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Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Touch and Take
I laughed my ass off, when he asked her what she felt about a cheeseburger!
Author's Response: Oh, you are sick! :) Just like the rest of us! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Desperation and Despair
I'm impressed who much crazier Edward gets with every chapter.
If Torture Bella was his imagination - wicked!
The fight between Fantasy Bella and Sand Bella is great - I'd give a point to Sand Bella for being made of microscopic stone fragments - that brings her closer to a vampire's stone like skin.
Author's Response: Excellent point! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: nana11 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
omg it's so sad, i really was near crying :( i hope badly bella is back, i can't stand it to see edward this sad and crushed :(
Author's Response: I know... but he's so cute when he's sad! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
I sure as hell hope that she is real. I don't know how much more of Looney / moody Edward that I can take. That boy needed to know that Bella had stuff that she needed to work out before she would make a decision. I have a feeling that if she was going to leave Edward that she would have atleast come back to say 'bye' to him.
Author's Response: Oooo...but would that make things better or worse? Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Know and Tell
I hate you James. Let them be for God's sake!
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Coax and Confess
this is posessive edward times ten. im dying to know how they get out of this ...
Author's Response: Maybe times 20. :) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Read and Bleed
Hmm? Lima Syndrome?? This story keeps getting better.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Greed and Need
I'm goin crazy over here. I want them be done with it already and want them ro resist the urge and make all us continue suffering. *sigh* so much with... what? :)
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Regret and Redeem
first of all i love emmettt :) and bella is gonna have a field day id he kills the nurse.
Author's Response: Yeah - she doesn't like that much... :)
Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Jeez, could you mess with my mind a little more in the next chapter please? lol. I love the story, but wow, the mind games! Thanks for sharing your writing and for another great chapter. I look forward to the next.
Author's Response: ROFL! Honestly, no...I don't think I could. :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Desire and Defend
omg he didnt seal the wound???? omg not emmettt!!
Author's Response: Nope....
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Cry and Consume
This story reminds me of a movie I saw a long time ago. No vampires of course! I really enjoyed this!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Confront and Expose
the dolphin thing was fun. knew they would put up a fight lol
Author's Response: They can be quite vicious. :)
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Shop and Kill
What a chapter, this was! You rock!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Calm and Control
Carlisle’s eyes held three centuries of pain.
That made my chest hurt, my heart ache, my eyes moisten.
Alice let out a sharp breath, and I heard the words in her vision-mind right before Carlisle spoke them. “You are no longer welcome in my family.”
Good Lord. I don't know How Edward manage to handle hearing that. It nearly made me collapse.
Right at that moment, if she had asked me not to drink her blood anymore, I would have had difficulty refusing her. Anything for her.
Right at that moment, if she had asked me not to drink her blood anymore, I would have had difficulty refusing her. Anything for her.
Really? Wait a minute... Whooaaa!!!! :)
Really?
Author's Response: Every once in a while, he thinks something sane! :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Sooooooooo dramatic, Edward! Jesus! I couldn't even bring myself to be sad becaise he was just so damn pathetic. I think fantasy Bella would win the fight, hands down. Sand Bella is SAND! What's she gonna do, blow into FB's eyes? Red shirt Bella is real, Edward is judt being an emo douche.
Author's Response: Sand in your eyes HURTS!!!! :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Know and Tell
uh oh. well that isnt good....
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Hey great chap i am glad what edward realised in this chap =]
Author's Response: Even this edward can learn something...sometimes. :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Bite and Run
I love this story so far! I just stumbled upon it. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Lily4 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Oh the agony is perfect! That's exactly how it feels when someone you love, leaves you! Perfect! And the lines, "The sun rose (the sun set). The water swept over my feet then receeded." PERFECT....LURVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: buffbroinze (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
I have to tell you ...this story is fantastic.....so brillliantly written...a completely believable version of how it could have gone had Edward not had the monumental restraint he showed in Twilight. All the characters' voices feel real. It's hard to read in places...Edward killing people or hurting Bella..so hard...but the way you've written it, I feel as tho I'm allowed to forgive him, because it's Bella's blood making him crazy and it's not truly Edward in those moments.
The realisation that he loves her and will do anything for her...letting her go and then being unable to move from the spot where she left him..gah!
I cannot wait to see where you take this story...how on earth will it end? I do hope you believe in HEA...I think both Bella and Edward deserve it.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for all of your comments! I relly appreciate them! I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: edwardsjennx3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Greed and Need
ahhh love <3 he said all that perfectly
Author's Response: If only she was awake... :) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Bite and Run
Noooo I don't follow Rob/Kris thing either er... normally. I do cyber stalk Rob 5 mins a day though - he's like having a coke zero on a hot day! ;)
Author's Response: LOL!!! Cyber-stalk away! :)
Reviewer: redsock (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Repent and you shall be forgiven...
I'm not a church goer by any means, but I do like the notion of karma. Edward must suffer for his deeds as well as feel sincere regret for any chance of having Bella willingly return...
And I'm DYING to know what B's doing through all this, what she's feeling and talking about w/ Rosalie... I mean I have a clue about what Rose is saying, but Bella's experiences are vastly different in H&D so there's such fertile ground to plough there -
I vote real, selfishly, because his agony and delusions are draining...
Fantasy beats Sand... every time [trust me I've tried both, LOL]
Oh, and am pleased to vote for Hide and Drink... but you must know that by now dear savage... Good Luck!
My best, red
Author's Response: He is a little "draining" huh? ;) Thanks a lot for reviewing and voting!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Fight and Flight
Oh my good Lord. who is this and where is our sweet Edward? I'm not complaining, not at all. This all new and strangly interesting. Seeing all this crulety and still sensing our deperate Edward behind it make it.. very intriguing. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Ummm...this one ain't sweet. Not often, anyway. :) Thanks for the review!!
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