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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Oooh, I so knew Samson was going to make a repeat appearence...but ruh oh!
Yeah, Edward certainly can't catch a break!
Loved it!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Beg and Barter
excellent chapter, cant wait for the next!
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Beg and Barter
He really can't catch a break, but he kind of sets himself up.
Love that you had him say I love you with all my heart at the worst possible time.
I was going to copy and paste fav lines, but there were a lot of them, and I have to go to work, so suffice it to say this was another great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: You are absolutely right - he can't get a break and it's all his own fault. :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Can I say how much I LOVE this story!! So well written, and captivating...I rush to read every new chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Beg and Barter
No I did in fact not know Samson had to come back.
And because of that, I'm not reviewing.
:P
Author's Response: Ummm...point of order!!! ;)
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Beg and Barter
I kinda forgot about Samson. Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next. It just gets better and better.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Wow...that was some chapter.
Those cops were horrible...did they not notice that they were hurting her or did they not care.
The social worker was an idiot. If a woman is being physically abused by a man...you stand by and watch others man handle her? Geez
Samson...I knew he would be back but I thought for sure it would take him a while to find them. How did he do it? Paperwork? Or has be been following/searching for them?
Like I said...some chapter...
Author's Response: People with the best intentions can do things in all the wrong ways, huh? :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Oh I so can't wait for Samson to be full fledged intobthis mix!!! I smile big every tine you update!!!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Beg and Barter
I laughed and cried with this chapter! really great one!!! I love both bella and edward in this story
but now I'm very worried, samson returned earlier than I expected, in a very bad timming...
Author's Response: Thank you! Could there have been a good time for him to return? :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Beg and Barter
I SOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THIS STORY
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Ohhhh....wow.
Well, huge props to Emmett for immediate damage control. Huge props to Jasper for damage control, long distance. The Cullen Clan do have a way about them.
I am hopeful that Edward will be able to refrain from draining Bella any more. I am hopeful that she will forgive him.
And I am intrigued by Samson's reappearance... Hmmm...
Oh. I love how you end each of these chapters. :)
Author's Response: "Damage control" is about right! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Beg and Barter
That was such a mess! I can't believe it got sorted out! Jasper and his connections are goood! I wonder if Bella feels the same as Edward, can't bear to be apart from him - despite what he has done. I love how he is slowly changing and aspires to be better. It's only a minor flaw isn't it? Kidnapping, blood letting & murder?
Author's Response: Yeah - it's not like he did anything REALLY bad... ;) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Beg and Barter
I don't know who to feel more sorry for: clueless Edward, heartbroken Bella, or the much abused and beleagured Emmett (lol). Those doctors and the police officer was disgusting. You don't ever crowd or coerce a suspected victim of abuse. It was terrible how they treated Bella, and I'm glad Edward put a stop to it. Yikes, Samson is back?! Can't poor Edward catch a break. He's right, someone up there must hate him (hehe). Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Not too knowledgable, were they? :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Boy o boy. Just keeps getting better and better. I'm so glad Jasper/Emmett were able to control Edward better. I visualized a floor full of dead hospital workers & police officers. What those hospital personnel were doing was wrong. That type of pressure is why there are innocent people in prison....not that there are a lot or anything.
Thank you for the update. I love the story.
Author's Response: Better and Better, or Worse and Worse? :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Grizelda (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Beg and Barter
This just gets better and better. Nice recovery from offing the nurse - wasn't sure how you'd pull that off. "Someone up there hates me." Lol
Author's Response: Well, he's a little self-absorbed. :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: RadicalDreamer (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Woot! I'm so glad you decided to update and I'm loving where this story is going. Poor Edward can't seem to get a rest. Lol. Can't wait for your next update! :)
Reviewer: Cultofcullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Beg and Barter
You evil cliffhanging wench! LOL (j/k...sort of....)
Author's Response: The chapter has to end somewhere!!! :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: poo235 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Oh no! I'm scared of Samson...
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Beg and Barter
nice work, I still think it would have been priceless for Bella to pass the cuts off as part of her sex life, I mean could you imagine the reactions that would get?
the Dr and Shrink would be speachless and embarrassed out of there minds
Edward would be flabbergasted... again
Emmett would collapse laughing
Half way across the world Alice would too
Author's Response: I think that's part of a diffferent story... ;) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: ooza (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Ahh, forgiveness... or kind of. Awesome chapter, as usual. :)
Reviewer: bellabells68 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Beg and Barter
It's so good. So worth the wait. Thank you for updating as promised. Love it so much. Will read it again and again until next chapter is up. I really feel for Edward. Please give him a break. Let he and Bella have some happy times together. Better yet, a happy ending. Love your story so much.
Author's Response: That's awesome! :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Oh, he just can't catch a break!
Well, at least Emmett is still there! :) Bella is so forgiving, but she loves him too. In so many ways, Edward is so childlike here.
Really love this fic. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Is it bad that I'm hoping Bella kills herself and Edward does the same afterward? I'm in a dark place right now...
Author's Response: No worse than those who think this is a relationship in which they would like to take part... :) Hang in there. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: spunkluvr (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Boy Edward is lucky Bella is so willing to put up with him. Good story
Reviewer: twicharmed (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Beg and Barter
one step forward, two steps back! ahhhh!
well thank god emmett is there to help with samson...
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