows will change their lives for good. All human and AU.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 137633
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture

a great story, I hate to see it come to an end=====good job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Second Chance

great, hopefully they will stay together. You are a very good writer, I've read lots of fan fiction and you are one of the better ones. Lots of writers are  unsure of themselves, repeating words unnessarily and then sounding stiff. I know everyone has to start somewhere. Twilighted has some of the best written stories. I like yours because you don't use to much bad language. Some make Bella and Everyone else  constantly use so much of the f-word and other awful curse words ========    A little bit goes a long way for me==I don't mean to  offend onyone I'm not forced to  read if I don't want, thats what is so good about [ choice ]



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks for reading my fic and for leaving such nice feedback. The F-word isn't something I used much in real life either, so... And luckily, we live in a free world!

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this story is great so far and I'm glad its pg13 I love fanfiction but so many have extream sex scenes over and over,....and the language is so bad so I get tired of the story before the end and end up skipping so much to get past  the boring parts. I love romantic stories like everyone else, and Edward and Bella are my favorites but I'm glad to see Jacob in a worthy part for a change



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. YOu have no idea how much I loved getting your review and how much it meant to me. I took a lot of slack from people for not having sex in the story. Don't get me wrong there will be a lot of sexual tension and citrus but NO lemons. This story is romantic but be prepared that there will be a lot of tension and their story doesn't come easily. You know what is weird about Jacob is that I HATE the dog, so it was weird when I wrote him as a good guy in this story. Thanks so much for letting me know what you thought I love getting reviews.

 
Reviewer: just a fan Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

this is one of the best stories I've read since I've discovered fan fiction

 




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