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Penname: mysticfighter [Contact]
Real name: Gudrun
Status: Member
Member Since: March 13, 2010
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I'm married, mother of twin-boys and live in Germany. Mysticfighter is a literal translation of the meaning of my first name.


As a huge fan of the twilight-series and anything Edward I'm equally into fan-fiction.


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Reviews by mysticfighter
 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: November 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

I'm so glad you didn't abandon this story. Everything is evolving nicely, I can understand Rosalie's reasoning. Now let's meet the new baby.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

Read your beautiful, funny, juicy story up to here and like it a lot. You had me worried a bit with Jake in the beginning, glad she's more into Mr. Talented Fingers. Despite their current lives don't seem to be compatible, their bodies obviously are. Your Edward is so charming and Bella a chef, no surprise here. Look forward to find out more about Edward and Jasper and what the 'rents have to say.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

Ugh - James is out and about on parole. Don't apologize for more chapters, so move these two from the entryway to the bedroom and make them talk some more in between   ... ahem.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I think Jasper was already the better man when his parent dumped him by the road. It's typical Esme and Carlisle to include Jasper without further ado into their family.

Hope you can overcome your writer's block soon.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

Yes, good one, Bella. I'm so glad James is out of the way for good, now.

Hope your move goes smoothly.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: January 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Epilogue

What a pleasant Christmas-surprise. Loved to read some more about the whole gang, you made me see the parents' ways in the kids. Loved it!

Happy New Year

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes

I had almost given up hope to see the last chapter of this story. I'm really glad for your update, the wedding was fun to read as well as the confrontation with the overly flirty waitress. Look forward to the epilogue, whenever you find the time.

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2250]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - A Disaster of a Night (V)

Thank you for the update - I almost lost hope.

Edwars should tell Bella and his family what's going on. Alone he won't be able to keep it together. They would understand and probably have some ideas that he won't come up with by himself.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

I'm with Edward, here. Bella should have said yes, they should have announced their engagement and the problem with James' photos would have been solved.

I looked at Don Cherry and his hideous suits - how can one take him seriously when he's walking around in an outfit like that?

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

I sure hope Tanya took the bait and doesn't cause anymore trouble. I'm sure James isn't satisfied with injuring Edward alone. From what he's done so far he is one nasty piece of work.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Drama

Well, don't you think introducing Jacob and James is a bit misery-overkill? The info about Tanya is interesting, though.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Confessions

..... makes a gagging sound. I feel the same horror Bella is just experiencing. And I have a feeling the beautiful bridesmaids-dress will make a reappearance on Bella.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

So the cat's out of the bag now. Wonder what Alice has to say.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

Now I hate Tanya even more and Jessica's involvement doesn't do anything to calm my nerves here. Hopefully something unsavoury gets dug up.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?

Of course I hate Tanya, rich-bitch-daddy's girl that she is. She sounds like a psycopath and I don't even try to imagine what her agenda is.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Going Home

It's nice to have a big family but .... they just shouldn't have stormed into his appartment. Cockblocked again - sigh.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal

Seems I'm a bitch, too, because I enjoyed the Jessica-debacle immensely! Maybe Bella and Edward move a liitle too fast, but they are so drawn to each other and the tension building up for much longer would probably not end well anyway.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Far From Home

Hope we don't have too much Mike trying to hit on Bella in this story, I'm not a big fan of him.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque

Bella and Edward are trying to avoid each other but are drawn together none the less - very promising. And I would watch Edward on the ice, too.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - At the Rink

I had a feeling that Bella's toy would make another appearance some way or other.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - New Home

Nice thing to have them meet and be attracted to each other without knowing who they are. Like your story.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

I think the toy circling on the conveyor-belt is pretty hilarious.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Planning

Yes, they are very good at postponing.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

Rosalie's right, Bella should talk to Edward. So far he's done more declaring his intents.

 
Reviewer: mysticfighter Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

I'm glad they started to acknowledge their relationship-issues, but there has to be more talk.

 




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