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Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Calm and Control

As usual Bella is slowly taking control. It won't be long until he is putty in her hands. So much for an all powerful being, at the end of the day, he is just a man in love for the first time, and willing to lay the world at her feet. Just the way we like him.



Author's Response:

You just might be right about putty... ;)

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Fight and Flight

Is there anything better than desperate Edward? Didn't think so... What I love best is when he goes berserk against his own family in order to protect/possess her. That's always a huge turn on for me, and this whole chapter was super intense like that! Finger licking good. I tell you! Thank god there's plenty more chapters ahead of me, if I can just stop typing!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  It was an intense one... read on! :)

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Touch and Take

Things are starting to warm up between them, that's good.

Just one more thing to say: Run, Edward, run!



Author's Response:

Run fast! :) 

Reviewer: thelisalisa (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Shop and Kill

I still like!

Reviewer: thelisalisa (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Bite and Run

I like!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kapap (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Ha ha!! The condom and the bannana... the hole scene was hillarious.

Hello Bella, Edward told me that there has been sexual interaction between you two, and I was wondering if you are under any sort of precautions, pill or condoms maybe??? Ha ha! I can't even imagine it...



Author's Response:

LOL!  Love it!  Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Read and Bleed

OK, about your comment at the beginning of this chapter, it astonishes me over and over again when authors have to explain themselves to readers about things not being scientifically correct. IT'S FAN FICTION, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! That means NOT REAL! We're talking about vampires and werewolves! Can't these people enjoy the ride and have a frigging life already? Jeez...

Now, about the chapter itself, you are absolutely right, I think Bella can forgive Edward for taking her blood, even for taking her, but if he raped her it would be a point of no return. Who can forgive something like that? I'm glad we didn't go there.



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Yes, definitely true.  Some people just need to point out the obvious. ;)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Hey great chap =] oooh another twist =]



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Cry and Consume

And so it begins...The attraction is fortunately not fatal, but barely. They each start to spin their webs around one another and the result we all know and love.

That was really good and I'm anxious for them to start to really connect with each other.



Author's Response:

Just hold on tight! :)  Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Shop and Kill

Wow... That's a whole new image of our sweet vampire. I'm so excited! I wonder what he will have to do to erase that image out of her head. Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Could take a little work to forget that one!   Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Yeah I can't even begin to think how embarassing that wsa!!

You totally deserve the best AU award!! Congrats!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was very honored to earn it! 

Reviewer: Anniee882000 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Bite and Run

Wow.  What a different Edward!  Very intriguing. Can't wait to read more.  Great story so far.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Hold on the ride is bumpy!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

thanks for the amazing wonderful chapter savage, you are the best!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Give and Take

Wow! So worth the wait!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Desperation and Despair

Wow! So well written. Lunatic Edward is actually funny.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Dr C trying to give any kind of sex talk to Bella is pretty amusing given it's his own "son" that she's intimate with hehe

I'm curious to see how Aro's power might interact with Edward's "madness" & power... I'd almost expect something akin to virus-transmission to occur...

Looking forward to seeing where it goes, though I think it's going to get tense for Bella and the Cullens :S



Author's Response:

Good theory!  Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Either Daddy C is insane or perverted. Why would he need to teach a 17 yr old how to us a condom. If anything it should have been taught to Edward.

Daddy C must be insane to risk going to Aro for information. Either that or that his way of getting rid of Edward



Author's Response:

Ummm..to keep them from having a baby?  :)  And edward aint quite right in the head to be taught anything at the moment...  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Bite and Run

That was absolutely wondrous! So well written. Hard to imagine our sweet vampire being so callous and rude, he even seems surprised with himself. I liked Bella too, no panicked and trying to rationalize her situation. I'm loving the EPOV,but fear that it won't last long.

Anyway, I'm thrilled to have been reced this story!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you have enjoyed it!  Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

I dont like the idea of they going to aro... would he want bella too? will they all be in danger?



Author's Response:

I think you are probably right!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Volturi ?!?.... and the plot thickens!! Can't wait fir edward to introduce pillow Bella to Aro....

Author's Response:

LOL!  That would be an interesting introduction!

Reviewer: k4str (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Lol - the condom and banana and Daddy C.
Oh noes, Edward is going to the Volturi. *bites fingernails*

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Poor Edward...

But has Carlisle gone bonkers! What about Bella. What about the vampire law...

This story is sooooooo goooood!

Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Poor Edward...

But has Carlisle gone bonkers! What about Bella. What about the vampire law...

This story is sooooooo goooood!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mycrookedsmile (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Oh Edward.  poor insane vampire. It will be interesting to hear what Aro thinks...

Yes, the banana lesson must have been a trip.

Bella's recounting of earlier events really gives her a Stockholm Syndrome vibe. Maybe she'll need a vampire therapist too.



Author's Response:

Bella might make a good vamp psyche!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize

oh the suspense is killing me!! i need the next chapter now!! lol

“He showed you?” i literally laughed out loud at this whole convo bit..even pictured it in my head!

 you amaze me savage! great job!



Author's Response:

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