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Penname: LordXeenTheGreat [Contact]
Real name: Sam Edmunds
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Member Since: February 21, 2009
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Summary:

The story is built upon canon, going AU at the point of the battle with Victoria and the newborns. This time, the battle is not so simple, and Esme, Edward, Jacob, Leah, and Paul are killed.  

This is the story of how Bella and the Cullens pick up the pieces after the terrible tragedy and find a way to live again. It's quite emotional and slow-building, and I've done my best to keep it as realistic as possible (for the Twilight world, lol) and keep everyone in character.

Here's a preview:

"Bella, everything you heard in those letters was true. You are a Cullen, no matter what. We love you, and we want you to stay."

She looked up at me, her eyes brimming with tears. "How, Carlisle? How can you want me to stay?"

I took her face between my hands and looked directly into her eyes. "Because Bella, I can't make it if you don't. I need you now. You are the only one who can understand the pain I'm in, and I yours. We all need each other. This family will fall apart if we separate now. Please, Bella, say you'll stay with us."

 

"But since we lost Esme and Edward, I've felt his feelings toward her - he thinks of her as a friend. A best friend, perhaps. He has loved her in that way since the battle. And she feels for him in the same way. And I've noticed, especially in the last few months, that the connection they feel for each other seems stronger somehow. When they are not together, they both feel incomplete, but together, they both feel secure. They really rely quite heavily on each other." 

 

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 140263
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Aftermath

wow

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Isle Esme

I like it!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Back to Reality

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Dartmouth Year 2, part 2: Decisions and Admissions

Awesome

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Reality Bites

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Fly Away and Discover

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Denali Disaster

hahaha

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Fallout

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 The Big Gesture

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Winter Break

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Merry Old England

awesome!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Welcome Home

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Afterglow

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 The Carnival

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Visiting, cont'd.

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

nice

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella in New Moon. She is bitten by Laurent in the meadow and is saved by Jacob from a pack of werewolves who think she’s better off dead. With Victoria is still lurking around, she decides to flee Forks and head south. 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 10157
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2009


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

nice

 
Saints by Ideophobic Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

"Some would say that this moment, when young Bella was first exposed to the world of vampirism, is when she had subconsciously decided the path she would walk down." Bella's life in the sprawling city of Volterra, growing up in a coven of vampires. A story of skewed morals, awkward situations, obsession, and unconditional love. Mostly canon, E/B much later.


Categories: Twilight, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6820
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

I like it!!!

 
Summary:

Bella isn't a werewolve, vampire, or witch. She's "something other." Vamps/Werewolves included. Cannon Pairings. Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award for Most Original Story Line WIP.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 62264
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

nice



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

nice



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

 




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