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Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Such an "amusing" chapter. I'm dying to know what is wrong with E though I have to say I find crazy E so sexy.  Sad but sexy!

Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

In every chapter, you have a line, a word, a moment, a paragraph tores my heart. Here it is;

“I want you to lie to me,” I said clearly.  “Just tell me you are going to come back when you leave me.  When you go, I kind of forget what’s going on around me, and I might just stay like that.  I think that would be my preference rather than to know you aren’t coming back.”

Thank you for this wonderful story.



Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

The idea of him telling jokes is comical enough. hahaha Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Aw I loved that chapter! really great, poor poor crazy insane edward!

Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

oh no whats wrong with Edward??

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Very good!  I can't wait to see what happens in Italy.  I'm predicting lots of drama

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

There is definitely something wrong with Edward. Is it some kind of poisoning from too much of Bella's blood? Hopefully Aro will know. I hope the trip to Italy is short and not overly complicated. I am not a bid fan of the Voltari business.

Reviewer: TransylvaniaOrange (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

sponge bob square pants pants!  hysterical!  This has got to be one of my favorite stories.  I like a confused Edward.  I wonder if Freud would to psychoanalysis for vampires? 

Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

OMG, I just about died laughing when I read about the Spongebob PJ pants! When I pictured him wearing them, I had to walk away from my desk for a moment. It nearly killed me and my children stared.

Excellent chapter. I'm so in love with Crazyward and his obsession with Bella's boobs.

It's also kind of tragic. He's ten past crazy and is so in love with Bella. She seems to love him too.

In a way this story is kind of a flip of Twilight. I might be mad here, and feel free to point it out later, BUT it is to me. In the books Edward was mostly the rational thinking one. He made most of the decisions. Bella was dependent on him and mostly did what he said.

Now that I've written that out, it doesn't sound right. Anyhoo, enough. I loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

SpongeBob on the pants!!!  That's so wrong that I knew that.  Kinda worried for poor crazy Edward...hopefully someone can fix him!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Confront and Expose

Vampire second base. Nice! And Bella is getting bolder, now, is it the heat? From the tropics or from her sexy vampire? Who could resist this man, really?

I'm still waiting on the other shoe to drop on this Samson situation.

I'm heart broken that the Cullens appear to have forsaken him. Carlisle decision to reject him was a punch in the gut. I hope with time and regret on Edward's part, they may be able to reconsider and forgive. Specially when Bella goes all soul mate on him, then they'll understand why he did what he did.

Author's Response:

That shoe must be out there somewhere...I'm sure I didn't lose it... :) 

Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

I can't even imagine that conversation with Carlisle. LOL then she ate the banana after? ROTFL!!!!

It's kinda freaky how he's all bi-polar and stuff. Maybe it was from having her blood and then depriving himself of it? Hmmmm

Author's Response:

She was hungry!!!  Good theory! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Yes, the image of Daddy C with the banana and love glove is definitely chuckle worthy.  I'm just waiting til Charlie comes across either the box of Trojans or a used one in the garbage!  Now THAT.........*shudders*  Yeah.........moving on......

I'm scared about what it means for everyone now that Italy looms in the near future.  And a conniving and coveting Aro............*taps chin*

I guess I'll be staying tuned.........







Author's Response:

Hang on tight!  The roller coaster ride continues! :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Oh I feel so sorry for Bella & Edward. I love how you write Edward's thoughts, they're deceptively simple and yet highlight how deeply troubled he really is. And now Bella will be blaming herself... And the Volturi are getting involved... Sheesh... what a plot! I also can't believe Carlisle gave  a sex ed talk to Bella... and she ate the banana!!!

Author's Response:

She was hungry!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Know and Tell

Holy shit! Can this get anymore complicated? They can't go at it in the airport because of the risk of exposure, but them what? Won't this guy follow them? Poor Bella is in some serious trouble! And Edward is going to go ape shit trying to protect her...

Author's Response:

Ummm...yeah, actually, it can get more coplicated! :)

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

The condom lesson was too funny.  I can't believe Carlisle wants to take Edward to Italy.  I truly hope he isn't insane, and everything works out. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Greed and Need

That's what I thought was going to happen: at some point his need for her body is going to overcome his need for her blood, and she can trade it off with him. If he wants to have her he is going to have to stop taking her blood, willingly, and them they can really start healing and maybe have a real relationship.

Author's Response:

Hmmmm...good theory!  Wait and see! :)

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Play and Pray

I'm starting to get as anxious as Edward for the heat to overcome them. At least now she knows, but I think it was pretty obvious by his reactions of extreme jealousy that he has strong feelings for her. She didn't have to be a mind reader to figure that out.

On with the program! Operation Get Into Bella's Pants is in full mode now!

Author's Response:

Operation Get Into Bella's Pants is in full mode now! <---- LOL!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Calm and Control

As usual Bella is slowly taking control. It won't be long until he is putty in her hands. So much for an all powerful being, at the end of the day, he is just a man in love for the first time, and willing to lay the world at her feet. Just the way we like him.

Author's Response:

You just might be right about putty... ;)

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Fight and Flight

Is there anything better than desperate Edward? Didn't think so... What I love best is when he goes berserk against his own family in order to protect/possess her. That's always a huge turn on for me, and this whole chapter was super intense like that! Finger licking good. I tell you! Thank god there's plenty more chapters ahead of me, if I can just stop typing!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  It was an intense one... read on! :)

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Touch and Take

Things are starting to warm up between them, that's good.

Just one more thing to say: Run, Edward, run!

Author's Response:

Run fast! :) 

Reviewer: thelisalisa (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Shop and Kill

I still like!

Reviewer: thelisalisa (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Bite and Run

I like!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kapap (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Ha ha!! The condom and the bannana... the hole scene was hillarious.

Hello Bella, Edward told me that there has been sexual interaction between you two, and I was wondering if you are under any sort of precautions, pill or condoms maybe??? Ha ha! I can't even imagine it...

Author's Response:

LOL!  Love it!  Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Read and Bleed

OK, about your comment at the beginning of this chapter, it astonishes me over and over again when authors have to explain themselves to readers about things not being scientifically correct. IT'S FAN FICTION, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! That means NOT REAL! We're talking about vampires and werewolves! Can't these people enjoy the ride and have a frigging life already? Jeez...

Now, about the chapter itself, you are absolutely right, I think Bella can forgive Edward for taking her blood, even for taking her, but if he raped her it would be a point of no return. Who can forgive something like that? I'm glad we didn't go there.

Author's Response:

LOL!!  Yes, definitely true.  Some people just need to point out the obvious. ;)

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