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Real name: Sam Edmunds
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Paradox by spacey25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 471]
Summary:

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Bella is a newborn vampire that is unlike others of her kind. Changed by James, a centuries old vegetarian vampire who has an unhealthy obsession with making Bella his mate, she flees her life in small town Forks and heads to Chicago. Intent on using her new abilities to help people, she and her best friend Rosalie spend their nights walking the streets of Chicago, searching for people to save, find the missing, and bring criminals to justice. In a dark alley, she runs into Edward Cullen, a handsome, cocky, homicide detective who immediately is captivated by the supernatural beauty.

The two eventually come together to bring down a serial killer who is not human and Bella finds herself falling for the cop and his entire family, revealing her secret and putting them all in jeopardy. When tragedy strikes, Bella is faced with the difficult decision to bring others into her world or leave them to die, including the man she loves.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 149410
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2011 Updated: February 07, 2014


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Awesome Chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Awesome Chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Great Cliffy!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Great Cliffy!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Great Chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Awesome Chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Great Chapter!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awesome Beginning!!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awesome Beginning!!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Awesome Chapter!!!

 

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Awesome Chapter!

 
Summary:

VO23 bannerApart from her summers with Renee, Bella's lived her whole quiet life in Forks, with her dad, and best friends Rachel, Becky and Jacob Black. When Edward Masen and Jasper Whitlock arrive as advance Volturi Scouts, it's vampires vs. werewolfs. Vampire AU, all-canon ships.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Harry, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 23065
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2011 Updated: September 25, 2012


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: It Begins

Great Beginning!



Author's Response:

Hope you're still enjoying it!

 
Summary:

 

While out hunting, Rosalie stumbles across a human. Intrigued by him, she watches, springing into action to save him when his prey becomes his predator.

 

This is how it all began...

 


 


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories, The Validation Beta Showcase
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1755
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2011 Updated: June 25, 2011


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Want

Awesome Chapter!!!!

 
Summary:

Grant Willoughby is a lonely college professor whose world is turned upside down when he is abruptly introduced to vampirism. Follow his story through war-torn 1940's Europe, as he meets a cast of all-new characters and interacts with Twilight favorites.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 107836
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2011 Updated: November 07, 2011


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Origins

Awesome Beginning!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Indestructible

Good dude!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Discovery

Great Chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Closure

Road Trip!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: 5. War

Evil Cliffy!!!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Hyde

Great Chapter!

 




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