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Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Bite and Run
this is fantastic i love a darkward!!!
Reviewer: amanda_maria18 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Confront and Expose
oh my god i am completely addicted to ur story. please dont ever stop writing this story. hurry with next chapter i cant wait to read it. you are soo sooo talented
Author's Response: It will definitely be finished, in time. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Confront and Expose
Sexxy! ... towards the end! lol
You know when she shrugged after he asked her what she was thinking when she commented on suicide my mind went like this... Sex -> suicide. Though, why someone would want to kill themself with Edward around is beyond me. Lol
Great chapter
Author's Response: But what a way to go!! :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: taylach (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Confront and Expose
I think his going to spontasily (spell?) combust! Great Chapter
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Confront and Expose
Incredible story, I can't wait to read more of it.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Confront and Expose
ahh so it seems Samson and the Volturi will be in the picture now.
Chuckled my way through the kissing game, but I think my favourite part has to be Bella saying "you can, you know" hehe
I'm with Edward on the dropping jaw and freezing up, not entirely sure what I've just been given permission for.
Looking forward to Edward losing it even more :)
Oh, and I guess we're not dolphin-safe anymore? I love that they put up more of a fight than a grizzly too - makes sense with all the stories of Great White's being beaten off by dolphins over the years :)
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Confront and Expose
oh, what a mean cliffie to go on a break :)
I loved that chapter. I hope Samson won't show up in the near future.
I'm concerned about Emmett. Will he text back eventually. Alice would have seen his texting, too, right?
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Confront and Expose
OME! I am loving this dark and twisted Edward. As dark as he is, I can't help wanting him and Bella to find a HEA. I worry how Sampson is going to play out in all this. And I wonder why Emmett hasn't at least responded to his text.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Oooo - it is starting to heat up! Bella's island is such a beautiful idea - of course they couldn't go to Isle Esme....... I look forward to Edward telling her the Island's name.
I think that the Cullen's are still watching over Bella and Edward. I don't think that they would ignore Edward's text message without knowing that at least Bella was alright. There is no way that Edward will be banished from their lives forever, although I think that he will have to earn his way back in - big time!
Thanks for the update! xxx
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Finally getting to the sexin...and lovin it! Hope you don't make Samson their undoing.
Reviewer: clairebo (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Confront and Expose
I LOVE THIS STORY! Truly. I want to hate Edward but I just can't. I'm glad that he has finally realized that he loves her. The ultimate sacrifice will be if he's able to give up feeding off of her...interested to see what happens with that. And it's no wonder that Bella's walls are slowly breaking down...I mean come on, its EDWARD! He's far from perfect, but irresistable nonetheless! Looking forward to the sexin! Also, loving the twist of Samson...can't wait to see how that plays out. Sad about the estrangement from the Cullens...hoping for a reunion at some point!
Take care :)
Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Oh my. I think I'm going to love Isle Bella.
Fantastic as always. We will be waiting for you in two weeks!!!
Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Confront and Expose
amazing :)
Reviewer: nanaL89 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Bite and Run
OMG!!!! i love it cant wait till i can read the rest
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Confront and Expose
YES!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Confront and Expose
I'm not happy that Samson can defeat Edward. I'd like to think we'll never see him again but I guess there may be a showdown later that will involve Emmett, too. I just felt so sad that Emmett didn't respond to the texts. <insert sad face here>
After all this time, I'm surprised Bella ran from Edward on the beach. Sometimes I'd love a BPOV but mostly I adore that we get to see the inside of Edward's head.
Loved, loved, LOVED the make out scene. woo hoo!
love, Richelle
Reviewer: laura goldman (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Shop and Kill
You are one kick-ass storyteller!!!! This is by far the best twilight fanfiction I have read! Please continue writing, can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Confront and Expose
This story is so good it makes me want to cry. I'm scared of Samson. There's no way in hell Edward can beat him! What's he gonna do if/when he comes back! And Emmett won't reply? They really are done with him! He's all alone and he needs them! And things are getting a little hot and heavy on the couch! I like it! I don't know if I can wait two weeks to see what happens! What am I going to do!
Reviewer: wolfgirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Love this story, my new fav
such a different concept its very intriguing
Keep writing!!!!
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Confront and Expose
another amazing chapter.. i always love how you end each chapter with edward giving in to some emotion..
Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Oh. My. God. Sooo Hot, And About time too! Absolutely cannot wait to read the update, please don't leave us waiting too long! This is one of my very favorite stories!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Confront and Expose
eDWARD IS SCARED OUT OF HIS MIND!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Why do I think we haven't seen the last of Sampson? I find myself wondering how Edward could possibly defeat him if it comes to that. Dang! You've got me thinking about this story WAY too much! LoL
I also keep thinking (over and over) about something I want Edward to say to Bella. It goes kind of like this: "Bella, I love you, I must confess. I do. And since I'm confessing here I must also reveal that not only do I want your blood, I want your body."
OME!
Reviewer: Soteria (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Shop and Kill
well she brought that on the poor man. He told her he would kill anyone who may believe her and she was just being stupid. But i do love the story. :)
Reviewer: vampireyouth (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Great chapter, Edward is in for it now!
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