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Reviewer: Eva V (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Know and Tell
You've turned Edward into a simpering, spineless, post BD honeymoon pansy. I really can't see any reasons why Bella should be attracted to him at all. I think it's time for a hunky werewolf to come resuce her.
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Know and Tell
oh shitt - omg noooo i wanna them to get to the island damn thats so messed up - i love ur story cant wait for next chapter
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Know and Tell
oh my god!, they can't really fight in the airport?
Anyway, thanks for updating!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Read and Bleed
well at least he realizes he is a monster....
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Read and Bleed
Once again, so intense. I think I'm becomming addicted to this story!
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Read and Bleed
Yes, he is a monster! But i really like him. LOL. I can't stop reading this! So addicted. I'm neglecting my studying! LOL
Reviewer: Gina_juicy (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Know and Tell
Oh nos! Things should get really interesting now that James has made an appearance in the story... I cant wait to see where you go with this. As always, your writing is fantastic, and it blows me away that people like you with so much talent contintue to share your stories with us. So, Thank you for that!
Gina
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Shop and Kill
damn, edward is crazy. why does he have to get so angry? not sure i like him being such an ass. but damnit i want to know what happens next so i just have to keep on reading. i truly feel sorry for bella. will he ever show some kindness, i thought it was funny when he got mad at her saying she was trying to take some of her blood away from him that it belonged to him. i honestly hope he'll calm down with the roughness and also that the cullens wont find them for a long time if at all.
Reviewer: mad4hugh (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Know and Tell
Edward's emotions now that he realizes he loves Bellaare "all over the map" aren't they? He expereinced such highs and lows in his emotions and feelings. From that euphoria of first love, the fear of rejection, hysteria of loss and jealousy just to name a few.
For being over 100 years old, Edward is really so naive and sheltered in a manner of speaking. Since he internalizes everything he's shielded himself from experiencing emotions - is it perhaps because he couldn't "turn off" listening to everyone else's thoughts? So being the cerebral dude he is, he intellectualizes everything and missed out on the experiences himself.
Well, Bella it seems is falling in love with him too - especially given the kiss she initiated in the airport waiting area. Her tender and loving behavior and actions here when she gets Edward away from the shop and soothes his soul to calm his fears is evidence of that. Edward being the emo, brooding vamp full of self-loathing can't see these subtle cues that she feels love for him.
You have me on edge now with the introduction of this lone vampire having followed Edward and finding Bella. Argh!
Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Know and Tell
It gets hotter and hotter...I luv your tale!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Cry and Consume
Interesting......he's gaining a conscience. I'm on to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Know and Tell
....Great. I actually felt kind of bad for this guy though. He's all alone, no friends to kill with. I'd be sad too. Maybe even angry when I saw that. Poor dude. Maybe he can not kill people and be stupid, and he can be like that strange Uncle who lives in the cabin miles away...and just happens to eat people, but not Bella. Edward has no family anymore, he could use a friend besides Bella.
...No? Would have been nice...
Bella, in any other situation I'd say she had Stockhome Syndrome. I can't decide yet if that's the case or not, but this is a Twilight romance..so I doubt it. But if I was Edward I'd be uber worried that she did. Can't wait for more, Keep Going!!
Reviewer: averii (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Know and Tell
OMG, cliff-hanger!!! I love how the vampires in this story are so...vampiric.
Reviewer: Raptured Ignorance (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Know and Tell
Noooo! Why such a horrible cliffhanger? XD
As always, I loved it. Adored how Bella kissed Edward this time, and grinned evilly as I realized her timing was off. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Shop and Kill
Wow! What a different Edward! I'm reading this during the Super Bowl, much to my husband's chagrin, but it's so much more interesting!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Know and Tell
Half step forward...twelve on back! My dog was frightened when I audibly squealed upon seeing the update notice in my mailbox, and -- as usual -- you didn't disappoint.
SUUUCHHHHHH a good chapter (although I thought Martin was going to turn out to be a dog!)
Author's Response: A dog!! LOL!!! That would have been better....
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Know and Tell
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Pinkcookie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Know and Tell
So did Edward's "dazzling" of Bella before he took her blood make any difference to Bella? You never said... PC
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Shop and Kill
ok this is not"my" Edward but I am trying to keep an open mind! You write very well.
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Know and Tell
Interesting addition to the plot - ought to shake things up a bit.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Know and Tell
uhoh update!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Know and Tell
Amazing chapter!!
Reviewer: alb68 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Know and Tell
i like your story ,thanks for sharing
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Know and Tell
i want to review so that you know how much i appreciate this story. i always feel so tongue-tied though...anyway, just loving your story. bella's instinctual calming of edward is just perfection as is her self-sacrificing nature. the virgin thing...very nice. go bella!
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Bite and Run
i always wondered what it would have been like if he just took bella and used her over and over again im glad youre writing a story like that. he seems more like a vampire this way.
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