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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Desire and Defend

Holy fuck! I'm not so woried with Emmett's security as I am with Bella bleeding profusely behind them. She can't even calm him down now. I'm just glad it wasn't Samson or our couple would be toast.

Great chapter, though, things are really starting to heat up between those two, but it's like two steps forward one step back with Edward's control. And I fear that he is too expectant of going ahead with their physical relationship and going to be very disapointed when Bella stops him just short of it. Of course right now it's all a moot point, because they first have to survive the ordeal.

Just really glad that the Cullens didn't completely abandoned him. Alice is probably still looking, and Carlisle must be monitoring the creditcard statements to find out where he is.

I also loved the "scientific" explanations about the color changing of the eyes. It doesn't matter that it's fiction, it was just so carefully thought out and beatufully described that it felt completely plausible and logical to me. Well done!

Reviewer: 1853kaz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Spongebob! Vampires lead such sheltered lives, lucky them! :)

Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I want my very own Boobward!  I love this vamp!

Reviewer: quitomom (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Eddie's going downhill FAST...hope we get him some help soon :)

Reviewer: twifans (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Damn I think you just lost me....sorry

Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

SpongeBob!!! Heeeeee lives in a pineapple under the sea...

Edward is so childlike now, well exempt for his sexual ability. lol  Will he be making Bella a vampire?  Can't wait to find out.

x x

Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Of course we know its spongebob! LOL I love spongebob and I can picture Edward wearing the PJ pants and no shirt.....mmmmm

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Bite and Run

so curious to see whats wrong with Edward and whats the cure...lol

Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Oh, shit! Poor Edward - he's not well at all... I can't wait to find out what's really wrong and what it takes to make it better... Bella as a vampire maybe? Or maybe as a (his!) wife?
I love this story!

Reviewer: roxiegirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Ok now I am starting to get worried about Edward and what is wrong with him. Thanks for the chappie and see you next week!

Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I just don't see how the Volturi aren't going to want Bella dead, sinse her knowing about vampires breakes the law unless Edward promises to turn her, which I just don't see happening. I guess I have to wait to find out!

Reviewer: slyt2 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Sponge Bob Square pants baby.. i have kids........ lol

So Edward is breaking my heart here.........please Have Aro be able to fix him or at least let us know what the heck is wrong so they can fix it......I would love to read a few chapter of "normal Edward at home with his family back at school then the drama of Charlie can start .....but omg this is killing me reading about him he just gets more lost every single chapter.......... it's horrible and Bella is making me so mad.......It's ok to have sex with him tell him u will take care of him but she doesn't love him or won't say it....... why???????????? that is driving me freaking crazy............ Can't wait for next chapter........

Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I actually feel kinda bad for Eddie, seems like his mind is continually deteriorating-who knew that was even possible?

Cant wait to see what you have in store!

 

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

spongebob, baby. :)

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

poor Edward!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Great chapter!

I hope everything goes well when they go to Italy and that Aro can help Edward. It's so sad to see him confused  and out of sorts sometimes.

I loved it when Edward bought 'funny' pants and the joke book. =D It was really sweet for him to try and tell jokes....I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to his new pants! xD

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I really hope you keep going with this, I have been riveted all afternoon reading up to this point.  Sorry I ddint review before now - its brilliant. 

Reviewer: minny22 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

SpongeBob? I have a few lounge pants with him on them. They are soo cute!

Love that show.

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Spongebob square pants. Im embarrassed to admit I know this and I entirely blame my children for my knowledge. We even have a SBSP laundry hamper, sigh. Is Edward becoming more human due to being mated with Bella? Is that the cause of his insanity? Or is it that she is his singer and they are mated? But surely Carlisle would know that? Im VERY curious as to the reason for his insanity but more that that, I just want him to get well.

Reviewer: redsock (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

So the litany of Edward's symptoms appears to be: OCD tendencies [particularly in regard to Bella's breasts... oh Boobward], "fever" vampire style [a form of sensory overload or hypersensitivity to stimuli, including Bella's touch], short term memory loss, intermittent losses of conciousness, utter surrender to Bella's will and being soothed by her proximity [Ahem, the "closer the better" in this instance].  Overall, the patient appears to be deteriorating pretty dramatically with time.

Oh Good Lord, I can't wait to see what Aro thinks this is!  I know there's a bit of a clue in this chapter with Edward's flashback to his parents' influenza episode... but other than some form of Vampire Swine Flu, I'm stumped.

No worries though talented author, I'm happy to follow the thread wherever it goes!

Thanks for the mystery as well as the blushing lemons, it's a great read ~

red

 

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

OK...the idea of DrinkWard wearing SpongeBob Squarepants...errr....maybe I should call them SpongeROB LoungePants...hee hee hee...makes me strangely hawt....the joke book may not have gone over vaudevillean, but the pants def will...humina yumina DrinkWard...

I prefer to wear ShamWow pants whenever I am reading Hide&Drink myself...you know for the moisture factor...sorry...but your story gets me everytime...the lust is still there, even when the sanity goes out the window with Pillow Bella!!!!

Savage...you know I love ya!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kingsley (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I'm so worried about Edward! I mean, he has always seemed somewhat OCD in this story...but he is really losing it!

I hope this is a good Aro and not an evil Aro, and that Edward can really get help in Italy....

Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

Spongebob, lol  good chapter, I can't wait to find out what is wrong with Edward.  He keeps getting worse and worse, hopefully he can get some help from Aro.  thanks again

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

I'm glad they had this time before Italy.  I still wish you weren't sending them there.

Reviewer: austenbrontemeyer (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse

This is why we enjoy this story. It is smart and has your readers thinking about it long after it has been read, deciphering clues and looking for motivation.

Bella is the strong woman we know her to be and is thankfully taking of him as his flashback episodes are becoming more frequent. They have been triggered by seemingly  innocuous events which evoke images of the searing heat and pelting rain he felt as he lay on the beach protecting his makeshift, "Bella".  This coupled with a latent/dormant early traumatic event, that of the loss of his parents which he never had the chance to come to terms with makes Edward a candidate for intervention.  He seems much more endearing now however we hope his more volatile side will allow it.

Good choice.  

 



Author's Response:

I usually read reviews early on, and then respond to them all in the order the arrive later, but I just had to comment on your comments.  WELL SEEN.  The heat and water were really supposed to be quite subtle, and I didn't expect anyone to catch on to it quite so quickly. :)  It makes a writer proud!

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