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Afterglow by jacklynnight Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

When my mother found me, fate seemed to link us together. Not only was I the daughter she never dreamed she'd have, I was unusually unappetizing for a human. However, being raised by vampires does not come with out conflict. This is my tale about growing up Cullen and finding love in the most unexpected place.

The world's largest coven is about to get a whole lot larger!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67140
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Empty House

Can't wait to see who is after Emmalie and why...  Please hurry with the update!



Author's Response:

ill try to be quick- the person validating my fic is with out internet and the others are helping her out.

:)

 
Sasha by KenoshaChick Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

This is the beginning of Nessie's story. She's grown, and even with the strength and intelligence of a vampire, she can't escape the confusion and flaws which come from being human. Original characters.

An nominee in the Original Character Awards, a Indie Twific Award Shortlist Nominee for Best Original Character, & a Twilight Award Nominee for Best Jacob/Nessie.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 100208
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: October 22, 2010


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: He's Looking Right Through Me

I love Sasha!  So glad Nessie follows her heart.  Great story. Really - as romantically captivating as Twilight was - when will there be more?!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! The next chapter is in the queue right now. You can also find this story on FF under the same title and penname. I post the chapters there right when they come back from the beta. I think it's up to Chapter 21 there.

 

Thanks so much for writing a review!

 
Summary: Feature

This is Breaking Dawn from Edward's POV, using the same scenes and dialogue but with new scenes added as well -- the latter of which are entirely the product of my over-active imagination. New scenes include the lemons sorely lacking from the original.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 194511
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2010


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Promised

I am thoroughly impressed.  You should be very proud of yourself!  I read the whole story in one sitting, was instantly drawn into it and Edward's POV is done perfectly!  Incredible!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was always awkward and never quite knew where she fit in, but she always had a best friend in Alice Brandon.  Edward Cullen was hopeless since the first grade, branded a geek and bullied every day of his life.  It's years later and Bella has just returned to Forks after graduating college.  She's desperate for a job and grabs the first thing she can find working at Forks Pharmacy with none other than Edward Cullen.  Follow their budding friendship as it evolves into something more, where Edward and Bella discover a little something about themselves as well as each other.  In the end, can Bella find where she belongs, and can Edward find someone who accepts him for who he really is?

Thanks to monamour for the banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 126299
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loooove Geekward!  He is sooo cute!  But it's great that he gets confident when lust is involved!  Great story.  I really can't wait for an update.  I hope Bella changes her mind about the no sex thing.  Given how hot and steamy their physical relationship is, it would be a shame.  Please, hurry with an update!

 
Summary:

 

 

Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.

An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.

*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*

**Indie Twific Nominee**

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 233653
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2014


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ Every Life Has a Measure of Sorrow ~

Wow. I didn't see this coming at all!!! Great story! I love it! Waiting...impatiently...for an update! :-D

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1282]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Consequences

She's pregnant, isn't she?  I wonder how Edward will handle that.  Or better yet, Rose.  ROFL.  Update soon!  Please!

 
Seeing Double by Kayten Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves to Forks to escape an abusive living situation, and she and Alice Cullen become fast friends. But is there something else developing between them? Bella's confusion is times-two thanks to Alice's gorgeous but elusive twin brother, Edward. As if being the new girl in a small town wasn't bad enough, Bella must now figure things out for herself as the Cullens have her seeing double.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Lauren, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 51623
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Unruly Part II

Wow.  I kinda wish the Alice/Bella sequence didn't end.  It's a shame Edward is her brother in the story because an Alice/Bella/Edward would be really hot.  Nice chapter though.  Kisses with both the hotties.  I think I will reread it now.......



Author's Response:

Woo! I have you guys doing re-reads now?? So proud haha I'm glad you liked it though!!

 
Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Unruly Part II

I read the reviews and I noticed that a lot of people are asking for an EPOV.  But...I'd really prefer an Alice POV.  I'd like to know where she stands on her feelings for Bella since she has been showing signs of interest throughout the whole story, and yet she is dating Jasper.  Maybe you could do a twin chapter and split the POV between Edward and Alice.

I really like this story, especially since it touches on my favorite - 2 girls and 1 guy.  Been living it for 5 years.  Although my partners aren't Alice and Edward, sigh, just don't tell them I said that!



Author's Response:

Oh boy, don't worry I won't tattle :X Haha I'm glad you're liking it so far! And I'll definitely take your suggestion into consideration, as it would probably be a lot of fun to write. Hmmm. We shall see ..... ;)

 
Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6.1: Edward's Side

EPOV was great!  Good to see him pining for her, hadn't been entirely sure of his level of interest when it was just BPOV. 

I think it's hysterical he is jealous of Alice because Bella comes over to visit her, but if he really knew what Alice and Bella were doing while he was talking to Rosalie - I think he'd lose it!  

SOOOO glad you decided to do the Alice POV.  I can't wait to see what happens in the morning and if Bella even gets home in time to not be caught by Charlie.  Although, I think even if she is caught, Bella will think it worth the trouble since she got to kiss both of her love interests.

As always, can't wait for the next update! :-D



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D I found the humor in it, too, actually ... I didn't even really plan it that way, but I giggled when I re-read it hehe. Thanks for reading!! Next chapter is almost done!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan receives an invitation to the exclusive Evermore Experience, an in-depth immersion summer program where she plans to fully explore 19th century England, but fate has other plans for her once she arrives.

 

Evermore Experience


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 153999
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2010 Updated: August 12, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Get me to the ball on time

Excellent story!  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope to be able to write this week & have a teaser up on the Twilighted thread by Wednesday evening.

 
Summary:

A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?  

Banner by @Miztrezboo

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Prey

Since the fic isn't finished, I'm reallly!  really!  reallly!  hoping for some nice twist of - Yay, he stopped and now Bella's immortal.  Yay!  I'm really hoping!  

Excellently written though.

 
Summary:

Unemployed Bella Swan takes on a temp position. Little does she know it is as assistant to Edward Cullen, a man she despises! Chaos ensues, papers fly, and Cullen Enterprises is turned upside down. AH, slightly OOC. Rate M for Lemons and Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 26544
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intervening Fate

Haha!  Loved the reference to the Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!! haha!

You are the first to mention it. Is it that obscure? :)

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intervening Fate

Not obscure at all.  I thought it was pretty obvious.  But, the hot scenes you write could be distracting for readers - it was hard to focus on a coherent thought myself.  Great story, just finished the whole thing.  Looking forward to an update. 



Author's Response:

Go to fanfiction.net and you can read up to chapter 18 that was posted last week. I am still trying to get twilighted up to date.

Thanks!

 
Harvest Moon by JanaOnWheels Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 605]
Summary:

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The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.

The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.

 

*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: September 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I hope your fear is squashed!  Great chapter, as per usual.  Can't wait for the meadow scene!  Write whatever feels right to you.  This is your story to play with, and so far, I've loved it!



Author's Response:

It's getting there. I'm about half through the chapter, but it's very rough right now.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Summary:

Edward made a decision after that second biology lesson.  Two years later that decision is challenged.


Categories: AU, Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 77655
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2011 Updated: November 05, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow!  Excellent story!  I could not stop reading and smiling.  Very upset that I am up-to-date with your chapters because it ended on a cliffie and I want to read more!  Hurry with an update please! 

 
Summary:

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From the ashes of North America Volterran Empire has emerged. Divided into twelve districts, some of the horrors the opressed humans are forced to endure are universal, the weekly blood donations, the fear of being carted away for even a hint of treasonous behavior.

Others are unique to each District. In District 2, the children of the wealthy are given the best possible education money can buy. But they're educated for only one purpose: violence.

Violence they can use in the annual Morphing Games, in which two adolescents, sixteen through twenty, are sent to the capitol to fight for their lives and the ultimate prize: immortality.

My name is Bella Swan, and I'm a Prospective in the 100th Morphing Games. There's only one problem: I don't want to win.

Hunger Games/Twilight X-Over. Vamps galore!

For those curious about the Morphing Games:

more can be found here:

http://orringtonrose.wordpress.com/


Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Ben, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 38783
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: November 26, 2011


Reviewer: marierouge84 Signed
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: [6]

Wow.  LOVE the story!  Awesome twist and very riveting!  Hurry with a new chapter please!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying! :)

New chapter coming soon!

-OR





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