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Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

MORE MORE MORE!!!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 22, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: February 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

omg omg omg, more more more please!!!!!!!!!! must. know. what. happens.....help me!! xox

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses

where are you and my fave story!?!?!?!? I MISS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! please plese dont abandon this story im too obsessed with it, ive like already reread it up to here 3x, so i hope you update, it's too good, xox

 
Private Tutor by 4theluvofmary Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 222]
Summary: Bella leaves her home in Arizona to attend Northwestern University in IL, far from anything she is used to.  What happens when her extremely attractive TA seems to despise her for no reason?  Will sparks or fists fly?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 52520
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: April 27, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

omg, seriously woman, if i dont get more speedy updates from you, and soon, i may die, this story is just too good!!! please please keep me satiated, i must know what happens next, its killing me!! you are amazing and beautiful, hehe ;) , now another chapter or 10 please!

lovingly,

kay

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

UGHHH THANK GOD YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!! i thought you abandoned the story and i was so sad bc i love it so much, please dont ever leave me for that long again!!! And now i desperately can't wait for the next chapter!! xox

 
Summary:

Bella has never had luck at finding friends, and now that she has exiled herself to one of the most prestigious schools in the country, it doesn’t look like that luck is going to change. But what happens when Bella, with some help from the incredibly hot new guy, decides to finally stop being Miss Invisible? Canon Pairings

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 27072
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Ohhh I am SOOO glad you didn't give up on this story I've been holding my breath hoping ud come back, and holy shit this chapter was so wonderful and heartwarming and I can't wait to see whatll happen next! Ohh and congratulations on getting married and I'm sure ull do great on ur lsats don't worry :)

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

yayyyyy im so excited! MORE MORE MORE!!! and whew, im sooo relieved that things are getting better with alice and bella!!

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan is orphaned and stuck at an elite boarding school on a request from her mothers ex-boyfriend and her guardian Phillip Dwyer. She was prepared for the spoilt rich snobs but what she wasn’t prepared for was Edward Cullen, AU-HUMAN


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8405
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2008 Updated: April 23, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: February 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: It Doesn't Matter Cause I'm Packing Plastic

more more more please!!!! i need updates and more chapters asap!!! im dyin over here! love the story and cannot wait for more, xox

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: I Wasn't Prepared For This

ahhhhh thank goodness i totally thought you abandoned the story and was so sad about it!!! i cant wait to see what comes next and dont stress about your writing, its beautiful :) please keep updating, i do love this story so much already!! xox

 
Summary:

Jasper, Rosalie, Bella, Alice, Emmett & Edward become interwoven, making their mark at Seattle's Fremont Park Preparatory boarding school. Wealth and war, friendship and love ensue.

 

 

AU/AH. Rated M for language and sexual themes. Slightly OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 146911
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: The Lion and the Unicorn

ok, so i will be very frank here....IF YOU DON'T WRITE MORE SOON I WILL IMPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i've read ALOT of fanfic and your story is by far my favorite, and i'm a little in love with you because of it, haha. but seriously, please please PLEASE update soon and often bc i am a lost lamb without it and i'm dying to know what will happen next and everything else after, it is so well written and the characters are so well developed, i just can't sing your praises enough. now please help me and UPDATE asap!

adoringly,

kayla sturridge



Author's Response:

I love frank! And I am abundantly sorry for such a long delay between updates - a week is too long in my opinion, bleh. I actually read this review the second before I posted and was so excited you wouldn't have to wait much longer - just the time it takes to get verified. I am speechless that G&B if your favorite - really, I had no idea it was being received with such enthusiasm. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I will keep working my heiney off on the chapters and bring my A game! Adoring your devotion like crazy, RAE

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: What Are Little Girls Made Of?

alright darling, now i have tried to be patient once more whilst eagerly awaiting an update from my favorite story ;) , but my marbles are now lost and i am slightly frantic in my desperation for the next update! you know how fond i am of you, so please throw me a bone and write me a new chapter! Btw, i never really listened to maroon 5, but since reading your story i have "little bit longer" on repeat on my ipod, haha! anyways, i cant wait to read more and see edward and bella's sexy relationship grow more, and bella and rose get closer, and rose/em alice/jas of course as well. plus all the fabulous drams of boarding school and coquettish trouble of the uniform skirts we all love to hear about, hehe! Cant wait for more, hope its sooooon, cough cough!

adoringly, per usual,
kay

Author's Response:

I know, I know ... this stretch I took between chapters was frustrating for me too. BUT there is a teaser up on the G&B twilighted thread and the update will be up tomorrow!! After that there will be another update later in the week! I am back to a writing schedule because I HATE making you wait. :) Thank you for hanging in; truly, I don't deserve you! ~RAE

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: February 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Rain, Rain Go Away

rae, this chapter was so beautifully written. thank you. not only for the update, but for writing so fluidly- the reason this is my favorite story is because your writing is so strong and descriptive and passionate. I'm so proud of you for this chapter and obviously cant wait for more...but whats new there, haha? Oooh the excerpt was such a great tease btw, i was loving on it! anyways, thank you again, and congratulations on another brilliant chapter, cant wait for more. If you ever need words of encouragement don't hesitate or be a stranger, i adore you too much! 

kay



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Kay! Really, truly - my word - your reviews make me want to never stop writing! You are truly fantastic and I am so thankful to have your continual encouragement, readership and support! ~ RAE

P.S. The next chapter is done and just waiting to be verified!

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Weddings and Funerals

rae, rae, rae....ONLY YOU could possibly make me cry, laugh, and squeal in delight in ONE damn chapter! Seriously, i don't know how you do it, but you do it well, and that's the fucking understatement of the century, HAH! I am already, quite literally, salivating for the next chapter for some BxE time! But honestly, you just keep raising the bar for yourself, as each update just gets better and better in its brilliance and your writing continues to flourish. I will be struggling in anticipation for the next chapter, and until then if you need anything at all - inspiration, encouragement, or just an ear to listen - i am absolutely here for you. Eep, can't wait seriously for more, but what's new, ahhh!!!

Adoringly,

Kay, xox



Author's Response:

I always wait to respond to my Twilighted reviews until I have an update in the cue, waiting to be approved. I'm not sure why I began that habit but it has just always been my way. I DO, however, read them as they come in. When I received this awe inspiring review I almost cried. For you, Kay,  I am the most sorry that this update took me so long, because you gave me so much enthusiasm and love in this last review and then it took me so long to respond in kind:( I hope what's coming with BxE is enjoyable for you and yeah ... I am nervous about how it will be received, I'm not going to lie. But you seemed to love AxJ and I was nervous about that as well. Anyway, I SHOULD have written you during these last two weeks of writing torture:) You are the absolute best at pulling me out of the murk with just a few, deliberate words. Thank you endlessly for everything, you are wonderful! ~RAE

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Roses Are Red

rae rae rae......im sorry it took me so long to review this chapter, honestly i needed to step away and read it a few times and let it sink in. When it took you a while to post this i had a feeling you were stressed or having trouble, i just knew, but i hope you're proud of the chapter bc i am. It's wonderful in every way. I hope we get a playful chapter soon of them flirting and playing and having light fun maybe even in a group, or something since theyve all been going through such emotional turmoil lately....let them eat cake....bc my man is huge, HAH! anywho, you know i love ya darling and if you need anything or are stuck anywhere writing dont hesitate to message me, i'll provide any support i can! xox

adoringly,

kay



Author's Response:

kay, kay, kay ... I'M sorry I've been one of THOSE authors who let their readers down and do not post for a millennium. I have been stressed, having trouble, being finicky, reading too much and being just all around lame. But, I'm done slacking and letting you down:) I think a playful chapter is a few out ... I want to go there since the ficdom is having major heartfail at every turn it seems. It just so happens that G&B although they should be playing are hitting the critical mass of their universe too. Thank you for your endless encouragement and please forgive my delay in posting, responding ... everything. You're wonderful, hun and keep me going! ~RAE

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ohhhhh shut the fuck up, she can not be pregnant can she?? That would suckkkkk, yikes!! love the story tho and your writing, i seriously cant wait for more! xox



Author's Response:

Keep reading to find out.....I hate to give it away but ask that you trust me to not ruin the story with whatever direction I take it.  Thank you so much for your review!

 
Summary:

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 (banner by the awesome m81170)

When Bella moves to Forks, she's surprised that there's someone living in the house across from hers... and even more so that her window faces directing into someone else's! Will these two window buddies be able to get over their naivity and shyness to discover that they're meant to be? AU, AH BxE all the way... enjoy!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 62092
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2010


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yayy so glad you updated, and it was a great, and hilarious chapter! EPOV definately works i think, i'm glad you're going to include it :) and btw i fucking LOVE your story Two Weeks, and cant wait to read more of it! xox



Author's Response:

Lol, yes, I know it took forever for me to update, and I appreciate you pointing that out to me in a positive way hahaha

I'll be sure to have a very big SPLAT! of EPOV in the next chapter, because we all want to know what he's been up to while Bella's been off doing crap, am I right? And THANK YOU!!! I'm so glad you like that stor, because it's my favorite of the ones I have posted on this site... More of that story will be posted soon as well, after the next chapter for this one goes up... I'm trying to catch up a bit XD

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!! **squeals** xox



Author's Response:

Hahaha, don't squeal too loudly... It's a sunday; people like to rest on this day ;)

Thanks muchly for the enthusiastic response!

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this was amazing and eep! i cant wait for next chapter!!!! i love this story so much! And where's two weeks btw? you know how much i absolutely adore your writing and thus your stories :) xox



Author's Response:

Two Weeks? Well, I had to do research for the next chapter so it was more accurate, and then that research all got deleted on accident, so I had to start from scratch with the chapter with a limited amount of time... hence me taking so long to respond here. Lol. It hasn't been forgotten, i'm just dealing with minor complications hahaha

Next chapter for this story will be coming out sooner because it's already completed... I just have to find the time to submit it to this site XD

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and rating, my darling!

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG that was the sweetest funniest chapter, i LOVED it!!!! im so sad ull be gone, but hope u have fun and update asap when ur back please....espesh for leaving me off with a damn cliffie! xox



Author's Response:

lol, it didn't take me too long to update, did it? :P Just forever to respond... lol.

I'm glad that you thought it was sweet-funny. AwkWard tends to bring that out in the story... lol

 
Summary:

Bella works as a Resident Advisor  at Seattle University.  She meets Edward at a Halloween Party thrown for the residents and employees of Weston Hall.  A friendship slowly builds and Bella finds herself falling in love with Edward throughout the semester.  What could the popular Edward Cullen possibly see in her?  BxE, AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 49362
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009


Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: If Only I Could

ahhhhhhhh im so glad ur back, i missed this story so much!! im so excited and nervous for what's to come but i sincerely cant wait, and hope u update and continue with this story bc i really do love it!! xox



Author's Response:

Aww thanks!  I'm working on the next chapter now, so of course I'll be continuing with it!  I can't wait to share more of these guys with you!  Thanks for reading! ;)

 
Two Weeks by MuffNbutter Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 290]
Summary:

two weeks story icon

(beautiful moving picture thingy of awesomeness by the one and only Icelandgirl812!)

It's been nine long years since Graduation and everyone has drifted apart. When it's decided to spend two weeks together again, getting to know their friends and old flames again, complications ensue, and everything that caused them all to drift apart is thrown back in the midst of a fun-filled vacation in Napa, California. AU-Human, ever so slightly OOC, but still a lovely, lemony story :D


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 60430
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2010


Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: I Never Want to Stop

holy mother of God.....that was.....um....let's just say my chest is still practically heaving from it....i can't even.....wow. um....more please?



Author's Response:

Hahaha!!!! I love your review. Bella imagines Edward as one sexy bitch, doesn't she? Is she correct in this assumption? Hell yes. We shall see more of his sexiness in the cumming chapters, and mayhaps it won't be a dream next time... ;)

Glad you seem to be... fully enjoying... the story so far. More to come soon, love. Thansk for reading, reviewing, and rating! ^.^

 
Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 974]
Summary:

BLtS Banner 2

 

*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Pyromania and Other Fun Topics of Conversation

this was such a good chapter, i was laughing aloud like the entire time :)



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Abby Normal and the Cupcake Pants

I get so giddy everytime I see an update from this story I'm pretty sure I squeal like a fucking schoolgirl, hahaha, but this chapter was amazeballs I laughed hysterically - per usual- and then I held my breath during the couch scene, I'm beyond thrilled to see the progression and I just adore you, xox

Author's Response:

Thank you very much :)

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Abby Normal and the Cupcake Pants

where ya been? I miss you and my favorite story??!!! xox



Author's Response:

The update will be up soon.

 
Reviewer: kaystu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Cupcake Cannibalism and Cooking Lessons

this just made me so happy, thank you, this is honestly my favorite story and i absolutely love every update, xox



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

 




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