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Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Spark Ignition

So excited we're finally at the meeting! This story is so intriguing.

Author's Response: YEAH! thanks jattyca. rhi

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Spark Ignition

Fantastic chapter, can't wait to see what will happen next.

Author's Response: thanks venus308. I'll write fast just for you. rhi

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Spark Ignition

I'm thoroughly enjoying the fact that he absolutely lost his composure! I imagine that after hundreds and hundreds of years, he truly didn't think he would ever find a mate. Now, he recognizes her instantly and things are incredibly inconvienent! He has a role to play in this town, and how is he going to get close to her without being shockingly inappropriate at best, and criminal at worst? This will be very interesting and I would think Alice could have forseen this as a problem?

Author's Response: You're good. There's a lot of issues to deal with. The biggest one right now is that Bella is seventeen for a few more weeks into the school year. That's jailbait folks. Alice saw it all, but my Alice tries not to interfere, only facilitate. Thanks for reviewing, again. Rhi

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Spark Ignition

So finally they meet!! Love this story, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, let's hope E made a good first impression. rhi

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Spark Ignition

oooh very interesting! I'll be looking forward to more!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! rhi

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Vortigern's Folly

I LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK THE WRITTING IS WONDERFUL.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Vortigern's Folly

Well you certainly seemed to have worked out your thematic issues! I loved how much thought you put into how his conscience and relation to humanity evolved and the reasoning behind it. Outside of his own developing sense of self, the world had to move along to be relevant to him. As the dark ages didn't advance, there was nothing to catch his attention. I'm really excited to see how things will progress from here!

Author's Response:
Very astute. Couldn't have said it better myself. Thanks for reviewing again!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Vortigern's Folly

Hmm, I'm beginning to suspect something about whom sired who...

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Vortigern's Folly

Since I am myself writing an historical AU story with vampires (much more modern, 1943-45) I can't tell you how much I am loving yours.

Just a question: the summary. You say your hero started his life in the highlands of modern day Scotland - OK, English is only my second language, but it sounds like he was born in the North of Scotland in present time ... As it is obvioulsy not so, maybe you should clarify/amend ...

Author's Response:
The "highlands" of scotland are, geographically and practically speaking, the north of scotland. The "lowlands" occupy the entire southern region, and the highlands are in the north. So, you're right and wrong. But you made a good point- it is slightly confusing. I'm not sure if/how I'll change it, but thanks for saying something, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Vortigern's Folly

I'm enjoying this so much. Your historical perspective is fascinating. So excited for him to meet Carlisle!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Taming Werewolves

Well, given that in your AU, Edward is several hundred years older than Carlisle as well as his gift, it makes sense that he be the leader. I loved the wolves' indignance that Edward was sitting Indian-style! But why not? It's a comfortable way to sit (assuming that 'Indian-style' means sitting cross-legged, but on the ground, the way we were taught to sit at school) as long as you're not sitting long enough to cut circulation, and I can't imagine that would be a problem for Edward.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Taming Werewolves

I am really enjoying this story. An Edward who is not an insecure boy is a refreshing change. I loved the line about him feeling conflicted because he's always hated nihilists.

Author's Response:
You know the reasoning centers in your brain aren't fully developed until 20-21. Edward's 23/1600, so he's pretty much all grown up.

Thanks for reading.

Author's Response:
You know the reasoning centers in your brain aren't fully developed until 20-21. Edward's 23/1600, so he's pretty much all grown up.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Taming Werewolves

Great chapter, love this story!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Taming Werewolves

THIS IS AN EXCELLANT STORY

EXCELLANT WRITTING

GREAT PLOT

SHOULD BE AN IFIC

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Taming Werewolves

It makes sense given Edward's background and experience that he would be a leader and teacher. It also makes sense that he would meet with the threat alone, as he is the only unpaired one in the family. As for the animosity between the shapeshifters and vampires, in the book I understand it was mostly instinctual-they literally can't stand the smell of each other. I guess in this story they are enemies as a result to injury to the members of the tribe, and they can be friends with the trust and assurance that there will be no injury? Makes for a more interesting relationship between the two!

Author's Response:
It always seemed to me that the Quileutes and Cullens should have gotten along better even considering their instincts- Seth and Jacob got along pretty well in close proximity to them. And they have a whole lot in common, despite being different species. Edward was trying to give the wolves a frame of reference for his lifestyle and experiences, in the hope that there could be mutual respect. I'd like to think that even angry adolescent shapeshifters could see the good in him and his family.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Taming Werewolves

I love this fic and so far, Edward is a good, effective leader. And his being in charge is believable given his history as a fearless, deadly and brillant warrior, and his mind reading skills. His need to be loved still remains the same.

I also like how he dealth with the wolves. Update soon.

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Taming Werewolves

Thanks for another great chapter. The intro to the Quileute wolves was perfect and I like Edward's role as coven/family leader.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Loss Incarnate

Excellent chapter!!!! Love your writing style.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

SUCH A GREAT STORY AND WRITTTING

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Prologue

Mmmmmm! This is very interesting. I love the idea of Edward the unlettered warrior discovering the sciences. Twelve hundred years is a long time to be alone. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

Nice update. Great to see how Aedwaerth is dealing with what happened to him and his journey towards the present with the Cullens.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

Neither would human clothes, I gather! Imagine if our cars were made of cloth! I like the way that you found to finally introduce a shred of Aedwarth's humanity back to him. Without any mentors, he would have lived on impulses and instincts alone until some type of mental breakthrough would have happened! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:
That was my theory, too. What we read in Twilight points to vampires being incredibly instinctual creatures. Much more so than humans. I felt like it would have taken a quiet, contemplative state to rouse his human sensibilities.

And yeah, clothes would probably get shredded pretty quick but I'm not sure I can write a story with naked vampires running around. Too distracting. Maybe we'll assume that Alice reenforces the stitching.

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

Thanks for another great chapter! I enjoyed the moment with the hermit and your rant about Newton's first law of motion. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

Interesting look into Edward's past.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Loss Incarnate

fabulous!!! Can't wait for more

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