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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3032]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

Please continue this ASAP... I can't wait to find out what happens!

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

ok... I really like where you are taking this story... please don't wait so long to post.... I'm on the edge of my chair!!!

 
Summary:

Bella's ready to bust out of her shell in college with roomie Alice. She meets the dazzling yet rakish Edward, but is warned of his less than angelic ways. Will B/A be just another notch in the belt for J/E, or will they teach the boys a lesson or two?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28871
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2010


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I Hate Myself For Loving You

love this story!!! Please update soon.

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

Thanks Mandi for the banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: What Could Happen While Driving

I swear it just gets better and better! Thanks for keeping my mind going!!!

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Forever

I think something from Jessica would be good... or even mike or tyler- Thanks -Tsherm

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: The Beginning of the End

Thank You so much for this story. It was my very 1st to add to my fav and start reading! thanks to you now I'm hooked on fanfics! T sherm

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 84444
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

wow this is great!!!! this story has touched me more then you would ever know! Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

glad you like it! :)  most of the events are based on my own life, so it's been sort of therapeutic to write. lol.  thanks so much for reading & reviewing!

 
Summary:

One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe.  Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well.  Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?

Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.

Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started.  I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: We Loved and Laughed

OMG... I think I'm in love. Please tell me they wake up with their arms and legs tangled together or something!!!

Author's Response:

LOL... I guess you'll see in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review  :)

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate.  His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet.  When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.

This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.

A little lemony, but not too graphic.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters. 

 Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Changes

This is great... I can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Telling

wow... That was better then i could have thought up myself... can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Meeting

It was good... More please

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Seattle

wow...please post quickly- I love this storey... I hope Edward rips Jamea apart!! Tsherm

 
Summary:

Did you want more from the honeymoon scene in Breaking Dawn?  If so, here is the first night on Isle Esme. What exactly happened after Edward pulled Bella deeper into the ocean? The events from the water to the bedroom from Edward's POV in five chapters (before the bruises show up). 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7115
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: March 14, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Edward First

I love where this is going. I can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Together

wow!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter-

 
Collide by Martinibaby1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1057]
Summary:

As usual, Bella is late for work and as she crosses the street -without looking-, a cycling music teacher, better know as Edward Cullen, must do all he can to avoid her. But the collision that follows will change their lives for good. All human and AU.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 137633
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Hold on to Yourself

omg... please tell me you are not going to send bella to Africa??? NO NO NO... she has to talk to Edward----please don't make that mistake!!!



Author's Response:

*hides under a rock*

*waves with a white flag, asking for peace*

I'll update the next 2 chapters back to back, does that help? :)

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Regret

two updates back to back... I can't wait to see what happens... Thanks



Author's Response:

thank you, more is coming over the weekend!

 
A Favor by Kitty_Cullen Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 194]
Summary:

I can't live without Edward.  Not now, not ever.  I've got a plan.  I'm just going to have to call in a few favors first.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 24893
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Out of Time

wow!!!!!!!!!! I love this twist! Can't wait for more! Tsherm

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro

Ok he has to come a round... right?? I love this story! I can't wait for more. Please hurry! Tsherm

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS

ok... I want more... Let's get a little ***** in the next one... ??

 
Summary:

Edward is a very troubled teen who moves with his family to the small town of Forks for a fresh start. What happens when he meets the shy Bella?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 31746
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: March 31, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Alternate Ending

I like this ending better!!! What a great job you did! Thanks again :)

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

This is a great story- Can't wait for more!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, graduate student and Biology instructor, has a wild night with a beautiful stranger, and becomes obsessed.  Bella Swan, his student, has a crush on her teacher...  Things aren't always what they seem,and people look different in the light of day.


NC-17 for lemons, mature themes.  Canon pairings ... kinda.


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Banner by Irritable Grizzzly!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 75384
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. Bad Girlfriend

I can't wait to find out what happens on there date!

 
Summary: Feature

Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Circus

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! So glad you liked it :D

 
Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable

really.. after that??? she turns him down, if she keeps pushing him away he will never come back. I had that happen in high school.. really good guy that wasn't very popular and my friends hated him. Even though I really liked him I pushed him away and once I figured out that he WAS what I needed. It was too late!! Please don't let that happen to Bella and Edward. That would suck! I really do love this story. I can't wait for more. Please post soon!! Tsherm



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing! I agree that it is a very real possibility that her actions will push him away. Hopefully, he sticks around instead of running. I think he owes it to her at this point.

Lola84

 
You Found Me by brighteyes87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 731]
Summary:

When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?

 

A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: Tsherm Signed
Date: April 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: You Don't Know Me

This is really weird- I'm currently in a long relationship... we are not married, but i do wish one day we would. I also feel like a toy for him. He forgets me, all about his friends and softball or what ever sports he is currently playing.... Yesterday at a softball game ( which it would be a deadly sin if i missed a game!!) a guy came up to me and all of the other softball girlfriends and wifes, and started talking to me... using the line..."don't I know you from somewhere" he was really good looking and no we didn't know eachother as far as I can recall, but he didn't stop, while my boyfriend was playing this guy was next to asking a million questions, then when he was playing which happened to always be on the same field we would be playing. He would stare at me a smile...wow his smile! welll n-e ways after his last game... my boyfriend was off drinkinh beer in the parking lot while i gathered up all of the stuff we bring and this gut... helped me it was really weird. He kept saying things like. He dosn't seem like he appreciates you and I hope I get to see you again.... I don't know this story just make me think!!! Thanks for hearing me babble! LOL can't wait for more- Tsherm

 




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