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Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Found and Lost
Oh man, I don't think I want to keep reading this if they don't end up together. You have to find a device that fixes everything... Carlisle has been thinking about it and trying to come up with a solution... so, there you go, you can resolve everything if he comes up with a way for Edward to be cured. And Bella will need to become immortal so they can remain together... forever. Come on, you're writing this really creative piece... Edward and Bella were meant to be together... please give us a happy ending.
Thanks for writing this, and for posting chapters pretty quickly.
Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Found and Lost
OMG!!! if this was supposedly the final chapter!!! Is really great, but wuao!!! you really bring tears into my eyes.
So thank you for the next chapters, and the continuation of the story, is amazing!!!.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Found and Lost
Loved the chapter! I'm glad you decided not to end it there.
I don't know if this has been mentioned or not, but if Edward is really addicted, couldnt he get weaned off the stuff? If I remember the chapter with the explantion, they said the other vampire drank from their singer until they died and then they went insane again. Couldn't the amount gradually decline and Edward's crazy-ass brain adapt over time? hmmm?
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Found and Lost
I can't believe ha actually left!! I really didn't think he would go through with it. I am SO glad that you are no ending the story here. Hopefully you give us a Happily Ever After, please :)
Reviewer: Maryale (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Found and Lost
I know I haven't review before, but I've read all the story and I've been following it for a while, I really get excited every time I see that you have updated!!! It's trully a wonderful story and this chapter has blown my mind, to me it's the best one so far. I'm happy you have decided to keep on writing because if the story had ended like that... I would have died! Thank you for sharing this one with us all. I'm also reading your toher story and I think it's great, please keep on writing that one as well.
10000000000/10 =)
Reviewer: pixiejenna (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Found and Lost
soo... does that mean that we can expect a super depressing ending for Hide and Drink? Because that ending would have broken my little wussperv heart :( If that was your original intention, it makes me wonder if there is hope at all for poor Boobward and Bella!
Anyway, always a pleasure to read!
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Found and Lost
Yes you are truly awful. If you had ended it here as originally intended I for one would have been crushed. And I really hate being crushed at the end of a story. I still do not see why they did not try giving him her blood to the point of getting him normal and then weaning him off it slowly. It might not work, but it would have been worth a try. And even Edward might have been willing to accept Bella's sacrifice if he knew that it was a temporary thing. Because really, "hurting her" by taking her blood would have been nothing compared to the hurt he has just caused. Thanks for deciding to continue past this point.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Found and Lost
Great work I can't waitto read more I am so glad Bella WAS saying I love you. I wonder how you will salvage this relationship...will Bela go after him AGAIN? Post quickly we need to know!
Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Bite and Run
This is absolutely fantastic and extremely well written! I love Edward in this. He seems like a right bastard! :P
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Found and Lost
Nope. Don't hate you. Though it's heartbreaking. I would've been really (and I mean really) upset if this was the end, only because as the story has been written up to this point, and ending here doesn't fit the story. Well, that and I don't like tragic endings... I read to escape the crappiness of real life, there is enough pain day-to-day already. But simply ending here would've been too abrupt and I would've been scratching my head and... yeah... probably would've sent an email rather than a review. ;)
So, will Surviving Bella be safe?
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Found and Lost
I’m going to lose my boy.
“I’m sorry, Mom,” I said. “But I don’t think I’m really here anymore anyway.”
killing me here.
thank you for NOT ending the story there. part of me - the dark and twisty part - wishes you had. the other part - the bright and shiny part - is so happy.
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Found and Lost
Ohh. I'm glad you didn't end it there though I can see why you would. I tend to get sick of neat hea's. I'm not sure whether a hea is right for this story, it's definitely a tragedy.
I'm going to have to go back and look for Bella's I love you's 'cause I tottally missed them.
I love this story, I'm glad there is more to go.
Reviewer: KStewLipBite (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Found and Lost
(Sorry if this is a duplicate. P.S. I hate Twilighted.) I can't believe the Cullens let him go on his own. I know Carlisle didn't want anyone else near the Volturi but how could he trust that he would go there for sure? I love this Edward. SFM.
Reviewer: Lovemartyr09 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Found and Lost
Oh dear Savage...I hope you are ready for the angry mobs...
You want honesty? I can totally see it ending here. I think in a "true" literary world - this would be the ending that would make sense...the most realistic ending. In FF world??? Its like HEA or die here...lol. I actually think the ending is quite beautiful the way it is. But I won't be disappointed if you change it... I am a sucker for a HEA.
I could feel that moment when the "I love you" registered...I figured she had told him before, but wasn't certain.
I look forward to the rest, just because I love your characters... It would be cool if you kept it up for 20 more chapters...but I understand all good things must come to an end. Who said that anyway? What kind of crap is that???
It was beautiful....loved it. Thank you!
Reviewer: BellaFlan (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Found and Lost
Great chapter! I love the twist and actually didn't see that coming. I assumed she wasn't telling him because she wasn't ready, not because he couldn't hear her.
This could have been a great ending if it was a longer chapter. Of course, I'm glad it's not over yet!
Thanks for writing.
PS - I'm the Sponge bob pervert from twitter ;)
Author's Response: I remember you! Sicko!! LOL Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Found and Lost
I can't review, I'm just too heartbroken.
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Found and Lost
Oh my! He can't leave bella!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Found and Lost
I may have seriously hunted you down if you ended it here! I see the poetic ending to it but would have been so damned heartbroken over it. SO THANK YOU for continuing it. My hope is that the insanity stems from her being his singer AND mate. Maybe once she is turned his mate can heal him? OCH, I don't know, I have been trying to figure out a HEA for these two. I tend to think Bella's nightmares are from being seperated from Edward at this point and she will be in dire health straits from his absence.
Reviewer: bellabells68 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Found and Lost
I knew you would make me sad, yet I still continue reading it like an addict. Cried so much.. Help. It's such a great chapter.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Found and Lost
oh no! =( sad day. is there an HEA here?
Reviewer: Scorp112 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Found and Lost
Wow. If you had truly ended it there I would've been a crying mess about now.
But since you didn't, I'm still holding out hope there's a cure and a happily ever after on the horizon. :)
Loved everything about this chapter, even Edward's goodbye. I'm glad we finally got to read Bella telling him she loved him...we all knew it, but it was still nice to read!
Sooo looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Found and Lost
Omg.. Edward is such a dumbass does he not realize that by leaving he is breaking his promise of never hurting her again. Yea I figure she told him ILY a couple of time but it feels good now that he finally heard it. You had me freaking out when I read that this is where it was suppose to end, so glad it's not. I'm still hoping for a HEA..there will be one right??
Reviewer: Kalika87 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Found and Lost
I think I like Crazyward. Puts an entirely different slant on the whole thing. You are doing a great job and I look forward to reading more. :)
Reviewer: kellybex (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Found and Lost
*sighs* Yes, you're awful! lol I love this fic...glad to hear this is NOT the end. Although I have no idea how he can be 'foxed' to be with erh and have a HEA...
Love it tho...
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Found and Lost
panic? PANIC? you were seriously going to have it end there? Wow that's just...ummm...sadistic, LOL....so glad you've changed your mind, however I have noted you have still not promised a happy ending (shudder).
So sad for Sobward :(
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