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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Beg and Barter

I knew that it wasn't over with that guy. It couldn't be that easy. But all the shit that has gone down in the hospital. Damn, enough to make me cringe. Update soon!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Dude so much for patience....you are killing me so softly and slowly...I love it...flowers froma snake....da da da.....keep t up you evil woman..........

Reviewer: Margaret Moony (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Beg and Barter

UPDATE!  YAY!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Beg and Barter

grr... stupid samson.. don't these poor kids have enough issues as it is??

 

hehe... i know he's necessary but still...

 

i love this story... can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Obviously, they need more drama in their lives. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Beg and Barter

That was intense!  And, now that Samson is back in the picture, I can just imagine how much more intense things will get.  Cannot WAIT til the next update.  I kinda do a fangirl squeal every time I get an email notification that you've updated this story.  So much for dignity. ;-)



Author's Response:

So much for dignity <--- Hey!  I haven't used that one yet!  :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Ohh how I love this story!!  You are so talented!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Beg and Barter

I have never been a fan of the darker stories but I do truly love this one.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: msbutterfly23 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Beg and Barter

oooooh noooo...well like you said we should have known he would make an appearance sooner or later. I am so enthralled with this version of Edward. His worst characteristics are magnified but I guess I'm a sucker for him in any event because I love him even more...I wouldn't mind comforting him...LOL...

I'm really loving this story and go into withdrawals waiting for updates (not really...well kinda'sorta...)

More please. Soon?

:)



Author's Response:

"His worst characteristics are magnified" <--- exactly!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Wow!  What a chapter ending!  Incredible!

How many more chapters do we get?  Hopefully the drama won't wrap with Samson anytime soo!



Author's Response:

I honestly have no idea... :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Beg and Barter

which is more important to Edward - Blood or Boobs. 

hmmm, I'm thinking it's boobs :D

Reviewer: finally (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Beg and Barter

fabulous!

Reviewer: biblepam (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Beg and Barter

poor poor horny bipolar baby...  he is just a total screwed up mess.... and Bella is just as screwed as he is... cause if she leaves him he is gonna take someone else out....  great post as usual... very intense...  but he is nutty as a fruitcake.( God love him)..

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Oh, you are so mean to Edward!  I know he probably deserves it (although, in my heart I can't condemn him) but Bella is in much greater danger from Samson than she is from Edward, who at least loves her and wants to be a better person for her.  He can't now return to the island but dare he and Emmett take on a vampire who may have connections to the Volturi?  Samson has a very scary gift which could well seriously harm them both, and although it's likely Bella won't be affected by it, she  has no defences against him if anything happens to the Cullen brothers.  This just keeps getting worse.  Perhaps the only way out is to change Bella before it's too late - or maybe it will even be forced upon her.  



Author's Response:

Maybe Sampson's a really sweet guy!  ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Beg and Barter

fucking awesome.. please update.. as soon as you can..

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Oh man!!! Just when they got out of one mess....



Author's Response:

...Edward creates another!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Hmmm, since he doesn't have a pathological need for her, maybe Samson would take better care of Bella ...   She's not his singer, so it is conceivable that he could control his blood lust enough to only 'harvest' from her periodically, as Edward has been doing.  But without all the drama and codependency.  Interesting thought.



Author's Response:

Good point!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Beg and Barter

It feels like Edward has dug himself a hole that there is no where out...man....the doc got shot down...thank you emment...

 

This is kind of a gothic version of beauty and the beast in which the beast kills people...

 

Samson will be a problem...what will happen??



Author's Response:

It's bound to get messy...  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Of course Samson's back!  I had a feeling he was keeping tabs on them.  I still wonder how Bella is going to forgive him.  And, wouldn't the officers be more gentle and understanding instead of coercing?  In the U.S., they wouldn't be able to do anything if she wasn't pressing charges, so I think that's why they were trying to convince her to sign. 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

They weren't very nice, huh?  Nothing like making a bad situation worse!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Pure awesome

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Beg and Barter

wow wasn't expecting that !

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Coax and Confess

Yes, I am quite aware that he is not right in the head.  It is indeed very much in question whether he ever can be.  In real life relationships such as you describe they usually end with the death of the abused party.



Author's Response:

Most certainly.  Thankfully, it's all fiction!!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Well, he got out on a pass, didn't he?  Without Emmett and Jasper's contacts, I don't know where Edward would be right now!  I'm glad that Bella is at least talking to him again, but he should at least attempt to make restitution to the nurse's family.  I also think Bella should call Charlie and let him know she's OK.

As for Samson, perhaps if Emmett helps Edward against Samson's power, he can be defeated?  Will we know in the next chapter?  Come on now!



Author's Response:

No sneak peeks allowed!!! :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tox (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Ohhh... Crap!! Cliffhanging!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!!  Looking forward to the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Don't let go!!!!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ebw (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Coax and Confess

Oh dear, that boy just can't control himself AT ALL, now can he??  Not even when he tells Bella he loves her ... hee hee.

I squeed today at work when I got the update notice.  Another chapter to read -- yaaaaayyyy!!  :)  Thanks for updating so regularly....it's much appreciated.  Oh, and thanks for writing, of course. Now I'm off to read the next chapter.....



Author's Response:

He is a mess, no doubt about it!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Beg and Barter

I really don't understand why the Cullen's---especially Carlilse, doesn't realize that Edward has not only found his "singer" but also his mate.  He is battling two fronts. The fact that Edward is doing this well is to be commended.  Edward needs his family supporting him----not judging him!

How can they be so ignorant?



Author's Response:

How would they know Bella was his singer?  :)  Thanks for the review!

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