I'm here, I'm here! Woohoow!
First of all, the teaser: “You want to cause my orgasm through manual manipulation?”
Wow, what? Oh, unless... they're talking about telephone sex after she's gone? *grin*
Oh my, he might go through a few cell phones like that...
I tried to summon the mental ghost of Dr. Gest from Harvard for another lecture, but all I could really think about was my penis entering her vagina and just exactly what that was going to feel like.
It’s going to be warm.
And wet…she has to be wet, or it will hurt her.
Okay…I know how to do that.
I think I need to pee from laughing... A prepping Edward is a funny one!
There were too many possibilities. Too many variations. Too many positions.
Positions? Sweetie, I doubt she's going to want to practice half of the Kama Sutra positions for her first time, idiot...
In about four seconds, all three hundred and eighty five pages of the Kama Sutra flashed through my head.
Hehe, I was thinking about the KS before you mentioned it. *grin*
385? Lol. Pehaps Alice should quickly text him a page number or two... *snort*
Wow, and please have Alice do that, if you're going to do that, not Emmett!
And Edward? I dare you to say to her that you don't know what page you have to use for this!
“You want to cause my orgasm through manual manipulation?”
Bella laughed again.
“If that is the same as a hand job, then yes.”
Lol, my version could still be mentioned when she leaves! :P
I had to release her breasts and lean back against the headboard.
Oh my, were they even? Or was he too much out of it for a moment to be thinking about that? Quite a feat.
I groaned against her touch, and felt myself starting to become rigid again.
“I guess that answers that question,” I said softly.
“What question?” Bella asked.
“Refractory period,” I clarified. “It appears to be about fifty seconds.”
*laughs out loud*
“Lubricated?” Bella breathed. She stared up at me and bit down on her lip.
“Yes,” I said looking into her eyes. “I need to make you orgasm now. Preferably more than once.”
*laughs even louder*
He almost says it as if it's a bad thing.
I was too close to her breasts to not to anything with them, so I...
Well, I guess, if you're there after al, might make yourself useful?
Happy Birthday to me!
Lol! Was it your intention to have written this chapter as a comedy, or is it just me finding this hilarious? I did however think that that sentence would not only look good where it was placed now, but also a paragraph farther. Right after Bella lowers herself. :P
No, it wasn’t sinful, not with Bella. She was my love. She was my life. She would be my forever, and I would never want to be with anyone else ever again.
He's thinking about 'forever', which has a different sense when you're a vamp, and marriage, already? Did he tell Bella this yet? Hmm... Perhaps wait a few more weeks or months or something... Let's not make her panic.
Though my innocence was gone, I didn’t think it was the worst of my remaining sins. There was definitely an overwhelming amount of lust traipsing around inside of me. I wanted to be inside her again now and maybe for the rest of forever. I wanted to destroy all her clothing so she would have to be naked all of the time. I wanted to think back through all the pages of the Kama Sutra and try every one of those positions with Bella. I wanted to listen to her scream my name while I slid in and out of her. I want to take her over and over again…
So much for virtue.
Another amazing ending to a chapter. Hihi @ destroying all of their clothes, and paging through a certain book... And the screaming... She did it so well. ^^
Some things, if you want them:
“I know that Edward.” = comma
I could get do this without biting her = perhaps through?
Thank you Dr. Gest. = comma
if my human memories served my correctly. = served me
Hmm, I wonder what we're going to see in the next chapter. Her leaving, his brooding, sure, but what then? Will he just stay in his cabin and wait until the week is over so she can come by? Isn't Charlie going to find it strange that she wants to go to PA every weekend? And that's supposed to go on for a full year and a few extra months until she turns 18, because I'm guessing it's June now, and next year September she turns 18 and is free... My guess is that Edward isn't going to be able to hold back, and he's going to be come stalkerward? Aka visit her at night. Okay, he'll probably wake her up. Then again, I'm discussing his not being able to go on without her for a week, but perhaps it'll be likewise the other way around. And then there's her bruises: will they be seen? God, let's hope not.
A brilliant, brilliant chapter. It's the one I enjoyed most. I don't know if you'll be able to top this one, really! But I'd sure as hell like to see you try! :P
I'm so very much looking forward to the next update. It can't be here fast enough. From now on I'll just review along with the newest chapter, as I'm completely caught up, and dang, it's a good story.
Hmm, have I asked yet if you have any idea how many chapters there's going to be, or let's say: are you half through the story, or not yet, or 3/4th in, or... I hope we'll have much more to read, in any case.
Happy catching up with reviews, and happy writing.
Of course they were even!!! It was definitely supposed to be humorous. :) She actually turns 18 at the beginning of her senior year, so she is only about 3 months off. Im glad you enjoyed it! I believe there will be about 25-30 chapters.