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Penname: ina_vi [Contact]
Real name: Ina
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Member Since: March 10, 2010
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The Screamers by KiyaRaven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1537]
Summary:

Living on the streets is hard for Bella Swan but not as hard as putting up with Edward Cullen when he drags her into his world of sex, drugs and rock’n’roll.  She needs a lucky break and he needs an image make-over.  Will they be able to help each other out before they kill each other?

 

Banner by Shalu

The Screamers banner

Kick-ass banner by Irritable Grizzzly.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 343376
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Moving Forward

“Ok, I know you're thinking ‘cause your face looks like someone just opened an umbrella up your ass."

F**K, my stomach hurts from laughing XD

And the juicy parts? Mmmmmmmmmm No words for this... As usual ;) *thumbs up*

 
Solar Midnight by LaRosada Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

 

One of the key events that creates the epic nature of the Edward/Bella love story is the moment that Bella’s scent first hits Edward, and Edward somehow resists.

But what if Edward’s self control had kicked in just a moment too late? What if his proximity to Bella once his conscience reawakened was just too much, and he couldn’t restrain himself. What if he bit her, and Bella had a new life forced on her, before she had any desire to live for an eternity?

Before she had experienced Forks High School, made friends, and re-connected with Jacob. Before she knew what Edward was. And most importantly, before they fell in love.

What would Twilight look like then?

This is the story of the seemingly insignificant moment that changed everything…


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 74511
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2011


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Complications

The story is awesome. But... I can't realy imagine a girl, that will act like that with a guy who asked if she'll be shared. That's practically calling her "piece of meat", or "whore", or something like that. I hope she'll come to her sences and tell him to f*ck off.



Author's Response:

I can definitely see your point.

In Bella's defense, the warnings about James may have had the opposite effect that her family was intending. They were trying to make Bella understand how dangerous James was for her. what his intentions might be. I think instead it caused Bella to see him as a person who is just inappropriate overall, and therefore not take his comment personally. She saw it as a reflection of him, not a reflectin of her.

Also, she's still quite naive. His unexpected "soft side" blind-sighted her when she was already feeling conflicted about Charlie. She thinks confronting him about his comment was enough.

I guess we'll see whether or not it was...

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Interrogations

OK, there I go again ;)

Just wondering, what is Bella's f*cking problem? Should have kicked James out (and kneel him, and rip his head off, and maybe his d*ck)! And what with the silent treatment? She was wrong, Edward was right - than say something! Grrrrrr...

And yeah, Edwards is a saint ;)

 

(Yep, I get your poind, just being mad with Bella, and having violent thought towards James :) )



Author's Response:

Lol. Yay! You re-commented. Sorry for my internet weirdness. Smh.

And yes, James pisses me off too. In all stories, in all forms...James is just...bleh!

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7581]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bite and Run

That is only chapter 1, and I'm addicted. I love that story!!!

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lost and Found

I love the story. After the first chapter I just couldn't stop myself and read it all. But if the end is bad I'll be sooooo depressed... After everything they have been through I won't be able to stomach the bad end. There must be a reason for all the pain and suffering... Just must be!

But if I put the depression aside (usually I don't read such stories), the way you write is incredible! You are really good at this, and only because of it I'll read this story through :*

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Mope and Hope

Nice!!! That was soooooo unexpected O.o  Loved the chapter ;)

 
Summary:

One-Shot: Bella's new job takes an unexpected turn when terrorists take over her office building. Bella is taken hostage, but the sexy head henchman seems to be exactly what Bella wants and needs. BPOV. 

Winner of the "Voter's Pick" award in the "Best Domination Ever Contest" on FFN.

 

"If I was your boyfriend, I'd be leaving marks all over you, just to make sure every other man who got near you knew you were mine."


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10864
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed this? I f**ing loved it!!! :*

 
A Thousand Leaves by flabella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 609]
Summary:

Isabella Swan met the Cullens when she was a child, growing up as Alice's best friend. Not every Cullen liked Bella, though. Alice's older brother Edward took it upon himself to make Bella's trip toward adulthood a nightmare. Everything changes when Edward is sent to prison for the murder of Bella's mother, Renee.

Special thanks to crazyj9girl for the top banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 182060
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2010 Updated: June 21, 2011


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: What Goes Without Saying

Sh*t  f*ck sh*t....!

At the end I almost had a stroke!

 
Point Taken by pencilitout Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

I can hear thoughts if I touch someone. But I'd never hated my 'gift' more than when I touched Edward Cullen for the first time. Figures, the most beautiful boy in the world wants to kill me. Why? I have yet to find out. Run little girl, run.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21833
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Utensils From Hell

Well, this chapter was better than the previous ones. Not that they are bad, they are interesting. But there was a lot of filling, of unnecessary things. I loved the humor though ;)

This chapter was good, I liked it ;) And you managed to show a lot with just a few words - perfect! ;)

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Alarm Clocks and Supervision

Wow, that was interesting!

At the beginning I laughed so much, my man insisted on reading him what was so funny XD The alarm clock situation was hilarious! And the way you mixed the fun stuff with the actual story was very good *thumbs up*

And yes, WHAT are the Cullens? Can't wait for the next update :)

 
Summary:

bannerVampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.

Banner by Libby at thetwilightawards.com


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Friends and other enimies

"You do realize I'm not a hamster…"  Oooooooh, that chapter was great XD

And Rose.... I love that girl ;)

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Dead people and other uninvited guests

Loved it so far. I wait to see James getting his ass kicked (if I could, I would have kicked him myself) ;)

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Falling and other things to fear

Aaaaaagh! I hate "cliffy" stuff! But... I love the story, so I forgive you :P

Merry Christmas, and sorry, can't help about the ponu XD

 
Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Why We're Here and Other Tragedies

Girl, I absolutely LOVE your Rose XD

 
47 Days by netracullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 465]
Summary:

Bella and Edward had never met until they spent 47 days in hell together. They can trust no one, except for each other. Now they're home, and trying to heal as they fight for the normality they always took for granted. Lang/Lemons


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 102229
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was.... wow!!! When is the next update?

When I start thinking again I'll write more normal review...



Author's Response:

that was a good 'wow', i hope?

netra
xox

 
Summary:

 

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night.

Because of the mysterious circumstances surrounding his childhood abandonment, Edward is raised and adopted by Carlisle Cullen - former F.B.I. agent and legend in his field.

Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice.

Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man.

Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward.

Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself?

Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready!

This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon.

Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery 

Warning This story is going to be very violent, and a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason.

Banner by me and Amazing Blinkie by Betti Gefecht


Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 38860
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2010 Updated: February 09, 2011


Reviewer: ina_vi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Disguises

The story is great! Congrats for your work with Bella and Edward - both are very well portraied ;)





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