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Penname: Disneyvampire [Contact]
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Summary:

Edward's working the night shift, trying to gain experience before his first year of medical school. He might learn more than he expected.

 

Walter Cannon's Theory, Expanded Hot Banner Action

 

 

http://www.sytycw.com/?p=1324


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 62613
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Your first two chapters are so excellent, that I am looking forward to future chapters with bated breath! This is going to be one of those one in a million spectacular stories that sticks with you. I can tell. I am looking forward to each and every chapter coming up in this story! I have favorited it, so I can get the alert! I do NOT want to miss one word of this tale.

Excellent, just excellent! A pure pleasure to read...You are a tremendous writer and I am so glad I found your story! I have been looking for a really, really good story for a while, a story that will grip me in it's plot and wring me out at the end! looks like I found the one!

Please update as soon as is humanly possible for you. I want to read more of this tale! I am so anxious to get into the meat of the plot! :D         Sooo... good!  10/10 

Disney Vampire   =O)

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am so looking forward to an update to this story. I began reading it when you started posting it and I miss it. It is one of the best stories here and I am hoping so much that you will come back and update and write more chapters. This is such a wonderful, readable, interesting story and I want, no need more!

You are one of the best writer's here and your story is a in a class above the rest. It needs to be written and finished. Please come back! I would love to read more of this great story! :)

Disney Vampire

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh., I see that it IS done, BUT...We need the Epilogue anyway....I hope your dissertation went well and you are doing what you want to in life. You certainly are a phenomenal writer!

I rarely read Author's Notes...I know I should, I would find out what I need to know that way...but I I will learn my lession from this...Still....please to an Epilogue!!!! I love this story and want it tied up....

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Where de epilogue?  hehehehe

Waitin for ther epilogue.....for awhile now....LOVE THIS TALE...One of my faves. Want the Epilogue...kay?

Disney Vampire

 
The Half-Breed by Athey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Alternate Universe where Edward is a half-breed human-vampire and the biological son of Carlisle and Esme. The Cullens move to Forks and Edward meets Bella Swan. ExB AU


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 58286
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found this story! I like it a lot! I am going to put it on my favorites sio I can get alerts when you update. I don;t want to miss one chapter of this story!

You are a great writer and I like your plotline a LOT! What an interesting story to tell. I look forward to more chapters! Post soon! I will be waiting for the next chapter!

Nice, nice first two chapters! :D

Disney Vampire

 
Endless Pain by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Being Human

I am loving this story already. I am so looking forward to what you do with this story. I will be following along all the way!

Great writing! Excellent storyline! Just awesome! :O)

Disney Vampire

 
Summary:

What if it wasn't bloodlust that drew Edward to Bella in the beginning? What if he had recognized her as his soulmate from the very moment he saw her? This is the story of how a lost soul finally came to be with his one true love.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23043
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Excellent first three chapters! I look forward to reading more of this intriguing tale. You are a great writer and I want to know more about what hapens in this story! I will be following along as tyou write and update!

Excellent start! :D

Disney Vampire

 
Summary:

Edward finds Bella at a different time in her life. The bloodlust is almost uncontrollable. He wants to leave, but can't seem to pull himself away. They both seem to call for each other. What does this mean? Where does this put them for their future?    


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 19947
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Raising a Human Child

This story sounds very good. The first two chapters sound promising to a great story ahead! I am going to favorite it, so I can get updates. I like the sound of an Edward that has a more difficult time controlling his bloodlust. Those stories are always more fun! :D He is more of a vampire in them, and ACTS like a vampire in them.

Excellent start to a great sounding story! I will be following this one!

Disney Vampire

 
Summary:

A mosaic freely drawn from book and movie, wanders into AU as the story unfolds ... ....

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Showing is stronger than telling.  Forks was just like I remember it.  I felt the short little hairs on the back of my neck stand straight on end.  Cut your losses before they can become catastrophic.   “It’s not fair,” I say aloud.   The night wind swirls, lifting the fine surface powder from the tops of the snowdrifts, coating us in diamond dust.  

 


Then weave for us a garment of brightness

 

Moving to Forks, spending the last eighteen months of her childhood with a father she barely knew ... it seemed like a good idea at the time.

 

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A/N about the rating: The narrative in this story ranges between PG-13 (most of it) and R (occasional language and occasional non-graphic reference to mature themes). An isolated technicality in a late chapter has necessitated changing the rating from R to NC-17, however R is a much better measure of the farthest outer limit of what the reader will encounter in this tale.

 

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<3<3<3  and  @};-  @};-  @};-  to  DeliciousDreamer for this beautiful banner ~~

delicious dreamer's lovely banner for garment of brightness

I never in my wildest dreams thought that something I wrote would inspire someone to make something like this.   I am so touched.  THANK YOU DD!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 59050
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2011


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Grendel

I don't think I would call this a real chapter.  Half of it is from "Beowulf" and not your original material.  I would have waited until I had a full-on chapter instead of posting what is really just filler.  Just my opinion.

I am a bit disappointed, only because this is one of my favorite stories, but I would rather wait for the real chapter than filler. I do love this story, very much! :o)

You should know that my criticism comes from a real desire for the "meat" of the story, which is so good, so much better than a short filler like this.

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

Please don't apologize for responding honestly! I actually had considered holding this chapter and incorporating it into the one that followed, but decided against it for two reasons. 

(1) I haven't even got the first word of the next chapter written, and I didn't want to sit on stuff and make an even longer gap between posts.

(2) The content of this short passage completes the 'three monster arc' of Edward's hegira, precipitated by the close encounter with Bella's almost death. It doesn't really mesh up with the action that will follow.

FWIW, the original outline for this "Grendel" chapter had been quite a bit longer, but it didn't write out that way because what I really wanted to convey was just the bare bones action and emotion of his dive and recovery. To have 'padded' it with lengthy introspection or dialogue or even more detailed narrative of the journey was actually feeling like filler to me.

All of which seems to show that people of good wit and good will can look at the same thing and see it differently. To me, that is a lot of what makes writing and reading fun.

Thanks so much for being such an active reader. Hope to feed you better next chapter!

~mkch

 
Lovegame by moneybeet Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Every night she goes about her business ignorant to the man who watches her from her window. She doesn't understand what is coming. She couldn't know the horrors he would subject her to in the name of fascination. E/B, DARK.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15979
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Now THIS story looks intriguing! I am putting it on my favorites, because I don't want to miss any chapters! I am very curious where this story will go. Will it reach the darkest depths? Will it soar to the heavens? I am looking forward to see where it does go! Wow! Already I am hooked, like a fish on a line! Keep writing! I need more!

Great start! Excellent writing! I am looking for another chapter VERY SOON!

Please? :)

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am very excited you are intrigued by where this is headed. It's a real compliment to hear that you're already hooked after only two chapters!!! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Looking forward to an update for this wonderful story. I really like the story and have not seen an update in a while. (sad) I hope you will come back to this tale and write more chapters and a fitting ending for it. It is excellent and you are a good writer! I really like it a LOT!

Please come back to the story, I miss getting a new cahpter from you!

Disney Vampire

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Never Mind....

Me dumb...I just saw the note about it being  posted on Fan Fiction...Oops! I wondered why I had not seen it here. I will check for it there! Thanks!

Disaney Vampire

 
Summary:

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NonVampire. The Cullens are returning from a camping trip and discover a car accident that makes Bella an orphan. Bella becomes a member of Cullens, learning what it means to be a real family, learning each Cullen's adoption story and what love really is. The story includes stories of each Cullens adoption and love story so it's not just Bella/Edward its all the Cullen pairings.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7682
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Tell Me When You Hear My Heart Stop

I love it! More! More! More! This is a great story and I want to read more of it!

You write so well and that is refreshing. I love to read good writing and a good tale as well. You have both! :o)

Disney Vampire

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Tell Me When You Hear My Heart Stop

Just found this story today. I really like what you are writing here. I hope you are going to continue to add chapters. This is a very interesting and wonderful story and I would love to read more of it. Please update soon. I would love to follow the progress of this story and our favorite Twilight cahracters and the situations you put them in! I am very interested to see where this story goes from this point in chapter Three!

I will be watching for an update soon from you! :o) Please update? Pwease... I really like this so far and this story needs to be written and finshed. :o)

Disney Vampire

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Tell Me When You Hear My Heart Stop

Waitring for an update! Hope to see a new chapter soon! This is a great  story and I would like to read more of it. :o)

Disney vampire

 
Coming Home by ladyrip Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

What if Jasper had never met Maria and become a vampire? What would his homecoming after the Civil War have been like?

This was originally written as a one-shot for the For the Love of Jasper Contest.

Disclaimer: There is some content to this story that may be questionable--even shocking--to some readers. Please keep in mind that it should be taken in historical context. Things that are now considered unacceptable and, in many states, illegal were once commonplace and within the bounds of the law. This is one of those situations. I have researched the history of this issue although I cannot reveal it here without ruining the story.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7231
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: May 09, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Unexpected

Oh please update soon on this story. I love any story with Jasper, but when he is in the Civil War times, I cannot get enough of those types of stories. I am looking for an update soon. :o)

This is so good so far and I love it.  MORE PLEASE, VERY SOON!

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

DV, I apologize for taking so long to get back to you! Your review got lost in my emails and I just now found it again while searching for an old email. Eek!

I hope to be able to update soon. So many other characters have been shouting at me lately that Jasper's whispers have not gotten through. Hopefully I can settle to his story soon. Make sure you have this on Story Alert so you get the update when it happens, okay? Thanks for the encouragement!

 
You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 379]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

Banner by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 59810
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: April 01, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Meeting

Oohhhh...Just found your story and I am hooked as I can be.  I LOVE my Twilight fanfics dark and scary!

This one is spooky to be sure and I am drooling like Aro and his Volturi bros' when Heidi comes home with "tourists", cause this story is so mouthwateringly delicious to read and I I just can't wait til the next chapter! Now I gotta clean the drool off my keyboard...ugh!  

I HAVE to keep reading to find out what happens. YOU got me, hook, line and sinker. I am yours til the story ends...hehehe

MORE! MORE! MORE! NOW! NOW! Okay, so I am little greedy, but when I find a story that just pulls me in, I have a hard time being patient, waiting for another chapter. I HAVE to know what is going to happen and how it turns out....Aughhhhhhhhhhh!

Great writing skills and a wonderful plotline. You are creative, original and a strong writer. I give you a big 10 out of 10 on the points review!

Now, get to writing and keep writing until I let you step away from the computer...heeheehee...Keep me hooked and reading til it is 3 in the morning and I hear a strange noise somewhere in the house, OH NO!  I am gonna dive under the bed! Muwahahahahahahaha...You got it, girl!

Disney Vampire :D



Author's Response:

haha, I don't even know where to begin...

Well...first, thanks for the review! It was awesome! I'm glad you like the story and that you're sticking with it to the end. When I first read your review it was really late and it made me laugh aloud.

The next chapter I just sent it to be validated so hopefully, it will be up soon. I already have the next chapter written so I just have to recheck it about 10 times before I can send it in. lol

 

 

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7581]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue: Love and Live

I have to admit, I am a bit of a lurker when it comes to reading some stories. I love to let them play out and them make my comments. I know that it would be a joy to the writer if I had reviewed much more, but I like to make my review count. And this is one of those stories, that I had to read and read before I could make a review. That is not a bad thing in this case. 

I have followed this story from it's inception to the Epilogue you have now posted (sadly all good tales have to come to a finish here...). This has been quite a ride of a tale, I must say. I have enjoyed reading your story and you write impeccably. You have a real talent for the written word and it is a joy to read a story that is not only well wrritten, but has a great story to tell as well.

This is one of my very favorite stories here, or any other fanfic site, for that matter. I have read hundreds upon hundred of stories at many fanfic sites and this story is Top Notch!  It is definitely in my Top 5 favorite Twilight oriented fanfics! 

Since I am retired, young, actually, I have a LOT of free time and I love to read fanfics. So I have tallied up at the minimum a thousand stories read...maybe more...None written by myself however...I have not gotten the itch to write one yet, though I do write other things. I want to have a very original plot and a story to back up that plot and so far, I have not thought of one yet that I want to spend time with writing. One must want to spend time with the story and characters. I have not gotten that inspiration yet!

Back to your story and my review of it... It has a gripping plotline that never slows down and keeps one on the edge of the seat. Each of your chapters is well laid out  and each chapter follows the last so naturally. It is a very well thought out tale that grabs one from the beginning and does not let go until every last emotion is wrung from the reader at the end.  You have written a very fine story and I cannot say enough good about it. I recommend it to all my fanfic reading companions and they love it as well.

Quite simply, I love this story. I also love your style of writing and hope to read more of what you write.

Do you have plans to write more fan fiction stories? They do not have to be prequels or sequels, Heaven fobid, but new original tales of our favorite Twilight characters would be delicious to consume! :o)

I just love your writing style and would read another story by you in an instant if you choose to write more tales for those of us who love the Twilight characters and your way of putting them into plots and showing what they can do at your writer's hand, creativity and imagination!

I look forward to more tales by your hand. If you choose to write more, we will be a better for it.

Thanks for sharing your talent and story with us. It was a real treat.  :o)

I can only ask, more please?

Disney Vampire

 



Author's Response:

THanks for your thought out and LONG review!  I appreciate all of your comments!  I definitely have other stories on the horizon.  You can find links to all of them on my blog. http://shaysavage.blogspot.com/

This is the one I'm going to focus on now  - http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=12466&index=1

Thanks again for reviewing!

 
Summary:

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After a rough morning and being stood up for a lunch meeting, structured and focused Bella Swan meets the passionate and challenging Edward Cullen. A daily writing prompt series hosted by Fictionista Workshop.

Thank you to Dahlia Black for the amazing banner. You can find more of her fabulous work here: http://www.dahliablackthings.blogspot.com/?zx=34b750a388c0481d


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 4848
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: February 12, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prospect

I am just waiting for another chapter of this excellent story. I really like it and hope that you will come back to it to write more chapters and a wonderful ending for it. I hope you don't desert the story. PLEASE update soon! I miss getting chapters for this story!

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

I suck so much and on so many levels.

I hope you can forgive me for my late reply to your review, but more importantly, I hope you found your way to my FFn profile, where this story was completed.

I'm horrible at updating here because I go through the chapters with a fine toothed comb to ensure that they are worthy of validation, as I was beta-less when I wrote this. Additionally, I'm not sure everyone is aware that you can only post one chapter at a time, meaning that each chapter posted has to be approved before you can post another one. If I could just spend a day posting everything, I definitely would. But having to go back every other week, when I'm not even writing this anymore, is hard to remember to do and make time for these days. It's a lame excuse, but it definitely delays things.

I will update all of these chapters, but instead of waiting while I procastinate, I hope you don't mind traveling to the other site so that you don't have to go on continueing to wonder what the hell ever happened with this Edward and Bella.

Thanks so much for reading, caring enough to review, and hoping for the rest. It means a lot!

 
The Mood Has Changed by BellAmy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

It's been 10 years since the Volturi came to Forks to meet Renesmee.  Caius eventually sends Demetri to kill Renesmee and Edward and Alice die trying to save her.  Years later, Bella and Jasper begin to act upon feelings they have been hiding for each other.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3357
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2010


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

 Great start! I think I am going to enjoy this story! More please!

 

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  This is my first Twilight fanfic, so I hope you like the rest of it.  Please keep on with the reviews and let me know if you like it!!

 
Moonless Night by sunray16 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 170]
Summary:

This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Distractions

I am waiting for an update to this great story. It is so well written and is very creative. You have a wonderful imagination! I want to see more of what is going on inside your head with this story I have missed it.

We need another chapter VERY SOON,  SOONER THAN SOON---NOW!!!!! :)

I love this story, I want to read more. I am going crazy wondering what is going to happen next. Please update soon. I miss you and your writing. Please????? Where are you?

Disney Vampire

 
Summary:

Middle class Southampton residents Isabella and Angela Swan are about to embark on the journey of a lifetime. Titanic, White Star's newest luxury liner, is ready to make her maiden voyage across the expansive Atlantic, and the sisters have a direct passage to the states, leaving behind the only home they've ever known to start anew in New York.

The two find excitement, adventure, and so much more during their five days afloat, but one dark and fateful night, and a signal seconds too late, could cause it all to come crashing down, possibly taking away the only things that have ever mattered most to them.

This apparent Ship of Dreams could hold the key to a lifetime of happiness, or to a world of heartache.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Bree, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, James, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 17140
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: July 18, 2012


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Friday April 12th, 1912

I truly love this story. I read each chapter with interest and delight and look forward to what is coming next. I am so very interested in this story, because I love the history and I love the the fact that you have put our favorite Twilight cahracters in it.  I look forward to it so much.

I wish updates would come more often and sooner. It seems they are very few and far between. I would love to see this strory get updates more frequently and sooner. It is just that I want to read the rest of the story and I am so interested in what is going to happen, (we know most of the history of this ship), but I am interested in what happens with the characters.

 

Please update more often if you possibly are able. I will continue to read this wonderful tale of intrigue and romance.

Disnery Vampire

 
Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: April 12th - Evening

I always look forward to a new chapter for this story. I am fascinated by the Titanic and have read so many books and watched many documentaries and films about it. I am fascinated by the history of it.  I also am a lover of Twilight, of course, and it seems natural to put Edward and Bella on the ship and tell a story....that was after all Edward's time in history and he fits into the customs and times of that period of American history quite well. 

You are writing a tale about a fictionalized couple (one of our favorite couples in fiction as a matter of fact) and are combining the couple with a historical event that remains so etched in our shared historical memory. It is being written well and with a great amount of thought and sensitivity to the issue. 

You are handling this sensitive story so very well. You are writing a compassionate story about one of history's great disasters, and handling it with wonderful sensitivity and also a great compassion for the event itself as well as adding our favorite couple to the mix of history and fiction. You are able to show us the history and the fictionalized love story as combined and realistic and are truly blurring the edges so much so that we really feel that Edward and Bella belong in the story of the great ship As we read the story, we feel that we are there as well, a fly on the wall so to speak. You have a real gift of writing and pulling the reader into the story.

I am looking forward to more chapters of this compassionate retelling of the story of the greatest ship and perhaps one of it's greatest loves. :)

I like that you chose this background for a story of our beloved  Bella and Edward.  I think the romance of the love makes the story more compelling. There have been so many fictionalized stories about Titanic and yours is very, very good.

I am just waiting for you to update and keep updating and writing more and more chapters to this wonderful tale of tragedy and love. It is one my very favorite stories here at Twilighted. I just really pray that we are not going to  cry really hard  at the end of this story...hint....hint....I don't want either of them to die or separate.....of course not. A love like theirs theirs spans the centuries and survives the events that shape the history of those centuries

....maybe they can live as vampires after the ship goes down....Hmmmmm.....I know the prologue  foreshadows things, but....anything can happen to them. Maybe the Cullens are already vampires and Edward is among the survivors in the next lifeboat?.....He HAS to be. And maybe  they have to turn Bella too or at least maybe Edward is in the lifebaot even if he is not a vampire and they reunite....just don't let them be apart, or I will cry so hard....

Anyway....Looking forward to your next chapter!

Disney Vampire

 
Summary:

This is my AWESOME BANNER from FrozenSoldier!!! Thanks FS!!!!!

New Banner!!!

Pre-Twilight, a twist in fate allows Alice to remember her childhood.
She remembers when the visions started, her family, and a dark moment of her past that makes meeting Jasper more eventful. Jasper's violent past and restless future beg her to tread lightly around this stranger. Will she be able to dig deep enough to find the gentle soul in there somewhere? Or will she scare herself away from the only one who can help her heal? Will they learn to trust one another and the family in her visions, or will things once again spiral out of control?

 


**Warning- contains allusion to childhood sexual abuse, please don't read if you are sensitive to that topic.

 Banner- Mary Alice, Full of Grace


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 44 Completed: No Word count: 174654
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2010 Updated: December 05, 2012


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Pause

I LOVE this story. I have loved it  since the beginning and I love it even more now. You write so well and this tale keeps me intrigued and keeps me coming back to read it and wanting more and more of it. Great stuff!

I always look forward to the next chapter that is is coming! I relish the thought of having a great story to continue to read. Thanks for sharing it here with us!  :)

Looking forward to the next update!

Disney Vamp



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! What high praise :) I'm sorry it's been so long, but I'm working on getting back on track now that life is settling back down :) I have an idea what direction I want to go so hopefully the next chapter won't be long. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Manda

 
A Brave New World by youngmei Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1035]
Summary:

Edward and Bella

“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”

Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.

All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.

I'd like to thank ms_ambrosia for the awesome banner!


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: No Word count: 182892
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: March 22, 2014


Reviewer: Disneyvampire Signed
Date: October 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Breaking In

Oh Boy! Thank you so much for the new chapter! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story and have been anxiously awaiting more of it. I look forward to more and more of it. It is such a heartbreaking, yet hopeful story. I just love it and cannot wait to see where you take us next. It is always fun and interesting to read.

This is in my Top 3 favorite Twilight fanfiction stories. It is so well written and has such an intricate plotline and has so much in it, so many details and scenarios, yet ties together so nicely. You are doing excellent work with this story!

I am already looking forward to the next chapter! Hope it will be soon! :)

Disney Vampire

 




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