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Reviewer: EmeraldRain (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

i feel like there is so much more to this fic, please keep writing!

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is such a powerful story. I read it months ago, and I have been haunted ever since by Jasper's dispairing lament, "How many?" Jasper's attempts to come to terms with his past have always fascinated me. You've put a whole new light on it. It just stays in my mind. How is he going to live with himself now? He is such a beautiful and loving person -- I hope he can forgive himself again.

Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable and funny to boot.

Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love stories where Bella's change brings on challanges...unlike Breaking Dawn, so this was right up my alley. Thanks.

Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

i wish this was longer!~

Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Definitely different then any thing else I have read about Bella's change.
Oh how I wish there was more...

Reviewer: JenWordSong (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Uhm....okay. Just so you know, they will be holding my funeral shortly because I am dead. Do you know WHY I am dead? I am dead because your story ended, and I was so completely desperate for it to not end...like...seriously.
A much darker take on Bella's experience than most versions (my own included), but so very very very well thought out, well written. I am so eager for more from you. Your writing is vivid and addictive,

Reviewer: Jasper4Me (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2008 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

that is amazing! like, i moved from the middle of my chair to the edge of my chair as i read it....absolutely amazing!

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