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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

this story is freakin amazing!!  seriously!!!  i love it!!   i love the inner workings on Edward's mind.  I love how deep and cynical and beautiful it is. I read so much Twilight that i got tired, but this is so completely different than what i have read. Im so glad i found it!!   You are one amazing writer!!  I LOVE IT!!!!!!!   UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

oh, eddie, please drink bella's blood and get better - i need my edward back!

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Desperation and Despair

You are eerily good at writing Edward. How depressing he can be, how self-loathing....Someone once asked me if I thought the original author of any of my favorite stories read or wrote fanfiction, and I honestly couldn't say. But I read your story and it makes me wonder...

Personally, I think Edward is slightly crazy...you just might be too. ;)



Author's Response:

It is entirely possible I'm not quite right, either. ;)  Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: cassie_nog (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

Love your story i'm just finish to read and really adorkable how Boobward cares about Bella and the fact she's not the usually damsel in distress,and i'm just like to know where you published the one-shots i think i read somenthing in your author's note or maybe i overstimated my english.So, that will be a second part i can't wait for more.

Kisses on both your cheeks,this is the way we do in Brasil.



Author's Response:

One shots -

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5933687/1/Want_No_More

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6049832/1/Surviving_Bella

 

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Choose and Lose

A massage...perfect. Those always lead to something more, especially when articles of clothing are actually removed. But I have to say, I thought the fight with Samson was a little anti-climatic, so to speak. I expected a little bit more of an actual fight there. Not that the way you did it was bad or anything. And I liked Rose coming in at the last second like that. She's always been one of my favorite characters. I'm surprised Bella left, though at least it doesn't seem permanent. Poor Edward... :(

Reviewer: mscanon (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

I'm a writer, and I have to say this story is much better than the original Twilight series.  The characters are more believable and the concept is amazing.  You have a gift.  I couldn't stop reading it.

Reviewer: yankeerose (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Burn and Churn

I kind of figured it had something to do with addiction, but I'm really dying to figure out why Carlisle decided Bella needed to be detained.

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

Enjoyable as ever!

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

U listened to the blog, it was good to hear them talking about one of my most favorite authors & stories. I love the Edward character, he's so adorable, but starting to become a little too self sacrificing of a martyr. Although in the BD, he had to go to Volturi & have them threaten to change her before he agreed to do it himself & even then he was hedging his word, but it did get him a little less off the high horse. I'm surprised Bella's not asking to be changed. I'm glad that Esme brought it up. It seems like the perfect answer the torturous blood would be gone right? I don't feel clear that if she's turned or dead that he will become crazy again. He just needs to drink her blood before he changes her? Seems simple enough. 

I will be pleased with whatever you write you seem incapable of disappointing me with your writing. Thanks for writing;)-

Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Fight and Flight

OMG!

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Placate and Punish

Bella making Edward not touch her was the perfect punishment, though you can't help but feel sorry for him. I honestly didn't think he was going to be able to do it. And I have to say, the Boop Grope was my favorite part. LMAO! I can see her face perfectly as well as his. You had me laughing pretty hard with that one. I also found the whole joke part to be pretty amusing. ;)

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Fight and Flight

OMG...(I know, barely articulate...but that's why YOU are the writer)  Good fic

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Beg and Barter

Ok, I think I hate Sophia and her 'friends' as much as Edward does. They are annoying! It's wonder Edward didn't kill one of them. I can see why Bella would be frustrated. I mean, I know abuse victims are always hesitant to speak up, for whatever reason, and a little prodding is necessary, but....Oh, and as soon as Edward saw the flowers I knew who they were from. Who else could it be? And yeah, right, like he'd treat her better. Pssh. This guy is totally asking for it, and I hope he gets it. But now Edard is going to be freaking out and things between him and Bella and are so fragile right now that can't be good.

Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

oh the plot thickens.. keep it coming!

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Read and Bleed

Wow...very engaging.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

OMG I just finished the story thus far and I swear I am losing eye sight from staring at the screenfor so long but it was so worth it!!!!  I have no clue hwo your going to fix it to bad turning Bella isn't an option it would be so easy...    Sorry I didn't review before I was just so caught up in all of the story that it was amazingly blissful to read and read!

Great work post again soon!

Reviewer: irunwithvampires (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

If Edward is going through withdraw symptoms, is it not possible that with enough time, Edward would be back to normal?  Yes, it would take maybe years, but often enough, what can be done can be undone.

Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Burn and Churn

wow, great twist.  Eager to see how this will play out.

 

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Coax and Confess

I knew Bella was going to be mad. But at the rate that Sophia is going, she is going to be next. I can't blame him, but he definitely is not thinking straight. Strike that. He's not thinking at all. Poor guy. :( I'm glad Emmett's there. Something about his no-nonsense manner is just what Edward needs to keep him in check. At this point either Edward is going to kill somebody, or he is going to get locked up and then he will somebody. Or multiple somebodies. Seriously, though, that outburst at the end really does make him look crazy or psychotic or something. Really not helping his case I think.

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Regret and Redeem

I knew that was going to be bad. I noticed that Edward never sealed her wrist. At least Emmett didn't seem mad. But when he went 'renegade' before, it was just him, Carlisle and Esme. Rosalie came along later and then Emmett shortly after. And I didn't notice you saying Edward had put on a shirt. He went to see Bella and he was only wearing the pants; at what point did he grab a shirt? And what about a change of clothes? I mean, he was sorta covered in her blood. Now he's going to kill a nurse? I get the vague feeling that Bella won't be pleased about this.

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Bite and Run

This isn' t an Edward that I've seen before.  Interesting beginning

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Desire and Defend

Swimming underwater like that would be cool. I mean, anything with Edward would be enjoyable, I'm sure, but because he can swim so much faster and he's not awkward and slow in the water like humans it would be amazing. Was surprised to see Emmett...thought he was ignoring Edward. I'd be willing to bet he's not going to be thrilled at being attacked. Though that was really bad timing on his part.

Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

Don't let him go back to the Volturi!

Great update, loved it very much.

Thank you.

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate

I'm not sure how Edward will be able to resist Bella's blood - and if she decides she wants to do it and gets Carlisle to draw the blood anyway, once it's in front of him there's no way he'll be able to stop himself.  As for returning to Volterra, will he even be able to keep it together enough to make the journey without Carlisle?  Although maybe Aro will be sneaky and send someone to get him?  This story never lets up and I still have no idea how it's going to end.

Reviewer: twilightlvr107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Confront and Expose

Nice twist. Sampson instead of James, Bella's Island instead of Esme's Island. So, how on earth is Edward going to fight this guy with this power he has? Especially when his family won't talk to him. And why Emmett? I would have thought he'd go to Alice first. Is Emmett more likely to help him, or are you just changing things up again? My favorite part of this chapter was when they were sitting in the airport and all these guys were admiring Bella and he said she needed to keep kissing him so he wouldn't kill them. So funny! :D

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