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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 09:24 AM · On: Harmony

Excellent chapter ... Love that they are talking and that they have people that care enough to support their need to connect emotionally and physically. 


Enjoyingyour story very much. I've missed reading it so was happy to see a chapter posted.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 09:29 PM · On: Harmony

loved it! thanks for the update...i hope they can continue to be strong for each other

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 02:57 PM · On: Addendum

ok babe now i love this story. I hope you give e and b afew days of bliss to strengthen their relationship before you insert the scumbag.

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 02:49 PM · On: Unison

perfect but no protection wow!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 06:10 AM · On: Harmony

Great weekend.  I hope they can survive the Riley roadblock you're planning on throwing them

Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 11:45 PM · On: Harmony


anyways, i took your advice for the chapter before and didn't read it until this one wss posted, i'm glad i waited!  i can tell from her devotion that bella won't leave edward when she hears the truth from riley, but i really hope edward tells her the whole truth soon - like right now!  but then of course he doesn't know that riley is on his way.  and of course riley will get to bella before edward can actually say anything.  and then something will happen that makes edward need to protect bella by saying something really nasty to the press.  aagghhh, i don't like angst. 

i feel really bad for riley, but u know, above all - he could have told this whole story to bella while they were together, who knows how understanding and supportive she would have been.  but its too late now.  no matter how well he meant or how sorry he is - sometimes the choises we make in life are permanent.

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Addendum

AGGGGH!  That is cliffie on steroids from HELLLLLL!  I hope the next chapter doesn't take tooooo long.  :)

Author's Response:

lol, steroids and hell, my fave combination. I wanted to throw confetti at you for being my 800th review!!!! I'm all excited and want a party hat and some streamers... lol


The next chapter is with my beta, so if all goes OK, I'll be posting on the weekend :)


Thanks for reading! Luv BBxx

Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2012 05:48 AM · On: Addendum

Brilliant, but you can't leave it there, more soon please ;-)

Author's Response:

I know I am complete fail on the 'soon' part, but not much longer to wait. Thanks for reading :)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Sadie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Addendum

Oooo I love a good cliff hanger! Can't wait to see what happens next! X

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading honey... next up, well there will be a lot of *bleep*.




Posting soon. Kisses.


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 07:25 PM · On: Addendum

Oh crap!! Man this is just going to be a gigantic mess!! I hope that Bella doesn't let Riley confuse her love for Edward!!

Can't wait to read the next one.


Author's Response:

Hi Rox,


Um, yeah CRAP, MESS and tears.... maybe :)

Next one posting very soon, sorry for the delay. Kisses and hugs.


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 07:14 PM · On: Addendum

Ok Boyd - This I could sort of handle. But please don't make me wait long. I think after reading all that Bella has been through over the past years and even in just her short time in Canada that she has moved on. At least I truly hope so. Plus, she has that electric thing with Edward that she didn't have with Riley. Great chapter. I honestly didn't think you would make Riley and obstacle in the present, rather I figured we were kind of past him. nice twist

Author's Response:

OK, I am a compllete fail, and have made you wait far too long for my reply and the next chapter, but it will post as soon as I get it back from my beta ;)


A twist, or a part of Bella's life that needs to be dealt with? I suppose readers will make their own mind up on this and I can't really comment, so I'll shut up now *zips lips* 


Thanks for reading,


Luv BB xx

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 11:30 PM · On: Addendum

Riley goes to Canada?! Are you serious!? B+E make loads of dramas themself, now with Riley in the picture this story will never end. Poor E+B, they could use a break and just be.


Author's Response:

E + B do need a break to 'just be' (I'm quoting you on this) so I think you may enjoy the next chapter when it posts, i dedicate it to you :)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Tifclark69 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Addendum

Wonderful!! Poor Riley. I was pleasantly surprised by this insight into Riley's experiences. Another movng chapter - you never disappoint!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I think it is a fine line... Half believe he was an absolute jerk...others feel so sorry for him. Wonder what Bella will think, considering she's convinced herself that he never loved her, that he just used her...will her views change if she knows the truth? Or is it too late?


Who would you choose? Edward or Riley?.

Xx lub Bbxx

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Addendum

Yikes! Thank you. What a selfish jerk!!!

Author's Response:

A selfish jerk. I like it, i'm going to quote that! Lol


Thank you for reading xxx


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Cinge (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Addendum

Excellent. Looking forward to next installment. 


Author's Response:

Thank you... Next installment posting this weekend, I hope. Thank you for reading xxx


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Addendum

Wow ! Didn't see that one coming. Loved it Tha texplains a lot but he is still an a-hole. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Lol, sorry to keep you waiting... It was out of the blue, wasn't it....? 


Just waiting for my beta to bring me back the next chappie squeeeeeeeee

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 09:56 AM · On: Addendum

oh no....oh no ..oh no....  I just wow I mean explains so much and makes me feel so bad for Rilet but geeze this is so not what our newly aknowledged loving couple need...Edward would need to keep Bella in the shadows teh way Riley did with her and when Riley steps from the darkness she can choose to be aknowledged and loved or hidden a secret...

Author's Response:

Exactly... What a dilemma for Bella, or is it? Who do you think she should be with? Edward and his life of fame and all the shit that comes with that? Or Riley, a familiar comfort, life in her own country with him and her family and out of the spotlight?


Who would you choose, soulmate or high school crush?



Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 08:35 AM · On: Addendum

Ooohhhh....can't wait for the next update!! What a tangled web we weave...muaaa!

Author's Response:

Lol, I know the web is tamgled and kinda stickey!!! Lol


I will post next chapter as soon as I get the all clear from my beta :) squeeeeeee


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ssinger (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 07:44 AM · On: Addendum

I like the turn of events of this chapter, definitely makes things more exciting! I'm sure that it would be untraditional but I would like for Bella and Riley to be together. Please just consider it!

Author's Response:

You are probably the only reader I have that want Bella and Riley to be together... 

I suppose you'll just have to keep reading to see who she ends up with... Lol


Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review ;)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Mrsgabicullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Unison

Yet another amazing chapter! Is it coming to an end or is there more? Love the end where she said she trusted him. Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you... there is more :)

I have to ask you to have faith in me and the story when the next chapter posts....


I hope, seeing as how you've made it this far and still love the story, that you'll trust me...there is some more to the story that needs to be told... *kisses*


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 11:25 PM · On: Unison

love love love this story!  Absolutely positively brilliant! even with all the angst and insecurities Bella has it is still a wonderful story and a great read!

hugs stephanie






Author's Response:

Thanks honey!

 I have to ask you to have faith in me and the story when the next chapter posts....

I hope, seeing as how you've made it this far and still love the story, that you'll trust me...there is some more to the story that needs to be told... *kisses*


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 09:53 PM · On: Unison

Oh---from the first chapter, I have loved this story!!  I hope you have no plans of ending it anytime soon!!  I feel like Bella may freak when he tells her about Alice's premonition--but I hope not.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I have to ask you to have faith in me and the story when the next chapter posts....


I hope, seeing as how you've made it this far and still love the story, that you'll trust me...there is some more to the story that needs to be told... *kisses*


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: cnh7 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 05:38 PM · On: Unison

Awesome chapter...Love...Love....Loved it! Your amazing! It was really worth the wait but now I want more, lol!!!


Reviewer: Millburn (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Unison


Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Unison

Unnnnnnnnnnnnnngh.  Hot as hell.  It's about time, and I loved every second of it.  I was so happy to see you'd updated, and this is the chapter we've been waiting for, for so long.  Hoping it isn't too long until the next update. :)

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