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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: lastobethnin (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Play and Pray

Great Chapter.. It surprises me that Edward doesn't have a clue that she is his mate.  He has been in a house of truly mated vampires and knows that the pull for each other is strong.  Add on top of that that she is his singer and he goes a little wonky.  Having someone trying to take not only your singer but mate as well.. I guess I can see why he did it.  But Carlise of all people should know how strong that pull is.  I hope Alice sees what she is to him, and that they are becoming attached. 

I hope Edward starts to realise that it's not just the physical that he's attracted to.  He's also atracted to he emotionally.  I love watching them get closer.  Love that Bella can calm him.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Play and Pray

I really like this story. I have a few observations. Edward for all practical purposes is a crackhead...heroin addict...and Bella is the drug...the pusher and the enabler.

I don't know what you have planned but at some point Bella's got to realize how seriously f-up this situation is...she can't even take a walk in the sun with Edward watching without him freaking out.

He's getting worse not better...I would like to see more introspective thought on Bella and her acceptance of this situation and why...

 

Update soon...

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Play and Pray

Mwa hahaha, now we get to the good stuff....

Can't fricken wait...please update quickly....totally dieing over here!!!!!

;)

Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Play and Pray

Oh this is riveting. Love it!

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Play and Pray

this sotry is amazing!  beyond amanzing.  I wonder if Carlisle and the cullen's have truly given up on Edward or not.  Will Alice still be watching?  Will she see what happened in the last 24 hours and how Bella truly calms Edward and how he wants more than her blood.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Play and Pray

What will Bella do with that tad bit of information. 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Play and Pray

I SO LOVE THIS STORY

GREAT WRITTING AND PLOT

DYING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Play and Pray

Ooh La La...Bella is learning to control the monster...nice! I wonder if she can influenece gim not to drink from her too ;p

Reviewer: pelegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Play and Pray

yay!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Fight and Flight

Taking a 3 year old is low.  He is truly insane

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Play and Pray

Wow, just discovered this story and its amazing! It was so intriguing, I couldn't stop reading long enough to review chapter by chapter. My heart was breaking and I had a huge lump in my throat when Carlisle disowned Edward in the last chapter (sob). I've never read a fanfic when Carlisle gave up on Edward. I hope they reconcile smeday soon. Its so difficult imagining Edward without his Cullen family. Bella is so amazingly courageous and continues to awe me. Its sad, terrifying and beautiful just how much Edward is dependent on Bella and his slowly falling for her. Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Play and Pray

You know, I am under the firm belief that this may be one of the most romantic stories on this site --- even during the more raw times. Fantastic chapter, as always. Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Calm and Control

WOW, incredible chapter.  I can't believe that Carlisle disowned him.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Read and Bleed

Many of us have heard of stocholm syndrome, bue I had never heard Lima syndrome.  I don't know why he is so repulsed by her think that he would rape her, when he has violated her in other ways.

Reviewer: Rason44 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Play and Pray

My heart was aching for Edward when she was in the park, but when she came back, well, that was hot as hell. He is seriously addicted to her. Can't wait for the sexin'. Great chapter. Please update soon!

Reviewer: eclipse36 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Bite and Run

Great chapter - thanks for the frequent updates.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Cry and Consume

This is sick.  How can you comfort when you're the cause fo the pain.  I'm surprised she let him hold her.  Unless he forced it I would tell him to go to hell.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Shop and Kill

Darkward is very scary.  I like it!  The building sexual tension for him is a nice bonus added to this intense brew. 

Reviewer: Silton (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Play and Pray

How can I hate him and find him so incredibly hot at the same time?  Don't knoe if I feel bad for Bella or think she is the luckiest girl in the workd to have him want her like that.  Looking forward to next week!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Bite and Run

I like Edward embrasing his vampire, but he's still a sweetie, just a little out of control.  This is a nice mix.  I'm interested to see where this leads.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Play and Pray

I'm liking how Bella is taking her own form of control in this relationship.  She is his weakness and she knows it and she's working with it. Whereas ordinarily I'd think that was wrong, here it has to be, to give them some kind of parity. 

And Edward and his jealousy had me spellbound, to be honest. Wow.  I mean, breathless and everything.  Brava.

 

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Play and Pray

I usually stick with Human AU, however, I must admit you have created an exceptional story here.  I don't know how it eluded my notice until now.

Great chapter and great work

Update soon.

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Play and Pray

So much tension and information.  I hope once his body is satisfied he might not need the blood, but I doubt that!

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Play and Pray

Your are developing your plot and story beautifully as always....the details are really cementing their attachment to eachother and his desperation and feelings of love.  Was alittle sorry to see the lack of bloodlust angst, in this chapter anyway, but would rather you didn't make Edward too dark and wind up killing Bella during drinking session.  Lovin' the sexy too..so much more erotic to tease than to force it on us...keep it coming and keep up the good work!  Update soon for crying out loud.  Felt like ages for this one. :)  The new banner is awesome BTW. 

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Play and Pray

I followed a rec by Kassiah over at Edwardville and I'm so glad I did! What a fabulous story! I read almost exclusively AH stories but I am completely hooked your premise and your fantastic writing. Looking forward to more!

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