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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: scotdancer40 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Bite and Run

Really a very cool take on the whole Bella/Edward relationship. It's interesting to see you take Edward down the road of his true nature. Keep up the great plot and writing. Awaiting the next episode...

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Touch and Take

“I don’t know, Bella,” I finally snarled.  “How do you feel about the burger you had with your fries last night?”

I wanted to slap Edward for saying that.  Didn't surprise me though. . .   He is such a bastard. But I love him too.  Ugh!!

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Bite and Run

WOW!!!  a friend of mine, writer angelanharvey3, rec'd this to me, and OMGoodness!!  definitely a different take!  i'm intrigued!  well done!

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Read and Bleed

You made me google lima syndrome. :-)  I have been wondering what Bella's thoughts towards Edward were.  Will we get a BPOV? 

This is one crazy twisted story, and I love it!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad I offered up a learning opportunity! :)  No BPOV in this story - it's all E.

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Cry and Consume

I'm speechless.  Awesome story!!

Reviewer: footroza (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Cry and Consume

I am so loving this story...Thanks to you...

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Shop and Kill

I'm hooked.  Edward is bad ass.

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Bite and Run

Wow, this is going to be an interesting ride you will take us on for sure.  Bella must be in shock, because I would be freaking out!! 

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Calm and Control

Continues to fascinate me.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Calm and Control

This is one of my favorite stories@

Reviewer: angelanharvey3 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Calm and Control

my god, i luv ur fuckawesome story

Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Calm and Control

This chapter was an emotional rollercoaster.  I am really hoping Edward was not going to kill the child, that he was just letting the monster reign just enough to use Alice's visions against her.  Afraid though that if he was pushed he would have really done it.  Whoa. 

On the flip side, very glad to see Bella taking some control back.  This could get very interesting.  Looks like some Stockholm syndrome could be happening (whatever it's called when you fall for your kidnapper).  I know the "relationship"-building is going to take quite a while, but it seems there may be the faint scent of some citrusy goodness in the air...

And I don't want to be gross, but what are they going to do when Bella gets her period? I wondered when they stocked up on supplies if they bothered to get FH products.  Is all the bloodletting interfering with her cycle? (Not a medical peron, so I have no clue.) Since Edward is so scent-driven, I can't imagine him being able to deal well with that!?!  Can't wait to read more.  You've got me hooked ;-)

Author's Response:

I toyed with the idea of dealing with Bella's period, but ultimately decided against it. 

Reviewer: NaWiSi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Calm and Control

i love this story. i have yet to find man stories of this nature, of this type of edward, well any interesting ones anway. thank the lord this story is not a one shot. it is too good of a story and concept to waste

Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Fight and Flight

Finished the chapers thus far last night, but had to come back and review.  I am soooo addicted to this story, and you write EPOV very well.  Can really sense his deperation and conflict.

Reviewer: jodes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Calm and Control

i got this rec'd to me last night and spent most of the day reading it! 

i have to be honest, i almost sent you flames in the beginning. edward kidnaps bella and thats alright? but then i stuck with it and he sees what his doing is so very very wrong. i actually feel sorry for him, his self loath is palpable. and his desperation, my goodness. 


poor poor poor carlisle, that would've nearly killed him saying that to edward. 


i hope bella continues to be strong while falling for edward. i know for pacings sake it will be a while but i can't wait for the good times! hahah! 


thank you for this story

Reviewer: tox (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Calm and Control

Hoocked up with the story... Crazy to know what will happen...

Reviewer: coltgal (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Calm and Control

Just started this story and I am really enjoying it :)

Reviewer: MsKCM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Calm and Control

Oh.My.God!! I am so hooked its beyond ridiculous! This is by far one of the best stories i've read so far...tby789 rec'd it to me yesterday and I am beyond thrilled!! This is so freakin good I can't even wait for the next update!! I love this plot and its originality! :D wow seriously I am so addicted to this story its beyond crazy!

Reviewer: lemmeggs (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Calm and Control

great job again, so glad you are writing this story, am really enjoying it.  hope edward stays bad ...

Reviewer: soffia (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Shop and Kill

holy yeah... just a little ooc

wondering where you are going with this? the patty  hearst thing? will be interesting to say the least!!!

Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Touch and Take

"How do you feel about the burger you had with your fries last night?"  This chapter was chock full of revelations and surprises and great lines, and even an evil cliffie!!  Really and truly enjoying this story.  So sad I have to leave the computer for a while, but I shall be back.  I simply have to read the rest, and it must be tonight!!!  Thank you for such a cool storyline.  It is not a mindless read and can really make you delve into some deep stuff if so inclined.

Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Read and Bleed

This story has got me so conflicted! (Mark of a talented writer with interesting, multi-layered characters). Some of it is like watching a domestic abuse situation unfold when you look at their pattern.  Edward's letting the monster have control, while at the same time he is battling his guilt and remorse as well as his growing emotional and physical attraction/desire for Bella.  Nice to see Bella stand up for herself, even if it's just a little.  Any chances the tables might turn at some point and Bella can gain some control?  The Next button is calling me...dinner can wait...

Reviewer: Niques (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Calm and Control

Wow i was trying to quit this story cuz i was obessed with it already but i just can't do it. It gets better and better every time u update. you are a grat writer

Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Calm and Control

I don't say this lightly - this is a GREAT story. Completely fresh, engaging and compelling. I cannot wait to see this unfold.

Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Cry and Consume

There are things I need to do, but that little red "Next" button is calling me... Very interesting to watch the play of emotions and rationalizations deepen for them both.  I can tell this is going to be an emotional roller coaster.  Great writing.  I am genuinely enjoying this story.  On to the Next...

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