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Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 04:45 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

Funny and touching at the same time. :)

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:59 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

Ok.  I love the begining.  I love the middle.  I love the end.  There's just that little part called the climax that I really hated.  But it made the ends sweeter.  Your writing is so entertaining.  I loved reading this.  I felt so drawn in, even in the crazy dillusions!!  Oh I really liked this 17 year old Edward, and even though I knew you were going to say he really did sleep around cause silly him thought B would want that, my crazy self was hoping that he would be just sly enough to be a gentleman who looked like he wasn't.  Ah it was fun.  Thanks lots for sharing it.

Reviewer: BasketCaseMom (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Epilogue: And On.

I loved the ending! Mature, moving, motivational.

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 8: On

OUCH!

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: The

Enjoying the smart repartee.

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: The

Okay, I like it so far, I am reading on.

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Epilogue: And On.

I was shocked at the abrupt end of everything last chapter. But this one was sublime. Such a wonderful reconnection, where everything was real & open. I really liked this story, such a reflection on the culture of high school days & ways. But also such an affirmation of living as an adult too.

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 8: On

So there is no supernatural explanation for Edwards transformation, just unrequited love,a makeover, hormones and lots of indiscriminate sex. How typically teenaged. I feel sad for them both. How can they have a HEA after this?

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: Edward Cullen

So Bella is starting to 'see' Edward, but is not yet connecting the dots that willreally bring him to her. He isn't an incubus, as she has established. But she hasn't really thought of any more expanations for his transformation

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: The

So Edward is showing Bella that he is different with her than with other girls. He is being as she dreams of him, a mesh of the old & new persona. 

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Myth

The mysique of edward Cullen. So Bella thinks he is a man-whore, but still wants a piece? How is she going to unearth the source of his sexual mojo? Fun time a comin'

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Man

Ah, the Edward I know & love *goes all gooey (in places)*

Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Prologue: The

I'm sure Edward is thinking lots of 'intersting' things. The quiet ones are the deep ones, don't you know. Never discount someone on their looks.

Reviewer: DanySpike (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Epilogue: And On.

The End!! wow, when you wrote the "I'm engaged to Jacob" part I thought for a minute you weren't going to give us a HAE! lol Thank God that wasn't the case!

I do wish you had given us a few chapters of happy Edward and Bella, but I understand the way you finished it and I loved it. I also loved that he understood that he didn't need to change to be what Bella wanted, but that he needed to be himself, because his self was a hell of a self lol Ok, I'm rambling, so I'll just say thank you very much for writting this!

A big hug all the way from Chile :-)

Reviewer: DanySpike (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Man

You're quoting The Phantom of The Opera??!! Oh, God, you have my ENTIRE attention right now! LOL

I'm a huge fan of the Phantom, and so far I'm liking your story very much!

Alright, I'll keep reading :)

Reviewer: Nakago (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Epilogue: And On.

Really enjoyed your story. Thx.

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

While I enjoyed the story, I'll admit, I was kind of disappointed with how little Bella grew up over the course of ten years. Edward had really stepped into himself and realized that he could only be himself, even if he was insecure, he accepted that. He put his past in the past. *round of applause* Bella on the other hand held onto a hypocritical grudge for a decade... and then got over it in an hour of clearer judgement? To me it makes her seem like that silly shallow girl she claimed she no longer was. I dunno, it just seems mismatched.

{I'll be honest, I was throughly offended with her high and mighty act, but probably because its not even been but a few years since high school for me, and even then my first instinct was to try and see every argument from the other person's point of view... something I had to constantly remind myself the other person wasn't going to be doing because they were an angry teenager... I was born so very middle aged :P}

 

Reviewer: Twi_hard_sush (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: The

What is the poem....its beautiful?

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Epilogue: And On.

this last chapter was bloody brilliant i can't say enough about it it taught me a lesson and it was beautiful loved ur little joke in the end *didn't know wat edward was thinking* lol
if u r writing a one-shot will it be for everyone to see and if so where can i read it please tell me when it is up at hmckaylah@yahoo.com pls and thank you
i loved this story when i start a story i have to finish it it my rule and i never brake it bc i wouldn't want someone to do that to me (stop reading it)
thank you for writing this story i loved again lol u r an amazing author u r very detailed and creative very creative lol i look forward to reading more from u i only have an account on Twilighted so if u put something on ffn.net i wouldn't know so that is why i asked u to email me bc then if it is on ffn then i can go on there and read i'm sorry i'm babbling i do that a lot but i love this story so that is why
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

I loved loved loved this story! I am so glad I didn't read it until it was complete. I don't think I could have handled having to wait for more. Bravo!

Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: Myth

that whole rose thing i admit i didnt like it at all, im such a E/B fan that my bias got in the way of even considering him to just be a talented male and enjoy his "mojo" bella should be disgusted completely with him.

Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: The

so far i like this story, i mean i wasnt too fond of what might have happened between him and malory , and stanley or perhaps im getting ahead of myself but all i can think about is nasty std's and crap  oh well. good first few chapters.

Reviewer: alice rules (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

That was not just a story, more like i was watching it happen right in front of my eyes. The characters were funny, story was warm and hilarious and your words just so perceptive and so damn right. Big up the puns! Woohoo! To be honest, you did have me all over the place in the last three chapters, what with that dance fiasco and the anti climax ending there. The brunette at the bar left me utterly confused until i realised that i was thinking of the wrong brunette. ;-) i loved how you did that! Especially how there was no too-sweet ending where everything just worked out magically but more of an open blank page of possibilities where you finally set your little creations free to make their own futures. You are the legend and the myth here. Absolutely loved it. And thank you. :-D

Reviewer: sphb (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

I absolutely love this story!  I'm going to have to reread it as it's been awhile, but it was certainly worth the wait.  Love that your prologue and epilogue end with the same line!  What crazy, crazy things Edward was thinking--indeed!



Author's Response:

Edward's crazy thoughts are what started us, so it's only fitting that they're what we end with. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Dewbedewx (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Epilogue: And On.

This was a really fun story. Thanks for writing it!

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