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Immortal by cakes4547 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]

What do all of our favorite characters have in common?  They were once human. They were normal people with lives of their own that were somehow interrupted by a change.  A change that would make them immortal.  This is a story that looks at what the circumstances were surrounding each ‘changed’ character from The Twilight Saga.  Life has presented them with a different way to live, whether it is after waking up, phasing, or being born.  Some chose the way of life, but most did not.  They are changed forever. 


Includes appearances by: Carlisle. Jasper. Edward. Esme. Rosalie. Emmett. Alice.  Sam. Jared. Paul. Embry. Jacob. Quil. Leah. Seth. Colin. Brady. Renesmee. Bella.

My awesome, wonderful, kickass banner was unfortunately NOT done by me.  It was made by the lovely ReachingAsIFall, and you can find her blog here:

Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 117631
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: September 12, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Carlisle : 1663

Just waiting for more character chapters! You have written all the others so well and I hope you are coming back to write more!

I will wait and watch for the alert that says this story has been updated and then I will do a happy dance and read the chapter and then wait  for the next one...  :o)

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sam : June 2005

Just discovered "Immortal". WOW! I really like this. This is just the type of story I love. I love to read about the characters and their pasts and/or futures. I am a canon gal and love any plotline that sticks with the characters being vampires. But, I also really like what you are writing here. I look forward to the next chapters.

I am so happy I found a new story that grabs my interest. I don't really like the human takes on the story and there are so many variations here on what happens to ExB as humans and I really don't care for them.  This is just the best collection of stories about the characters I have come across in a very long time.

I so look forward to your next chapters. I can't wait to read them.

Thanks so much for sharing your talent and creativity with us! We get the pleasure of reading very good fan fiction without all the sameness of so many other stories here. Thank you for a truly unique look at the characters!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I remember before I began writing it that I wished there was a story like this out there, and...boom!  the idea just hit me.  I'm so glad that people are really liking it.  I'm hard at work on the next few chapters - the wolves!  They're so much fun to write, and I hope people love them as much as I do.  Can you tell I'm team everyone?  haha.  Thanks again for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Paul : September 2005

Oh, what a great chapter! I am so glad you updated. I was looking forward to another chapter about another of our favorite Twilight characters! Thank you for a wonderfuil chapter! As always, I am already excited for the next one! LOL. I always want more. I cannot be satisfied with one chapter. I am greedy when it comes to great stories like yours!

Excellent writing, very imaginative and creative! You are a great writer! I love the story and how you write it! :)

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Great!  so glad you enjoyed it again!  I'm hard at work on Embry, I promise : )

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Jared : November 2005

Excellent per your usual great writing and storytelling abilities... Another WOW! chapter!

I really like this story. Can you tell? LOL...I  always watch my emails for another update notice for this story when I am checking  my  inbox for the day!

Exceptional storytelling and writing!

Disney vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you!  You always leave me such nice reviews!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!  I'm hard at work on Embry and Jake, they will be up next!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Jared : November 2005

I love this collection of tales about our favorite Twillight characters. I am looking forward to the next installment. You write so well and the idea of telling each of their back-stories is an excellent one. All of the stories have been so very interesting and so excellently written. I look forward to the rest of the characters.

I have two quibbles though, not a real huge:. In Chapter 9, Paul's story, there was a bit if confusion on my part. In the author's notes, you say that a vampire, some vampire like Laurent or Victoria may have come to investigate the scent and were put off by the scent of wolf and moved on. But the timing is not quite right in context with the story. The wolves were many in number by the time the nomads Victoria and Laurent, came through looking to get Bella. This was after James was killed in Twilight. We don't see many wolves phasing until New Moon.   

Paul was the second wolf to phase in New Moon. Just a bit of timing quibble for me. I guess Victoria or Laurent COULD have passed by, or even some other nomad vampire that he smelled, but what would Victoria have been doing there without James? They were inseparable at the time of this incident in the story. I am just trying to track the time period down in the story when Paul would have phased and that would have been early New Moon.  

As for the other quibble,  in the author's note you make reference  to the fact that Paul, and I quote you, " is awoken by a sweet strange smell."

However in the text of the story, you call it a different scent,, and I quote you, "He jerked awake several timers in the night when a slightly SOUR, sickening smell wafted into his nose." 

When I first read that in the text of the chapter,  I kinda thought maybe a vampire was nearby, and then said to myself,  "Naw, a vampire would have smelled sweet and cold to Paul". So I then thought it was maybe a bear, wild boar or some other large animal had wandered close to Paul in the night, bringing with it a sour smell that animals in the wild can have,.    

But you confirmed my first assumption that it was, indeed, a vampire, when I read in your author's note that it was a sweet smell, though you describe it in the story as a sour smell.  Just a little quibble about the mistake of calling it a sour the text of the story.


I really LOVE this fan fiction. It is one of my Top 3 favorites right now. It is so good and I love seeing the characters' lives through your eyes/imagination and I think you have it pretty right on. Your stories for them seem to fit each character as you write them. I really like this and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s). I hope the next one is coming soon. I cannot wait to read the next cahpter and those aftetr it. It is soooooo.... good.

As far as who I would like to see more of, I think Jasper and Alice are my two faves in that order. So definitely more of Jasper or Alice or Jasper/Alice. It would be fun to see the whoole meeting of the two through your eyes and imagination! 

Excelklent writiing! Excellent imagination/creativity.  One of the Top 3 best stories on Twilighted! Just phenomenal work! You get 10 out of 10 in the ratings! :o)

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Jared : November 2005

Hoping for more chapters soon. This is a marvelous and wonderful collection of tales about our favorite Twilight characters. I love what you are writiing. It is so fuin to rerad  and wonder about the next character. I am looking forward to more chapters soon. :o)

Disney Vampire

Say It Softly by FirstLove15 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]

Takes place after Breaking Dawn. Bella learns that Edward had a fiance who died with everyone else from the infuenza, however Carlisle has been holding a secret for a long time and she may not be gone after all. This is a true test for Bella and Edward but what is waiting on the horizon will the shake the foundations of their world.



Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Nessie, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 19671
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The End For Now

Excellent story!   I love stories with interpersonal drama. That makes for a better story because the characters have to really be themselves. Stories where everything is hunky dory with the characters and their love is so sweet and trouble free are just not as interesting to me. Plot is very important and you have covered that very well here!

Excellent writing, creative and imaginative plotline, one that is interesting to read. Great job!

The only thing I would have wanted is a longer story! :) (cause it was so good and I want more, more, more!!!) :)  I might add an Epilogue to tell about where Claira went and what she did, or make that a sequel! Yes!


Sequel possible? Maybe?  Claira's life after this story. OR...

A Prequel...Take us back to when Edward and Claira were human and were engaged. Tell us about their relationship and the flu and how they were separated in detail. Those would be great stories as follow-ups to this great story. Just a thought... and me hoping that it is possible... :)

Disney Vampire



"As I approached my prey, the human simply stared. I tilted my head as the wide blue eyes watched me intently. They didn't try to scream or run, nor did they attempt to fight. They were mystified, dazzled by my unnatural beauty. No one was scared by something beautiful... I bared my teeth and took a step closer."

Follow Alice Cullen through her long and unusual life, from her mysterious rebirth, finding Jasper, and finally to finding the family she had always seen in her visions.

The only question is: what are you betting on?


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8320
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2010 Updated: July 13, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Found

Just found your story and I like it! I love Alice , so a stroy about her makes me happy. I look forward to following her story along and see what her path leads her through to the point she finds Jasper and then, the Cullens. This is going to be a favorite of mine, I can tell.

Excellent writing skills, great plot and a wonderful story already in 4  chapters. I can't wait to see where we go with Alice on her travels to Jasper and the Cullens. I look forwrd to the trip! :o)

Disney Vampire


The Cullen family seem to relax now that Renesmee is no longer in danger of death and the Volturi. But what happens when years pass and the Volturi once again become interested?

Alice sees various visions of what she believes to be the same person, could this be the nail in the coffin for the Cullen family or is this something to look forward to?

Enjoy a post-Breaking Dawn fanfic from various points of view and romantic smut in further chapters.

Rated NC-17 for sex, violence, and some language.

Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 69489
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2010 Updated: March 01, 2015

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Birthing Negotiations

I am just waiting for that alert in my inbox that tells me I have another new chapter for this story! I love this story so much and am waitng for a new chapter or chapters, I should say... :o)

Please update soon. I am looking forward to more chapters!

I really love your story and it is so well written it deserves to be continued and completed.


Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I will update as soon as I is just in the way right now LOL!

Summary: Feature

Single father Edward watches his daughter taken before his eyes, along with stranger Bella during a routine trip to the grocery store. Follow him as he searches, and Bella struggles to survive under a delusional madman's torment.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 70724
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2010 Updated: June 21, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Day 21 August 6th Part 1

I hope you are going to come back to this wonderful story and finish it. I miss reading new chapters for it. PLEASE come back and write more of it! SOON? PLEASE? :O)

Disney Vampire



Not all is as it seems when the Edwards from two different universes find a journal that can bridge the gap between them. Things become even stranger when the reality of one universe starts to bleed into the other, since in one universe vampires exist, and in the other universe, they do not.

Until now.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 79576
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I found this story and favorited it a while ago, but never had the chance/time to get to read it. I finally had the time, and I must say, it is very fascinating and so interesting. I really like it.

The title page says it is not done yet, so I am wondering if there is an Epilogue to come or if it just has not been marked as finished.

At any rate, it is very good and you write so well. Great story! :o)

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Hi hon!  No, this isn't finished yet.  Not an Epilogue, we're still in the middle of the story :-)

I Love Myself by Kimmydonn Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]

An alternate Twilight Saga emanating from the contest, "The End Is Only The Beginning." Changing Chapter 3 of New Moon to one where Bella sees through Edward's horrendous lie changed the path Bella's life took. Her new self-awareness and self-appreciation change her relationships and what she wants to get out of her life. Due to a change in my personal life and time committments, this story will not be completed here. For the complete version, please go to



Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 48024
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2011

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just found this story, just now, and I can't wait for more chapters. Bring em on ASAP! I will be following this story now! You write well and the plotline is great! I just love it. Fun story to read!

Excellent writing and plotline! Great job! :o)

Looking foward to the update alerts in my inbox!

Disney Vampire

P.S. (Mickey Mouse will be watching you to make sure you write more chapters! lol...and Goofy too! :0)





Lizzie Black left La Push the moment she turned 18, determined to outrun the pain that she felt after her Dad and siblings were hit straight on by a drunk driver and killed. Three years later she's returned, having been called home after her mother committed suicide. While packing up her Mom's room she finds her bucket list, along wth letters to Edward. She decides to do all of the things on the list her Mom never got to, finishing it for her.

Edward Cullen has lived as a nomad since he left Bella. His family and he have little contact, but that could be about to change. Who knew one little list could mean so much?


Warning: This story deals with suicide and mental health issues. If that upsets you, please don't read.



Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 28753
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2011

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Hugs

Wowee Wow Wow! as Christopher Walken says in a bit on SNL! WOW!

I just found your story and I see that I have been missing something very special. It is fortuitous that I found it tonight.

I am so happy that I did find it. Now I will not miss another excellent chapter of this heart warming, yet tear jerking story of yours. This is a wonderful story, told so originally with Bella's letters opening each chapter. What a great way to start a chapter! So ingenious! It is a great way for us to get know Lizzie Black and Edward and how he and the Cullens react to Lizzie.

What a heartfelt tale of love lost and found...You, my dear  are an excellent writer and it shows in this amazing tale through your excellent writing skills and your ingenious way of telling the story and the plotline itself!! I think your opening of each chapter with a letter  from Bella is so different and original and, so much the heart of the story. It is these letters that lead us through the story of Lizzie, Edward and the Cullens. What a wonderful tribute to Bella to tell her story this way.

I cannot tell you how much I love this story already, only having found it tonight. I read quickly, but am not through all of the posted chapters yet, but I have read a good portion of them. I hope you continue this way of opening the chapters and telling this story. It is marvelous and your very own sucessful secret to an excellent story.

I give you 10 stars out of ten. I wish I could  give you 20 stars out of ten!  That si just hhow good  this story is... :o)

Disney Vampire :B 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy the story, especially the letters.

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Hugs

Oh my Gosh! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. I am looking forward to more chapters! I am hoping that Lizzie and Edward end up together! That would be cool and actually quite fitting. They would be a great pair! Lizzie is very independent and unlkie Bella holds her own with Edward, so I could see a very good pair there. I am hoping that they end up together! :O)

I so need to have more of this story. Update soon, PLEASE!  Oh, please!!!!  


Disney Vampire :B

Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. -winks- Thanks for reviewing!


The Last Breath Banner

It’s 1944 and a young American, Edward, awakes in a field hospital outside of London. He was injured two months earlier during Operation Cobra near Marigny, France. Upon regaining consciousness, he immediately begins to ask for his wife, Bella, who was working at The European Theater of Operations (ETOUSA) in London. Sadly his physician tells him that his wife was injured in an air raid and did not survive her injuries. Our young hero vows to find his wife refusing to even consider the very real possibility that she’s dead. This sets Edward on a journey over two continents, through the dangers of war and espionage to find the love of his life, forgiveness for his past, and a joy he never even knew existed.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 152420
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: June 17, 2011

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ETOUSA

First of all, I LOVE your story! I love stories set in a historical time or great upheavels in our history. World War II was a very interesting and intense time in our world. 

True story:  Both my mom and dad were in the service in WWII, my dad in the army in Europe and my mom in the Coast Guard in the USA. They married while they were in the service and have been married for 67 years and are still together and alive! A war wedding and a remarkable love! <3

I have studied and read so much about the war and it is a subject that is an excellent backdrop to any love story!  And to put two of our favorite characters right in the action is genius for a storyline. Great plot. Great writing! Great imagination! You are a great writer! I LOVE this.

 A few questions for you:  Are they going to be vampires in this story? Will Bella turn up as a vampire and Edward is the one to be changed? I know these will be dealt with in the story most likely, so you don't have to answer and I will read to see where you take this. I noticed it said AU, but did not say Human or Vampire. I am curious, or am I getting ahead of myself and that is to be part of the exposition of the story? I just like this so much already.

I also love the way you add historical information at the end of the chapters. It is so refreshing to see REAL research done for the stories and it makes that more real. Good job!

You are writing what is going to be one of my favorite stories, I can tell. The style, the setting, the characters and your excellent talent at writing has already drawn me in and I am HOOKED!

Excellent work! I await your next chapter and the one after that and the one after that get the picture. I will be following this story waiting for each chapter with bated breath!

Thanks for sharing this story and your talent with us!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Hi Disney Vampire,

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I'm blown away by your review.  I love hearing stories about WWII that have been passed along by friends and family. 

Now let me get to your questions, The Last Breath will be an all human story, sorry if I didn't clarify that correctly in the description. 

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I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far.  I'm so happy you like the research too.  It takes quite a bit of time to find the right websites but I think it's worth it.  The view into world history helps me write a better more realistic story.  Trust me on this, the best part of linking history to TLB is yet to come. 


Thank you for reading and reviewing,

-First Blush

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Sterile

Thanks for the update! I was very happy to see the alert in my inbox this morning! What a treat! I have a smile on my face now! :o)

YOU Rock!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

The next chapter will be up soon.  Thank you so much for sticking with me.  In chapter six we'll get so see more of Edward's memories of their life before he left for the front.  Their love story was strong then and his devotion to her is even stronger now.

Thanks again for the feedback,

-First Blush


We've all thrown our hands up in the air in frustration at the gap that was Bella and Edward's honeymoon during Breaking Dawn.  What happened after Edward pulled Bella into deeper water?  What was Edward thinking?  NC-17 just to be safe, canon, one-shot, lemon rinds

Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8743
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

There was only YUM! :o)

Serenity by Twivamp Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 147]

There have been many stories about Alice and Jasper's journey to the Cullens from 1948 to 1950, but not one quite like this one. This is Jasper's dark journey about learning to trust and love and that war is not how vampires have to live life. Told in both Alice and Jasper's POV's. Kept as cannon as possible.

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Other Character, Peter, Rosalie
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 32735
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2010 Updated: September 24, 2010

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: No Luck

Thanks for the update. I was looking forward to the next chapter! And an excellent chapter it is! I really like this story!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it! Hopefully the next chapter will come faster!


~Twivamp :)

Eternal Horizon by Kateration Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]

It has been 17 years since Isabella Swan’s death, and young Adora has moved to Forks, igniting gossip everywhere she turns. As Adora slowly unravels the clues that lead her down a path riddled with even more questions, she begins to realize that it seems to be more than coincidence, drawing her farther away from the life she knows, and into a world, she does not understand. The closer she gets to the truth, the more her own destiny becomes irrevocably entwined with the girl that haunts the small town. She wonders why everything that’s happening revolves around the mysterious Edward Cullen, and why he seems to hold the key to the answers she’s spent a lifetime searching for.


This story takes place 19 years post Breaking Dawn, and although at first, to those of you who love the classic Edward and Bella love story, it may seem that the initial plot isn't heading in that direction, I promise you it is. I perfer to stick closer to the characters Stephanie originally created.

I consider this story to be pretty much the unofficial 5th installment of the Twilight Series, it takes place after Breaking Dawn, it is 100% canon, which means that it does NOT deviate from the storyline of the books, although in the first few chapters it doesn't seem like it, but trust me, it does.

Edward still loves Bella.

And so on, also for:

Alice and Jasper

Rosalie and Emmett

Carlisle and Esme

and Renesmee and Jacob.

I did not touch these pairings or alter me.

Vampires are fantastical creatures, and Bella's luck is just too bad for them to have just lived happily ever after, plus...there were a lot of things that Breaking Dawn did not all. Like what happened to poor Leah? How did Jake and Renesmee end up? What about Edward's belief in his soul, or rather lack there of, what happened to that? Is Rosalie going to be a *insert bad word that rhymes with witch* forever? Won't the Volturi come after them again? What happens to the humans decades later? How long did the Cullen's stay in Forks after Bella's change?

There were A LOT of unanswered questions, so I wrote Eternal Horizon to answer them.

It's written with 99.999999% no grammatical errors, because I'm sure some managed to somehow get past me, and in my opinion, it's written as closely to the original books as I possibly could, I studied how Stephanie wrote and tried to make the flow of Eternal Horizon similar.

The summary that I originally went with hasn't seemed to garner enough interest to do this story justice, so here's an excerpt for you:



The memory made anger flush though me. “You should have been frightened.” I spat bitterly. “But it seemed as if no matter what I said to you—no matter what I did—you were utterly incapable of fearing me.” I gritted my teeth in frustration—irritated by the fact that perhaps my hallucination may have been correct. Maybe there wasn’t anything that I could have ever done. “What a poor excuse for a vampire I was,” I groaned, “unable to frighten one tiny, fragile human girl—the laughing stock of monsters everywhere, I’m sure.” I sighed remembering Emmett’s teasing—

Maybe you’re not as scary as you think you are,” he had chuckled. “I bet I could have frightened her better than that.”

“And, maybe, I should have let him—seeing as how I had proved to be utterly incapable of doing so.” I muttered sourly. I imagined that somewhere Bella was frowning petulantly at me for saying that—it made a smile tug at the edge of my lips. She never had liked me insisting upon what I’d thought was best for her—even if I’d only been trying to protect her.


Please read and review, just take five seconds and tell me what you think, PLEASE?

And maybe once you read it, you can think of a better Summary that will get people's attention.


The main characters herein depicted, and the rules of the world that they are bound in, are not of my creation. They do not belong to me. They belong to Stephanie Meyer. She created a universe for us all, where we might lose ourselves in the untamable desires and dreams of our own hearts. I am very grateful for all she has given us, for she has breathed a new hope into lives, shrouded by the attempts our society has made, to repress our imaginations, and limit our struggle to reach far and beyond the boundaries of our own fragile existence. I will claim no credit for the inspiration of a lifetime, I will however say, that it was my own fatally flawed dissatisfaction with the closing fragments of the world she created, that spawned the words, of which I have carefully pieced together here, in my own refusal to accept the fact that Edward and Bella’s story was complete. After all, they are vampires, and vampires are immortal. Moreover, as long as they exist, so does their love. And if they cease to exist; does their love cease to exist too? Or is love eternal, undying…forever?

I present to you, my own vision of Stephanie Meyer’s world, where faith knows no bounds and love never dies.

Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 182334
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2010 Updated: January 04, 2015

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Spoons and Forks

This is intriguing! I want to know so much more. I will have to read each chapter as you post! I look forward to seeing where this goes. I particularly like the part where Adora sees the vision of swirling water... A slight glimpse of what is to come that tells us why she is already attched to the Cullens.

Could that be a vision of a past death? When Bella jumped off the cliff? And maybe Adora is reincarnated from Bella? Just me trying to figure things out already...I want to know! You have to continue this story so we can find out!I want to read it the way you have seen it and I want to savor every moment of the story.     

I really want to know more. Please post a new chapter VERY SOON! I like this a LOT! I want to read more...NOW! hahahaha

GREAT story! Great writing! Great imagination and creativity! Just excellent!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.

I also love that fact that you're intrigued enough to try to figure out what all the little signs mean.  Hopefully the next chapter will be up in a few days. I look forward to more awesome reviews!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Charlie

I really love this story so far! It is well written and very imaginative. I always look mfor an update in my email. though I know you can't possibly update EVERY day. I wish.....

You have spurred my interest and pulled me into this great story about eveyone's favorite Twilight characters. I am going to follow this tale all the way through...through hopefully many, many chapters and a wonderful epilogue, but that is way in the future!

Thanks for sharing your talent with us! =O)

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

I will hopefully have the next chapter posted before tonight, otherwise it will have to wait until tomorrow seeing as how everyone will more than likely be watching Eclipse tonight. : )

Unfortunetly if I do update, I'll have to wait for it to be approved, so you can always check out my story on @

Hope you've enjoyed the chapters so far!


Suspicions 1


Suspicions 3


Geeky Bella has a theory. She suspects that popular Edward Cullen is not who he claims to be. Being one not to let things go, she decides to investigate. Are her crazy speculations true or will she be left feeling foolish? Most importantly, how far is she willing to go to prove herself accurate? OOC


Huge thanks to palewhite_n_icecold, babistarr and writegina2 for their awesome banners!


Suspicions 2


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 77833
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2010 Updated: April 09, 2011

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: You Won't See Me Going Up Against Any Windmills

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Two chapters in as many days! This IS a TREAT! Wowee Wow Wow!!!

I am happy. I love this story as you well know by now. :oP

I am leaving on Thursday to take a train trip (Amtrak's California Zephyr) to California. We leave Denver's Union Station and arrive at Colfax, California a day and a half later! Colfax is a whistleI LOVE the train! We will be visiting my parents who are 88 yrs old. And I will love seeing them. I miss my folks a LOT, so this will be good for my heart and theirs too. My dad has been ill and I need to see him.

But anyway, they have dial-up in their house. They live out of town and in the woods, so I will be checking and pounding  my fist on the counter as the computer takes 15 minutes to load. lol...I will try to catch up with all my stories, especially this one, but if not, I will definitely have a treat to come home to. More chapters of this story! That will be the best homecoming present, if I cannot get on my dad's pooter. It is a little ancient and has a few foibles...

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S !!!!  I am so happy for you. Boards are not easy to pass and you ROCKED them! I am proud of you! :o)

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Strange Case Of Dr. Swan And Mrs. Cullen

I hope you are not finished wiht this story. it is so much fun and well written, it is a joy to read. I hope you are coming back to write more chapters and finish it. I have been looking for updates, sadly there have been none. I hope that you come back VERY SOON and post more chapters. Please?

Looking forward to more of this marvelous, well written and outstanding tale.

Please come back and write moe. I love this story and want to read more. I look forward to where you are able go with it. You have such a great imagination and it has been sheer joy and laughter reading the chapters  you have posted already. But we need more. We readers are waiting for more.

One of the Top 3 stories on the site. This is a masterpiece, so well written and funny. Looking forward to the day we can read more of it.


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: It's Imperative To Keep Eye Protection On At All Times


This has to be the funniest story I have ever read. I found it not long ago and just finished with this last posted chapter. I was literally laughing so hard  the tears were running down my face and my stomach hurt. You have a real talent for writing humor!

Oh man, there is so much in the this story I want to talk about...I guess I will start with Bella herself...In many fanfics we get a real one dimensional character in Bella. Not with yours!  :o)

Your Bella is endearingly lovable, cheerful, optimistic, and has no social skills whatsoever. But, she really is such a three dimensional character that she literally leaps off the screen as I read her story. This is by far the best Bella I have ever read. She is hilarious, especially with Charles! heh heh heh...:oP

I am so glad that Jacob's kiss did not land correctly. Am I the only one who really is rooting for Edward to give Bella her first real kiss? That has to happen. She is so great with Edward. I can really see people like that. Edward is funny too. He is a quiet but, funny Edward. I like him. They are so fun together. I wonder what he will think when he finds her little red book. hehehehehe...

And as far as the  Cullens being vampires in this story? I don't know.It isd hard to tell so far. I know nwhen Bella hit Edward she thought she hit a wall, so maybe he is hard like marble. But then she corects herself, not a wall cause it had lumps (hahahahaha...)so I don't know. I hope they are for Bella's sake. It would give her some real self confidence if she was right about them. Her self awareness is taking a big hit wit all the fails she encounters on her journey to discover the truth! :o)

And Charlie...oops, I mean Charles! Those two talks! Poor guy. I bet he had NO idea that he had such an infomed daughter! LOLOLOLOL...The whole sex conversation was a real hoot. True humor, laughing on the floor crying holding your stomach humor...  :o)

Man, this story is great! It is my favorite story right now and holds a place on my YTop 5 storieds evcer.

Thanks for sharing your writing and talent wiht us. I hope that everything bodes well for your boards, if they did not happen yet. If they did, all the best to you.

I will be waiting for the next installment of this most excellent story. YOU CAN WRITE! MOre! Soon! (as you can)

Disney Vampire :o)

Author's Response:

LOL. I don't even know where to begin. This is one hell of a review. :)

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. It's good to know that when I write the chapters, other people are finding it funny. I have wondered, when writing, if things are just funny to me. LOL

I absolutely love writing this Bella. To hear that this is the best Bella you have ever read...well, that has to be one of this best compliments I have ever heard. Thank you. : D

As for the Cullens being vampires. It seems a lot of people are going back and forth on that one. It will still be a little bit before we find out that answer. *Muhaha*

Thanks for wishing me luck on my boards...I passed! yay!

Thank you for a wonderful review (and probably the longest I have ever received) lol



Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: It's Imperative To Keep Eye Protection On At All Times

Oh, please come back and write more. This is my Number 1 favorite story and I need more. I laughed so hard at Charlie and Bella's sex talks, I cried and my stomach hurt!

I have to have more of this fabulous story. You really are a phenomenal writer and know how to write humor. That is quite a talent, since real humor is very dificult to write. You have talent and this story is terrific!

More please...I hope we get a new chapter soon. I am just waiting and watching for an alert in my inbox that a new chapter is up! Hope that is very soon!


Disney Vampire

Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: You Won't See Me Going Up Against Any Windmills

Just waiting for more chapters! I cannot wait to see what you have planned for more experiments. Poor Edward! Love this story!

Please, Please, update soon! :o)

Disney Vampire



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