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Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Play and Pray
ummm...am i crazy for thinking that was kinda hot? well it was...
Author's Response: If you are, you aren't alone! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Touch and Take
good...someone's catching up to them...i know i know...he feels something...ok so howz that diff from toying with his food & that comment abt burger & fries....yikees! just drain her fully & get it over with you stupid vampire
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Read and Bleed
i was thinking while reading as to what bella's thinking & then i am like thank god there's no bella pov..that would have been too terrifying...i dont want to know in excruciating detail what's she's going thru...the stupid mf bites her & then says sorry...you have to give bella some sort of power over him please just so he knows how being helpless feels
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Cry and Consume
ok cant believe i am saying this but i hate edward...hate him hate him hate him. cant believe he's doing that (yet i can totally buy into your plot..ughhh you write so well) he's such a bastard...hope at some point bella gets to kick his ass
Author's Response: Yes, he is a bastard. He gets worse, too. I hope you continue to enjoy the ride! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Shop and Kill
oh jeez he wasnt kidding when he said he would kill any one who came to know of this...man is he crazy or what?! it's just a little difficult to digest this edward because honestly i never thought of this take on things...lol....very original i must say
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Beg and Barter
Holy Drama, mama! I thought Edward was crazy and twisty before! What's he gonna do? Go cold turkey on the O neg? Eesh...long talks and longer days are ahead! I thought Em or Ed would have called the copper out on hurting Bella's arm. That would be grounds to get them outta there...alas, it's all good. Well, except for the flowers. Quite the "Oh shit" moment! Ed needs to work on getting the whole Cullen Clan back...we need backup, stat!
Author's Response: Thanks for your many, many reviews!! I really appreciate them!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Coax and Confess
Oh, gah! My brain hurts from all of this! I'm not surprised Eddie took out the nurse, but hilaaaarious Emmett talking to Alice trying to find him too little too late. The hospital staff is making things more complicated than necessary, can't wait to get outta there!!
Author's Response: Shall I start recommending aspirin in the chapter notes? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Regret and Redeem
Pshhhhhhh!!! Nothing is easy up in this 'hood. At least he kept from killing Emmett. That would have been pretty sucky. Not to mention the bleeder in the bedroom! I was afraid someone would overhear an apology...and even more afraid the listener would take the predictable thought process. We're in a bind, now!!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Desire and Defend
Oh, fuck! Emmett!!!!! What a day! W the scuba-ing, and the picnicing, and the dolphin sucking...now Em is here to hang out. Edward didn't seal the bite/tear before investigating the 'intruder'! Oh shit! Get your shit together, E...
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Confront and Expose
Quite the flight! And welcome to Isle....Bella? Ve'y niice. And boooooobbies!!! Also, I hope word doesn't travel to Volturra about our friends via Samson. Who's name I love when his gift is considered! Cut his hair, Edward :-P !
The dolphin cracked my shit up...I was wondering if Edward had enough foresight to pick an island that had some sort of meal plan available. I do feel bad that Emmett is ostracizing Eddie, too...I hoped he would be the secret glue keeping things together for the Cullen's!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Know and Tell
Ah, when jealousy rears its ugly head...Really? One would think a vampire could smell an approximate age. But iin his haste, I'm sure all Edward ever notices is the vague picture ahead: Another human, drawing her away. I'm glad Bella had the confidence and wherewithall to call him out on the green attitude. And pleasantly surprised at the comraderie that they are truly developing! I mean, fer chrissake...it was her idea to peace out of Londontown! This new vamp proves to be an interesting sideshow!!
I'm SO glad she kissed him! Squee-glad! :)
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Know and Tell
Ah, when jealousy rears its ugly head...Really? One would think a vampire could smell an approximate age. But iin his haste, I'm sure all Edward ever notices is the vague picture ahead: Another human, drawing her away. I'm glad Bella had the confidence and wherewithall to call him out on the green attitude. And pleasantly surprised at the comraderie that they are truly developing! I mean, fer chrissake...it was her idea to peace out of Londontown! This new vamp proves to be an interesting sideshow!!
I'm SO glad she kissed him! Squee-glad! :)
Author's Response: He's a little on the one-track mind side of things... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Beg and Barter
You forgot the label.....about it being HIGHLY ADDICTIVE!!!
Like Bella's blood!
Author's Response: I haven't posted since then!! It will go on the next one!! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Beg and Barter
Ohboy - Is Emmett still there?
Author's Response: Yep. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Greed and Need
Your 'So much for...'s make my life. I love it. And this was insightful! I'm beginning to enjoy Bella more, especially as Edward is growing (emotionally) into something a little more grey than pitch black. I like the development. I was waiting for a hitch in her breath to let us know that she was awake and heard everything! Quite a soul-bearer when he wants to be, that Edward!
Author's Response: His color wavers a bit, but he's trying! Well...sort of. Sometimes. Maybe. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Play and Pray
Aaaaaand its out there. That means we can start having fun, right? And Edward can become less of a sexy-ass whack job? I'm excited for that possibiity :)
Author's Response: Ummm...well, he's still quite the whack job, really. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Calm and Control
Heartgutwrenching. This journey is so interesting! London makes for an entertaining stop! I've never been, so any fic that takes time to make it real is golden to me. I am curious about the dynamic of our duo now that she is here with him on purpose and with full knowledge of her role...tic, tic, tic! Things are a'brewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Fight and Flight
Holy fucksticks! Damn it, Edward! CARLISLE punched you! That's what this has come to. That is equal parts awesome/shitty. I can't believe he just nabbed a kid as a bargaining tool! He's got some iiiiiissues, jeebus. Rawr! So awesome!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Touch and Take
Oh damn! It was the credit card statements, wasn't it.....We were just getting to a strangely comforting place. I want Bella to get snarkier, fiestier. I think Edward should have a bit of a personality challenge or something. And I think he should kiss her again. Scratch that, she should kiss him.
Author's Response: She'll get there...I swear. :)
Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Beg and Barter
Ok, I am totally addicted to your story. This is just such a compelling side of Edward and what could have been if he had not shown proper restraint. Edward terrifies me! At the same time I am begging Bella to get away from him, and I also want him to chnage for her. What a touching dark romance.
Author's Response: Thank you!! He scares me sometimes, too. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Read and Bleed
Just another vacay...Out at WalMart w the girl whose blood makes me quasiaipsycho. Aint no thang. I love that she wanted to finish the chapter...it's like my RL. Boy wants me in bed, but I'm chillin reading ff on the crackberry. "Let me just finish this..." I had to giggle at that. And I thought fo sho there was going to be evidence of a hardon in those inspiring pants of his, thus Bella's fears of a much darker experience...
Author's Response: I do that, too. hehehehe
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Cry and Consume
But it's dark, delicious guilt wrapped in hotness. So that's win. The cabin seems to be a great idea for now...and its nice to have Bella talking instead of screaming/sobbing (most of the time). So is this going to turn into a Stokholm-y like situation, or is our dear, dark Edward the one who will change? This is just the Eddie I need today :)
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Shop and Kill
Ugh. Poor Bells. The mindreading thing would have been super helpful, eh? I like the flash of sexiness with drink #2. Almost like Bella wanted him to, but couldn't wrap her mind around all of the shock. And Edward kinda felt it, too! Crazy kill on the clerk, too! Awesoooome! Too bad Bella saw the whole damn thing....You brought it on yourself, kiddo.
Author's Response: Edward felt *something* anyway... ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Bite and Run
Holy yay. I am in deperate need of a fucked up Edward. Twitarded fans sent me over, and I'm SO in.
The images you're putting out are insane. It reads almost like a screenplay. Edward's first drink was so dark and hot...damn. I love it. And poor Esme was so heartbroken! I wanted to give her a hug! Bella's reactions are so much more...calm than I would have been. It took her a long ass time to freak out. This is going to be an awesome ride.
Author's Response: Well, if you are looking for twisted - you found it! :)
Reviewer: isabellamariecullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Read and Bleed
this story is hypnotic...i can't stop reading it.
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