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Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Bite and Run
I saw this story mentioned in another fic and was intrigued by the name. I must admit that I usually only read AH stories - mostly out of habit as that is the only category I regularly visit on the site - but I am really glad I search your story out. I am very intrigued by your storyline and really like your writing style. At the best part is that I don't have to wait to read lots more! (Of course the bad news is that I now probably won't get much done today!).
Author's Response: I had a lot of people have the AH comment. Hopefully, you will enjoy this one as well! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Placate and Punish
OK...I am worse than Edward. I needed 3 fixes of this chapter within 24 hours. Seriously: you need to create a Hide & Drink rehab clinic for me. But only after the story is over; I'd much rather receive updates than help. ;-)
Last two comments and then I PROMISE to leave you alone:
a) THANK YOU for bringing a mention of Alice back. I miss her! And I'm glad she's still keeping an inner-eye on her brother. I doubted that she could just let him out of her life without any reservations...
b) Freud would have a field day with the breast-fetished OCDward. That scene is one of my favorites in all of the Twilight fanfic world. You have truly managed to capture his inner 17-year old. The description of him twitching b/c his last touch was to the right; brilliant.
Author's Response: I think you are right - they could probably build a whole psychiatric hospital wing for Edward, if they could convince him to stay. :) Thanks a lot for your comments!
Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Placate and Punish
Thanks for another great chapter!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Fight and Flight
Oh. My. God. Not my Edward. Has he gone this far? Wow!
Author's Response: Yeah - he's kind of a nut, you see. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Touch and Take
I can not get enough! I woke up and started reading again, just fantastic!
Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Placate and Punish
I really loved this chapter. Edward was totally out of control and I loved it!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Placate and Punish
ohhh wow!! Bella was AWESOME! Loved the way she not only put Edward in his place, but made deals with him in a way that he actually started to feel better about things overall.
The last few minutes of the punishment were particularly amusing.
I'm liking that Bella's holding off on the reply to Edward's confessed feelings too - I think perhaps she needs to see him improve, and gain a bit more ground before effectively "rewarding" Edward with those three words.
Hmm I also suspect that Bella's waiting because she knows that Edward wouldn't really be able to accept/understand the words if she said them. He's already/still struggling with the concept that she wants to be around him and wants to share herself (in more ways than one) with him.
It should be fun/momentous to see when Bella finally verbalises her feelings to Edward :)
[preferrably not in connection to duress with Samson or the Volturi etc, though B&E's story so far would suggest that may well end up the case]
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you vry much for all of your comments!
Reviewer: Dacoops (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Placate and Punish
he's such a 17 yr old boy, when it comes to boobs anyway! LOL
Author's Response: When it comes to boobs, he is just like a 17 year old boy! And a 27 year old boy, and a 37 year old boy, and a 47 year old boy.... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Placate and Punish
Come on Edward you can do it and Bella you keep on owning him - Just loved this chapter, it was incredible he IS wanting and trying to become more human for her he DOES love her
Author's Response: He want's to be a good boy, really he does! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Placate and Punish
I can't wait to see where they are going next.
Reviewer: Moonliteclipse (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Placate and Punish
I LOVED Edward's weird boob groping thought it has super funny.
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Placate and Punish
complete & utter wonderfulness!! yay for bella backbone! LOVED her state a chpt or two ago, telling the suits that she could "handle edward" giggles!
Author's Response: And handle him she did! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Placate and Punish
yeah, a chapter to breathe. I really like Bella wearing the pants here, and I think Edward likes it, too :)
Author's Response: Wouldn't he prefer her in an easy-access skirt instead? ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EMILIE00 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Placate and Punish
What is great about this?
The black humour
He's like the pet you can't house train. She can't take him anywhere. Like the person that always pinches the last bit of chocolate- except that we are talking about dead bodies- but really it's great- you make that work
Author's Response: HA! You are right! SHe can't take him anywhere. Maybe we need the Vampire Whisperer. LOL Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Placate and Punish
ahhhhhhh dammit. i just found this story and i didnt notice this was the last chapter until i had to wait for more. dammit.
this is an awsome story and i absilutly love it. as you can see as how i read 16 chapters in one and a half days. cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Wow! That's a lot in a short amount of time! Thank you very much for your comments!
Reviewer: ilovetwismut (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Calm and Control
the last pgraph shook me to the core. that was beautiful. *sniff*
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Placate and Punish
Brilliant!! Such a bizarre story. I loved seeing Bella finally get the upper hand.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Placate and Punish
Hahahaha, horny bipolar vampire.
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Placate and Punish
I truly believe Edward will keep his word this time - or at least until the next human gets in the way of his need for Bella. Kudos to Biblepam for that awesome Edward moniker!
Author's Response: He will keep his word until next time....hehehehe Reminds me of someone at my office who quits smoking about 4 times a day... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Placate and Punish
This was hilarious!!!! ROFL our Darkward is Definately a Boob-Man!! Ha ha "they weren't even" LOL!!! I love it!
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Placate and Punish
"Horny bipolar" and OCD vampire with an obsession with symmetrical boob groping! "They weren't even." He is TOO funny. Love Emmett too. It definitely breaks up the monotomy by having him on the island too! And what is Carlisle's problem? I know he does not agree with Edward having kidnapped Bella, but she is at greater risk that than from Samson, and I fear they may need the whole family for this one. Oh well, we shall see, but I am disappointed in this Carlisle. I do however think that Bella's "punishment" for Edward was ingenious and very effective. Curious to see where they will go after they leave the island. Curious to see how they will deal with Samson. Really enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward! This has become one of my favorite fanfics. I would be interested in the t-shirts if that idea comes to fruition.
Author's Response: I think they are pretty serious about the t-shirts, and the design is awesome! Check out the thread for details. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Placate and Punish
I love that Bella withheld Edward from touching her. That was just great!!! I'll admit, I was a little sad that Edward didn't take Bella back to the family to protect her. I'm very curious to see how the rest of the Cullen's would deal with B&E's relationship up close and personal.
Author's Response: Maybe they would tunr the garden hose on him. Do you think that would help? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Placate and Punish
Fantastic chapter!!!
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Placate and Punish
"I like them," I admitted sheepishly.--love how boyish he is lol!
Also, him being so OCD about having boob gropings be even was hysterical! :D
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Placate and Punish
Ugh, ugh, ugh. Nothing worse than a horny bipolar vampire with limited hunting grounds. I'm nervous because who knows when Samson's going to show up? He found them a little too fast on the mainland for my liking.
So, Edward and Emmett need to kill Samson PDQ so Edward can get back to the 12 step program. Maybe Bella can order him some books on the topic?
Author's Response: How about a horny bipolar vampire with limited hunting grounds, and a group of inebriated frat boys who happen to like brunettes? That would be worse! :) Thanks for the review!
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