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Penname: LordXeenTheGreat [Contact]
Real name: Sam Edmunds
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Member Since: February 21, 2009
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Summary:

Set during New Moon.  Bella didn't jump.  But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks.  What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life?  What if Edward couldn't handle being apart?  What if he fell?  How far could he fall?  Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie?  Just how bad can it get? 

Read and find out!

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Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Crest

So much Drama!!!



Author's Response:

I know :)  but I felt it needed to happen.  Only once the air has been cleared can they begin to build anew.

Thanks for reviewing, I do appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Honesty

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Funerals

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

More!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

nICE

 
Not Her by Heavens Immortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 375]
Summary:

What if Edward didn't get to Bella before Tyler's van hit her...what if he responded to her blood...? What if he bit her? Where would they be, how would their lives change...a view into an alternate Twilight.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 57901
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2009


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Emmett

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

 
Afterglow by jacklynnight Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

When my mother found me, fate seemed to link us together. Not only was I the daughter she never dreamed she'd have, I was unusually unappetizing for a human. However, being raised by vampires does not come with out conflict. This is my tale about growing up Cullen and finding love in the most unexpected place.

The world's largest coven is about to get a whole lot larger!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67140
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: February 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Accidents

I like it!!!



Author's Response:

: ) Thanks : )

AJ

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Dancing with Danger

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks : )

gald to hear you like i so far

 

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bambi's Mommy

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Becoming Cullen

Awesome Beginning!



Author's Response:

: )

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Becoming Cullen

Awesome Beginning!



Author's Response:

: )

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Becoming Cullen

Awesome Beginning!



Author's Response:

: )

 

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Soggy, Old Forks

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Honeymooners and Sneaky Uncles

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Guess Who

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Spilled Soy and Bad Blood

wow!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Grow Up!

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Accidents

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Dancing with Danger

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

You have been such a great reviewer. Thanks for taking the time to do that. It really means alot to me.

hugs AJ

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Retail Therapy

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

: )

 
Summary:

 

 

"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.

 

"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."

For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."

This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.

Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.

WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]

 

ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10- Decision

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14- 20 Questions

nice

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15- Rapture

nice

 




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