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Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2469]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Break and Enter

When Edward kissed George's forehead, it brought tears to my eyes. It was so sad but so beautiful. This story is beautiful. I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  That little scene where Edward says goodnight to George is a favourite of mine, so I'm glad you liked it - thanks for letting me know.

 
Summary:

Honeymoon Suite

NOW COMPLETE!  We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV.  This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.

Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation. 

 Banner by the talented m81170 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Forbidden Love

This story was great and your new story sounds really interesting! I'm looking forward to reading it! :)

 
Summary:

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!!

 

Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn.  Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...  

In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.

"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly.  She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans.  There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs.  And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....

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Her face was so deathly still, no response.  She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn.  As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool.  I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.

"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered.  "Come on, sweetheart.  I'm right here.  You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough.  Now it's time for you to come back.  She's waiting.  I'm waiting, love.  I'm waiting for you, always...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Absolution

This chapter was beautifully written. I loved everything about it.

 
Moonless Night by sunray16 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 170]
Summary:

This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Party

Oh Edward! :( This chapter made me so sad. Especially the part with the little girl.

 
Taken by BellaLovesEdward729 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1181]
Summary:

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Thank you to Mkystich for the awesome banner!

Edward and Bella go to tell Charlie about their engagement when something happens that changes everything. Love is tested, friendships are torn, but how can Edward save Bella from someone they all trusted?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 88773
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

I LOVE THIS ENDING! E & B repeating the biology scene is too adorable! *squeeeeee*

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Tuxedo Time Part I

I loooooved this chapter! Can't wait to see what Carlisle gave Edward.

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue: A Winter's Day (angelicwish)

OMG I LOVED THIS! So, so good! This last chapter was perfection - this is how Breaking Dawn should have been. I loved all the memories you put in. I also thought it was really creative how you kept elements of Breaking Dawn in, but you changed them (and made them better, in my opinion).

Can I just add that I would love to see a sequel to this? Like really, really love it. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks very much :)  I won't be writing a sequel, sorry - I've done the baby/change storyline before in Blood Lines, but I think this Edward and Bella would have a baby boy.  And there'd be a tree house.  And train sets :)

 
Summary:

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. 

Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

Video trailer by MyEdwardSaga: click here

***Gorgeous banner artwork (above) was made by the talented Fernanda. Many thanks to her for allowing me to use this masterpiece for my banner. View more of her work here***


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 165869
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: October 06, 2013


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: October 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I don't know what's up with Charlie and Renee but it's giving me a bad feeling. I think they're going to find out about Edward and the Cullens somehow...

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one! :)



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see what they're up to! :)

Thank you for not forgetting about this story and for reviewing! It means a lot to me.

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: April 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Also, I just watched your E/B video and it was BEAUTIFUL! :')



Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching!! Means a lot. 

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: April 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter! My heart is just aching for both of them. You really do a wonderful job of capturing Edward's emotions and I liked that he was able to show a little vulnerability around Bella. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (soon, please)! :)

Good luck with your job interview!

Looking forward to the BD one-shot! :)

 



Author's Response:

Hey, sorry for such a late response, but I wanted to let you know that your kind words means so much to me. I'm working hard on the new chapter and have gotten a good start on it so unless something unexpected happens it should come much faster than last time.

I also wanted to share some good news and ask for your support. Not sure is you saw already but Mistaken Trust was nominated for two awards at The Wordsmith Awards for Best Canon Story and for Best Bella! It would mean a lot if I could have your vote! Voting ends tomorrow I believe, so if you vote, you will need to do so ASAP! Here is the link: www.wordsmithawards.blogspot.com

Thanks so much!

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: December 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So, so, SO happy you updated! This chapter was worth the wait! :)

And don't worry -- I think the hardcore Twilight fans will always be around. I know I will be. Just because the movies are over doesn't mean I love the series any less. :)

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It made me so happy to see that a new chapter had been posted! I absolutely love this story. I love that Edward is always there for Bella, no matter what. :)

I'm guessing that whatever Charlie's up to, it has something to do with Jacob. I have a bad feeling about it...

Good luck with writing your thesis! Hang in there!



Author's Response:

I'm just so happy to know you're still reading and enjoying! Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It truly means a lot to me!

And thanks for the luck! I think I'll need it, lol.

I have some exciting news. I just found out that Mistaken Trust was nominated for two awards at the Sunflower Awards for Best Edward and for Best Bella. I am just so honoured by this! Voting has started, and if you are so inclined, I would love your vote! Voting goes until May 25. Here is the link: http://thesunflowerawards.blogspot.com/

 
Summary:

Jasper's POV of Renesmee's birth scene from my fic The Ties That Bind, an in canon, EPOV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in BD.  Given his gift, Renesmee's birth was a very difficult experience for Jasper...


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3332
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2010 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Deliverance

I love this.

 
Made to Live Alone by JustTry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1407]
Summary:

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All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.

***Tissue Warning***


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Wednesday, July 21st

Okay, normally I don't read AU Human stories, but I have got to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this. I can relate to so many of the things that Bella is feeling in this story, and its nice to read about her finding happiness and learning that she can be loved.

 
Summary:

 

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It took me only a few years to return to Carlisle and recommit to his vision. I thought I would be exempt from the…depression…that accompanies a conscience. Because I knew the thoughts of my prey, I could pass over the innocent and pursue only the evil. If I followed a murderer down a dark alley where he stalked a young girl — if I saved her, then surely I wasn’t so terrible.”

 

I shivered, imaging only too clearly what he described — the alley at night, the frightened girl, the dark man behind her. And Edward, Edward as he hunted, terrible and glorious as a young god, unstoppable. Would she have been grateful, that girl, or more frightened than before?

 

 

A look back into a single dark night in New York City. Long ago, when the creature now known as Edward was known only as the angel of death that brought punishment to those found deserving.

 

Rated for scary themes, extreme violence, gore, death, and coarse language.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2300
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW. I always knew Edward had a dark past but I never imagined anything that violent. I liked the story though. It was interesting to see Edward from someone else's perspective, as a scary vampire.

 
Summary:

Post-Eclipse. Bella buys a birthday gift for Edward. One-shot.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2087
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Notes from the Underground, eh? Poor Bella. :P

This story was so cute! I wish you would have written more about Edward's reaction to the scrapbook though. I liked Bella's epiphany - it's about time she learned to accept a gift! lol.



Author's Response:

Haha. Poor Bella, indeed. Thanks for your review.

 
Sunrise by EternallyCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Post Breaking Dawn: Bella stumbles upon a discovery of the scent of a trespasser on the Cullen's property in Forks. Alice receives a shocking vision that threatens to destroy the lives of Edward and Bella and their family..


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Charlotte, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 53386
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2010 Updated: October 26, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Expect the Unexpected

I really like this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Expect the Unexpected

YES! So glad they beat the Volturi!

 
Summary:

Fluff, Feist & Feathers is a compilation of one-shots written by MissBella (spunkette) that take place pre-Twilight, throughout the Saga, and post-Breaking Dawn. Told in alternating POV's, rating from G to Nc-17, and including "missing moments" that SM may have left out * ahemm... Isle Esme... ;) * Fluff, Feist, & Feathers is a just-for-fun-and-because-I-can't-curb-my-Twilight-addiction story (:

Enjoy! 

xx


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 7781
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Kept Me Waiting A Long Time

ALICE AND JASPER!!!! AWWWW!!!!!

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 106 Already

I loved the part where Bella threw the tree branch at Emmett. And the straitjacket. lol.

 
The Guard by cjmuehlb Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary:

The newborn battle is over and Bella is dead. Can Edward survive without her?  Can the Cullens save him from himself and his bad decisions?  Does he want to be saved?  This is Edward's heartbreaking journey of self discovery.  Can he find another reason to live?

Story starts six months after the end of Eclipse. Canon couples.  Rated R for vampire and human violence in later chapters.  Told mostly from Edward's POV with some insight from Carlisle.  ANGST ANGST ANGST!

Nominated for an Avant Garde Award - category - Best Makes me cry/saddest.   


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 135221
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2011


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fall

Poor Edward. I feel so sorry for him. :(

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Save

Can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Star Gazing by Thats-So-Alex Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

With Valentine's Day gone and passed in the time Edward was away, he feels cheated that he never got to celebrate the day properly for the first time. So he decides to treat Bella to a belated Valentines.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2830
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2010 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww this was cute! It's nice to be able to read canon fanfiction for once.

 
Summary:

At the last possible moment, Edward is unable to entrust Bella to anyone else after the baseball game and appearance of James - even if being the one to protect her means kidnapping her and making her, for all intents and purposes, his prisoner.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 11265
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2010 Updated: September 23, 2010


Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Kidnapped

I LOVE THIS! I always wondered what might have happened if Bella went with Edward instead of Alice and Jasper toward the end of Twilight. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this version of the story unfolds.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter 2 should be up soon (it's already in the queue), so I hope that you'll continue to enjoy my twist on Twilight. :)

 
Reviewer: bellacantante Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Kidnapped

I'm really enjoying this story. I have conflicting thoughts about Bella. I mean, yes, Edward "kidnapped" her, but he only did it to protect her. Maybe I'm crazy, but I think she's sort of making the kidnapping thing into a bigger deal than it really is. Edward doesn't have evil intentions. He's just trying to keep her safe. And by staying away from Charlie and Forks, she's keeping her family and friends safe from James.

Anyway, I'm loving this story and I can't wait for next chapter.

 




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