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Penname: LordXeenTheGreat [Contact]
Real name: Sam Edmunds
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Member Since: February 21, 2009
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Amnesia by Gemgirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary:

What if Edward Cullen weren't a 109-year-old vampire...what if he were 'born' yesterday? When Bella Swan's truck breaks down in the Olympic Forest one rainy evening, a fateful encounter between the two will change the course of both of their lives forever.

Canon pairings; OOC vampire characteristics. Rated NC-17 for some swearing and violence, and more lemony goodness as the story progresses.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 168953
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Oasis

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It was a long one, I know. But nice and lemony...that makes it go fast, I think. ;)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Revelation

Poor Edward!



Author's Response:

IKR? He kinda had it coming to him, but you can't help feel for the guy! Although a few peeps were pretty mad at him for even giving Lauren the time of day, let alone kissing her.  But I think he considered that a punishment more than anything, and he was looking for ways to punish himself.  Classic Edward-like behavior, if you think about it!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Epilogue (aka Edward Gets the Last Word)

Awesome Story!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks for all the reviews along the way, I appreciate them all!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Resolution

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Truth

Awesome Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Homecoming

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked! :)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Storm

Awesome Beginning!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Awakening

Wow!!!!



Author's Response:

Um, thanks! ;D

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Recovery

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I have fun writing about the humans.  And Alice--she's always a trip!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Discovery

Awesome ChapteR!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next one coming soon...perhaps Edward and Bella will meet face to face...? ;)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Encounter

Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you think so...thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Tricks and Treats

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry I missed this the other day---I appreciate the reviews!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Lessons

Great ChaptER!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like! :)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Deep End

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Things are getting interesting.  The next one willl be fun.  :)

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Dance

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It was a fun one to write.  Some interesting things start happening in the next one....

 
Consequences by Leizu Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Fred decides at last to go in search of the mysterious yellow-eyes that he was created to fight, and finds much more than he bargained for...

Fred and Leah


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Fred, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 13015
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Smile

Awesome Chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sorry I've not updated in a while (busy with uni work), but want to write some more over the holidays.

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Already Gone

Poor Leah

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Unchained Melody

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Unchained Melody

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Open My Eyes

Awesome Beginning!

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Unchained Melody

Great Chapter!

 
Summary:

Jason Culhane has a troubled life and a worse past. Burdened by an unloving family, low expectations and a strange gift, his only anchor in life is his little sister Chloe. Yet a brief encounter with the supernatural changes everything. Jason finds himself thrust into a world he never knew existed and never wanted any part of. Worse than that, he's taking his family with him.

 

Note: This story only features the main characters of the Twilight Saga in a peripheral sense. The story does not focus upon them.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Other Characters: Alec, Aro, Caius, Demetri, Felix, Jane, Liam, Maggie, Marcus, Renata, Siobhan
Challenges:
Series: The Jason Culhane Saga
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 110328
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Prodigal

Awesome Chapter!!!  So he is around 14ish



Author's Response:

16, he's 13 in the first chapter, the second chapter is three years later, and the third chapter is four months after that so he's about sixteen and a half. Thanks for your reviews.

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Reprisal

Wow!



Author's Response:

Thank you. update soon.

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Foreclosure

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for keeping up with the story and reviewing. I'll probably be submitting the next chapter tonight so hopefully it'll be up for you soon. Thanks again.

 
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1 - Reminisce

Awesome Beginning!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 




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