I absolutely love this fic!! When are you posting again?

I hope your okay, this is a great story.

Not sure how far you are in the plot/storyline but I have re-read your story twice at least! Good job!

I love Paul's "nerdy vamps" comment! Although, I would have thought that was something Jared might have said rather than Paul.

Interesting how well Charlie took everything... up to the point of finding out about Edward and Bella. But then again, that is a typical father reaction.

So Billy (may) has diabetes. I know you don't have him in a wheelchair in your story, but I'm pretty sure I read somewhere that diabetes was the reason he became paralysed. But that could be fanon from a fic.

Can't wait to read more!

awesome update!! can't wait for more! please update soon.

Wonderful chapter. I'm so taken with your story, it lovely.

Hmm, I haven't been able to read any fanfic for a while, and boy did I have a lot to catch up on. Hence this review being for the past several chapters.

I find it interesting that Edward had befriended Alec and Jane, as well as Felix. Although, I'm a little unsure of the twins fate. We're they turned or what? I also get the feeling that the Volturi may not have caught up to James and Victoria.

The fishing trip is an interesting idea. Mind you, I get the feeling that the Pack is not going to be happy about Edward and Bella. And that's without the question of turning her. But I love the fact that Edward is willing to do that eventually.

Can't wait to read more!

Awesome chapter, I can just see their faces taking off in the plane.

It's nice to know that he is aware of how superior he must seem to Bella in every aspect. It's good that he allows her the upper hand in the relationship, but I would be surprised if she felt as if she actually has it. Now, nervous declarations withstanding, this trip seems as if it will be a lot of fun. There's nothing like male bonding..

wow.. i am so excited...they are going fishing...i cant wait. dang, what i wouldnt give to have an edward doppleganger cook me pasta...mmmmm

" tidal lock " Nice one!

You have crafted an interesting dynamic between Edward and Bella in the way that he very purposely cedes power to her, and the emotional consequences to him of that surrender.

I love Rosie as Anakin - I can make it go faster -Skywalker. And this --

 

In the midst of taxiing out to the runway, mashing buttons and pressing levers, he says to Carlisle, “Do you think we should tell them about Rose's engine modifications?”

“They're about to find out.” They exchange an almost evil grin, and Edward pushes the throttle.

-- cracked me up!

Can't wait to see how the conversation goes down at the fishing hole. Heh!

Wow! This chapter is just stellar! Their dialogue is so appropriate and plausible. You've shown their feelings to us so well. Both of them 'have it BAD', and yet, the particular nature and character of how they feel is very individual to each of them. They are both in love, but completely distinct from each other in how they feel and perceive. Really good art of characterization there! Bravo!

I think it's so ironic that Edward was dealing such a harsh brand of frontier justice to the meth cooks. Considering that he himself is an eternal addict. Perhaps that is why he hates the purveyors so much. He knows what a hell addiction is. Or perhaps there is no zealot quite so zealous as a reformed sinner?

Great chapter. Can't wait to click forward to the next!

-m

I just started reading your story based on the recommendation by Sebastien Robichaud.  I am soo hooked.  Your take on "Edward" and Carlisle's history and the flip on their relationship, as well as all the other family members is very creative. 

I just finished the chapter where Carlisle meets Esmerelda, who I assume will become Esme.  And to see James and Victoria as historical villians.  I just love how you are weaving the existence of vampires into human history.  It is a teaching experience as well as a joy to read.  Just like Univ. of Edward Masen.  And your shifting from past to present and back again really makes me pay attention. 

Your story is so different from any I have read.  It challenges my mind.  Thanks for the extraordinary effort I know you are putting into this.  Your early comment that this was tedious to write and you did not want to continue if it was a fail actually frightens me.  To think you might not have kept this wonderful story all to yourself.  Keep it up.  Your efforts are appreciated by many, but especially me.